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-Unforgettable Memories Part 14-

"Dadi I am really scared now" Kiran said as she phase from one place to another

DM- Hamein tu lagta hai ki hamein Maan ko is bare main bata dena chiyae

Krain- Dadi I am also thinking the same, and after what she tried to do, we have to be more careful with her, before she really harm herself

NT- Par di Neet ne tu hamein mana kiya hai Maan veer ji kuch bata ne se

Kiran- I know NT but she is not in good condition am afraid she might harm herself, and before its too late we have to tell Maan about this

NT- par di we should tell her family member about this na coz she will be leaving soon na

DM- Nt geet jam tak hamare saath hai wo hamari responsibilities hai aur aise halat main Maan se kuch bhi chupana theek nahi hai, kyun ki wo hi hai jo unhe shambhal sakte hai

NT- Dadi think again before talking to Maan veer ji, he is already tensed up aur phir Geet ji to yeha kuch hi din hai hum sab mil kar unhe shambhal lenge but if Maan veer ji get to know about this he will be worried for her ever after she leaves

DM- This is also true, hum kya kare hamein tu kuch samajh nahi arha hai"
seeing Dadi worried Kirna goes and sit next to her and says "Dadi you don't worry NT and I will look after Geet till she is here"

DM- thanks beta aap hamari ek baat manengi

Kiran- Ji Dadi boliye

DM-beta can you stay here for tonight

Kiran- par Dadi main

DM- Plz beta na mat kijye ga

Kiran- theek hai Dadi

Dinner
DM- Nakul go and call Geet for dinner

Nakul- Ji Dadi Ma, Nakul goes and knock on the door after few min Geet opens the door

Nakul- Maam Dadi Ma aap ko Dinner ke liye bola rahi hai

Geet- mujhe bhook nahi hai aap jao

Nakul- Par Dadi Ma____

"Kaha na main ne mujhe dinner nahi kar na" Geet shout at and closing the door on Nakul face.
Nakul comes back and says "Dadi Ma Geet Maam ne kaha she is not hungry" hearing this Maan fist tighten and was about to go to his room but Dadi stopped him and says "Maan aap dinner kare, Kiran beta aap plz unhe unke kamre main dinner kara de" Kiran takes Geet dinner and knocked on the door few times but she gets the same answer from her that she gave Nakul, Kiran comes back to dinning room and when Maan saw her coming back with the food tray he gets angry and tells Nakul tu take the food tray from kiran and follow him
"Geet open the door" Maan sternly says and by his voice Geet could sense that he is really angry and without any argument she goes and opens the door and comes back to bed.

As Maan came in he saw her sitting on the bed hugging the pillow "Nakul dinner andar rakho aur jao" Maan said as his eyes were fixed on Geet and as Nakul left. Khushi came in the room then Maan went and brings Geet food in once plate and held it in front of her. Geet looked at the plate, then at Maan, as she looked up at him, Maan could tell that she has been sitting here and crying as her eyes were read and were swollen a little.
Maan softly says "Geet dinner kar lo"

Geet- mujhe nahi khana

Maan- Geet you haven't eaten anything since yesterday, plz thoda sa khalo

Geet- mujhe bhook nahi hai plz aap jao yeha se

Maan sits on the bed facing her, makes a small bite and place it in front "Geet plz thoda sa kha lo"

"Main ne kaha na mujhe bhook nahi hai" Geet snaps at Maan, on the other hand Maan was trying his best to not shout at her but she left him with nothing but to shout at her and says "Geet if you don't it now, then i will force you to eat samjhi tum" Hearing Maan shout like this Khushi who was sitting on the corner quietly watching everything gets scared and Geet just lay down hiding her face in the pillow and started to cry. Seeing Geet crying tears welled up in Khushi eyes, she comes to Geet and starts to creases her head with her little hand, Geet looks up feeling the soft hand on her head and sees khushi sitting their with tears in her eyes
Khush- Mama aap ro mat"
Maaneet both closes their eyes helplessly not being able to make Khushi understand that Geet is not her mother, as Geet closes her eyes tears made it way down her check, which were instantly wiped by Khushi which somehow soothed Geet pain. Then khushi comes to Maan who was standing their watching this whole scene, Khushi takes the bite from Maan hand and says "Dada ki aur khushi ki kati, kyun ki Dada ne Mama pe shout kiya aur unhe rola ya bhi" saying this she went to Geet made her sit up and sat on her lap and says "Mama thoda sa apni Khushi ke liye kha lo" and takes the bite hear her mouth, Khushi waited for few min and then Geet took the bite and ate it, Geet kissed her forehead and hugged her, then they both fed each other. Maan stood their watching them feeding each other and waited for them finish their dinner__________
Na jane ye kaisa rishta hai jo rishta na ho kar bhi inhe rishte main bandhe hai
anjaan rishta hai par har rishte se bhi pyara hai inka rishta

2 days later
It had been 2 days since the dinner night incident (Maan shouting at Geet) and Khushi hasn't talked to Maan since that day. Maan tried every possible way to say sorry to Khushi and make her start talking to him again but she won't even listen to him, forget listening she doesn't even want to see Maan face...
"DADIII" Khushi shouted putting her hand over her ears till she saw Dadi coming toward them

DM- Khushi what happened why are you shouting like this

Khushi points her finger at Maan and says "Dadi deakho na Dada is bothering me"

"MAAN aap kyun Khushi ko padishan kar rahe hai" Dadi says in stern voice

Maan- Dadi wo main

DM- Maan aap ko koi aur kaam nahi hai kya jo aap Khushi ko bother kar rahe hai"
"Ise Manae se bhi zidya koi aur important kaam ho sakta hai kya" Maan murmurs

DM- Kuch kaha aap ne

"Dadi aap plz ise kaho na ke ye mujh se baat kare aur apni kati tode" Maan almost pleaded to Dadi with his moist eyes "Dadi its been 2 days now and she is still not talking to me plz tell her na to talk to me"

DM- Khushi what is this why are you kati with Dada now see he is so desperate to talk to you and your..." Khushi interrupts saying "mujhe nahi karni Dada se baat, Dada ne Mama pe shout kiya aur unhe rolay bhi hai, Dada is bad i don't want to talk to him" Khushi voice got heavy as she said the last few words
Now Maan really got angry at her listening to the same answer and shouts "fine don't talk to me main bhi tum...tum se baat nahi karunga aab tum...tum jao apni Mama ke pass" Maan closes hi eyes as he realized what he just said, not being able to control his anger and neither he wanted to shout at Khushi he leaves from their...
"Dada" Khushi whisper seeing him go like this...
As he punches his legs in the air the memories of Geet flashed back in
-Geet eating Pani puri
-their first meeting
-their hug, as he continue to get flashback of Geet his speed increases her face flashes in front of his eyes
-Him finding her wounded
-Her saying " Mujhko phir wohi suhana nazara mil gaya
nazaro ko jo deedar tumhara mil gaya
aur kisi cheez ki tamana kya karo
jab mujhe teri bahon main sahara mil gaya
- Mera Maan
As all the flases caem to him he breaks down and falls on his knees screaming "AAA"
Dadi who was looking for him hears his screams and come their and sees him screaming. Seeing him like this she get scared and comes and places her hand on his shoulder, Maan looks at her and says "Dadi wo kyun aai"
"Maan" dadi said as she sat by him. Maan holds her hand and says " Dadi main use is halat main nahi deakh sakta, nahi deakh sakta use is tarha rote,tote, tadapte huwe
DM- Maan kuch hi dino ki baat hai phir wo chali jayegi
Maan- Dadi agar wo chali gai tu main khushi ko kaise sambhalunga uske jane ke baad, kaise sambhal paunga main use dadi kaise, Dadi why did she came in our life why Dadi
DM- Maan it was just...
Maan- Dadi i just shouted at Geet and Khushi haven't talked to me from 2 days par Dadi Geet ke jane ke baad tu Khushi will never talk to me. She will never talk to me again Dadi, wo pagli Geet ko apni Ma samajh rahi hai par jab use pata chale ga ki wo uski Ma nahi hai tu wo tu tut jaygi, She will break down Dadi"
Dadi hotld Maan face in her falm and says "Maan loot at me, hamari taraf deakhe" Maan looks into Dadi eyes "Maan aap aise yu nahi the, phir aap aaj itni choti si baat pe itna kyun padishan ho rahe hai aur jaha tak Khushi ka sawal hai tu hum sab hai na use deakh ne use sambhal ne ke liye aur phir jab Geet chali jayegi tu Khushi Khushi will foget her and our life will be back to normal"
Maan- No dadi Khushi won't forget her
"Bas Maan bauth ho gaya" Dadi snap seeing her like this and says "aab aap is bare main kuch nahi kahenge aur nahi sochenge samjhe aap, now enough of all this and quickly go and get ready Adi ka call aya tha the clients are waiting for you, aur aap meeting main jane ki bijaye yehan ghar pe Khushi ke piche lage huwe ho, come on get up and get ready quickly" Maan nods in yes and dadi leaves. Maan quickly gets ready and was on his way to the car when he saw a little not on his car saying "All the best" and by the handwriting he knew it was from Khushi, because even if he signs a small contract she would wish him then how could she forget to wish him today when he is going to sing the contract for million dollger...Maan picked the not and kissed it "Love you" and a small smile crept on his face which didn't go unnoticed by Khushi who was watching him from behind on the tree and as soon he drove away Khushi wnet back in KM hoping on her foot with a big smile on her face and went to Geet.
At night
"Khushi where are you...deakho we have only 30 mins to get you ready chalo jaldi aao nahi tu you will be late" NT said as she came in Khushi room looking for her who was running away from NT and finding the chance she quietly sneak out of her room and runs to Geet shouting back "Mujhe nahi jana"
NT(st)- ye veer ji bhi na, na jane mujhe kaha fasha diya i have been trying to get her reado from past 1 hr par ye ladki hai ke maan hi nahi rahi uff kya karo main iske gusse ka jo har waqt uske nope pe beathi rah ti hai." Nt comes Maan room and sees khushi sitting on Geet lap resting her head on her chest and playing with her hair. "Khushi" NT called making Khushi look at her and says "I am telling you for the last time Khushi, ache bache ki tarha ready ho jao na Dada aap ka kab se wait kar rahe hai, aur agar aap late huwi tu unhone meri jaan le leni hai, plz beta jaldi ready ho jao"
"Mujhe nahi jana, main Dada se kati hoon" Khushi said still playing with Geet hair
Geet(st) - kis baat pe itna gussa kar rahi hai ye
NT come to her making a baby face and says "Khushi Dada ne SORRY tu kaha na, phir kyun itna zid kar rahi ho
Khushi- Par Dada ne Mama ko tu SORRY nahi kaha na after he shouted at her
Geet(st)- oh tu ye us raat ki baat pe itna gussa hai Maan se, ye ladki bhi na bilkul pagal hai, bhala koi apno se is kadar naraz aur gairo se itna pyar karta hai kya
Khushi- aur Dada ne Mama ko manaya bhi nahi aur jab tak Mama Dada se naraz hai tu khushi bhi Dada se narz hai"
"par main tu unse naraz nahi" Geet said making both NT and Khushi look at her
Khushi- Jhot
Geet make her sit facing her and says "Bhala main kyun unse naraz hone lagi"
"Dada ne Dnata" khushi said with her heavy voice
Geet- meri bhi tu galti thi na, i too should have listen to him na when he told me to habe my dinner but i didn't
Khushi- still kyun danta
Seeing their little chat not ending NT intruppts saying "Khushi aap ye bato aap chathi kya ho"
Khushi looks at NT with twinkling eyes and says "I want Mama to come with me" NT and geet both looked at each other
NT- But geet...
"Mama mere saath jaygi tu hi Khushi jaygi" saying this she leavs from their leaving Geet and NT confused as what to do now
Geet- aaa...wo...main...I am sorry I can't go with her. and starts to walk toward washroom but stop in mid hearing NT
NT- Geet plz maan jaye" NT walk to her and says "Geet main janti hoon ye sab galat hai par"
Geet- Par...par kya NT ji...aap log is choti si bachi se jhot pe jhot bole ja rahe hai aur aap chathi hai ke main is jhot main aap ka saath doon.
NT- Geet ji plz...aap plz iske saath chale jayen warna
Geet- I am sorry NT Ji but plz don't make a part of this lie, main
"Plz maan jaye beta" hearing the voice NT and Geet both look at the door and saw Dadi standing their, "Geet beta it if wasn't for Khushi happiness i wouldn't have asked you to be a part of this lie but for now plz be part of this lie and go with her, I know her she desperetly want to be with maan in his arm but she is holding her self just for yoursake coz she loves you as much as she loves maan, aur jahan tak maan ka sawal hai tu agar wo thodi deer bhi use baat nahi karte tu unka din nahi guzar ta aur aaj indono ko ek dosre se baat kiye huwe do din ho gaye hai"
Geet- But Dadi this won't be right it will only shateer her her once shw will know i am not her mother
dadi holds Geet hand in hers and says 'I know beta but for now just do this for me more over plz do this for Maan"
Geet (st) - Geet Maan has done a lot of favor on you and has helped you whe you needed help, unhone tujhe har baar tujhe bach ya hai, shara diya hai, janito hoon ke un ke ehsano ko nahi chuka sakti par itna tu tu kar hi sakti hai ke ek baap ko uske beti se mila de aur ek beti ko baap se jo teri wajhe se unse baat nahi kar rahi, Geet tu aab aur kya soch rahi hai maan ja aur Khushi ke saath chali ja," Geet looks at Dadi and NT and says "Dadi hum Khushi ke saath jane ke liye reday hai" Dadi and NT smiled and Dadi hugged her and told NT to help Geet dress up while she will get Khushi ready__________
soon khush and Geet both came down dressed up Khushi is pink and Geet in white wari, Dadi went and touch Geet check and says "kisi ke nazar na lage, bauth pyari lag rahi hai aap" Hearing dadi Prasing only Geet khushi tugged Dadi sari making Dadi look down at her and says "aur hum Dadi" Dadi smiled and bend down to her lever and did the same with her and says "aap tu bilkul hamari pari jaise lag rahi hai" and kissed her, to geet "acha you guyes go now Maan must be waiting and till then i will call him and tell him that you are also coming. soon as they left dadi called Maan but Maan was n't picking up the call as it was on slient mode and was busy in pre[aration
"IS EVERYTHING DONE" Maan asked as he looked at his watch and as a replied he got "YES"
Maan- hmm, what is it taking her so long to come, that when he heard the car break and the car stoped right in from of him, he saw Khushi coming out of the car, Maan started walking toward her with a big smile but stops as he sees Geet with her and his smile fades away. Khushi hold Geet hand walks toward Maan who was standing their still and starting at her, Where Geet looked everywhere and avoided looking into his questioning eyes. Khushi came and stood beside him stared at him as he was still looking at geet, She slips her hand in him and held it making Maan look down at her, they started walking toward the table while Maan was still staring at geet, Khushi let go of their hands and goes to sit on the table, getting the chance Maan holds geet hand stoping her from taking another step, turn her toward him and pulls her toward him. Geet knit her eyes and says "Maan ye aap kya kar rahe ho"
"Geet tum yeha kya kar rahi hoon" Maan said as his girp on her hand tighten, where geet treid to free her hand, she looked at khushi making sure she is not watching her, she turns back to Maan and says "Maan hamar haath chodye hamein" Before Geet could finishe her sentence Maan pulled her more closer and says "Geet WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE"
Geet- Maan plz chodye hamein
"Mama" Khushi called as she looked up to them and found them still standing where she let their hand go, she felt Maan is again getting angry at her so she said "Dada aap phir Mama ko dant..."
"NAHI" Geet quickley said "Mera matlab hai ke Dada hamrin dant nahi rahe hai wo tu hamein, he was saying sorry to me for shouting at me" Geet looks back at him and says "Hain na Maan" and gestures him to say yes.
Maan- Yes beta I...I was saying sorry to your Mama" geet frees her hand goes and sit next to Khushi and says " Khushi see Dada ne aap ki Mama ko sorry bola na tu aab aap bhi jaldi se apni Kati tod do aur Dada ko maaf kar do" she looked at Maan and continue " aur waise bhi hamein begano ke liye apno se naraz nahi hote aur nahi unke liye worried hote hai, kyun ki begane tu begane hi rah te hai wo hamare apne kabhi nahi hote"
Khushi went to Maan and hugged him "Sorry Dada, Khushi no more kati, Khsuhi loves you Dada"
Maan picked her in his arm and kissed her and says "i Love you to beta, aab dada se kabhi kati mat hona, dad aap ke bina ji nahi paynge" Geet just stood their looking at them, their bonding, their love for each other. they all sat and had their dinner Khushi taking turn in feeding Both Maaneet and making them feed her____________________________
Driving Back
as it was really late khushi dose off in the back while Maan and geet sat in front lost in their own thought
Geet (st) Geet its just a matter of few days phir Veer ji a kar tujhe yehan se le jange, But till you are here keep in mind ke tu Khushi ke samne Maan pe gussa nahi kare gi aur nahi unhe hone de gi. Thinkg about all this Geet also does off to sleep. Maan looked at geet and found her a sleep and was feeling guilty for behaing like thiw with her without knowing that she came their to help him only, nothing else.
soon they reached KM and seeing both sleep he calls Vicky and tells him to take Khushi in and he waited for them to go in. then he comes around to geet side, opens the door and looks at her and a smile touched his lip as he saw her face expression changeing due to her hair straind that bother her, he slowly tuck it behind her ear and saw her sleeping peace fully again "Pagli" saying this he shook his head and then took her in he arm and brought her to his room and placed her on his bed then removed her sandels then came back to her side placed a soft kiss on her forehead and siad "kyun tina zid karti hoon" after turing of the life he leave the room and goes to study hall
Precap: Main mar Jana chathi hoon Veer ji Main Marrr (SLAP)...


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