E-Motion [New Mayur Sci-Fi ]update pg-28 [23/June]

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Hello friends⭐️

wish you a very Happy New Year🥳

I know ... I know ... today is 11th Jan and I wishing you new year, par January hotahi hai New Year manane k liye to aaj to sirf 11th hai 😳... so Wish you all a Very Very Happy & Prosperous New Year🥳


You must be wonder when you got my pm, you must be doubted of my mental stability ... aur hoga kyun nahi, main kaam hi aisa kar rahi hun ... One FF just ended and another still going with very irregular update, one temporary suspended and one OS shop ... n now m going to open my 5th thread.😲


Great!!!! Sach me yaar !!! I am totally a Gone Case!! mera kuch nahi ho sakta!!! 😕par kya karen, apne aapko rok hi nahi payi *hiding my face under blanket*😆


Sholly !!!😳


So here m going to post a Short Story of MayUr, with so much courage ... you know why.😳


You all appreciates my stories before, so I wanted to post this one too. But it was lil different from my other FFs ... I m going to write a Sci-fi on MayUr ... n it is my audacity to write a science-fiction, as we are fan of many sci-fi writers, specially Jules G. Verne, he was great writer and no words to his imagination ... after his story, the scientists were made submarine!!! what else you want?! this one information was enough for his greatness! I am big fan of him and I know, you all too ... and you can found many many talented sci-fi writers at presents ... so its my heartedly request to you all that plz DONOT COMPARE this story to others, coz THEY ARE GRETEST, n m nothing.

No CS and no Plot ... I going to post the prologue ... n its all upto you😊


If u dont like this idea, then say it ... I have no problem to drop this story.😊


Thank you⭐️


Love

suja❤️


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::: INDEX :::

Part 1 >>> Page 8
Part 2 >>> Page 16
Part 3 >>> Page 23
Part 4 >>> Page 28




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Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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::: PROLOGUE :::


Time : 12:30 PM. The students of batch no 2243-A, please entre in your classroom.

A sweet female mechanical voice finally stopped before chanted twice.

The corridor was empty, every one entered their classroom, no one can bunk their classes for a fear of punishment ... BS College was the most reputed college on the earth. They have a bunch of brilliant faculties, daily updated labs, huge library and many more facilities, and a big hostel which other colleges wouldn't affords all together.

Their money-source was the government, every government showered their blessings on this college, because they deserve it and most of honorable persons in the earth, were pass out from BS college.

The college campus was huge, with lots of greenery there, they were always took good care of environment, even the hostel situated between a green park and huge lake, which look like some landscape ... but no one can bother to explore their beauty. The students were very busy of their studies and assignment and trainings and bla bla bla ... they lived in the BS college-hostel ... the hostel was so big, almost 15000 student capacity, for both boys and girls. They shared one room ……. there was no objection from anyone, they were human, but they feels nothing ... Because they have no feelings.

There was no possibility to have 'Feelings', It was 3017 AD after all! Human became so much mature now and they knew, the feelings were most deadly thing for mankind and their prosperity …… not from today, they understood this truth from thousand years ago ... and they thought, is there is a way to remove our stupid feelings from our heart and mind???

After years of research, Dr. Manisha invented a medicine and it worked like an eraser, which removed ALMOST every feeling from human's heart and mind.

Everyone were satisfied then, cause of their 'no feelings' heart ……… but science is always below from nature ...… destiny ... and every success has some failure with, here too the same case ... human's primitive feelings, like hunger, thirst, sleep, fear etc werent removed, but this medicine has power to remove pain, sorrow, love, bother, curiosity, etc. feelings.

@ BS college, classroom.

Four students - Samrat, Gunjan, Nupur, Mayank …. They were read in the BS college. now they were in the classroom on their allotted seat. They were not just batch-mate, they were room-mate too ... this four shared their room on college-hostel.

The weather of the classrooms was very pleasant, super computer repeatedly checked room's temperature in regular interval and send order to auto-cooler to adjust cooling according to temperature and absorbed carbon-dioxide from air ... this class-room has only three walls around, cause fourth wall was a screen, a huge screen, like a flat screen TV of primitive age was hang on the wall …. Classroom seats were very comfortable ... soft seat & hand-rest, but under the seats, lots of wires there, which connected to main server of the college ... each and every wire has their own work, these sensors randomly checking student's blood pressure, heartbeats, body temperature, glucose etc.

The classroom went little darker ……. Fraction of seconds later a robot entered into the classroom and with that the monitor went on.

