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AvNeil123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#481

Abby my dear.. What an awesome ff!!
Just finished reading all 14 parts n I enjoyed all d updates!!
Maan's dream n then falling off d bed..just trying 2 imagine that..haha
Truly an amazing ff..very nice concept too..keep up d good work..cnt wait 2 read more :)

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Abreshmina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: luv_GurTi
Abby my dear.. What an awesome ff!!
Just finished reading all 14 parts n I enjoyed all d updates!!
Maan's dream n then falling off d bed..just trying 2 imagine that..haha
Truly an amazing ff..very nice concept too..keep up d good work..cnt wait 2 read more :)

ahhh... thx a ton Waheeda... m glad u lykd it... 😃

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Abreshmina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: ritusoni2233
luvly update

aah.. thx... 😊

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Abreshmina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#484

Part 15

Hey guys... Here's another update for all of you...
I have replied to each one of your comments... so plz do have a look.. 😊
I wanna dedicate this part to my dear DOLL(zahra15)... this update has a bit of her immense help... love you Doll.. I'm hoping you'll love this update... 🤗
Without further ado... enjoy the update... 😃
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Geet: Maan.. I think I should go now.. maine Rimi ko bhi nahi bataya tha ki main kahan ja rahi hun.. I just told her that I'll be late.. but I think it's already quite late..

Maan: Geet.. mat jao na.. please like this in my arms.. It's the most peaceful place in the world..

Geet: mujhe bhi aise bohot acha lag raha hai Maan... sach keh rahi hun.. but jana bhi to zaruri haina Maan...??

Maan: hmm.. thik hai.. chalo I'll drop you home..

Both sat in the car and after sometime, they reached Geet's home..

Geet: mai chalti hun Maan.. kal milte hain..

Maan: Geet.. drop karne ke lie ek kiss to banta haina.. 😉

Geet: Haan haan.. tumhe to har baat pe kiss hi chahie... chaalbaaz kahin ke...

Maan: haww... apni girlfriend se kiss maang raha hun ab isme kya chaalbaazi hui...

Geet: rehne do.. I'm going...

With that Geet opened the door of the car.. But Maan pulled her back.. And kissed her lips tight.. Geet instantly forgot all her hesitation and resistance.. she started responding back.. sucking those sexily carved lips..

Maan(through the kiss): ab nahi jana na Angel..?? 😉

Geet instantly broke the kiss and ran out of the car with a flushed face..
She reached the door of her house panting heavily.. She calmed down her breath and rang the doorbell..

Maan smiled sitting in his car... her flushed face just got him insane... she looked like a such a cutie pie.. Maan knew that she was her life and now it was impossible to even breath without her..
He texted Geet.. "I love you Angel.. take care"..

Geet looked at the text and smiled..
She replied back.. "I love you too jaan.. now don't make me blush more and go.. bye"

Maan read the text and smiled wide.. smiling to himself, he drove away..

Rimi opened the door..

Rimi: aa gai Maan ke paas se... kaisa tha experience??? 😉 first time at your future home..?? 😉

Geet: Rimi.. main nahi gai thi Maan ke paas...

Rimi: chal chal .. jhoot mat bol.. tera laal chehra sab bata raha hai.. cumon Geet.. don't hide things from me.. bata na..

Geet lightly smiled at her sweet friend.. and told her everything.. how his house was decorated with her photographs.. (of course.. editing the parts she didn't want to say.. hehehhe...)

Rimi smiled... she was very happy for her friend.. she was sure Maan loved her a lot.. and Geet for sure deserved a man who would love her immensely and selflessly..

Geet: are haan.. Rimi .. tujhe batana tha.. kal se Maan hamare sath hi meals khaega.. okay..?? I mean wo apne ghar pe khud ke haanth ka bekaar sa khana kha khake bor ho gaya hai.. hehehhe... hum na Alka ko bol denge ki kal se na aae...

Rimi: are ye kyun...?? I mean Maan bhi aaega tab to zada khana banega na...

Geet: haan but Maan ko mere haanth ka khana pasand hai.. to kal se mai hi khana banaungi.. 😃

Rimi: ahaan.. abhi se hi future patidev ki seva ho rahi hai.. haan... 😉

Geet: chup kar na Rimi.. pareshan mat kar... abhi Alka kitni der me aaegi dinner banane.. hum tabhi bata denge... okay..??

