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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot dr.

Originally posted by: khushi_4ever

You are writing very well and the story is progressing very good. Geet knows the truth about Maan and doesn't expect too much from him and yet she is cherishing the feeling that he thinks of her in a special way and not like the other girls which in itself is of so much more importance to her. And same goes for Maan even though he is in denial, still he cherishes these moments with Geet.
The basic ground work for the Love part has started.
Loved it. Continue soon.

p.s. I myself write so i know how much impetus it gives us when we read comments which tell us that the other person has read the story thoroughly...continue soon.

Thanks for your detailed comment dear... I loved it and am really humbled. Yes, they are falling but none want to realize it for their own reasons.
Your FF, I have bookmarked it and will read it in one go... just waiting for some free time. And then will post my comments too dr.

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Thanks Anu for clarifying my misunderstandings...though i still feel she is more emotionally involved but it is clear that she knows it is temporary

Also, i don't think it has anything to do with challenge she took on earlier as she is not even thinking in those lines now
i can understand that as a writer it must be very difficult to write this story and balance all the emotions...but just want you to know that you are doing a great job...continue soon dear

Anything for you dear... I always love and respect your comment dear...
When you like it or when you point out something... both are important to me.
And you know what the story is so vibrant... I mean their madness for each other and then taking it casually ... to show this all I really have to think how to write... but I am trying.
So if there is some mistake anywhere, please point it out but also forgive me as sometimes I myself don't know what I want to covey is being conveyed properly or not.

Originally posted by: ammu5

we completely have faith in u so plz do continue soon. loved the update.

Thank you drs for liking my FF .

Originally posted by: spvd

part 7
nice part...
looks like Maan is also falling for Geet but not accepting it...
their relationship is not just a time pass but its gonna be deep rooted...
cont soon...

Yes, the relation is going to be beyond their understanding... they will just go flowing in the flow.

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

awsome update
loved it
waiting..con soon
thankx for pm

Thanks dear for liking it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mino_M

Can i be added to your PM List please.

I added you.
QUOTE=crazyfriends007]awesome update

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

nice...


continue soon/...

thnx for PM...
thanks dears for liking and encouraging. keep commenting.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi All,
This time being a good girl I have replied to each one of you. I am not able to do this every time but I tried it this time, as you all encourages me so well.
From page 97 - 99 are my reply tp all of you. Please check.
Thanks,
Anu.
Part 8
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At night Geet called him.

"So at last, yaad aa hee gaye meri, right? "

"Yaad gayee kab thee" she accepted.

"You wanted to say something" "Yeah, just wanted to let you know I am leaving for Mumbai coming Saturday"

"So what's there to inform in this.. Everyone knows it' hmm" she sheid a little then which did not get unnoticed by him.

"Woo' ok leave it"

"Never keep things in your heart'. Waise bhi main jaa hee raha hoon, it's no harm in telling me"

"I mean' so you are planning to end it here" Now Maan smiled to himself' Ohhh he was waiting for this point to come' off course he was no where planning to end it now' not so soon' he was eager to know in out of her'

"When did I say that'. I just said I am leaving for Mumbai and yes I will not be coming to HP now as I am done with my work here"

"Well then'."

He just wanted to hint his idea to Geet.. if she wishes she can take it.

"Geet actually I wanted to speak about your career" Geet was confused now why suddenly he is talking about her career.

"You are such a nice student, why are you wasting your life' I mean why don't you give your career a try' I mean Mumbai have lots of opportunity" Geet was trying to understand what he said.

"OK think over it'. Bye for now."

For the whole week Maan did not meet Geet, though he was restless for her and Geet's restlessness increased on other side.

Geet started missing him' what will she do when he leaves for Mumbai at this point his idea of job striked her'.

"Ohhh so this is why he was interested in my career talk'. Smart Mr. Maan Singh Khurana"

Slowly the idea started boiling in Geet's mind. She silently started looking for jobs in Mumbai'

1st she have to look for appropriate opportunity and work on it and then she will plan on how to convince her family. She was flying high' all in her mind was to meet Maan in Mumbai and just the thought gave her so many imagination' she will be so free to meet him there' ohhh yes this will be best.

But between all this, the day he was leaving she could not stop herself to meet him' Maan was waiting for her too'.

If she comes to meet him now then she will definitely come to Mumbai' and he knows if she wishes she will manage.

He will be leaving in and hour when Geet entered his Havelli'.

He smiled "So came to meet me for the last time'. I will always remember the time spent with you"

She came closer to him for a hug' he hugged her back and then she whispered in his ear

"I am looking for job in Mumbai" She came in front to look into his face.

They kept looking at each other and then he cupped her face in his hands and took her lips with his' she responded back equally.

"Welcome to Mumbai" He whispered. She smiled and left from there. As now many people will be coming to wish him goodbye.

