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Posted: 13 years ago
That ws lovely..
And the dream ws so so beautiful...I jumped off from bed in happiness but uff why it has to be a dream...Hope this come true soon...
And what abt the storm...Plz keep mayank safe...And make him call too...
Loved it..
Update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i somehow knew it was all too good to be true...wonder what's up with mayank...update soon this time please!
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats on 100 pges
thnku for updating
lolvy part...i was hell shocked at strt...it was so much lovly
but lets see wht happen next
pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shivi- another beautiful update.
Oh GOD- mayak is missing
plz use kuch nehi hona chaiye..
u better keep him safe- plzzz
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
so much expectation
now i m scared
thank for the pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
the starting was so heavenly! ahh i can see nupur's reaction..:)
but it was a dream! :o, i hope that it will be true soon :D
and whats that calamity striking new jersey?! do keep mayank safe..okay!
loved the update...:)
thank you for the pm:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey shivi im so glad u updated after so long...😃
lovely update n such a beautiful dream...hope it turns into reality soon😳 i like dat nupur trusts mayank completely...hope he is safe...continue soon...thanx 4 d pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you guys for the lovely comments🤗 They keep me motivated to write this FF.


Part 34

"What you are not coming?"

"This flight to New Jersey has been stranded in London due to bad weather over the Atlantic."

"But mom, meeting you dad, Rahul was the one thing I was looking forward to the most. My New Year's Eve is all ruined now."

"You speak as if I am very happy to be a mother who has not seen her daughter for the past 6 months and isn't as impatient enough as you if not less to meet you as soon as possible."

"I am sorry Mother. It's just that..." , my voice broke. " I miss you."

"I miss you all, miss my family. Suddenly it's so lonely out here."

"Honey, we all are always with you. Mama's strong girl never cries, does she? We'll meet soon beta."

"Promise?"

"Promise. Now cheer up."

"Love you mom. Hope to see you soon."

"Same here. Love you too. Take care. Bye."

I wiped the tears and wondered as to why the Lacrimal apparatus of my eye's been working overtime lately. The table clock showed a quarter to five. There was still time left for Dia's New year's party. A picture capturing one of those precious past happy moments of me with Mayank adorned the side-table.

I checked my cell which was flooded with advance New Year greetings. Aman,Liu,, Jake, Bells, Ian, Dia, Susan, Andy, Chuck- all the world were there. Only one name was missing.

"Stop looking for him! Maybe Dia is right. I am stupid enough to wait." Angrily I threw my cell away.

"But this isn't him. The Mayank I knew would have called me by now. Is he safe? Maybe Dia does not know the whole truth from Atlanta. " My heart started to pound loudly.

"No ways. Nothing bad can ever happen to him. " I closed my eyes and prayed.

"If only he wasn't so dumb not to call I wouldn't be this dead worried." I switched on the Tv.

All the Tv shows flashed with merry-making people celebrating the advent of New Year. Their laughers seemed over-bearing and fake. An act to pretend, to hide the glum from their dismal lives under the cover of this day. It seemed a fool's way of hoping against hope that the New year would turn out just right.

"Gosh what's gotten into me? These pessimist thoughts don't seem to go away no matter how hard I try." I changed the channel.

"New Year's eve. A most joyous occasion we look forward to ending our past histrionics of the last year and beginning afresh. This is the time to be with your loved ones. Don't forget the chance to kiss your beloved at the midnight ensuing he or she remains with you forever..."

"What a load of crap?" I switched off the television.

"Get a grip girl." I poured myself a lemonade." Just because he isn't with you right now or hasn't bothered to call does not make the world a bad place. There is no reason to be upset. You don't doubt his love, do you?" I sipped my drink.

"That's the last straw. I have started talking to myself all holed up in my apartment. No wonder they say love is crazy." I sighed and grabbed my car keys.

Whattya cry for? Let's live it up

Let's live it up, live it up, live it up

Hey yeah, you with the sad face
Come up to my place
Come up to my place, baby

"Come up to my place, baby" I shouted along." This is life. Not giving a damn to others. No more dependence on others for your happiness. Independence is the key. Women empowerment baby!" I put on my sunglasses.

I was speeding off on the highway with my locks wildly waving back. I wondered at the grim weather. No use for my poor sunglass ' I thought.

" Hey grey Sky, why art thou so gloomy? Did your boyfriend ditch you?" I pouted.

