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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

koi twist hone wala hain kya iss love story me...koi nayo ishare hawaienke

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Posted: 13 years ago

#522

wow amazin update

relii emotional dey both luv eachova alot

plzz update soon fanx 4 da pm x

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sehrish79

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Posted: 13 years ago

#523

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I just loved it very very very much SD
Geet is so cute missing maan and maan came there and beautiful passionate moment wowww so romantic :D :D
Love u rimi she is very sweet and funny
I love the scene where she said "why would you have problem" Lolzzz
Beautiful update...wow painting scene was so emotional and beautiful loved it
Continue soon SD xxx
Waiting for update xxx
Sorry for late comment xx
Mwahhh xxx love u sooo much xxx

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Abreshmina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#524

Part 16

okay... I dedicate this update to my dearie Piya di(piya-)... She wanted an update n dat y i did it so soon... luvya Piya di... bisou...
I have replied to all your comments... n some of d comments r afta d post of the update... so plzz do hv a luk...
thx evryone... ur support means a lot... luvya all..
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The hug was an eternal one.. Otherwise the environment was silent but that hug spoke volumes.. It provided calmness and serenity.. It proved the existence of love.. A love which was pure and selfless.. A love which was beyond the need of words.. It had a language of its own.. The language of eyes..heartbeats.. They were enough to speak for that love.. They didn't need the words..
They broke out of the after a long time.. Both wiped their tears which flowed out of their eyes seeing the height of their love..

Maan: Geet.. Mai lafzon me bayaan nahi kar sakta ki tumne mujhe kitni badi khushi di hai.. Mai tumhe kaise bataun ki...

Geet shut her mouth with the placement of her song finger over his M-shaped lips..

Geet: sshhh Maan.. Tumhe kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai.. Tumhari ye aankhen mujhe sab bata deti hain Maan.. In jazbaaton ko lafzon se zaae(waste) mat hone do..

Maan looked at Geet with an expression of astonishment... He couldn't comprehend the depth of his Angel's love.. It was beyond any measurement..
Maan held her waist and brought her closer to him.. He look his lips beside her ear and whispered..

Maan: dunia ka sabse khushnaseeb insaan to tumne mujhe usi din bana dia jisne tumne mujhe apna maana tha aur aj is qadar mohobbat kar baitha hun tumse ki is dunia ki koi parwaah hi nahi reh gai hai ab mujhe.. Mai bas inhi lamhon me apni sari zindagi bita dena chahta hun Geet.. Tumhare sath..tumhari baahon me..

With that he hugged her passionately and took her lips into his.. This time he was gentle and soft.. He wanted to tell her how much he loved her..how much he cared for her.. So he was gentle with her..
They broke out of the kiss after sometime..

Geet: Maan.. Neeche chalen..??

Maan: haan chalo..

Both went back downstairs to the living room..

Maan: Geet.. Tumhari shoot ka scheduled time kya hai..??

Geet: 12pm Maan...

Maan: Geet.. Its already 11.. I think you should go and get ready.. Then we'll leave for the set..

Geet: yeah right.. I'll just go and get ready..

Geet went to get ready and came out in a long figure-hugging blue top and black jeans.. She looked gorgeous..
Maan just kept gaping at the beauty in front of her..
Realising the way Maan was looking at her.. Geet shyed and lowered her eyes..
Maan went forward and lifted her chin to make her look into his eyes..

Maan: Geet.. You look like a beauty to die for.. Baap re.. Aaj to tumhe buri nazron se mujhe hi bachana hoga... Hehee..

Geet: hehhe.. Thank you Maan.. Ab chalen?? Warna we'll get late..

Maan: haan chalo chalte hain..

Maan and Geet sat in the car and reached the set in about 20mins..

On reaching there

Everybody's eyes popped out to see Maan Singh Khurana with Geet.. They couldn't believe their eyes.. The MSK who was one of the most busy personalities in the city was here on the sets of a movie.. Everybody kept looking at them shocked as they crossed their path..
Finally the director came forward..

Director: Maan ..tum yahan..??

Maan: haan.. Mai Geet ke sath aaya hun..

Geet looked at Maan and smiled.. He didn't even once gave a thought to his words.. She smiled seeing he love in his eyes..

Director: Geet ke sath..??

Maan: haan.. Kyun.. Nahi aa sakta.. Aap itne sawaal kyun kar rahe hain??

