The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1]- Page 27

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

hey

dont u dare think i dnt like mayank

i can never except in ruchs ff....

i so much relate to the charcter of mayank personlly ...

this one of the reason apart frm the peace ths ff has ...tht i like this ff so much

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

m sorry Fiza,

i ve not wish to hurt u.......actually i also attached with Mayanks character personally.........so i thot so😕

okay drop it.

i hope that u like next update also.

i'll update asap😃

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Superb update

loved it

cont soon

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

sorry wapas lo apna...

i m dying to read dear

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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
By GOD kya update tha janu-
muah muah muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

love u dear
it was the bestest update of this ff................................................

Hayeeeeeeeeeeeeee - finally my mayur confessed their love.


OMG Nups confessed it first- hahahahaha ye tou thoda ulta he hogaya........but i loved it suja......
i feel really very good to see them happy.............. both r perfect 4 each other...........
i can say mayu is very lucky that he has got nups loves.
and nups is lucky too.......................both r innocent,down to earth, and vey good human being

at first u started it with the convo of uday and mayu which was very nice
but when myus family joined with then and made fun of mayu i couldn't control anger.......
isnt it too much
why they alwz insulted mayu???
he is too shy to response- is it his only fault????
did they give any chance to proof himself??????????????
they alws praised gunjan- disgusting
r a koi tou saath dena chaiye na- its one type of mental torture yaar........

i hope maynak ko apne apko defend karneka mauka mil jati.
anyway forget it...............

coming to the most beautiful partof this update.
mayur scene near the lack- it was totally out of world
haye nups daar gayi thi and thats why she slapped nups
u know what when maynk said-"gir jata to mar jata … aur kya"-my heart ached.
wokitna dard k saath ye baat kaha- hai na
but now everything is fine mayur jo saath saath hai

and the convo b/w wind and sun- by GOD it was outstanding
i have no word to desctibe this beautiful convo
and then moon mama also joined them- sujaaaaaaaaaa u r awesome writer..........

what a beautiful update
mind-blowing
acha i forgot to tell one thing- uditi and mayu scene was very sweet
even this lil baby recognize hw sweet and nice maynk is.

btw i think its enough of my non-stop bhashan
plz buda maat manna
thoda padne ki kasht karlo

love u dear
take care
and do update next part soon

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Originally posted by: jiya_angel

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Grr!! Fari first aa gayi😡

Kyun humesha ap he first hona chati ho kya????
huh thoda space mujhe bhi do
yeeeeeeeeeeeee jiyaaaaaaaaaa main first agayi...............lol
gussa maat ho- love u

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Kyun humesha ap he first hona chati ho kya????
huh thoda space mujhe bhi do
yeeeeeeeeeeeee jiyaaaaaaaaaa main first agayi...............lol
gussa maat ho- love u