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One week has past since Maan left for Mumbai' His ancestral property and huge Mansion is in Delhi and also his head office and many main offices are in Delhi. In Delhi he leads a classy life style of Maan Singh Khurana and there is where his Dadima stays.

Delhi is a place of elegance and Status as Maan Singh Khurana but in Mumbai he leads his personal life'. It is from Mumbai office that he mostly works and visits Delhi in between to have look on everything and meet Dadima.

Here he works madly and then take a break from work by visiting Bars, party and if any girl is successful in catching his eyes' he can spend a day or two with her.

His life in Delhi and Mumbai is completely different. He does not have that elegant Mansion as Delhi in Mumbai but he owns a big Bungalow in Bandra.

(Guys I don't know much about Mumbai so I will not be so specific about places... but I needed to include Mumbai in story as going further in story Mumbai and Delhi have significant role to play'.. )

Once in Mumbai Maan gets completely engrossed in work' he has started work on all the new project that he had pushed back.. he is also in direct contact with Delhi office thru phone and Video conference'.

Though hell busy when ever he is alone in his Bungalow Geet somehow or the other lingers in his mind.

Two weeks has passes Maan is badly busy in his work'He is in his meeting when he gets a text'

"Arrived in Mumbai" Maan immediately excused himself from meeting' everyone in the conference room is surprised, never can Maan leave meeting in middle unless it's a real emergency

He called her back "hey babes' when did you come"

"Just landed'. Am in airport, just wanted to give you a surprise. I am going to see my apartment"

Maan was super excited that Geet was there in Mumbai'. This was all new for him. Leaving the meeting to talk to her and then he immediately wanted to see her.

"Hold on' just stay there, I am coming" "Maan you don't need to' I will manage"

"I am coming" and he cuts the phone.

"Ohh no'" geet thought. She was with her friend Abhi who is one of her Diwana from Bangalore college. She never gave any importance to him but while coming to Mumbai she knew he is in Mumbai too so she needed his help to find the apartment and initial setup'

She did not prefer to involve Maan in these needs of hers, nor did she expect him to do such work for her in his busy schedule. These were the time to use persons like Abhi who will, she knew whole heartedly come to her help and do even more than needed.

Now she knew Maan would not say anything when he will see over excited Abhi but he definitely is not going to like it. She also can't get rid of Abhi at present as he is the one who will take her to the apartment and finalize things with Land owner.

"Let's go Geet' I have got half day off for you, let's go and finish up the final with the owner' Everything is all set, you just need to say yes to it."

"Abhi, actually one of my friend is coming to meet me... can we wait a little."

Abhi was little disappointed' he wanted to show her the apartment and then may be help her set up there' he can that way spend time with her' but he had no option.

Now Maan was almost reaching'

"Shall I bring coffee for both of us'."

"Sure so nice of you abhi' please" Least did she want to give Maan first sight of her standing with Abhi.

While Abhi leaves Maan enters and Geet waves'. Maan comes with quick walk and smile on his face'.

Abhi is coming with coffee'

Maan comes near Geet and they hug each other tight. Abhi sees this with eye wide opened and could not move from his place.

Geet hugging a man'. She always keeps her distance and here'.

How much he had worked for her and all she did with him was shake her hand for just few second and then maintained her distance. He so much wished she will hug him but no and here'..

Next to be continued

Part 9

Precap: Abhi:

"Geet where are you' are you alright, I tried calling you so many times'. Tell me if you have any problem, that boy you went with I don't trust him".

Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it. The best part and an almost untold confession of heart was how Maan leaves his meeting in the middle for just her. He might not say so, but as per his track record he has never done this before, not for a girl. Continue soon. Loving ur story.
Edited by khushi_4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
This just turned a new angle completely! Maan walking out of a meeting to call her was a super shock!! and him even going to the airport cause he wanted to meet her desperately..❤️

wow.. I loved Geets attitude, in that she didnt want anything from him , not his time, not his efforts to help her in any way.. I want her to keep this up , so that he himself realizes what all he wants to do for her , with her.. so that he realizes he wants her to share everything with only him😍..

yeh yeh I know we need to keep patience😆.. dont worry , i ve plenty. ;)

and man... seriously the way Geet 'is using' Abhi, is kind of shrewd, and street-wise.. and though its not a likable attribute in a girl, I am sure she will grow out of it.. very genuine and unique characterization though. very interesting.
Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet in mumbai with maan? great. lovely update. loved geet saying" yaad gayee kab thee"
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome.
Wow...i'm just loving it.
Maan is changing...but i feel very soon Maan will be back in his MSK mode.
Lets just wait n watch.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem maan wanted geet in mumbaI AND NOW SHE IS IN and abhi saw the hug
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome..Geet goes after Maan to Mumbai..
Maan went to see her at airport..
precap: Maan said to Geet..
waiting more..

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