OS...My take on akshi*s delivery~

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hai..dosthom...there r lots of os during these days👏👏 esp on the topic ""akshis delivery""..so i m also trying one😉...ye thoda filmy h😕

(sorry i m not writing it on dimri*s pov becoz i cant imagine it..😭..i m leading it in my own version...may we all want 2 see this magnificient moment like that))

***My take on akshi*s delivery***

Its start 4m the point where Natik leaves 2 the airport...

Akshi couldnt go with him 2 the airport as she was in this stage..she was very sad...bma @ ga3 realised it but they also couldnt relieve her as simple words r not all worth at this moment so they decided 2 leave her alone...she came 2 their room...she broke out in tears seeing his shirt at their bed...she sat on bed holding that shirt tightly..trying 2 feel him in that shirt..she was mesmirised with all that sweet moments which she spend with him esp those moment which they 2gether spend these 9 months...

Although she knws that it was a tough decision 4 him 2 leave her but she was trying 2 make herself understand still she couldnt😭

ak:ap kyon gaye natik???😭😭

soon her phone rings...it was a blank message 4m natik which he send while he was travelling 2 airport...

msg:I m really sorry akshara...i love u😭

It added her sadness...she was completily blank inside..she also replied..**a true blank message** both in sense of texting @ meaning...

msg: ...

Natik could understood it better than her...

nt(2 himself):mujhe patha h akshara ap kabhi kuch nah kahengi...par mein jantha hoo mujhe ab apka sath dena chahiye tha...ap chahthi thi na ki hamare bacche ko mein hi pehle dekhoo...lekin shayadh bagvan(actually dimri😡) ko ye manzoor nah h..ye bi hamari ek pareeksha hogijisse hame ladna hi hoga..

tears falls 4m her eyes😭

@ss

akshi was also crying😭

ak:Natik...mein janthi hoo ki apko bi utni takleef ho rah h jithni mujhe...shayadh mujhse bi zyaada😭

she placed her hands on her stomach...

ak:aur hamse zyaada hamare baccha dukhi h..dekhiye jabse ye baath suni h..mujhe ek baar bi kick nah ki...ye bi apse milne keliye bahuth bechen tha..aur jab vo khadi ay😭😭

Tears over flow 4m her eyes...

ak:par Natik..hamare bacche ko ap pehle dekhe ya last mein...mereliye vo pal sabse anmol hoga..ab mein bi uss pal keliye intezar karoongi...jab apke bacche ko ap apni ghodh mein le lenge😭

she somehow controlled herself @ again meesaged him...

msg:Natik...*WE 2 LOVE U ** hum apke intezar kar rah h...jaldi ayiyega

she kisses on the wordings (mobile screen) @ send it❤️

Natik reaches at the airport...

Natik was overwhelmed with her action @ he also receives it by kissing on the msg❤️

Both tried 2 manage the situation..our naksh was so responsible..so they were success at this 2 a great extent

he had a safe flight..he reached at the room...freshned up..but since the time he left 4m home,his mind was with akshi..(he was mentally with akshi @ physically in pune..)

Both were not in a state of mind 2 talk 2 each other so they avoded it...Natik continuosly called in land line @ enquired about the akshis conditions...

It was evening...bma @ ga3 was eagerly waiting 4 akshis labour pain...they decided 2 go 2 temple 2 do some special pooja*s...as they didnt expect the news this time...

they left...

girija came with juice 4 her..she doesnt wish 2 drink it but she felt like natik compelling her 2 take it...so she takes the glass 4m her hand suddently she felt pain @ the first word she said was **natikk**..there natik also felt that akshi was calling him...he immiadetily tries their land line no:

girija also got tensed she takes the glass 4m her hand @ went down 4 calling maharaji..there mj was talking 2 natik over phone..he holds the phone @ listnes 2 her...

gi:mj akshara babhi ko dard ho raha h..ab hum kya karoo..ghar par toh koi nah h...

mj:hey bagvan..choti dulhan aur bma toh mandir gaye huwe h...

natik also heard this..

nt:mj ji..ap meri baath suniye..ap jaldi akshara ko hospital le jayiye...

suddently mj notices rj coming with shaurya...(remember yesterday rj said that she would go 2 ss the next day)

mj:munna...ab chintha ki koi baath nah...bagvan ki kripa se bahu rani ki maa aur bhai agay h...

mj hands the phone 2 shaurya @ rj rushed 2 akshi*s room...

sh:ji jamai saa mein shaurya bol rah hoo..

nt:dadu...akshara...

his eyes get filled...

sh:jamai saa ap chintha math kigiye..hum agay na...ab hum sab samalenge..

nt:jantha hoo dadu phir bi ap akshara ki khayal rakhiye..unhe kisi bi tarah ki takleef nah honi chahiye...

sh:ji...ap toh janthi h apki jagah koi aur nah le saktha..phir bi hum poori khoshish karoongi ki akshara ko apki kami mehsoos na ho...hum sab h na uski himmath badane keliye...

nt:thank u dadu..mein ab rakthi hoo...dadu ap mujhe pal pal khabar karthi rehna nah toh

sh:zaroor jamai saa...

