Aaj phir jine ki tamanna hai(ff) new updates on pg. 3, on 10Th july

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today is the last day of fillinf up of higher secondary school exam. and rashi had had not enough amount for paying school fee. she was sitting in school ground and almost to cry.suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder and when she moved back than she saw gopi there.
gopi- hey, what happenedtro u . why r u sitting alone here and why are u upset .

rashi-nothing

gopii-i can guess why r u upset nd if i am not wrong then u r worried abt filling up of ur exam form .

rashi said nothing.

gopi- take it ur receipt of ur school fee. i had paid itnd now u can fill ur exam form.

rashi ssaid nothing

gopi-take it' dont hestitate.

rashi was just amazed ongopi r and her eye has fillled with tears. she makes a hug with gopi and started crying like a child.

gopi- omg ,so much emotions. pls. stop crying and make me free from ur hug otherwise my image of non emotional girl will be damaged .and gopi started to laugh.

rashi left herand wiped her tears.

gopi -yaar,dont be so emotional otherwise u will be always get hurted in ur life.

rashi- what are u saying.

gopi- left me nd go otherwise school office will be closednd than u cant submit ur exam fom nd ur one year will bwe wasted.

rashi takes a breath of comfort.nd go to office and submitted her exam form.

at that night rashi cant get concentration on her study and frequently thinkig abt gopi ia flashing in her mind.today she saw a different gopi. before today she knowswhich gopi she had an other image.every person takes gopi as a heedless and a proudy girl who doesnt like to talk any person.even gopi had not talked to rashi also bt today she make help to gopi.

exam was going to held after 2 msand classes are discontinued for preparation of exam.so rashi cant meet gopi during this duratiion.

after 2 ms rashi was standing on busstop for going to exam venue.suddenly a car had stopped to her which was of gopi. gopi opened the door and insist her for going by her car .at first rashi denied it. but aftergopi's insistence rashi has to go by it.

in car rashi want to return the amount by which gopi helped to her. but gopi denied it.and asked -rashi u know well that i belong to a very rich family and what i had given to u it doesnt matter for me. if u really want to give something to mo than can u give me wht i want.

rashi- whynot ;if it will be in my hand...

gopi-let think well.

rashi-(lil hestitating)-o.k. pls. say.

gopi-i wnt to be ur frnd can u make me ur frnd.

rashi-what!

gopi- dont surprise as i have demanded ur bfrnd and sarted laughing.

rashi-whar r u saying, u want to be mine frnd.

gopi-yes, but why r u so surprising.

rashi-bcoz ther was no one in the class who doesnt want ur frndship but u always ignore them.but today u want to be mine frnd.

gopi-not today, i always want ur frndship but never can say as u always remai busy in ur study nd i dont want to distuab u.

rashi-o.k. why u hadnt make any other frnd.

gopi- bcoz .they all are impressed of my wealth nd take interest bcoz of my money'

rashi was totlly exclaimed with her and in her thought.

gopi- o.k. yaar, if u dont want than lets it go.i'll dont mind it.

rashi - i am accepting ur frndshipas i have also not any frd bcoz of my poverty and her eyes again filled up with tears.

gopi-omg how much u cried. dont be emotional otherwise u will be get hurted in ur life. at that day both have became frnd. they have to wait for 3 ms for their results in these 3 ms their frndship had developed at last extent.

after 3 ms ----------awaited results has been declared. as expected rashi got 85% in her exam but fate was not with gopi and she cant get success. after seeing results on net raSYHI WENT TO THE GOPI AS SHE WA T TO CONSOLE HER. BUT WHEN SHE MET WITH THE GOPI SHESURPRISED AS GOPI WAS BEHVING AS ON ANY OTHER DAY .RASHI THOUGHT THAT PERHAPS GOPI IS NOT KNWING ABT RESULTS. SO SHE WANT TO TELL HER ABT RESULT.BUT BEFORE SHE CAN SPEAK ANMYTHING SHE LISTENS THE GOPI'S VOICE.

GOPI---GOOD MORNING RASHI, U R HERRE., I WAS THINKIG THAT YHIS TIME U WILL BE IN TEMPLE FOR THANKING KANHAJI FOR UR RESULTS.

RASHI BECAME SURPRISED AND ASKED-THAT MEANS U R KNOWING ABT OUUR RESULTS .

GOPI-YES.

RASHI-THEN U R SURELY KNOWING UR RESULTS ALSO.

GOPI-YES.

RASHI-THEN R U NOT FEELING SORRY FOR THAT.!

GOPI-FEELING SORRY,! THAT MEANSTEARY EYES SADDY FACE LIEING ON BED AND BEHAVING LIKE DEVDAS ETC. ETC...AND STARTED LAUGHING. AFTER SOME MINUTES SHE BECAME LIL SAD AND ASKED TO RASHI -----RASHI , FRND, ITS O.K.. I KNOW I CANT GET SUCCESS, AND IM FEELING VERY SADNESS FOR THAT BUT LET ME U CAN TELL ME THAT MY CRYING OR MY TEARS CAN CHANGE MY RESLT, IF YES IT MAY HAPPENS THEN I'LL SURELYCRY AND BECAME SAD BUT MY TEARS CANT CHANGE MY RESULTS THEN WHY SHOULD I WASTE MY TIME IN SUCH A STUPID THINGS. GOD HAS GIVEN US LIFE TO LAUGH AND MAKE OTHER LAUGH THEN WHY SHOULD NOT WE ENJOY IT ALSO IN OUR FAILURE.RASHI, SUCCESS AND FAILURE R THE PART OF OUR LIFE. IM NOT SAYING WHO CANT GET SUCCESSTHEY SHOULD NOT BE SERIOUS ABT. THIS BUT IT DOES NOT MEANS THAt THEY SHOULD STOP LAUGHING.

RASHI WAS SURPRISINGLY SEEING AT GOPI AND THINKING THAT HOW CAN ANYONE LAUGH ON HER FAILURE.

AGAIN GOPI SAID - HEY RASHI, DONT UNDERSTAND THAT I HAD FORGOTTEN ABT UR RESULT. TODAY I AM NOT GOING TO EXEMPT U. U HAVE NECESSARILY TO GIVE A TREAT TO ME AND I HAVE NOT LISTEN ANY EXCUSE.

RASHI- O.K.O.K. ,WHERE AND WHAT DO U WANT IN TREAT.

GOPOI-NOTHING, JUSTANYTHING MADE BY YOUR HAND WILL BE ENOUGH FOR ME.

RASHI- GOPI I WAT TO SAY SOMETHIG.

GOPI- WHAT.

RASAHI- GOPI U R REALLY TOO GOOD AND SOME TEARS HAD CAME INTO HER EYES.

GOPI-O.M.G. THIS GIRL WILL BE NEVER BE RIGHT;EVERYTIME TEARY EYES,AND A LOT OF EMOTIUONS. RASHI,DONT BE EMOTIUONAL OTHERWISE

RASHI-,I WILL ALWAYS GET HURTED IN MY LIFE.(AND BOTH STARTED TO LAUGH)



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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely ff lovd it...








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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start😃 update soon and give it a name so I can remember😊
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Originally posted by: maddy311

Nice start😃 update soon and give it a name so I can remember😊

thanka for liking me.
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nice start cant wait to read the next part
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Nyc start!! plz continue soon n PM me whenever u update the next part
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Good job, can't wait to read the next part, this Gopi is very much like Giaa.
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It was really nice. Love them in coll! Love the positive rashi and strong gopi!! Continue soon
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but the fate of gopi is going to be against her. gopi, in next year at the time of the her exam , became very ill.and cant be present for her exam.
and in another next year at the time of her exam she had lost her parents and she became very upset and again cant be present for her exam.
after death of her parents gopi's uncle hads made a lot of frauds and taken all her property.
one day,when rashi went to gopi's home, she saw there some new person. she asked from gopi's aunt-
rashi-aunt, who are they.
gopi's aunt- they all are gopi's would be in laws and husband.
rashi-( being very happy) -it is a very good news. i come here on right time. now i can also meet with them.
gopi,s aunt-no...thtt means not just now as they perhaps may not like to meet ouytsiders.
rashi became lil upset but did not mind for that.
now gopi's aunt became busy in kitchen. and suddenly, gopi's one cousin came to rashi who had a pic of sumone.
rashi-whom pic. have u.
gopi's cousin-it is of nobody other thgan my jiju. that means gopi's would be husband..
rashi-really, then ,show it me also.
and took the pic from gopi's cousin. but' aftern seeiung the pic 'she remained shocked as it was of too aged man .for some moments sge became senseless . she decided to talk with gopi's uncle and aunt.
rashi-aunt,(by showig the pic) is it the pic of tht person whom gopi is going to get marrird.
gopi's aunt-yes.
rashi- how can u do this.this peerson is noy suitable for gopi. gopi cant be happy with him.
gopi's aunt- how can u say this when gopi self is agree for marriage.
rashi-gopi , r u really happy with decision. of marriage
gopi- hmmm...
rashi- pls. tell me truth.i am ur frnd...
gopi-my willingness is noit importnt, the important is that, i am going to be married and thn i wii be in my own house.
rashi-in ur home? what do u mean by that? it is also ur home where u r living.
gopi's aunt-no, now this is not gopi's home ,it is our house. and we dont want to keepo an orphangirl in our home for further more.
rashi-oh,the matter was that. if u cant keep gopi with urself then gopi can live in my home.
gopi- rasgi- what r u saying? i am happy with my uncle and aunt's decision.afterall iam goig to get married ( say by smilinbg )
rashi-gopi, what r u saying, it is not a small thing. it is question of ur whole life and pls. dont try to play with ur life.
gopi-right, it is my life and u have not right to interrupt in i,t now , u may leave.
Edited by ritika-gohem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice one .loved the story

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