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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: poojadworld

dat was realy awsumm,,,,,,,kriya rey pe line mar rhi hai wowww😆😆,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,nyc update


ha ha thnxxx 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AlexArsha

Are mere jaane man.. agar tu itni achi ff banayegi tho mujheitni achi comments dena padegi naaa'

Vicky: kria baby... Kaisi ho tum... ' when i imagine Vicky calling her kria baby.. I feel that he is making fun of her calling a baby.. 😆

Rey: Koi baat nhi neha.. Mai kria ka dost hu.. Uski care krna mri duty hai,,, smiles ' dost ya fir kuch aur???

Vicky: kya wo kutta kamina.. Kaha hai...? Mai uski haddi phasli ek kardunga...

Rey: chill... Wo hospital me pahunch gaya hoga

Kria: haan. rey ne uski bht dhulayi ki...smiles ' hahah!!!! Ab wo tho gaya kaam se'

Vicky: accha to mai b hospital jake uski thodi aur dhulayi karta hu... Uski himmat kaise hui mri dost ko chedne ki

Neha: oye hero.. Bas bas... ' first you wanted me to die because of diabetics.. now you want to make me die too?????

Vicky: oye chipkali tum chup raho ' hahahahaha!!! Chipkali!!!

Neha: kria.. Kch der pehle hi tu rey se mili thi..itni jaldi kya uska haal bigad jayega jo tu puch rahi hai ' agayi kabab mein haddi KriYaansh ke liye

Vicky: ye lo haddi udi... Oye chipkali agar wo rey ka haal puch rahi hai to tumhe isse kya.. Tum apne kaam se kaam rakho... ' you just made me fall in love with Vicky!!!

Neha: koi mjse b puchlo...

Vicky: hame aur b behtar kaam hai chipkali ' haha!!! seriously I say you.. before I die I'll come and kill you..

Neha: *self talk* emmm madam k rang kch badle se hai.. Thoda sa late hne par kaise bhagti thi aur ab rey ko ghuri ja rhi hai... Mera shaq sahi nikla..isse kuch to hua hai.. ' atlast!!! Ise pata chala'

Kria:*self talk* isko itni jaldi kya hai.. Huh.. Thodi der rey k sath khade hone b nahi de rahi..- awww.. ab lo!! Suzi!!! Tum mujhe nai chodegi kya???

Kria:*self talk* mauke pe chauka maar le kria... N she says rey waisa hai to kya aap mj drop kardoge plzz.. ' hahahah!!! Sahi kaha kria!! Mauke pe chaka maar le!!!

Neha: shockd *self talk* accha ispe rey ka bhoot sawar hogaya hai.. Abhi isse maza chakati hu ' are kyun ye kabab mein haddi ban rahi ho??? Tumhari hi tho dost he na!!

Kria: vicky tuje drop krdega

vicky: shouts mai??... Nahiii - over actor!!!

And then the drama started~!~!~!

Neha: whispers in kria's ears.. Hve a gud journey

Kria: *blushes*

Rey: chalein kria ' awww!!!!!!!! Gosh I hate you for getting me diabetics..

OMG!!!!! God BlessAnd KeepRockin Gal!!!





Colorful comment...😍Luks so beautiful❤️
Mai tri janeman hu... hayeee sacchiii...cho cuteee😍
U hate me?? Ab to mai tujhe aur zyada diabetes deke maar hi dungi...🤣🤣🤣
Na rahega baas na bajegi basuri😆😆

luvvv uuu doll... 🤗muaaahhh❤️


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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 33

Kria: helmet nhi pehnenge..

Rey: haan haan...

Bike ride starts..

Kria slowly keeps hr one hand on rey's shoulder n d oder near his chest...Her lips curved into a smile..a raspberry blush coating on hr cheeks...she had no idea why her heart ws beatng so fast.. Or makng hr feel smtng...bt she dint care

The bike picked up speed as it weaved down the twisted road... Kria held rey tightly... Evrythng ws jst so perfct n peacefull for hr..it felt like a living dream..she slowly mves hr oder hand on rey's chest, keeps hr head on his shouldr n closes hr eyes..

Rey feels smthng...bt ignores... He turns his face n sees kria sleeping... *Smiles* n says pagal...

Rey:kria...

Kria: emmm*lost in fantasy*

Rey: tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahi

Kria:emmm..

Rey's cellphone rings..n he stops bike

Kria: kya hua?? Aapne bike kyu rok di

Rey: call aya hai..

