Eternal Return: Ch 9-16 summary; 26/July/2015; pg 101 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

-24 hour psychotic Dhood-Waala, comes to the house everyday so he has a fair idea where the family goes,who visits and what they do. Nobody would be suspicious about a dhood-wala so he just hangs around his cows and spy's on the family o_o

Right. No one would mind much when they see a man hanging around a house with a bunch of cows and buffaloes. But then again he might install some stealth camera on one of his cow which will give him access to entrance of the house. And might have installed several more cameras on porch and hallway while giving milk in mornings.

You have not given a description of the neighbour hood...nu-uh. For all we know, there could be random men in cows. In Bangladesh there was this crazy man who would keep his cow in the alley way into our house and then steal rice :| Anything is possible in this twisted world.

-24 hour Daakiya, can look through their personal letters (illegally of course) has an excuse to visit the houses and the neighbouring houses.

It's also quite possible given how Mrs. Guha doesn't have access to internet and carries a monolith cellphone which doesn't connect to internet and access her emails. She and her son have just started using post before which they were using homing pigeons. See what can happen with technology. Postmen reading letters (personal stuff) and killing woman and child. Tch...tch..

Some things just can't be e-mailed and Mrs Guha may not be as net savvy as you Ms.Sookie...sadly the poor lady may not have been educated in IT :( You, have ruined a woman's education by not mentioning it :( Bad Sookie!

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Edit: Even if it's upper middle class...the milkman could've fitted the cameras in whilst delivering the milk. Orrr the Daakiya may of brought a gigantic boss which he would have to take in the house and when in there he could fit cameras in :) Mrs.Guha seems like the ignorant fat old rich lady type...she was probably not even paying attention to poor old geaser.
Edited by .Stuff. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm...something is amiss...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -nirvana-

And when will Eternal Returns returns returns and returns...;)

The thread is in limbo 😆 It seemed like no one is really waiting for an update so I have planned on a total change of story ditching whatever I intended to write... I might as well experiment in implementing some things I've read and give the style change of writing a go.
So the pace of update might actually increase and the length of updates will vary abnormally...I will post the first change in few hours... Let's see what will be your take on it... I mulled over the things we were talking about this morning and then I realized what I was missing this whole time...so Thanks! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ek din ki chutti di thi...aur aap to AWOL hi ho gaye!!!

Ms Skipper please get your pen and parchment back in here...

<and yes, this is a threatening post...dont make me come after you 😆>

EDIT: I just saw your response to Aarya- you are updating 😃.

So I am in a fix- if you pester writers for updates- then you are pushy and mannerless...and now that I have been minding my ps and qs and revising my (Emily) Post...you come and say no one is interested. Next time, I shall fire the threats exactly after 1 day 😆
Edited by -pixie- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Note: After this update I will not be sending out PMs regularly. I will send them for every two or three updates as I plan to update regularly.
6. Nocturnes for Dreamscapes:

She was lying in a crimson haze. It was as if he had walked into a room with only red lights on. But he knew that redness of the room was not because of light. No. It wasn't. The walls of moderately sized room were reflecting the liquid red that was splashed across the room. His shoes squelched whenever they made contact with the floor. There was something familiar about the woman's profile ' the way blood tainted her angular jaw jutted out in stubborn rebellion, her once wild hair now horribly knotted and sticking to her scalp. But the bloody mess couldn't help him recognize the face from where he stood. But the familiarity that had initially hit him was causing havoc in his mind. He forcefully moved forward taking in the ghastly smell of something primordial and something terribly dark as his feet protested every moment he stalled. His lungs swished down a breath as his feet brought him two feet away from the woman. He closed his eyes to avoid the onslaught of emotions that accompanied with the grotesque image ' fear. It paralyzed him with shock and horror scrawled on his face when the face of the blood trotted woman turned to a familiar face. Bile rose in his throat and his vision became hazy.

He didn't know if he was welcoming the darkness or the darkness took pity on him and took him in its embrace.

"Maan, are you okay?" Geet called him out in soft whisper as Satya and Emily disappeared inside the room. Maan swiftly turned away from the door and leaned on the accompanying wall, facing hallway. His knees gave away and he slowly slid down the wall his head lolling against the wall. Had his eyes were open he would have seen the flash of terror that ran on Geet's face at his state. He took several deep breaths and whispered, "I am okay." It tasted like artificial sugar in his mouth ' bitterness morphed to sweetness. He felt Geet kneel down close to him as he could hear the crispness of her trouser made a soothing ruffling sound. He felt cool of her hands run over his forehead and caress his cheek. He breathed a sigh of content and ordered his nerves to stay calm. The throb in his chest reduced and the claws of unknown fear that clenched his heart were retracted.

He finally opened his eyes to see her brown ones filled with concern.

"I am okay," he whispered. "Let's go in," he said a moment later picking himself up from floor. He didn't ignore her helping hand as she held his shaky ones. She gently squeezed it looking into his eyes and nodded. He let go of her hand as they entered the bedroom.

Edited by -Sookie- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
THIS SCENE WAS FAMILIAR TO MAAN
HAS HE GONE THROUGH IT BEFORE
IT WAS QUITE HORRIFYING
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update!!...
Maan's past memories are opening up...
Elated to know dat v'l get the updates daily!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
our sub-conscious mind holds so many secrets...that sometimes even we r not able to distinguish between a reality n dream...whether what we saw actually happened or we were just dreaming...

seems like the sleeping demons r now waking up...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am waiting for you to update 3-4 parts so that i can read them all together...that way i won't be suffering from withdrawal syndrome...😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update...
Fabulous

thanks for pm..
Luved it..
Continue soon

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