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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey just read all the 3 parts.. Its really Gud.. Luvd Maaneets catfight 😃 ...Luvd rajveer n Geet bonding... Wat happened to her di?? And asmi is a Cutiepie ❤️ ..could you plz add me to your pm list? 😊
Edited by palluhegde - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsmmm update dear...
loved it.😊
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PART 3






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PART 4


Areh...Adi tum kahi jaa rahe ho??

Haan Maan ,I'm going with Pinky to watch a movie .

Pinky?? Maan asked while looking at the tickets lying on the bed.

Haan , I told you na ...she is my colleague.

Yeah...yeah I know ,but Adi why are you wearing this coloured shirt ,you don't like this colour na and what about this movie ?? You don't like romantic movies ,so why are you watching it.

Maan ,this is Pinky's favourite color and she loves Romantic movies ,toh maine socha ki...

Toh tumne socha kit um woh karoge jo tumhe nahi pasand.

Yaar...there's nothing like I'm not doing something that I don't like to.

Then what .. accha chod , main mechanic ke paas jaa raha hoon , to get my Yezdi.

Maan ,why did you stop in between? Bol na

Adi frankly speaking I don't get the point in changing ourself doing things , that we don't like in the name of relationship ...If a person really loves you ,she would definitely accept you as you are ,without changing you.

Maan, but I don't feel anything wrong in changing myself for some-one I like.

Maan smiled and before he could tell something else , Adi's phone rang , It's Pinky main jaa raha hun.

Adi left ,but the discussion between Maan and him did leave him disappointed ,but it's not a new thing for him...Maan was always like that , he never believed in changing himself for some-one else.

Even though they shared a very good bond ,but this thing always came up as a conflict.

Maan never believed in compromise ,neither in career nor in relationships.

Pari ,now relax we filed a complaint ...I'll talk to rajveer jiju about this , let's publish this in the paper so that all the cheated people can get to know about this and file their complaints.

Ok?

Thanks Geet.

Par Geet, if my father gets to know about this Police and all ,how will he react?he'll not be convinced I guess.

He'll tell that it's just a matter of 5000 and what's the nedd of running behind everyone for just 5000

Pari ,uncle kuch nahi kahenge and It's not just about 5000 ,it's about the cheating and it should not be tolerated...atleast we educated people should rasie our voice against such cheaters.

So there's no need to worry ,you have done the right thing.

Now smile.

Accha ek minute yahi rukna ,main abhi aati hun ...Asmi key liye kuch lena hai.

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Maan took his Yezdi from the mechanic

He was feeling thirsty and went towards a small shop , and he bought a cold drink

He checked his pocket , there were exactly 25rs with him , he spend all the money he brought with him on the bike.

Maan ,tub hi na tujhe zyaada paise lane chahiye the ,it's ok , for now these 25 bucks are enough for you.

He bought a cold drink and drank as much as possible as he was damn thirsty ,he was about to take another sip while moving and just then he clashed with some-one ,spilling the drink on that person.

Oh NO!!!

Damn!!!

He moved his eyes towards the girls face.

TUM??He shouted after looking at her .

Areh waah!!! NO wonder ki tum ho!!!

Look what's your problem ?? why can't you just look and walk!!! You always waste my money!!!

Stop ,just stop your bakwaas ,ek toh hamesha galti tumhari hoti hai and tum mujhe suna rahe ho??

Great!!

Whenever I clash with you , I suffer loss!!

Correction ,you always do mistakes and also face the consequences but unfortunately ,tumhare galtiyon ke consequences mujhe bhi jhelne padte hai!!!

Huh!!! Pehle my bike and now my dress!!

Both got spoilt for no mistake of mine!!

Accha...waah very nice ,first I had a loss of 6500 plus 25 because of you and now you are blaming me!!

Hello!!! because of me??? galti karoge toh uske consequences bhi tumhe hi face karni padeng na...In fact tumhari wajah se mera loss hota hai!!huh!!

They were hell irritated with each other ,no wonder they were fighting like kids in spite of dealing the situation like matured adults but strangely they were damn irritated with each other.

The fact that Maan's yezdi has to go to his doctor because of her always comes infront of him and makes him behave in a manner that irritates her.

Look ...Mr...Mr...whatever...haan Maan ...I'm in no mood to fight with you ...dress ke saath saath mujhe mood bhi kharab nahi karna!!!

Arrgh!!! She murmered to herself and left the place ,kuch na kuch gadbad karta rehta hai!!