How can you see looking through those tears?
Don't you know you're worth your weight in gold?
I can't believe that you're alone in here
Let me warm your hands against the cold

He had always been a late realizer. Never thought I wanted more than friendship and hooked up with Bells. Such a dolt.

A close encounter with a hardhearted man
Who never gave half of what he got
Has made you wish that you'd never been born
That's a shame 'cause you got the lot

Aman made him green with jealousy. He realized what he was missing, Why couldn't he ever see on his own? Never use his brains to think what all I must be going through. Does he think that not talking to me all this while some kinda of his silly practical joke?

Hey yeah, you with the sad face
Come up to my place and live it up
You beside the dance floor
What do you cry for? Let's live it up

I can't even enjoy the song. Why do I keep thinking of him all the time when he's not here? He's probably busy polishing his flirty skills in Atlanta while I cry for him here. But no more crying anymore. I sped up the accelerator.

If you smiled the walls would fall down
On all the people in this pickup joint
But if you laughed you'd level this town
Hey lonely girl, that's just the point

Just answer me the question why
You stand alone by the phone
In the corner and cry

He's such a cassanova. That was my first impression. Alright I was crack to find him hot seeing him naked in that towel. But still he had been such a repulse. He dared flirting with me. Bravery? Idiocy!

If you smiled the walls would fall down
On all the people in this pickup joint
But if you laughed you'd level this town
Hey lonely girl, that's just the point

How can you see looking through those tears
Don't you know you're worth your weight in gold
I can't believe you're alone in here
Let me warm your hands against the cold

It was a car ride when we solemn for a change. The first time I saw something else. Knew there was something deeper to him than that surface acting of his. I was right. It was his dad. I got lumps hearing his story. He had never been more vulnerable. The Great Mayank Sharma needed someone. It was me. I speeded up some more.

Hey yeah, you with the sad face
Come up to my place and live it up
Hey yeah, you beside the dance floor

His first kiss was out of envy. I still remember my lips bleeding. He made sure to be gentle in the next kisses we had. His touch bringing alive all the parts of my body and soul. Do I miss that? Hell NO.

Whattya cry for? Let's live it up

Let's live it up, live it up, live it up

Hey yeah, you with the sad face
Come up to my place

He helped me in that f**k Moragn's case. Made me sort out. Even fought for me. Like a film hero, That was way too cheesy. I had never needed someone else in my life.

Or maybe I did. There was everything in my life. Friends, family , a great medical career. Yet something was majorly amiss. There were stony wall around my heart refusing to let anyone take a sneakpeek inside . Afraid of sharing my vulnerabilities. Afraid that someone might play with my emotions, use a new girl in town. I hated him at first, thought him wrong but he always stood along waiting patiently for me to come around. Never broke my trust even when he had the chance. Melted the stony wall like simple wax with his sincere feelings and that dimpled smile. Changed me from a over-cautious feisty stubborn girl to women neck-deep in love.

It's everything you wanted, it's everything you don't
It's one door swinging open and one door swinging closed

Some prayers find an answer

Some prayers never know

We're holding on and letting go
?

Tears blocked my sight as I traveled at !00 knots. The car started to spring out of control. I tried hard to manage the steering but a greater force seemed to thrust it forward.

The clouds had darkened pitch black. The trees were swaying hard. A strong gale had started to blow. I could hear it's low rumblings ramming the sides of my car. The first time I noticed clearing away from my thoughts the highway was erringly deserted.

Attention New jersey. You all are warned to stay inside your houses. I repeat- 'stay inside '. This is an emergency. Hurricane Irene has hit the city.

"AAARRRgGGhhh." The car spiraled out my control into the adjoining lane. A huge lake reflected the turbulent weather as its waves lashed angrily against each other. The car seemed to make a straight go for it.

Edited by shivi02 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
SIS...🤗
m sooo glad to see u back here...
i know m a bit late n evn cudn't edited my comment on d earlier update...😳
missed u lodsss...😔

Awesome update SIS...
i loved it lodsss
Beautifully written as usual...
bt after i finish dis part i was like...
😲OMG!!!OMG!!!OMG!!!😲
what will happen now!!!!!??!!!!!😲
plzzz dont let anything happen to Nupur..
n whr is Mayank????
hopefully i wish he will come to save his Nupur...
loved it lodsss...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Oh my God this's so scary

i hope nothing happend to Nupur..
n why the hell didn't Mayank call her? is something wrong?
too much suspence Shiv
brilliant part
plzzz update soon and don't let it anything happend to Mayur plzzz..
thanks for the pm
Edited by SamiraARTiMAYUR - 13 years ago

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