Rimi: haan meri maa.. teri jo marzi hai kar... khush..??

Geet: bohot... 😃 love you Rimi...

Rimi: love you too...

Later they had their dinner... and asked Alka not to come from tomorrow onwards..

Around 11pm

Geet: Rimi.. chal na koi movie dekhte hain...

Rimi: is time...??? kal tera shoot ka first day hai Geet...

Geet: koi nahi na.. please... mera bohot mann hai.. please please please...

Rimi: acha baba .. thik hai.. chalo let's fish out any movie from our collection...

They looked through the DVDs they had..

Geet: ruk ruk ruk.. mil gai ...

Rimi: baap re Geet.. itni kyun excited ho rahi hai...??

Geet: It's my all time favourite Rimi... Dil To Pagal Hai.. hum yehi movie dekhenge...

Rimi: yup.. okay...

Geet: ruk.. mai popcorn banake laati hun.. jab tak tu movie load kar...

Geet went and prepared popcorn while Rimi loaded the movie...
Geet came back to the living room with the popcorn..

Geet: chal .. ab dekhte hain movie..

As the movie was about to start.. Geet's phone rang..

Geet: uffo.. ab kaun hai??

Rimi: aur kon.. Maan hi hoga..

Geet instantly blushed just hearing his name...

Rimi: baap re.. sirf naam pe hi blush.. Maan ne aag kafi tez bhadkai hai...

Geet blushed even more and instantly ran to her room to attend the phone...

Maan: hey my Angel... kya kar rahi ho??

Geet: movie dekhne ja rahi thi.. tumne disturb kar dia...

Maan: aww... maine disturb kar dia.. acha chalo I'll keep the phone down bas ye to btao ki konsi movie dekhne ja rahi ho..

Geet instantly beamed at the thought of the movie...

Geet: Dil To Pagal Hai.. 😃

Maan: ohh okay.. my all time favourite romantic.. 😃

Geet: don't tell me Maan... tum kya meri sari choices copy kar lete ho...

Maan: mai tumse ek saal bada hun Geet.. choices tum meri copy karti ho...

Geet: haww.. mai nahi karti copy wopy... meri apni choices hain...

Maan: haan to meri bhi apni choices hain..

Geet: acha baba.. thik hai.. ab mai please movie dekhne jaun...??

Maan: jao na baby... maine kab roka hai.. bye.. love you..

Geet: bye.. love you too..

Geet kept the phone down and ran back to the living room...

Rimi: ho gai baat.. ab please movie start karen.. movie khatam hote hote hi bohot raat ho jaegi...

Geet: haan to maine kab roka tha.. tu hi late kar rahi hai baaton me.. start kar na...

Rimi: haww.. jhooti.. chal chod...

The movie started.. and Geet was jumping and beaming like a small child with every scene.. she laughed at the funny scenes while she cried at the sad ones... she was just like a cute kid watching the movie with sheer love and dedication...
Finally the movie ended... Rimi was already very sleepy..

Rimi: chal Geet.. mai to chali sone.. mujhe to bohot neend aa rahi hai.. goodnight bye..

Geet: goodnight Rimi .. bye..

Geet went to her room and laid down on her bed... after watching the movie.. now she was missing Maan terribly.. she wanted to talk to him.. be in his arms.. but it was already 2:30.. she didn't know if it was right ti even call him up at this time.. he might be sleeping...
Finally after thinking a lot.. she finally decided to give it a try and call him up..
Maan picked up her phone in just one ring..

Maan: finally.. gosh Geet.. mai kabse tumhare phone ka wait kar raha tha..

Geet(shocked): Maan .. tum abhi tak soe nahi the...??

Maan: mai apni Angel ko thik se goodnight kie bina kaise so sakta tha...

Tears flooded Geet's eyes... she was so enchanted by his love..
Maan sensed that his words had triggered her emotional side..
he quickly changed the topic..

Maan: acha ye batao.. maza aaya movie dekhke...

Geet: haan Maan .. maza to aaya... but now I'm missing you a lot... 😔

Maan: aww... my Angel is missing me..??

Geet: haan... 😔 tum aa jao na..

Maan: acha ji.. agar mai aa gaya to mujhe kya milega...??

Geet: jo tum bolo.. pakka promise...

Maan: soch lo Geet.. you're promising me...

Geet: soch lia.. please Maan...

Maan: okay Angel... I'm coming Angel..