Director got scared instantly..

Director.. Nahi kuch nahi.. I'm sorry.. Wo I was just shocked to see you here.. Geet you please proceed towards the vanity van to get ready for the shoot while I'll take care of Mr. Khurana..

Geet went ahead to her vanity van while Maan sat with the director..
The director was trying everything to impress Maan.. After all.. It was his chance to shoot to instant fame..

Next day.. There was a huge news in the newspaper about MSK accompanying Geet Handa to her shoot..
Within a day.. Things turned upside down for Geet... People were hovering over just to look at her.. People were hurdling around her to talk to her and hold her hand..girls were shouting towards her to know about MSK.. She instantly became famous.. She was being treated like a gem on the sets of her film.. She got every possible facilty..
As soon as she stepped out of the sets.. People started to rush towards her to take her autograph.. Geet got scared with this sudden rush of people.. She quickly called up Maan to come and pick her up..
Maan reached there within 15mins.. And as soon as his car reached there.. Girls started shouting at the top of her voice.. People started jumping to get a glimpse of him..
Geet quickly got into the car and they drove off..

Geet: phew.. Thank God.. I came out alive from there.. Hehehe..

Maan: what was that immense crowd for??

Geet: aaj ka newspaper dekha na tumne.. Sab tumharu hi meherbaani hai...

Maan: sahi baat hai.. Maine tumse famous kar dia... 😉

Geet: hehehe.. Ye to hai Mr. Khurana..

Maan: Geet.. Waise mujhe abhi Farhan Akhtar ka interview lene jaana hai.. Would you like to accompany me..? I mean you would get to meet him as well.. May be if he likes you.. You never know.. You might get a chance to work with him..

Geet: haan Maan.. I'll come with you..

Both went to Farhan Akhtar's studio to get his interview...

Maan greeted him.. He already knew Farhan quite well.. They had met before for interviews and in parties..

Farhan: hey Maan.. I specially asked Indian Herald's head to send only you to take my interview..

Maan: yeah I know.. Sir told me.. It's my pleasure to be here..
By the way.. Meet her.. Geet Handa..

Geet: hello sir..

Farhan: aah yes.. The actress of Pyar Ke Dushman... You were good lady.. The film wasn't a justice to your talent.. I liked you.. I would definitely like to sign you for my next project..

Geet beamed at this proposal.. But quickly calmed herself..

Geet: sure sir.. It would be my pleasure..

Farhan: sir.. Sir bada shareef sa lagta hai.. Call me Farhan.. Heehhee...
Maan.. Let's get on with the interview..

Maan: ohh yeah Farhan..

Maan did the interview.. Both Maan and Geet bid a goodbye to Farhan after Farhan gave his number to Geet.. And went away..
They sat in the car...
And instantly Geet started jumping on the seat...

Maan: whoaaa Geet... What's wrong..??

Geet: wrong..?? Maan nothing is wrong.. Everything is just perfect.. I met Farhan Akhtar today.. He was interested in signing me.. OMG... Thank you so much Maan... I love you..

Maan: I love you too Geet... Now just take the best of the opportunity...

He kissed Geet on her cheek and started to drive towards her home..
Finally they reached their home..

Maan: goodnight Geet.. Tumhara ghar aa gaya..

Geet: hmm.. Thank you so much Maan... I just cannot thank you enough..

Maan: Geet.. Please itna thank you mat bolo... Waise thank you hi kehna hai to ek kiss hi de do... 😉

Geet: aaj to kuch bhi Maan...

With that Geet boldly moved towards Maan and captured his lips into hers... They kissed each other ferociously expressing their desire and their hunger..
After sometime.. They broke apart from the kiss..

Geet: goodnight Maan.. Love you..

Maan: goodnight Geet.. Love you too.. Take care...

Geet went towards her home.. While Maan drove to his..
Maan reached his home and freshened up.. He quickly made some maggi and had his dinner...
Later at night..
He lay on his bed in his trademark vest and tracks thinking about Geet...
Geet had slept early today.. She was very tired due to the shoot and all..
Maan lay in his bed thinking about her smile.. Her walk.. Her eyes.. Her everything..
Maan suddenly got up and took out his diary..

Your smile is the light of my heart..
Your smile makes my day start..
Your smile makes me enjoy my day..
Your smile makes it easy to say..

I love you Geet..
And I'll love you all my life..
Never I'll let waver away that smile..