Ajeeb ladki hai !!!

They both left the place.

Maan zyaada mat soch ,now your Yezdi is with you ...so you have better things to do better take care of its well-being and safety .

Geet ,just don't think of that irritated ,frustrated human Asmi must be waiting for you ,jaldi ja.

Geet left for her jiju's house on her scooty.

She entered the house and watched Asmi sitting on the carptet and doing her painting

She slowly went near her chweet Asmi and closed her eyes from her behind.

Maasi...!! Asmi shouted in excitement.

Geet smiled and sat on her knees beside Asmi on the carpet ,

Asmi kabhi kabhi toh aise mat pehchano yaar mujhe.

Maasi aap jab aise karto ho ,toh guess karna bahut easy hai.

Accha...my smarty , so itni easily pehchanti ho apni maasi ko??

She kissed her cheeks ,look what I have brought for you.

Wow...My favourite chocolates.

Thanks a lot maasi ,I love you she hugged Geet .

Aise hi bigaado ise ,

Geet turned back to find Rajveer standing there with his hands folded across his chest.

Not fair Jiju ,whenever I bring chocolates for my chweety ,you always tell that I'm spoiling her.

Batao Asmi ...is your innochent Geet spoiling you ?? Geet said with a baby face.

Bilkul nahi maasi , you are cho chweet ,how can't spoil anything in those big big world said Asmi cutely widening her hands .

Awww...my princess.

Rajveer came near them ...Oh God..kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki is ghar mein ek nahi do-do bacche hai.

Nothing much jiju ,just smile and eat this chocolate.

Geet said while offering a chocolate to his jiju.

Accha...if we all eat your chocolates then what about those that I brought??

Said Rajveer while showing the chocolates that he brought.

Accha jiju ...when I bring chocolates I'm spoiling Asmi and what about you then.

Simple ,now I'm spoiling two bacche ,you and Asmi.

They all smiled and ate those chocolates together.

Rajveer's wife and Geet's sister Ayesha passed away when Asmi was 3 years old from that time ,Geet ,Rajveer and all the other family members ,every-one else tried not to make Asmi realise the absence of Ayesha .

Accha who wants an Ice-cream today??

Asmi raised her hand.

Me...Me...!!!

No ...Geet...No ice-cream today ,said Rajveer

Jiju please ek baar ,bas ek baar,ek baar.

Haan papa please ,please!!

Areh no means no...aaj bahut chocolates ho gaye and no ice-cream today.

Jiju ...we don't have ice-creams everyday na...so please allow for today.

Please...Please.

Haan Papa Please.

Geet ,Asmi ...no ice-cream today...This sunday I promise ..I'l buy you your favourite ice-cream.

Okk..?

Ok Asmi ...maan jao ...Papa keh rahe hai toh.

Ok Papa..as you say,smiled Asmi

And that's like my princess.

Jiju ...sunday ko mere liye bhi.

Haan tumhare liye bhi,

They all enjoyed those moments

No matter how professionally Rajveer and Geet behave in the office but in house ,Geet loves to argue on the silliest of things and behaves like a kid and same with Rajveer ,he might be a bit strict in the office but in the house he pampers her a lot along with Asmi.

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Precap : Maan and his parents 😆

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Note:

Hello dearies ,Hope you liked this part ,recently I watched a telugu movie and I found few aspects of the movie very interesting so I thought of including it in this FF😃..everything else , including the setting ,back drop, professions, will be different except for the ponits of view of a character which I found very interesting will be included 😛.

So andhrite readers if any😆...I hope you people don't guess the movie at-least not after this part because you'll surely come to know about it in the next few updates.😉

I guess that movie is not a very big hit but somehow I found few parts of the movie really good ,that I actually wanted it to include that in this.😆

Hope you all like it...

Ab main bak bak is over and it's time that you post your generous comments 😳

Waiting ...waiting 😃


Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful part...
dey never meet in normal circumstances...!!!
luvd the convo b/w adi and maan...
jab hum apnon ke liye change ho rahi ho toh aur bhi khushi hothi hain..
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice dr...
loved maaneet's encounter...
masi's love ...
cho chweet😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem love maneetmeeting as a fact fight
Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update...
Especially maaneet's childish fight...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey wow awesome update...
uff again maneet fighting... kitna kadte hain wo dono...
love geet rajveer n asmi's bonding...
heyy which movie... naaku gurturavatamledu... :(((((
continue soon...

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