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Posted: 13 years ago
update soon😉😉😉


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hey dear will be waiting for you to update this continue soon
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when willl u updateee thisss... cant wait fr an updatee
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Originally posted by: i rok

when willl u updateee thisss... cant wait fr an updatee

i will see if I can update today
if not then 2marow for sure😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

i will see if I can update today

if not then 2marow for sure😳



waiting eagerly for the update...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay guys,

Am sorry for keeping you guys wait for this long...but I really hope that the wait was worth it...

Chapter 33

Two weeks had passed since both Maan and Geet have been living separately. Ronit often visits them everyday after work for dinner...Geet meets Dadima at the temple where they chat about everything...Dadima had stopped convincing them to come back home knowing that they won't unless Madhuri says something.

Maan and Geet became really close but still hadn't taken their relationship to the next level. Often, they would hold each other's hand while eating. Geet would often take the first step to kiss Maan...she didn't know why he was still feeling weird or awkward to go more then that but she decided to give him a chance knowing he is still getting used to this.

She still felt guilty about him having to leave his home for her but somewhere she felt proud and happy to get a husband like him who is very understanding and caring. Maan still worked in Khruana Constructions but in a separate branch after much disputes Ronit agreed to the new arrangement's

Today, they both had their dinner "date" Maan had gotten a new project which will make him stand out as an individual away from his father. She looked in the mirror at her new red sari given by Maan. It was a simple sari with black sequenced border around the sari.

She smiles to herself as she remembered how nervous he was to give her the sari thinking she wouldn't like it. She wore matching bangles and earring to go alone with her sari. She was about to put her sindoor on when she heard the door bell, thinking it to be Maan..she quickly ran to the door with a smile.

Geet: Maan you are early...(she stops smiling when she saw Dev standing there with a smile. Geet felt nervous, she didn't know why, whenever she is around Dev. He looked at her from top to bottom as he slowly came in.)

Dev: Hi Geet

Geet: Hi

Dev (hands her the flower bouquet) This is for you (Geet looks at him confused) I mean for you guys..its my first time coming here so I thought why not give you flowers to brighten this house a bit

Geet (nervously smiles) Thank you...

Dev: Where is Maan bhai?

Geet: He is not here yet...he should be coming any minute

Dev: Are you guys going anywhere? You are dressed up

Geet (moves back a little to put a little distance between her and Dev...he was slowly coming near her as he talked) uhh yeah to dinner

Dev (looks at her with anger but quickly replaces that with a smile) ohh how nice...anyway I should get going...I have to go somewhere..tell Maan bhai that I said hi

Geet: okay I will...bye

Dev (Looks at her one final time before heading toward the door) Bye Geet...

Geet quickly closes the door as soon as he leaves...she had this fear inside her whenever he came or talked to her..the way he looks at her makes her scared...she wanted to tell Maan but decided maybe its all in her head...

she didn't want anything to ruin Dev and Maan's relationship because of her. She looks at the time..it was almost time for him to come home. She goes back to the room to finish getting ready. Sure enough as soon as she was done she heard the door bell again..she looks at the time 7pm..right on the dot...she knew for sure this time it was Maan..he is never late in anything..

She quickly opens the door and smiles at him. Maan comes inside with a rose..Geet happily takes it from him..Maan looks at her from top to bottom...Geet blushes as she sees his eyes on her...

Maan comes closer to her and holds her hand...both look into each other's eyes...Maan was leaning closer and closer to her...Geet closed her expecting for Maan to finally kiss her...she felt his lips on her forehead..disappointed she opens her eyes and looks at him. He lets go of her hand...

Maan: I have to get ready

Geet ("gadha kahi ka") its in the room...(she walks away from him and slumps on the couch..Maan smiles at her and leaves to change..after half hour he comes out of the room dressed in casuals...blue jeans and a white top that shows off his arm muscles...Geet looks at him admiringly...Maan comes and holds out his hand for her to take..she slowly slips her hand in his...he pulls her up...)

Maan: Chalen?

Geet: Lets go..am hungry (She wraps her hands around his arm as both walk out of the apartment)
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Both are eating in the restaurant. The lights were dimmed just enough to see each other while candles on the table illuminating a romantic atmosphere. Geet wondered what came over Maan to be this romantic all of a sudden. She loved it though but it also got her curious to know. He slightly held her hand as both ate silently not knowing what to say or where to even start.

Geet: Maan so when will you start on the project that you got today?

Maan: uhh this week itself. Everyone in the staff is really excited.

Geet: hmm can I ask you something?

Maan: yes sure

Geet: Well I was thinking...I get bored home being there all by myself so I wanted to know if I can do something in your office? You know help you out with this new project?

Maan (coughs and looks at her) Yes sure

Geet: Are you sure? you seem hesitant? What are you hiding? Is there someone that you don't want me to see? (She asks with jealousy and anger)

Maan (laughs) What are you saying? Do you think I will do that? You are such a monkey sometimes. Chudail

Geet: Then why did you cough when I asked?

Maan: Because I chocked on my food. Now what I can't do that?