You light my heart..
With that laughter of yours..
To you my heart opens its doors..!!

He closed his diary with a contended heart and laid down closing his eyes to see His Geet his way in his paradise..

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next - part 17

okay dats ol for 2day guys...
i hope u luv d update... plzzz do like and comment...
it really really means a lot.. and motivates me truly...
luvya all... 🤗

Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago

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Zahra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#525

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first thing first...

thank you Pihu darling...

like because of you we got an update...me love you tons...

starting with maanee;s hug...hayyee...

i loved that first para...

how you described their love for each other...

and then their little convo...

awesome...like they understand each other so well...their eyes speak volume now.. :)))

and then the first maaneet kiss in today's update...yipppeee...

maan saying geet looked like a beauty to die for...awww...he must so love her...that he said even he is all smitten by her...love him reshu...hehe...

and then MSK accompanying geet...in a way like we say there is a woman behind every man's success...it is the inverse here...i love how maan is supporting her all the while and helping her with her career and decisions...so sweet, nice and caring of him...

and then FARHAN AKHTAR...

u know i really like him...hehe...though i havent atched all the films where he has been acting...i make a point to listen to all the songs where he is seen...hehe...

and in ZNMD...like u said...his poems were just great...i loved him in that...n the last song where he dances...hehe...awesome

and then "SIR BADA SA SHAREEF LAGTA HAIN...CALL ME FARHAN"

AWWW...my favourite film don...with my fav actor srk...

i have already watched this film 5 times..n once at the cinema...hehe...

srk looks so nice in this...

the second half just roxxx...

n his one's liners...i love where he removes the mask n says...no autograph plzzz...n when he says tumhaari aur uss arjun ki kya kahaani hain to roma...lol...

awesome movie...

vtw i guess me going out of context...lol

back to update...hehe...

farhan would love to have geet in his next film...great news..

like i said...maan is a gem of a person...

geet kissing ferociously...awww...haha...

awesome awesome update...i loved how u ended with maan writing the poem in his diary...amazing...

continue soon n thnxxx...

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago

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minnie_tweetie

@minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#526

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well this was the bestest update dear
loved the convo between maan and geet...aww that was so so sweet...
i love their cute sweet relationship

and then maan accompanying geet so sweet on his part...jo bhi ho maan apni geet ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai...hayee marjawa...

director sahab man ko impress karne chale...and girls maan pe flat hona to banta hai by god
and then the meeting with Farhan akhtar

so he asked geet for his next movie...
i just loved it

great update
loved it

keep up the good work
god bless u
muaahhh

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#527

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Sorry for the late comment Falak dear

just loved the starting the way u explained their hug was a brilliant piece of writing 👏👏👏

this was followed by their kiss ab ye toh sone pe suhaga ho gaya 😳😳😳

hehe Director sahab ko toh unke film ki publicity ki zarurat hi nahi hai the gr8 MSK unke shooting mein jo aa gaya ab kya kare unki Geet ko wo akela toh nahi chodengena

aww geet sudden attention se darr gayi ab aadat daal lo geet abhi toh shuruwat hai

boyfriend ho toh MSK jaisa ho Farhan Akthar hehe Sir mat bulau call me farhan sir shareef lagtha hai hehe Don ka dialogue haan

the update was really sweet and it brought a smile on my face

love u and continue soon

-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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Abgina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#528

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reshu it was d most beautiful description of a hug i ever read dear...fabulous job there...👏
awww i luved d way geet didn't let him speak n told him not to waste their beautiful emotions in trial of giving words to it...
maan so dreamily responded to geet whispering in her ears dat he doesn't care bout d world anymore n just wanna live in her embrace forever...n den maaneet's dreamy passionate hug n kiss...awww...
its amazing d way maan without any second thoughts stand by her throughout...
wow reshu farhan akhtar haye wish mujhe mil jaye usse milne ka chance...
lol...farhan mimicking his own (written deliver to srk ne kiya tha) dialogue...dat was nyc...
superb farhan ne geet ko apni nxt movie k liye offer diya...great going geet...
luved geet's reaction once she was wid maan...geet is such a cutie pie...
maan ko mili opportunity n maan ne fauran grab kiya n whoa aaj to bina mushaqqat k kiss mil bhi gaya...hehe
amazing piece of poetry dear...simply marv...
brilliant update dear...sweet cute romantic n dhasu...
luvya ma cherie...

Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago