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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: i rok

oh gooddd cant wait for the updatesss. what about the other fanfics

I won't be able to update other fan fics today
will be realy busy at work today😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -memorable-

waiting for maan to beat that DEV & PAMMI 😡 with whip

lmao
hahaa maan might need a bigger whip😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
U need to say dat u r lucky 2day coz 2day me in bad mood so i wil nt eat ur head even if u nt updated.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29

Nice 2 see u r back.

yep good to be back😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29

U need to say dat u r lucky 2day coz 2day me in bad mood so i wil nt eat ur head even if u nt updated.

aww hope everything is fien and tomroow you will be abck in your happy mood

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Posted: 13 years ago
THANK YOU GUYS! FOR YOUR COMMENTS!

Sorry can't reply back to each and everyone of you guys but only Like which I will do later!!

Here is the next much awaited part hopefully it was worth the wait😳
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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 58

Maan puts Geet behind her...he sees Dev at the bottom of the stairs smiling at him...Pammi stands right next to him...Geet holds on to Maan's shirt tightly looking at them with one eye shaking with fear...Maan felt her shake making him more angry..he closes his fists in rage...his veins were popping out almost ready to explode...he had told the driver to turn the car around when he forgot his important file home...but told the driver to speed the car when he saw a missed call from her. He had just hoped that she was fine and so was the baby.

Pammi: you made a biiggg mistake in letting us stay here...what did you think that I will forget what you did to me?

Dev: Gotta say Maan your wife is so beautiful...and her skin is so soft...

"EEEHHH"

Maan charges toward Dev..grabs him by the neck walking toward the wall while Dev struggled to get out of his grip..Maan slams him against the wall and raises him with one arm with anger...Pammi looks at him shocked..she goes near Maan hitting him on his arms and back telling him to let go but Maan ignored everything..all he saw was blood on Geet's head and her screaming in pain...Maan throws him across the room making him land on the glass dining table...with the amount of force the table brakes..Dev was lying on the floor with blood and blanket of glass underneath him...

Pammi: Let him go Maan...

Maan (looks at her with rage and grabs her hair) DON'T THINK THAT I WILL SPARE YOU! YOUR TURN WILL COME AND I WILL NOT GO EASY ON YOU! (he lets go of her making her fall down on the floor)

He walks toward Dev...he steps on his wrist..he looks at Geet...her blouse was ripped up and he noticed a bite mark on her neck...he presses more of his weight on his wrist until the glass goes inside his wrist making him scream in pain and agony...he takes off his foot and bends down near him...he holds a glass piece and stabs him on his palm...Dev screams...Maan holds his by his throat and picks him up...

"Are those the very hands you touched my Geet?" Dev smirks through his grip...Maan shakes him..."ANSWER ME!!!"

Dev: Yes...

He says with great difficulty...Maan throws him on the floor...and sits on top of his stomach..he punches him on his nose breaking it in the process...He then picks Dev up by his neck and slams his head on the wall leaving a hole behind...Maan picks up another piece of glass from the floor and scratches his other arm slowly until he screams in pain...his blood was dripping down his hand as Maan slides the glass down slowly...

Maan then drops the glass and picks him up above his head and throws him against the coffee table...Dev lies down on the floor covered with blood..Maan proceeds to go toward him with his belt...he wraps the belt in his hand tightly as he whips him...Dev crawls on the floor in pain to get away from Maan..but couldn't...

Maan hits him on the back as he crawls like an animal trying to get away from its pray...he stands behind him wrapping his belt against his neck chocking him...Pammi looks at him horrified..she saw Geet trying to stand up looking at Maan with tears..she goes behind her with a knife...she holds Geet by her neck making her scream in pain..Maan immediately looks up...

Pammi: Leave Dev or else I won't hesitate to kill your so called wife...

Maan (stands up leaving Dev alone..) Leave her NOW!! Before I do something really bad to you

Pammi: What can you do? I have your life in my hands now Maan...sign the property transfer papers before (she stabs Geet a little on the neck...)

Geet: Maan...bacha...(she cries..Maan looks at her and then her stomach...he closes his fist with anger..)

Maan: where are the papers?

Pammi (smirks) Good..they are in my room on the bed...bring it and sign them in front of me! NOW! (Maan looks at Geet's helpless state...)

Maan: Okay but get one thing straight...I won't spare you that is my promise!

Pammi: We will see now move! (Maan goes to the room and grabs the paper that laid on the bed...he goes outside..she still had Geet grabbed...Maan signs the papers without thinking...) Poor Maan will have no one in his life...you know your father was such a fool to think that I am pregnant with his kid...(Maan looks at her shocked) I controlled him like a puppet..slowly I had created misunderstandings between them and to such an extent that your poor mother got beaten by him everyday..(she laughs...) until one day she was killed by the same person...to tell you the truth I only wanted the baby to die...what did you name baby..ohh yeah...Pari

(Maan digs his fingernails in his palm as he closes his fist tightly) I tried convincing your father to poison the baby but he wouldn't agree so I had to come up with some other ways to make sure the baby wouldn't survive but who knew that I would be hitting two birds with one stone..(she looks at Geet with anger) NOW..I wouldn't enjoy anything more then to kill your wife...