Maan reached Geet's place as fast asa he could... He just couldn't make his Angel wait...

He reached Geet's place and texted her to open the door...
Geet opened the door.. and instantly hugged him tightly...
They hugged each other for quite sometime and then they broke the hug...

Maan: woaahh... now that was a great welcome.. 😃

Geet: shh... room me chalo..

They went to Geet's room and Geet closed the door...
Both went and sat on the bed...

Geet: love you Maan for coming here..

Maan: don't thank me Geet.. you've got to pay back for that... 😉

Geet: pay back..??

Maan: remember Geet.. u just made a promise to me on the phone...

Geet bit her lips.. oops... what had she done..
she gave a loopsided smile to Maan...

Maan: aan aan my love.. you're not going to be able to escape today... 😉

Geet got nervous now...

Geet: Maan.. mujhe kya karna hoga??

Maan: kiss me Geet...

Geet looked at him with a shocked face...

Geet: I will have to initiate the kiss...??

Maan: yes baby... today you'll initiate the kiss...

Geet nervously looked here and there...
Maan closed his eyes..

Maan: cumon Angel.. I'm waiting... 😃

Geet finally shrugged off her nervousness..

Geet(thinking): kya Geet.. Maan to tera boyfriend haina.. tum dono ek doosre se itna pyar bhi karte ho.. he does evrything for you.. tu uski ek khwahish puri nahi kar sakti..?? aur aakhir isme burai hi kya hai.. kiss wo initiate kare ya mai.. kiss to honi hai na.. chal Geet... banja sherni...

With that.. Geet settled herself on Maan's lap.. and lightly placed her lips on his lips.. and starting sucking on them gently..
Maan instantly felt like he was in heaven.. his Angel was kissing him... he held her waist tightly as if wanting her to deepen the kiss..
Geet did as he demanded.. she deepened the kiss.. and slightly started massaging his back over the clothes...
Maan was greatly aroused now.. he was burning inside... it was the first time.. they were getting intimate in reality..
He moaned her name...
Geet felt like she was on the 9th cloud hearing her name from his mouth.. it sounded so beautiful and melodious... at that moment.. she felt like her name was meant to come out of his lips like that..
Maan started kissing her passionately... sucking hard on her lips... her lips felt so tender and soft... they felt like a rose petal.. soft and beautiful...
He slowly took his hand inside Geet's top and started massaging her back...
Geet instantly moaned his name... the feeling was so undescribable.. she felt beautiful inside.. his touch was giving her unknown pleasures.. it just felt great...
She took her hadn inside his shirt massaging his chest and his navel..
Maan groaned... He squeezed Geet's waist... He broke the kiss and started kissing her nose...her neck... her bare waist..
He was about to caress her mounts when her phone fell on the floor.. and the noise got them back to their senses...
They broke apart with their flushed faces...
They thanked their stars otherwise they had no idea what they would have done today..
None of them spoke... they were too flushed over their intimacy to even think of uttering a word...
After quite a long time.. Maan broke the silence..

Maan: umm.. Geet.. I think I should leave.. It's quite late..

Geet: hmm...

Maan: it's okay love... please don't think so much about this..

Geet: don't worry Maan.. I'm fine..

Maan: yeah Angel.. please take care.. goodnight.. will come tomorrow morning for the breakfast... 😉 love you Angel... bye..

Geet: see you tommorrow Maan.. goodnight... bye... love you too...

With that Maan quickly left Geet's house.. he didn't want to create any other havoc..

Both Maan and Geet quietly laid on their beds and drifted off to sleeps into their world of dreams..

The morning sun shone bright in the sky and a few sun rays brightened Geet's room...
Geet rubbed her eyes and slowly opened her eyes to look at the time...

Geet: OMG... its 9.. shit... i had to make breakfast for Maan too.. wo aata hi hoga...

Geet quickly ran to the washroom to have her bath... she quickly had her shower and came out of her room.. she quickly made her way to the kitchen.. and started preparing Maan's favourite pasta...

After sometime.. Rimi came out of her room to wake up Geet but to her stupefaction Geet was standing right there in the kitchen working... she rubbed her eyes several times to make sure she was not dreaming... but no.. it was reality...

Rimi: Geet...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tu itni subah kitchen me khade hoke breakfast bana rahi hai...??

Geet: haan I told you nah Maan aaega.. to hum sabke lie breakfast me pasta... 😃

Rimi: OMG.. kabhi meri bhi aisi khaatirdaari kr deti yaar...