Kria: kiska...

Rey: mom.. Hey mom

sunita: hello beta ji..kaise ho? Kaha ho? Subah brkfst karke nhi gaye.. Abhi muje jyoti ne bataya...

Rey: haan wo mai late horaha tha to agaya bt maine canteen me kha liya

Sunita: ghar pe saaf sutra khana bana tha wahan canteen me jake khane ki kya zarurat thi... Tabiyat kharab hogayi toh..mera baccha..

Rey: mom mai baccha nahi hu...

Sunita: har maa k liye uski aulad chahe jitni b badi hojaye bacche hi rehte hai..

Rey: ufff ur drama

Sunita: he he.. Accha aap jaldi ayenge... Hum aapka intezar kar rhe hai

Kria: whispers...kya bol rhi haiRey to kria: ssshhh

Rey: haan mom bas araha hu

Kria: unko mra hello bolna

Rey to kria tum chup raho

Kria:keeps finger on hr lips

Sunita: accha to thik hai hum rakhte hai... Dhyan se aana.. Luv u

Rey: ok mom luv u

Kria: rey aapne mera hello kyu nhi kaha

Rey: kyu ki nahi kehna chahta.. kyu beech me bol rhi thi.. Agr mom sun leti to

Kria: toh kya?

Rey: tum unhe nahi janti... Agr unhe ye pata laga k mai ek ladki se aise baat kr raha hu..to wo tumhe mri galfrnd samjhengi aur saare mohalle me sweets baatne lagengi..

Kria: ha ha kitni sweet hai

Rey: sweet?? Yeh sweet laga tumhe...its irritating... Wo ek filmy bhoot hai...tumhari tarah hi pagal hai

Kria: laughs.. Muje aapki mom se milna hai

Rey: par mujhe nahi milana

Kria: par kyu rey... Mai aapki dost hu naRey: cut it out... V r gttng late...

kria: emmm...

He starts bike...

Rey: Ghar k saamne drop karun kya?

Kria: nooo...mom dekhlengi toh...aap muje pehli wali gali me drop kardijiye

Rey: ok

Kria: aap bike bht acchi chalate hai

Rey: thnxxx...

Kria:ek baat puchun

Rey: hmmm

kria: aap bht rich ho na...

Rey:tumhe nahi malum..

Kria: pata hai... Aap car ki jagah bike me kyu aate ho

Rey: cuz i luv bike more than car...

Kria: muje bhi bike ride hi zyada acchi lagti hai

Rey: chalo kuch to similar hai hum me

Kria: *smiles*

Rey: kria tumhara ghar agaya

Kria: itni jaldi...

Rey: haan... Ye sab mri fast ride ka kamaal hai

Kria:*self talk* huh..thoda dheere chalate to kya jata...pata hi nahi chala k itni jaldi ghar agaya.. Kitna accha lag raha tha:(:(

Rey: oye hello...kya hua..

Kria: kuch nahi..bye rey

Rey: ok bye..tk cre..

Kria: she starts walking...slowly turns n shouts..rey

Rey: kya?

Kria: agli baar se bike thodi slow chalana.. *smiles* n starts walking...

Rey: bike slow chalana...? aisa kyu kaha usne...*confused*

Hope readers undrstood y she said dat..

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Posted: 13 years ago
That was amazing . Plz plz plz plz rey ko jaldi kria ke liye luv realize karvao... And thanx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww!!dat was so shweet!!!!!!!
i hope ek bike ride d3 main dikha de!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice update...par rey ko v realize karwao...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i just wish rey also fall 4 kria he he
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Posted: 13 years ago
hahahaha finally suzi ne updt kia!!! i was waiting!!
well bike ride hayeee😍😍😍😍

nd thn rey ki mom hehehehe loved it!! <3

fir wo kria ka rey ki shoulder mei soo jana hayeee☺️ mei mar jawan! kitni goosebumps deti ho apne updts se my god!! aaj ke baad meri romte shayad kahde hi rahenge lol!😆

nd thn tat last part!!! hahahah REY BUDDHU HAI EK NO KA 🤣🤣🤣

AS ALWZZ AWSUM UPDT BY AWSUM WRITTER❤️

updt soon waiting eagerlly😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow wow wow...amazing...n the bike ride was awesome...next part jaldi update karn...n thnxx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyy..its damn cute! can u pls pls add me to ur pm list!

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