Maan threw the papers toward her..."now let go of her..."

Pammi: Sure I will...(she presses the knife harder on her neck..Geet screams..Maan takes a step toward them) Don't Maan..stop or else I won't hesitate to kill the baby..(she points it toward her stomach)

Geet: Please..don't..

Pammi: Shut up...

"let go of Geet Pammi..." (She turns around still holding Geet..it was Rajvir...Maan looks at him shocked and anger...)

Pammi: Rajvir (she smirks seeing his wounds..she had him kidnapped before they started their plan with Geet...) what happened to you? You look awful.

Rajvir; You did a great planning in having me kidnapped so I can't warn Maan about you on time but too bad you didn't hire competent people for the job. Now, let go of Geet now! Or else (he takes out a gun and points it toward Pammi)

Pammi: What you are going to kill me?

Rajvir: No...him...(he points toward Dev who was still lying down on the ground...he shots on his leg making him scream)

Pammi: Stop...

Rajvir: Last chance let go of Geet...(Pammi lets go...throwing her on the floor) Maan take Geet to the hospital now! (Maan picks her up and rushes her outside...she had fainted...)

Pammi: How can you hit your own kid?

Rajvir: He is not my kid..I heard you! I feel so low and ashamed of myself in believing you...now no more! NOW I will make sure you pay for what you and your bas***d son did to Geet and Maan! (Dev tried to get up..Rajvir shoots him on his other leg...)

Pammi: Dev! (she tried to go near him but Rajvir stops him)

Rajvir: DON'T...stay where you are! Don't move! (Pammi throws her knife toward his leg...Rajvir gets down on his knee in pain..Pammi makes a run for it but Rajvir shoots her on the leg..she falls down flat on the floor..he gets on top of her and ties her hands tightly with her dupatta...)

Pammi: LET GO OF ME!

Rajvir: Shut up! (he slaps her hard on the face until she becomes unconscious...)

Dev: Please help me!

Rajvir (looks at him and goes near him...he steps on his other arm) I can't..you are no one to me!
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Maan holds Geet close to him as they drive to the hospital..he looks down on her...she was unconscious...barely moving..he puts his hand on her stomach..."your revenge is more important..." because of him she is here in this state...he should have never left her alone like this...now because of him he might loose the most important person that meant to him...he touched his face when he felt something wet on his cheek...water...was he crying?

For the first time ever since his mom died he cried...he looks down at Geet and hugs her...

"Geet am here...am sorry...you are more important to me and I will never leave you alone! Please Geet don't leave me...please..." She started to breath heavy...making him panic..he tightens his hold on her...

He looks at the driver "HURRY UP!!"

He takes her in his lap and cradles her like a little baby..he puts her head on his chest as he wraps his arms around her waist.."I am here now Geet..." (he whispers in her ear) "I was stupid, mad for revenge and failed to see what it was doing to you...please Geet don't leave me...I won't be able to live without you...please..."

He messages her back..she moves in pain...he quickly takes off his jacket and puts on her...more then anything he blamed himself...he is responsible no one else...his tear dropped on Geet's eyes..he didn't know he was crying...all that mattered to him was Geet...she slowly opened her eyes and looks at him..Maan looks down at her...she moves her hand up to touch his cheek and weakly smiles...he holds her hand...

"shetan"

She closes her eyes and rests her head on his chest...

"Geet...Geet...open your eyes...I am not a shetan...I am sorry...Geet..." He tried to move her to get a response but nothing worked..he rubbed her hands together to warm her but she didn't respond..Maan's eyes became cloudy..he couldn't see..."Geet...don't leave me...Geet..."

Okay guys how was it?
I tried to make it long but umm will update the next part tomorrow!
Please like and comment!
ohh and I won't be able to update other fan fics today😳

DON'T WORRY THERE IS MORE TO COME WITH DEV AND PAMMI!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
It wil only possible wen my one frend wil again start 2 talk wid me.
I knw its my fault bt she is nt forgiving me after saying ro many sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awsem dev beaten by maan really good and this pammi want to kill geet rajvir reach on time please save the baby and want more taurcher for pammi dev
Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by i rok

oh gooddd cant wait for the updatesss. what about the other fanfics
I won't be able to update other fan fics today
will be realy busy at work today😭

no problem
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part
hping dat geet & her baby is safe
want to in more pain dev & pammi😡
Edited by SONU_29 - 13 years ago

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