Geet: Rimi... bakwaas na kar...

The bell rang saving geet from more teasings...

Rimi: mai dekhti hun...

Geet: Rimi ruk.. Maan hoga.. mai dekhti hun...

With that Geet strode towards the door and quickly opened the door...
And there was standing Maan Singh Khurana looking as handsome as ever reading to kill all the girls with his looks...
Geet kept gaping at his sexy demeanour...
Maan noticed Geet gaping at him and clicked his fingers infront of her..

Maan: bonjour ma lady..!! (goodmorning my lady) 😊

Geet: bonjour monsieur Khurana...!! (goodmorning Mr. Khurana) 😊 please come in... hehhehehe...

Maan came in and sat on one of the dining chairs..

Maan: bonjour Rimi..!! (goodmorning Rimi) 😊

Rimi: bonjour..!! (goodmorning) 😊

Maan: sa va? (how are you?)

Geet: ohh cut it out Maan...

Maan: okay baba... by the way Rimi.. I asked how are you...

Rimi: ohh.. thanks for translating that dude... I'm good...

Geet: chalo .. the breakfast is ready... sab log sath me khaate hain...

Geet smiled excitedly at both Maan and Rimi and they smiled back...
All of them had a hearty breakfast with doses of maaneet romance every now and then..
Maan was sitting in the hall reading the newspaper while Geet was cleaning up the table..

Rimi: Geet .. mujhe sir ne bulaya hai.. I'm going.. I might get late okay...??

Geet: yeah okay Rimi.. no problem...

Rimi: ofcourse.. why would you have problem.. 😆 have a nice time guys... 😉

With that Rimi left the house and the house echoed with Maaneet's laughter...

Maan: Rimi is a sweetheart Geet...

Geet made an irritated face and came and sat on Maan's lap...

Geet: nahi tumhari sweetheart sirf mai hun...

Maan: haan baba... tum to meri jaan ho.. meri angel ho... tumse pehle to koi nahi aata..

Geet: aaahhh.. i love you...

And they kissed each other... passionately... holding each other... promising each other to be there forever... promising to love each other till they couldn't love anymore... they promised each other to be together till eternity..
After sometime... they broke the kiss...

Maan: Geet... aaj se tumhari next movie ki shoot hai na...??

Geet: haan Maan.. tum chaloge na mere sath...???

Maan: of course Angel.. I'll always be there with you and for you... 😊

Geet: love you Maan.. 😊

Maan: love you too... 😊 acha haan Angel.. remember you told me that you paint as well.. cumon.. I want to see your paintings...

Geet: now??

Maan: yeah baby now...

Geet: ohh k chalo.. upar ke room me hain...

Both of them went upstairs to a room whose door was painted in a very different fashion and it had "Geet Handa" carved on it...

Maan: Geet.. ye tumne??

Geet: haan Maan.. siwae iske construction ke.. is room me har ek cheez maine apne haanthon se ki hai.. yahan tak ki wall bhi maine khud hi paint ki thi.. andar chalo I'll show you...

Maan entered the room to see a beautiful piece of art in front of him... the entire room was full of paintings.. Every wall of the room was painted in a different way to signify different stages of life...
Maan moved towards the wall towards his left...

Geet: Maan.. ye wall meri childhood memories ko signify karti hai... look.. ye jo painting hai.. this is me, papa and mumma... we went to the Goa beach once..usi memory me ye painting ki.. then this painting is with my childhood friends... hum sab khelte hue... then this painting has me and Nanu... Nanu used to love me a lot Maan.. I was very close to him.. though he's no more but I still always feel that he's with me all the time... 😊

Then, they moved to the second wall...

Geet: This wall is for my teenage... ye dekho... maine "Dil To Pagal Hai" ka poster paint kia tha... I was and I am crazy about this film... phir ye painting... mumma ki mujhe daant te hue... 😆... actually once I grew up to I became really naughty to meri naughtiness pe mumma hamesha mujhe daant ti thin... 😆 then this painting is with Rimi... mai jab 15 years ki thi na Maan ... tabse I know Rimi.. tabhi she's my best friend...

They then moved to the third wall..