They immediatly takes her 2 the hospital...they had informed it 2 all other dinos @ ms members..so all reached at the hospital...

akshi was taken 2 the doctor room in wheel chiar @ all ladie gang was with her by giving her mental strength doctor came @ checked her...As she cried alot her bp was high @ she was having false pain..her fear increased seeing an another pregnant lady who was having labour pain.so they had 2 wait till she gets the orginal labour pain..so she was admtted...

she knews that natik wouldnt come still she was expecting him...by looking at the door she was waiting 4 him...

The usual family drama was there..every one tensed esp the rj by saying meri bacchi...After about 2 hours akshi get the labour pain she began 2 scream with pain...she was only taking his name..

Natikkk..Natikk...Natikk...

According 2 the doctors instructions...sister takes her 2 the labour room.in this painfull situation 2 ..she was lost in Natik...she was craving 2 get a glimpse of him..At that time Natik calls shaurya @ he told him about these..

sh:jamai saa akshara ko abi labour room mein le jayega...ap usse baath kigiye usko accha lagega...

shaurya places the phone near her ear (didnt put in speaker as it was private thing)

nt:akshara...

akshi was still in pain so she was not able 2 reply she was hardly taking his name..

ak:natikkk...ap..ke..bi...naaa...

nt:akshara..mein apke pass hi hoo...abi bi mein apke sabse khareeb hoo...apke dil mein...apko kuch nah hoga..mein hoo apke pass..mein hoo akshara..bas aj apko mujhe apne dil mein mehsoos karna hoga...

ak:iii...lll...vvv...uuu...nat...iii...kkk

nt:i love...u both...

With this..she was taken 2 the labour room...

there natik gets the call 4m manager 4 a casual meeting so he gets ready with mind which was at akshi.it was a more tough situation 4 him...he came 2 hotel lobby 2 hand his room key..there he mets the Mr raichandh (2 whom who did the designs 4 wedding)..In the casual talk he said him about his present condition...As Mr Rathod was his one of his close friends..he immediatly called him @ recommend 2 postpone the meeting..mr rathod was also sad at his mistake as he didnt give a chance 2 natik explain his situation...@ happily agreed 2 postpone the meeting that to for a week @ both wished him by saying ""go young man @ enjoy with ur coming baby""

he couldnt believe it..With out wasting time he thanked them 4m the bottom of his heart @ takes the next flight 2 udaipur...he had informed it 2 shaurya @ asked him 2 keep it as a surprise 4 akshi...

After 2 hours..(patha nah kitne time lagthe h😆)

Nurse come outside with a cute little baby boy exactly a ***junior Natik***

Every one was happy 2 see him...dj says that it was their new generation... @ the others saying about their new promotions as some become dada..dadi..mam..mami...

but the nurse denies 2 hand the baby 2 others except as the baby doesnt cry till now(its very imporatant..i think😕)..so every one pampers him with out taking him...

every one enquired about the akshis condition

doc:akshara bi bilkul teek h bas vo sshock ki vajah se abi bi behosh h..thodi der badh vo khudhi jaag jayenge...abi thodi der mein usse room mein shift karenge...

every one get relieved..

Natik landed at the udaipur airport ..he hires a taxi @ started his journey 2 city hospital..through out the way he was talking 2 shaurya telling him how he feels now @ sharing all things..shaurya also told every thing but natik requested him 2 not tell anything about his baby as he want experience it..not even whether its a boy or girl...

They brought akshi back 2 their room...

After some hours..

akshi opened his eye..she had 4getten every thing just searched 4 natik...just then nurse came inside with their baby...her eyes get filled with tears..

ak:natikk..hamara baccha bi agaya...ap kaham ho natik...

there,Like a Hero he got down 4m car @ rushed 2wards them

she had been always wished 2 see him along with Natik...but 2day it was not possible...while she was thinking all these...nurse placed the cuttie in her hand..she gently holds him @ closed her eyes...baby was also in deep sleep...(he didnt cry till now..))

she saw him in her mind...opened her eyes...suddently she felt his touch along with her hands...she fastly looked at there @ she was ** shocked** seeing him beside her...

she fastly placed her head on his shoulder...@ cried..but this time it was her **khushi ki anzoo**

ak:natik...

he placed his hands around her @ caresses her...

he kisses on her 4head ..

nt:akshara...i love uuu so much...

ak:(with tears of joy)love u 2 natik...

