My Version of Upcoming Episode: YES I DO

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Friends, i thot of writing an OS. Here's what i want in today's ( 12th Jan ) episode

Recap:

Kriya Chooses Swayam as her favourite guy over Rey making Rey hurt and jealous

Episode:


Kriya and Swayam do a small slow dance while Kriya looking at Rey all the time and swayam towards Sharon.
Rey gets up in between and says

R: guys, mein abhi aata hun thode der mein.. ( Making excuse of going to the loo )

Swayam n Kria stop dancing. Kria could sense a problem and knows that loo is just an excuse. She wants to go behind Rey but cant think of something to get out of there in front of everyone.

Swayam understands Kria's expression and makes a plan to get Kria out of there..

Sw: Mein bhi aata hun guys.. Shayad se i left the car open. Kria, kya tum chaloge?? I need to talk to u..
K: haan sure..

While going towards the car, Swayam talks to Kria

Sw: Mein jaanta hun ki tumhara favourite guy kaun hai..
K: Kya?? kaha toh meine ki tum ho..
Sw: Kriya, tum mujhse jhooth nahin bol sakti..

Kriya looks down and feels ki she made a mistake and has hurt Rey

K: Toh tum hi batao mein kya karun.. Mein nahin janti ki sabko pata chale.. issilye i took ur name...
Sw: Haan woh mujhe pata hai.. but tumne Rey ko hurt kar diya na..
K: Toh ab mein kya karun??
Sw: Dont Worry.. Hum Rey ko dhoondlege and tum usse Sorry bol dena..
K: Thanks Swayam..

Rey was sitting alone near the pond ( Kal wala ) and throwing stones.. From a distance Swayam locates Rey and asks Kriya to spend some time with him alone..

Sw: Tum Rey ke saath raho.. Mein baki sabko sambhalta hun..
K: R u sure ki tum sabko sambhaloge??
Sw: Anything for my 2 best friends.. 😊

K: Thank u sooo much Swayam.. U r d Best.. :)
Sw: Soch lo.. Mein best hun ya Rey??
Kriya smiles and sharmaofy's and moves silently and sits besides Rey.. His eyes were a little moist and gives no reaction despite knowing ki she is there..

Kriya takes his face and moves towards her so that Rey could see her. She could c the moist eyes and the pain in his eyes..


Rey moves back his face towards the pond.. He could see the reflection of them sitting besides each other so close in a still water..
He throws a stone in the pond at their reflection in anger

R: Please Kriya tum challi jao yaha se.. Please leave me alone for sometime..
K: M sorry but mein aise akela nahin chodd sakti aapko.. Mein jaanti hun ki aap sad kyu ho.. Kya aap mujhe ek mauka nahin doge explain karne ka ki meine aisa kyu kiya?

Rey is silent. Even Kriya's eyes getting moist while saying..

K: Rey yeh aapko bhi pata hai ki mera favourite guy kaun hai..
R: Swayam
K: Swayam nahin Rey.. But meine aapka naam issilye nahin liya kyuki mein nahin chahti ki sabko pata chale humare baare mein.

Both of them make an eye contact in the pond. Kriya takes Rey hand in her's..

R: kriya, mein tumse pyaar karta hun.. Bahut zyada. Jab se tum meri life mein aayi ho, its completely changed. I have never felt ne thing like this before..Mujhe koi farak nahin padta ki woh log kya sochenge wen they get to know abt us.. i really dont matter . But it does matter to me wen things like these happen.. I know ki tum swayam ke liye kuch feel nahin karti, but still i cant c u wid ne one else..

Rey's Tears that he tried to hold for so long finally broke.. Kriya wiped out his tears and hugged him tightly..

K: M soo sorry Rey.. Please mujhe maaf kardo.. I promise aisa dubara kabhi nahin hoga.. U are my bestest guy and will always will be..
Pehli baar i have felt something for someone.. Shuru se hi i have always been very Reserved being from a small city of Dehradun.

R: Kya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho?? Do u love me??
K: YES I DO..

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Hope u like it..

Regards,
Mick

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..Rish.. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!
This is so so nice...I hope aisa hi ho..and iske baadh ho the ROLLING scene!!!!!! agar aisa hua toh meri saari bhadhass hatt jayegi from the CV's...!!!! please cv's and universe ji..aisa hi ho..!!! please...!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mick tumhare mun main ghee shakar kya likha hain. I hope something like this happens
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow its awesome !!! amazing ya!!! really liked it!!! I hope aisa hi kuch ho jaye aaj!! and then the rolly polly!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG dude dis was awesum no words .. i wish aisa hi ho real mai..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww...so cute...i so wish k d3 mein aisa hi kuch ho...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWESOME!!!!!
Mick I am speechless!!! that's how story moves CVs!!! That's perfect vision of upcoming scenes...
It has love, complainant texture and passion..I could feel it!! Feel!! which I haven't since many days in D3. I have felt Kriyansh after so many days..
Thanks to you Mick...
Lovely post...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome mick...i m speechless...i ve no words to say as it would be understatement...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mick tumhare muh main ghee shakkar. Hope so ki aisa hi ho...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hayeee MICK!! i hope something like this happens!!! 😍

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