SiNal World -New OS/SS New update @pg 1

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Jai Sree Rama

@Manavi_kesari

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Iamrani
Nice one Savz, but it seems that the story can be extended further. Please write an extension to it as I want to know how they fight together to win this case

thanks rani it's just my first attempt if find time i will try to extend it or comeup with new one 😊

Quote

Jai Sree Rama

@Manavi_kesari

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Ovi_Tanni
Wow nice update...i so liked this different siddhi😊 plz continue it😊

thanks 😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Jai Sree Rama

@Manavi_kesari

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Guyz this is OS on sinal. bear with the mistakes n let me know ur views so that i can improve,thanks😊

Kunal!Ah! siddhi squealed as he picked her up from the bed, carrying her like a baby.

Kunal : No! you have to eat breakfast with me. no more sleeping in. he demanded,heading

towards the kitchen table.

Siddhi: "please don't drop me ...,she looked up at him with puppy eyes,kunal i will kill you if you do."

A light chuckle escapes from kunal's mouth and squeezes siddhi in his arms gently.

Good morning, says seema when she sees siddhi and kunal approach the kitchen table.

"you can let her go now" seema opens his arms, by grinning at them. but siddhi didn't want to

leave kunal's arms, she liked the way her head comfortably layed against his chest with his

scent roaming around her, and his defined muscles against her skin. she look over the

kitchen table where ishani & anokhi(seema's kids) are having a little food fight & just grinning

with their dimples showing at seeing siddhi in kunal's arms.

siddhi : i was living with the team what a perfect life it is! she closed her eyes slowly, with her

head still pressed against kunal's chest,couldn't imagine anything better than this. she

suddenly open her eyes by kunal calling in the distance, her desk and laptop infront of her

with her IF story on the screen.Just another daydream.😍

Quote

Jai Sree Rama

@Manavi_kesari

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

thanks guyz who liked it

Quote

MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Nice nice

pls update more romantic ones 😳

Quote

Jai Sree Rama

@Manavi_kesari

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: MsCeylon
Nice nice
pls update more romantic ones 😳

thanks i will try 😊

Quote

gaya3sp

@gaya3sp

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Very lovely savz...
This was a big dhamaka in a small pack...
Though short it conveyed lot...

Keep writing ... 👏

Quote

Jai Sree Rama

@Manavi_kesari

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: gaya3sp
Very lovely savz...
This was a big dhamaka in a small pack...
Though short it conveyed lot...

Keep writing ... 👏

thanks for the support n encouragement 😃

Quote

Jai Sree Rama

@Manavi_kesari

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

This is how kunal & siddhi of my OS look like.

Author's Notes:

Quick little fluffy One Shot story that I came up with while I was trying to write

Hope you all enjoy it 😊

Disclaimer -- Although many of us wish we did, I don't own kunal or anything to do with the fellow. This is simply my interpretation and something that was bouncing around in my head for a while screaming to get out. I do however own the female character siddhi 😉just kidding 😆

Rated PG to be on the safe side, not that there is anything in here that shouldn't be in here,😕 😆

ok enough of jokes, coming to the story 😳
😉

siddhi:"Kunal, I want to leave..."

kunal looked over at siddhi strangely. she expected him to protest, but instead he simply turned and followed her as she walked away. she felt him placing his hand on the small of her back to lead them out of the club.

she briefly caught the look of annoyance in his expression.

Once they stepped outside, she breathed in deeply, relieved to be away from the stifling atmosphere of the club.

she let the cool, crisp night air fill her lungs completely before slowly letting out the breath that she didn't realise she had been holding. The horrible stench of sweaty bodies and smoke lingered in her hair.

"Don't you just hate that smell?" kunal asked quietly, crinkling his nose. It never ceased to amaze siddhi how often they were on the same wavelength. It was almost as if he could read her mind.

siddhi:"I know. I'm dying for a shower."

He slowly set off down the footpath away from the club in silence. Now it was her turn to follow him.she could sense him wondering why she had wanted to leave.she didn't have the desire to discuss it.she was afraid of what would come of the discussion.