suddently baby cries @ they both...2gether looked at their sign of love..their baby...(our munna ka munna)...both realised that it was a baby boy...

ak:dekha Natik...ladka hi huwa h...

nt:haa akshara..ap sach keh rah thi...

he softly caresses him..

akshi slightly bents down @ kisses on babys 4head @ looks at natik with a great satisfaction...@ handed it 2 him...he carefully takes him in his hand... @ he was seeing his jhalak in him..he was utterly wondered seeing the cuttie...gave him a kiss of love..some how..the baby undestood that it was his pappa...so the little one moved his hands as if he recognised him...as if he was happy 2 see him there(a slight movement)lol...😆

@ it was a great moment 4 natik @ akshi...

nt:akshara...lagtha h ye bi mera hi intezar kar rahi thi...jaise ap..

his eyes get filled...

ak:natik...ab sab teek ho gay na...dekhiye bagvan hamari ye wish poori ki..bhala kaisa na kartha..mein aur baby milkar duwa mangi thi...aur baache ki wish mein bagvan kabhi na nah kahengi...

nt:haa...akshara..apko bahuth dar sehna pada na...apko bahuth takleef huwi honge na..sorry akshara..un vakth mein apke pass nah tha

she placed her fingures on his mouth

ak:apko kuch bi kehne ki zaroorath nah h..bas iss pal ap mere sath h mere pass h..yehi mere liye sabse badi baath h😃😃😃😃😃

they sat by holding their baby...Naksh were really excited..both were admiring him @ tried 2 find the similiarity they have with the baby😳😳

bg mein naya version of jadoo sa which they will show after the baby arrives😉😉😉

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(bas itna hi agar mein zyaada likhoongi toh apni ff mein iss situation mein kuch bi nah dikha pawoongi so baaki uss vakth)))

Edited by i4naksh - 13 years ago

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ammu4u thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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edo thanikku etra hugs thannalum mathiyavilla...u made my day
thante os enikku orupadu ishtayi...sarikkum entha parayandathu ennu enikku ariyilla...munna delivery time il undavilla enna news kettathu muthal ente mood ful poyi kidakkuva...sarikkum karayan anu thonnanathu....oru padu prathekshakalodeya njan chota munna undakan scene nu vendi nokki irunnathu...oduvil athinu samayam ayapol kittunnathellam potta newskal anu....edo aa dimri ne matti ashu aayi koode cv...thante os le pole show il sambhavichal i ll be the happpiest person....sathyam ayittum enikku atrakku ishtamayi...munna ayirikkanam adyam kochine edukkanam vere aru eduthalum enikku sahikilla...thannte bhavana enikku ishtayi...
start 2 end kidilan....munna pona scne enikku sarikkum karachil vannu...blank msg part sarikkum sankadam varunnu...n akshi calling naitik's name onlyathu ettavum ishtayi...aval shirt pidichu karayanathu vayichapol enikkum sankadam vannu...pinne whole baby birth kochu karayathathum pinne munna eduthapol karayunnathum vayichapol ente mukhathu 100watt smile ayirunnu...de ippolum ninnatilla aa smile...munnede entry sarikkum hero mathiriavar randum kochine nokki irikkanathum...pinne enikku ettavum touchng ayi thonniyathu LR il keranathinu munpu munna phone vilikkanathu...sarikkum athu enikku oru padu ishtayi....whole os is just fantastic...mindblwng...awesome...vere enthokke visheshanagal undo athokke




Edited by ammu4u - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice...👏

awsomee...😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb OS asha!
beautifully written..
but one thing.. if the baby doesnt cry soon after coming out of the womb, it means that his respiratory tract has not cleared, and he is dead.😭

Anyways.. lovely part *claps*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS Asha...😛
tumaray os may naitik aygay wow...😃 kash asay he serial may be ho patha hope sooo...😃
u write sooo beautiful asha...👍🏼
Edited by fazeel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice os asha aapi👏👍🏼 kash kash kash serial mai b aisa ho jae itne sare osmil chuke hain plzzz cvs hum pe mehrban ho jae
but lovely os😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!! a very big 🤗
awesome os... loved it.
now I cant wait for the real thing...
the blank msg part was seriously tooo good...
and "ak:par Natik..hamare bacche ko ap pehle dekhe ya last mein...mereliye vo pal sabse anmol hoga..ab mein bi uss pal keliye intezar karoongi...jab apke bacche ko ap apni ghodh mein le lenge😭 "

I think thats what we have to say and satisfy our selves too...

well written...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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may sab kuch iss tarah ho jaaye kitna acha hoga waiting 4 that
love u naksh
asha loved ur o/s
Edited by ANN91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey asha...
superub OS... its awsome...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS👏 Asha
luvd it👏

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