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Posted: 13 years ago
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MAAN WAS SO FORCEFUL AND GEET WAS BEHAVING LIKE A SHREW
SHE DOES NEED HELP
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it, awesome continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

loved it

loved it loved it loved it like hell u have ur way with words
u make me read
every word
carefully
awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2
well Geet's mom now might know that her daughter is fine as Geet is now so staring and getting lost in Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Part3

He smirked at my baffled expression yet again

For now you can leave but I hope to see you again ...tomorrow same time

I was so annoyed and angered no one absolutely no one has ever talked to me in such audacious way

I remembered his expressions when he said that it was on him to decide whether I was sane or not

I sat in my car and started it immediately pushing my leg on accelerator speeding it up immediately

I looked outside the window the roads were empty I wondered why the day has started up so unusually

I looked at my cell phone that was vibrating on the dash board

Mom it displayed

I looked at the screen annoyed

Yeah it is because of her that I met stupid jangli doctor

The light on the cell phone faded making me aware that the call got disconnected

I threw it in the backseat not wanting to get annoyed by it anymore

I pushed in my favorite cd in the cd player

And the sound just soured the entire environment with its loudness

I speed up the car some more and within minutes it seemed that I was riding on the wings of wind

I relaxed a bit forgetting about everything and

Within minutes I was right in front of my pride

Handa industries

Good morning ma'am the guard wished me

Good morning I replied back

The moment I entered the office i saw everyone getting up straightening up and wishing me

I knew they all were scared of me but isn't that what was necessary to run the business in a disciplined way

I recalled how my father always used to bring me here in the office when I was a kid this was the only place where he found solace apart from home

He always used to tell me Geet beta honesty and discipline can conquer world and always remember that it is the most important thing in the business world too

Ma'am pinky came in rushing screaming my name

What is the problem pinky I asked in a stern tone

Woh ma'am Dr.Maan has called not once but almost 10 times and has threatened us that if you will not call him in 5 mins he will call up police and report a missing case against you

What I literally screamed

What does this stupid doctor thinks of himself

He can do anything

I marched up to my cabin immediately and called his clinic up

Hello a very strong voice answered the phone

Dr maan khurrana

I asked through my gritted teeth suppressing my anger for few seconds more

'Yes May I know who is this' the reply came

And that was it I literally got up and screamed on him

What the hell do you think of yourself?

How dare you called up in my office and threatened my staff

Do you think that you own your patients life huh

What do you think of yourself?

I sighed and took a breath after pouring all my wrath on him

Silence lingered on for a while and I really wondered was he even there

Hello Dr. Maan are you there or you deaf that you cannot hear me

Enough the shrilled voice came from the other side

I closed my mouth immediately

Wondering how the hell this man has the audacity to still shout but then i heard his heavy breaths as if trying to suppress his anger

Where the hell is your Miss Geet Handa

He asked

I looked at my purse and then my drawer it wasn't in there I tried to recall where have I kept my phone and then suddenly it flashed in my mind that I threw it at my back seat of the car

Miss geet I heard him scream again

Do you realize how irresponsible you are?

Your mothers has called you almost a dozen times and you have not even once cared to receive her call

Do you know how worried she was?

There was a huge accident on the salt street and probably that is the way that you take for your office

Am I right?

I was silent now I was completely at fault

Do you know how scared she was she called my office a dozen times she was so scared you were not at the office and even your silly staff were not answering her properly

How can you be so irresponsible Geet

Do you even realize how lucky you are?

That there is someone for you that worries and cares about you

I guess not because you don't know what it feels to stay alone

I was silent listening to his every word guiltily yes I was at fault but then when he said those lines i sensed something different his emptiness and loneliness there was much more behind that charming face of his

I am sorry I said abruptly

Silencing his angered voice

He was silent yet again his heavy breathing was heard

And almost after a minute of silence

I heard him mumble a hmm Just call your mom

I don't know why but a smile crept on my face immediately

I kept down the phone immediately and dialed my mother's number

As expected she was worried but as soon as I assured her about my being well and apologizing her for my stupid irresponsible behavior she calmed down

I looked outside the whole office appeared same people running and chatting at times everything seemed same but something was definitely different about this day..

I smiled yet again and tried to concentrate on the work that was to be done today but for the first time in the life I felt a lack of concentration in my mind towards work...

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so here is the next part do leave your comments

i will try to upload the next part tmrw

hope u all are liking the updates

and yup @ SNEHAJ you asked me how this unique idea well actually the day i started writing it i went to the hospital with a friend she had twisted her leg real bad and we all thought it is a fracture so there we met a real ahh cute doctor😆 and sweet

you know it was just that after i came back home i thought i will just write it in my diary as i like maintaining a diary entry for everyday

but then when i closed my eyes and tried to drown the days experience in words

it turned out in to something like a story

might sound stupid but that was the reason

chalo now me going to type as time goes by bye

love you all bye

MIKI

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Posted: 13 years ago
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yieppe i m the first one to comment🥳

awesome part

loved it
Edited by angelic_cute - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelic_cute

yieppe i m the first one to comment🥳

awesome part

loved it

hey there
thanks 😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
thank u
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome..
liked the phone convo...
hmm getting really interesting...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetha10

awesome..

liked the phone convo...
hmm getting really interesting...
continue soon

thank u
really i love to read your views on the update s
thanks for commenting once again 😊

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