Geet: This wall is dedicated to my passion... cinema... It's my third stage of life nah... see.. ye painting.. picture hall ki... hehhehehe... then ye painting... though itna pata nahi chal raha but It's me with the filmfare award.. 😆 I wanna get it one day... then this one is my painting when I was shooting for my first film... memories.. first film ke time nervousness ka koi level hi nahi hota... 😆

Then they walked to the fourth and the last wall...
Maan was surprised to find it empty..

Maan: Geet.. ye wall empty kyun hai...??

Geet: ye wall mere aakhiri stage of life ke lie hai.. for the love of my life... I didn't know ki ye wall mai kabhi paint kar bhi paungi ya nahi.. but now... mujhe pata hai ki ye pure wall pe kise hona chahie... 😊
come I'll show you something...

Geet opened the door to the small room inside the huge painting room...
There lay a huge paper which had patches of color here and there...

Geet: ye hai wo painting jo mai us wall pe lagaungi Maan... TUMHARI PAINTING...

Maan looked surprised towards the epitome of sincerity and purity that was standing right beside him..

Geet: haan Maan.. mai us wall pe tumjhari painting lagaungi.. because you're the love of my life... wo insaan jiske sath mai apni sari zindagi bitana chahti hun.. jise mai apni zindagi maan chuki hun.. MERE MAAN KO MERI ZINDAGI MAAN CHUKI HUN... shayad ye painting banne me bohot waqt lagega kyunki mai nahi chahti ki is painting me kuch bhi galat ho.. mai chahti hun ye painting perfect bane... yahan tak ki tumhare chehre ke maasumiat aur shararat bhi is painting me qaid karna chahti hun.. bas ise dunia is sabse perfect aur sabse handsome painting banani chahti hun bilkul waise hi jaise Mera Maan Sabse Perfect aur Sabse Handsome hai...

Maan couldn't take it anymore.. He took Geet's lips into his... he was pouring out his emotions in that kiss... he wanted to tell her how overwhelmed he was with her gesture... how much he loved her for what she was... and how he wanted to make her his...
He said it all in that kiss...

and Geet understood everything that Maan conveyed through that kiss and she deepened the kiss to make it more passionate.. wanting to make that kiss LAST FOREVER..!!

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Okay guys... Thats it for now... I hope you guys enjoyed it as much as I did writing it..
Please guys... Do press the like button and please do give your valuable comments.. It really encourages me to write better and more..
Thanx to each one of you who take out time and read and comment on my FF.. Your love really matters a lot..
It truly provides me a sense of achievement..
Thank you once again and yeah.. Dont forget to press the like button and comment..
Love you all... ❤️

Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#485

me first... :))) yippeee... :)))

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dedicated to your doll...you mean ta poupee...hehe...i guess i know the reason...

i mean why you are saying so... :)))

caught you even before reading it...haha...

and you surprise...now i know what it was...

waise sachi main bahut long update hain...i really love it...hamesha long long update dena...meko pasand hain...haha...

maan kissing geet to be a bit more with here...he knows how to strike the right cord...lol..like he made her loose herself in that kiss to such an extent ke geet bhool hi gayi thi ke ghar jaana hain... :P wah wah...and typical girl ki tarah...hamari heroine bhi sharmaati hain...awww...so sweet...

and rimi...

i love how she teases them all the time...

dost ho toh aisi...lol..

waise geet this is not right...rimi ke liye toh khaana nahi banaati aur MAAN the writer ke liye...well...waqt hi waqt milti hain aapko...haha...

but rimi itni achi hain ke she will definitely not feel bad or left out...like she only wish for you both to be happy and together...

maan coming in geet's room at night...it really isnt a good idea...hehe...both tend to lose themselves a bit too much...haha...sachi main i loved how you write and like you had told me geet had taken the lead...geet heroine se sherni ban gayi all of a sudden...hiha...

and that french waali part...

i must say tu es une bonne eleve...

je suis fiere de toi ma puce...

c'est bien...

t'aime fort and zoubiii a toi...

that room waali bit...how geet had paintings on her walls...each wall for a stage in her life n the last one she made a pic of maan.that was so sweet of her...showing the genuine love for maan...i loved the idea of that room...perfect...

awesome update reshuuu...

u were great ma fille...

loved it to the core...

continue soon and merci ma cherie...for the pm... :)))

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago

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minnie_tweetie

@minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#486

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gudiya muahhh
kya update the...
maan is too smart huh,,,,,asked geet to initiate the k***
and geet smartest to respond back...