"Hello, batch no. 2243-A. we ll start new chapter today …… it's a mix up chapter of history and human psychology. We have read our past yesterday of those primitive human, who were lived in 19th or 20th century. They were made automatic airplane …. They had launched their space shuttle and they had made computer too. It didnt matter how useless things they had made and had how many faults ….. but they made their level best. Ok, batch no.2243-A ….. today is the class of human psychology. We had read about human of primitive age had so many complicated feeling, like sorrow, pain, joy, love, help, wish, revenge and many more. They were a factory of feelings ….. and now today's topic is 'Love'. I can explain you about this. What was love and how it was worked …….. this chapter is huge, so it ll take several classed to finish it and after finished this, you ll present us a project on 'Love'. so, just listen carefully. It's a very tough huge and complicated chapter …... just listen carefully ………."

After 2 long hours ….. the class finally finished and every one out of the classroom. They all looking so much devastated, like a thunder storm passed through them. Mayank, Nupur, Samrat, Gunjan were no exceptional !!!

"uff …. What a lecture and what a topic!" mayank said, shook his head in irritation.

"really …. It's a backdated topic and so much complicated." Gunjan sighed," I didnt understand a word"

"me too" Nupur quizzed her eyes tightly, "I don't understand ….. how they spend their daily life with super complicated things like this …" nupur held her head with her hands, "weren't they got bore???"

"ok, guys ….. even I also didn't understand anything …. And I don't know how I'll working on the project ……… but right now I feel hungry and my brain has jammed. I immediately want food and coffee." Samrat said.. " can I offer you all a pill of coffee?"

"off course samrat, actually our brains are also not working properly." Mayank said.

"yes, coffee is the best option after that wired lecture" nupur said.

They nodded and walked toward the coffee counter.


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So, Friends ... here was the prologue.😊


now, its all upto u ... if you dont like this story ... then tell me ... I have no problem to drop it then n there ...😊


i want your honest comment guys ... criticism also welcome 😃



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Posted: 13 years ago
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shukar khuda k apny hum per rehm kiya aur 3 months bad yeah ff post kerny k kasht uthaya...
aur apko filler jasa prolgue humain mila
beta tu yeah story drop ker k tu dekh...emin tujhy qatal kerdo gii
suja its aweum..so much diffrent...and unique... mjhy soch soch k kcuh horah hai k agay kiya hoga...
it amzing so perfectly written...
i am so looking forward to it
CONGRTS DEaR ON THIs on and i know u will rock on this too
lovly
Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Un-ress😎
SUJA APU...
tumi "FOBB" update korteso na kno???
plzzz update it...
love ya...🤗

Awesome prologue...
i loved it...
actually i loveee Sci-Fi...😳
n alwaysss try to imagine MayUr while m reading any book like dis...😳
so dis wud b a treat for me...
thank u sooo much APU for starting dis...
m eagerly waiting to read further...
loved it lodsss...
love ya APU...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

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shukar khuda k apny hum per rehm kiya aur 3 months bad yeah ff post kerny k kasht uthaya...
aur apko filler jasa prolgue humain mila
beta tu yeah story drop ker k tu dekh...emin tujhy qatal kerdo gii
suja its aweum..so much diffrent...and unique... mjhy soch soch k kcuh horah hai k agay kiya hoga...
it amzing so perfectly written...
i am so looking forward to it
CONGRTS DEaR ON THIs on and i know u will rock on this too
lovly



blue...fiza agree ise drop karne ki sochna bhi mat...suja

nice yar please go for it...
Edited by raginisharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congorats Sujafor the new FF 🤗

Amazing start hun, lovig it already
i would love to read Mayur this role Sc-Fi
n dying to read more Sujata
plzzz updte soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all toh i lovee ur title...My curiosity increased double just reading this title...
And secondly THANK u for writing a sci-fi...Im a huge fan of sci-gi...yes u r right Jule Verne is an awesome sci-fi writer and noone can write fictions like him...also im a bigg fan of a writer of my country...but he dsnt write romantic stuffs so i always wanted a romantic science fiction...after so long my wish is gonna fulfilled...
Love u suja dii for this...
And the concept is WOW...im very willing to see how this people survive without feelings specially without love...And when this love will enter their life that will be a scene to watch na...
Its really tough to write a sci-fi but just reading first chp i can surely guess this ff will be a treat to us...
Awesome start...
Update soon...and update FOBB too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice prologue with new concept
now just waiting for 1 part plzzz jaldi update karna
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Wow..a science Fiction🥳
I just love sci-Fi and brilliant concept suja👏
Loved it,Prologue is awesome...I think they would feel the complicated feeling of love as story proceed😉 and I hoped that they would have any software which will be programmed for satisfying energy needs😆
but mera dimag to jyada hi imagine kar raha hai😆

Very well and intelligently written.Love it❤️

cont soon.

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