Instead of heading to the lot where the car was parked, she just kept walking. He seemed to know that she didn't want to go home yet. At this point in time, she just wanted to walk, to be with her best friend. she hooked her arm around kunal's and rested her head onto his shoulder as they strolled along. He looked down at her hands that
were interlinked with his right arm, smiled and placed his own free hand over the both of them. He patted her hands before giving them a tight squeeze. The warmth emanating from his hand over her crept its way through her body.

they ended up walking right up to the foreshore, where the street met the beach. siddhi's feet hit the sand, sinking in slightly. she took her shoes off, and buried her feet in the cool grains of white.she walked along, dragging her feet a little.she stopped walking and tugged on kunal's arm to get him to stop as well. they stood looking out over the water.

she dropped her shoes to the sand, and crossed her arms to try and protect herself to the coolness of the wind. The sky was clear and bright, the horizon sprinkled with tiny, glittering stars, almost like diamonds. Moonlight danced off the waves, illuminating the breaking water with silvery patches. The sound of the ocean seemed to heal her anxiety, dissolving it as the water crashed against the shore.

she barely heard kunal's faint sigh. she turned to him, watching the ocean breeze whipping his hair softly around the edges of his face. His brown curls framing his face perfectly. Even in the diminishing light, his eyes still sparkled with the moonlight.

kunal met siddhi's gaze and smiled his trademark lopsided grin, confusion still lingering in his expression. Still, he didn't ask her why she had wanted to leave so suddenly. Instead, he started off on one of those random conversations that she enjoy the most.

kunal:"You know what?" he asked.

siddhi:"What?"

kunal:"Of all the places in the world, I'd have to say that the beach is my favourite. But especially the beach at night," he explained.

siddhi:"Which beach?" she questioned.

kunal:"Any beach. It doesn't matter which."

siddhi:"But you must have a favourite. There are a cagillion beaches!" she exclaimed.

kunal:"A cagillion hey... Is that even a word?"

siddhi:"You know what I mean," she replied, smacking him playfully on the arm.

kunal: "Well, i don't have a favorite because every beach has something special about it. Maybe it's the way the moonlight shines off the water, or the way the sand is so hot that you have to walk along the actual water. Or maybe the different sized shells scattered along the sand, or those pebble beaches that massage your feet as you walk. I don't know. There's just always something."

siddhi couldn't respond. she could only stand in awe of his appreciation of the world.kunal has an artist's soul.

Kunal:"You know the best thing though, the one thing that they all have in common?" he continued.

siddhi:"What's that?" The smile on my face matched the one spread across his own."They seem to evoke romantic moments out of absolutely everyone. Even the biggest oaf has to feel romantic on the beach."

kunal began to walk off again, his eyes combing the sand. siddhi followed, his searching perplexing her.

He seemed to be looking for something in particular. His expression brightened as his eyes fell upon some treasure. she couldn't see it in the dim light. He leaned over and pulled something from the sand. He held up a large pebble, brushing the sand away as he held it up in the light. It was smooth and clean from years of tumbling in the water as it crashes against the shore.

siddhi's eyes widened as kunal got down on one knee, facing her. He looked up into her surprised expression, his face alight with mischief.

"siddhi," kunal said, the tone of his deep voice sweetly seductive, "will you marry me?"

He held the rock out to her as an offering. she continued to stare at him dumbfounded.

kunal:"C'mon on," he urged. "With a rock this big, you had better say yes!"

she chuckled. Reaching down, she grabbed his wrists and pulled him to his feet.

siddhi:"You are such a nut!"

she took his hand and tugged him along to continue their walk along the shoreline.kunal loosened his grip to then interlace their fingers, as he then slipped the offending rock into the pocket of his waistcoat.

kunal:"Aren't you going to give me an answer?" he pleaded.

siddhi"No."

kunal:"No, you won't give me an answer? Or No, you won't marry me?" He sounded as though he almost didn't want her to respond.

siddhi(considered her answer carefully.): "No I won't give you an answer."

she watched him from the corner of her eye as the smile slowly crept across his face. she turned her face towards him as she gave him a sly wink.

And with that kunal let their hands separate, but side-stepped towards her.He draped his arm loosely over her shoulders and pulled her into him even closer. he felt him kiss the top of her head lightly as they walked along, and she couldn't help but let a grin spread across her lips. they continued walking along the beach, settling into another of their comfortable silences.

Quote

tanyashrivastav

@tanyashrivastav

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

amazing os savz loved reading it...

Quote

1 2 3

SiNal World -New OS/SS New update @pg 1 - Page 2

Related Topics

Explore Topics