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Posted: 20 years ago
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I thought I'll post this as it suits the Kripa-Angad story...

Kya Ho Tum !

Chalo mein batao kya ho tum,

Mere liye meri duniya ho tum.

Chu kar jo guzri woh hawa ho tum,

Mein ne jo mangi woh dua ho tum.

Karey mujh ko jo roshan woh diya ho tum,

Dil yeh kahey mera jiya ho tum.

Kiya mein ney mehsoos woh ehsaas ho tum,

Mere honto ki pyaas ho tum.

Mere baahon ki Aas ho tum,

Meri nazar ki talaash ho tum.

Meri zameen ka akaash ho tum,

Mere chehrey ki kashish ho tum.

Mere sitaron ki gardish ho tum,

Meri zindagi ka karaar ho tum.

Mein ney jo chaha woh pyaar ho tum,

Meray intizaar ki raahat ho tum.

Mere dil ki chaahat ho tum,

Tum ho to yeh duniya hai meri

kaisey kahoo key meri jaan ho tum !

Plz. let me know ur comments on this...😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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VERY NICE YOU DESERVE THIS CLAP.šŸ‘
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow...its so beautiful..šŸ‘

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow preeti kammal hai hamare forum mei sab log deewane hogaya...

šŸ‘ keep going

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Posted: 20 years ago
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I have one to contribute also..... ( dont know who the original writer is though)


TU MERA GHUROOR HAI
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=

Tu mera khawab hai
Tu meri taabeer bhi
Lambi Kaali Ratoon ko jaag key jo maangi ho,
Hasrat bhari dua bhi,

Tu meri zindagi hai
Tu meri taqdeer bhi
Tu mera vardaan hai
Tu mera shraap bhi

Sab kehtey hein
Maghroor hoon mein
Kaisey kahoon key tou mera wajood hai
Aur tu mera guroor bhi….


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I just love the contradictions used in this poem to describe the poet's luved one .... and the intensity just rocks .... love the poem....

Hope u like it tooo.... šŸ˜› let me know what u think
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Posted: 20 years ago
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I have one to contribute also..... ( dont know who the original writer is though)


TU MERA GHUROOR HAI
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=

Tu mera khawab hai
Tu meri taabeer bhi
Lambi Kaali Ratoon ko jaag key jo maangi ho,
Hasrat bhari dua bhi,

Tu meri zindagi hai
Tu meri taqdeer bhi
Tu mera vardaan hai
Tu mera shraap bhi

Sab kehtey hein
Maghroor hoon mein
Kaisey kahoon key tou mera wajood hai
Aur tu mera guroor bhi….


-=-=-==-=



I just love the contradictions used in this poem to describe the poet's luved one .... and the intensity just rocks .... love the poem....

Hope u like it tooo.... šŸ˜›
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Posted: 20 years ago
#7

itni achi post karen ka zarya hoo tum

jis ne mujh reply karne par majbor kia wo hoo tum

aur mujhe achi lagti hai film humtum........šŸ˜†(kia karoon koi line nahi jaa rahi thi

luved ur post dear.............😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was very very good!

just awsomešŸ‘

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Posted: 20 years ago
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šŸ‘šŸ‘sach preeti kya ho tum........bravošŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Both the poems r really nice. Good job u guys.šŸ‘

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