another poem on personal experience!

this poem is another of my creations.it is based on a personal experience.do tell your views about it!

DOES THIS DOG BITE?

I had an experience on my first trip abroad,
It included me about to be bitten by a dog
It was an experience which wasn't so good,
As it was about a dog,
Who didn't act like a good dog should

I was enjoying the scenery,standing on a hill
When I saw a dog,who looked as if
He would come after me,if given his will.
He looked around 2-3 yrs old,
But bitten by a dog was greatest of my fears

We looked at each other and he started barking,
I saw my father standing near the parking.
So,I saw a narrow road and started running towards it,
OH!but the hill was quite steep and I slipped

I rolled down the hill andhit the ground
I hurt my head and heard a cracking sound,
I tried to get up but I was hurt badly,
I saw the dog over me,looking at me quite sadly.

I thought he looked quite cute,
I guess I was crazy to think,
He was an ugly brute
And I patted his head as I realized I was mistaken
Even though the accident had left me quite shaken

His master came and asked if I was alright,
I guess I must've given everyone quite a fright,
But I severely got hurt on my left shoulder
I knew it happened when I hit that big boulder.

I tried to forget that dog with all my might,
But the sorrow and pain kept me up all night.
So,the next day I went there again,but
The dog was nowhere to be seen,

And I realized what all this means,
We shouldn't make our minds about
Things and people without knowing,
Don't u all know,its all a part of growing

Hope u all liked it.
Luve,
geet

Hey geet it's really sweet ....!!!

👏 hay its awesome man!!!👏

i wanna read more n more..........plz write again!!!

You are such a cute poet! A lot of honesty there!

👏....man we have great poets in kyph forum....we r so lucky.....u get to read such knewl stuff.....geet it was lovely....👏

thx soo much guys,this means a lot to me!i will try to write something about angad n kripa too!

👏👏 Luv the message that u gave in the end.

dog=a real person

or dog= a real dog

hehe jus kidding..very nice there..keep it going

Originally posted by: deepey

👏👏 Luv the message that u gave in the end.

ya me 2

geet...the poem was great...thanx 4 posting!!!!😃