phone gir gaya nahin to...😉

waise geet cooking pasta...wah geet superb huh
and then loved the convo between maan, rimi and geet

photos wala part was awesome...so last part khali hona...maan ke liye tha...
great update
gudiya ur a fab writer

muaah...superb one dear

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#487

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Pata hai Falak dear tumhare iss update par mera kya comment hona chahiye ye toh main khus bhi nahi jaanti phir bhi kuch likhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon

So maan does not want geet to go away from him ab kya kare ye dil hai k manta nahi haina Maanji are ye kya haal toh Geet ka bhi yahi hai wo bhi apne maan se dur nahi rehna chahthi par kya kare jaana toh padega hi

Hmm ye maan bhina ek chance nahi chodtha apna gift lene ka wah ghar tak lift di issliye kiss achha hai maan babu licence ka fayda uthayo hehe

Geet toh aivi nakhre dhika rahi hai wo bhi maan ko uska gift dena chahthi hai dekha maine kaha tha na de diya gift

Rimi is such a sweetheart wo toh sab jaanti hai k geet kaha gayithi geet k lal lal gaal sab kuch bata dethe hai hehe so geet ne maan k saath bitaye hue palo ka zikr rimi se kiya oops I mean jo cheeze delete karni thi unko delete karke hehe

Bechari maid ki job toh chali gayi

Dil toh paagal hai one of my fav movies

Movie dekhne k baad geet ne maan ko phone kiya aur maan toh baithe hi the nazre bechaye hue k kab phone aaye aur ye kya geet k demand par maan phir se haazir aur phir wo romantic moments haye main mar jaawa

Pyar toh jadu ki tarah kaam kartha hai ye baat rimi ko koi samjha de dekhona geet aaj sabse pehle utkar apne maan k liye breakfast banarahi hai aur yaha geet ne breakfast baanya nahi k maan haazir ho gaye

Geet itna possessive hona achhanahi hai hehe loved it when she said k aapki sweetheart sirf main hoon

Wow the last part was really unique falak dear the paintings and the diff phases of geet's life made me emotional

Loved your update muahh

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#488

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thats wat we call a magical update dear...awww geet's beautifully painted walls really made me cry...it was super magical n too emotional...
ab shuru se update ki baat karte hain...
maanji hai to most peaceful place but bechari ko jana to parega afterall pyar ka dushman ye zalim zamana...😆
sahi kaha geet maan bara chaalbaaz h har baat p kiss but now m confused 😕 maan ki baat bhi sahi h haq banta h uska apni gf se kiss pane ka...hehe
bhagogi kahan geet ur bf is very strong dole shole nai dekhe???
gud question maan bas kho gayi na kiss mein geet???😆 but ye lo ye to conscious hoke bhaag gayi par gud nyt kiss to mil gayi...zyada lalach achchi baat nai...haina maan???
i luved geet's txt specially "now don't make me blush more" dat bit was really very cute...hehe
rimi as usual was really sweet as a frnd n too cute n naughty wid her teasings 😆
luved d convo between geet n rimi n deir late night slumber movie...
kya baat hai agree wid u rimi bas naam p blushing chaloo...i luved deir sweet convo before movie n copy bit was awsome...hehe
awww maan is sooo damn sweet he kept waiting for her to finish wid movie n call him...😊
oh god dey can't spend a second without each other guys jaldi shaadi kar lo tum dono ka kuch nai ho sakta...
uff wat a payback but d payback really got dem insane dreams reality hone ja rahi theen shukar h babaji ka sahi tym p fon gir gaya...hehe sabar karo guys...
oh god madam geet jo 11 baje bhi bistar nai chhod pateen apne future pati ki seva mein 9 baje uth gayin...👏👏👏
now dats seva ki bhawna!!!!!
possessive geet rimi ko door bhi nai kholne diya...hehe
n heres reshus new passion french...kya baat h maan aur geet yahaan bhi same same dono ko french aati h but bechari rimi k baare mein bhi koi soch lo 😆
now d most beautiful magical n touching part of the update...
GEET'S PAINTING PARADISE
reshu the whole description of the room n den the walls dedicated to geet's phases of life was amazing...magical idea dear...
u beautifully described her connected emotions to each wall...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
n d last wall dat was waiting for d most special n precious painting of her life had me crying...i really don't hv words to describe d magic u created!!!!!!!!!!!
superb job dear!!! u were really fabulous!!!!

Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago