Celebrating Love. SS on the promo scene. prt2pg2 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u so much for ur comments was supposed to write the 2nd part y'day but my boss called and gave me so much work that just not been able to write. will try to do it asap. i am so soory.😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: buggerall

thank u so much for ur comments was supposed to write the 2nd part y'day but my boss called and gave me so much work that just not been able to write. will try to do it asap. i am so soory.😭



no problem take your own time

we will wait
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

Kunal stops an auto and gives him the slip 'bhaiya iss pate pe le chalo'

In the auto he starts thinking to himself ' ye mughe kya ho raha hai. Richa ke life ka sawal hai aur main uski help karne ki jagah Sidhi ke paas ja raha hoon. Haan toh sahi hai na, Richa meri responsibility nahin hai, wo Thakral ki responsibility hai. Wo apne paise ke dum pe Vinit ki asliyat do minute main pata kar sakte hain, phir kiya kyon nahin ab tak? Kuch toh gadbad hai. Main kyon ye sab soch raha hoon,Sidhi ki help karna mera farz hai, wo meri biwi hai after all. Kya sirf farz hai Kunal chopra aur kuch nahin, phir kyon aajkal tu uske karib jane ki koshish karta hai, towel samne rakha hota hai par Sidhi ko bulata hai, taki wo tere karib aa sake. Kisi na kisi bahane se usse choota hai, kyo usko choona tughe pasand hai'

All the past instances of closeness starts coming to his mind, when she had put her head on his shoulder, when she had seen him without his shirt, when he had hugged her, when he had tried to take the snap from her etc etc. he starts smiling, he liked Sidhi.

'just liked, was it not love, kya sach much mughe Sidhi se pyaar ho gaya hai. Wo mughe pyaar karti hai ye mughe pata hai. Bacha nahin hoon main, jis tarah se wo aajkal meri taraf dekti hai, mere kamre main aane se uska gaal timatar ki tarah lal ho jata hai, mere liye raat main wait karna, mere har zaroorat ka khyal rakhna, main janta hoon wo payaar hai aur mughe bhi toh uske liye har cheez karna acha lagta hai, usko hamesha smile karte dekhna chahta hoon, shayed ab main bhi'

'saab saab hum aa gayen'

The first thing he noticed was her red sari. She looked pretty in red. His heart beat increased. 'Sambhal kunal chopra sambhal apne aapko' He went close to Sidhi and said 'Aye, kya hai kyon bulaya'

'Mughe aap se baat karni hai' sidhi said.

Kunal got irritated ' baat karni hai, kya baat, aur seema ne toh bola tum kisi mushkil main ho. Main bhaga hua yehan aaya. Mughe Richa ke yehan jana tha. Chalo ab yehan se, baat toh hum baad main bhi kar sakte hai, abhi Richa ki engagement rokni hai, wo Vinit pagal hai'

'Pahal toh aap hai,

'Aye tumne mughe pagal bola'

'haan bola, aap kuch samghte hi nahin hai'

Kunal smiled ' main sab samghta hoon Tumhain bhi aur tumhari feelings ko bhi'

Seedhi looked up at him in shock.

"Sidhi hum baad main baat karengen, abhi chalo'

'Richa toh chahti hai ki aap yeh engagement roke, wahan aake kuch hungama kare aur phir wo aapko guilty feel karaye, wo sirf aapko pana chahti hai, aap ye baat kyon nahin samghte'

'Sidhi tum ye kya bol rahi ho, Richa sirf meri achi dost hai'

'ye aap samghte hai, magar wo nahin' then Sidhi told him everything that she had seen and heard about Richa. Kunals expression kept changing from shock to irritation to anger and disgust.

Sidhi started crying 'magar aapko toh sirf Richa ki pari hai, hamesha aap Richa ki parwah karte hai, hamesha Richa ki fikr karte hai'

'Sidhi main abhi yehan hoon, tumhare paas, jab ki Richa ke life ka sawal tha. Jab waqt aaya mughe decide karne ka ki main kiske paas jaoon toh main tumhare paas aaya. Kya ye proof nahin hai ki main tumhari parwah karta hoon, tumhari fikr hai mughe'

She looks upto him, with tears flowing from her eyes, he comes closer and wipes them 'Aye, maine bola tha na roya mat karo, tum hasti ho toh achi lagti ho'

She hugs him and he holds her immediately and looks around, the first time he notices the candles.

'Sidhi tumne bola tumhen kuch baat karni hai magar ye itne candles kyon lagayen hai. Aaj na tumhara birthday hai, na mera. Kya kisi aur ka birthday hai. Hum kya celebrate kar rahen hai?'

Sidhi said softly 'pyaar hai shayed' and she moves away from him. He watches her going and thinks 'kyon bhad rahin hai betabiya, kyon aaj dil tumhain pukaar raha hai, na jane kya baat hai, aaj kuch toh baat hai.'

He sees her sari getting caught in the candle stand and rushes to untangle it, holding her pallu he moves closer to her, kisses her forehead, holding her close, quietly their hearts beat together for each other. He goes behind her and says 'pyar hai shayed, mughe bhi' and kisses her neck. With his fingertips he extinguishes the candles and takes her back in a hug.

End

Thank you for reading. do leave ur comments.


Edited by buggerall - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
You made it so simple and uncomplicated however I am not sure if it's really going to be this simple for Siddhi to win the challenge from witcha. Nice FF and thanks for putting the time and effort to write it in spite of having a heavy workload in the office.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow this ff was simply fantastic...so simple as well as soo very romantic... please write more you write very well...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was so beautiful
it was quiet straight forward and smooth
no twists or turns and no heart wrenching emotions
thanks for such a lovely OS :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Wowww aweosome update...
The best part was siddhi telling the truth about witcha...
Kunal choosing Siddhi over witcha...
Story with less suspense yet so powerful...'
Keep writing...

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