Geet: Well no you can't do that

Maan: Okay sorry...happy...I will never chock on my food in front of you. Happy?

Geet (smiles) Yes

"Ladies and gentlemen..the floor is now open for dance..."

Geet (looks at him with a smile) lets dance

Maan: Wait what?

Geet: Yes (she stands up and holds Maan's hand...no one else was getting up except for them)

Maan: Geet this feels weird

Geet (stands before Maan...) sssh just forget everyone and think we are all alone...(she places his hands on her waist..a spotlight hits them...Maan looks into her eyes..the music starts)
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Dev sat in the corner of the restaurant watching them...he had waited for more then half hour in his car waiting for them to come out. He was getting angry and very possessive of her. The flowers were just an excuse to see her. Ohh how he missed her. He was angry at his mom now for kicking them out.

The thought of seeing her in that sari made him want her. He so wanted to tear her clothes away and let her know who her true love really is but he controlled himself. He couldn't let her know, at least not yet, his true face. He had seen Maan enter the driveway..he wanted to run his car over...when he saw him disappear inside the apartment building..he had this urge to cut off his car break so that he never lives again but he calmed himself down knowing Geet would be with him as well.

He couldn't' hurt her, he wanted her for himself only and that day is not far. He smirks. Quietly, making sure to keep enough distance, he followed them to the restaurant. He waited for 10 minutes or so before sneaking in as well. He picked the first table that was in the corner. He had watched them hold hands which made him want to stab his hand with a fork.

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The music started slowly...he watched in anger as both Geet and Maan begin to dance...

Both look into each other's eyes...Maan held Geet's hand in his hand while his other hand on her waist...both looked into each other's eyes as they began to move...Maan removes his hands from her waist and spins her around..she lands on his chest...she looks up at his face..she smiles...

he dips her slowly hovering his breath on her chest making her breath hard...he lightly kisses her on her neck before pulling her up...he lets go of her arms as both moved in sync separately...while still looking at each other..Geet puts her hand out...Maan bends down and takes the hand lightly kissing it...he stands up..she spinds around him...holding his right arm before behind.

Maan holds her elbow as he lightly dips her..she slowly comes up with a smile..both hold each other's hand as they did salsa dance..both moved in such sync that it leaved people looking at them with admiration...

Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa kho jaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga (2)

Yeh dil to na keh saka yeh baatein

dil to na keh saka (2)

Maan pulls her closer squeezing her waist making her gasp...he himself did not know his actions as he was lost into her eyes...he just moved to the music with Geet...he slowly moves his hand lower while pulling her closer and closer to him until there was no space between them...he picks her up from the bottom...she arches her back as he lifts her...

her stomach was in front of his face...he rubs his stubble cheeks on it making her dig her nails on his shoulder he spins around with her in his arm holding her just by her hips...he slowly brings her down..as she looks at his face as she slides down...

Tu jaane na tu
Chaahat meri kitni betaab hai (2)
Ho jo barso meri palkon mein tha
Tu wohi khwaab hai

She stands with her back to his chest...he puts his left arm around her waist as he holds her other arm..Geet leans back to him..he holds her arm up as she rests her head on his chest...his hand gently slides down her arm tickling her...

He runs his hand over her neck before holding her arm again spinning her...he kisses her cheek making her blush..he dips her again caressing her face with his finger..he stops right below her lips..her lips tremble in anticipation...he pulls her up

Har ghadi har ghadi teri yaadoon mein
vaadon mein iradon mein
Aungaa kho jaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga

Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
Dil to na keh saka (2)

Both look at each other as they do salsa while clapping their hands together...both move away from each other before looking at one another again...Geet comes slowly toward him...Maan extends his arm and dips her while she holds on to his shoulder with one arm...he spins her around...he bends down having her back gently rest on his knee...he touches her eyes and her blush...he slowly brings her up...he presses her lips with his thumb..she closes her eyes feeling his touch

Yeh Jhukti nazar
Jaane jigar hosh le jati hai (2)
Mein kaise kahon
Ek ajnabi dard dejati hai

She opens her eyes...Maan slowly bends forward and pecks her on her lips...he presses her closer as if someone was going to take her away...she puts her arms around his shoulders as they both slow dance while looking into each other's eyes...her fingers entangle his his hair pulling him closer..Maan digs his fingers in her waist feeling her...his one finger gently starts messaging her skin on her stomach...she shudders...

Chupke se Chupke se teri neeedon mein
Khwaabon mein khayalon mein
Chaaunga Khojunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga

He picks her up and spins her around...everyone gets up to applaud them...he slowly puts her down with his hands on her waist

"Geet I want to take our relationship to the next level..." She looks at him with tears...she nodes her head yes

Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga

Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka (2)

Dev couldn't believe what he saw..he was burning in anger and jealousy...its time to take it up a notch...he wanted Geet to know how he feels...he will tell her..he loves her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
superb
oh devil dev
i kill u...
wow maneet dance and date
is spell bound dear
oh this dev
pls make SR to be happen dear
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome.
Loved it.
Uff this Dev is a disgusting man...i hate him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
simply awesome dear
loved the update
hate dev😡
cont soon
Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago

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