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Posted: 13 years ago

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Beautiful parts!!!



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hey gals! going to update next part in an hour.. get ready wid ur comments
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Hey Gals! thank u so much for ur overwhelming Love nd comments on d part 1 of my FF. i really cant believe dat i m able to make it up in d first update itself. thanx to u guys, u r my inspiration. keep suporting me like dis in future too. So without Wasting tym m going to update d Part 3 of my FF. hope u all r going to like it. Pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it

Part 3:

He said nd dey formed a group hug celebrating d joy nd happiness dat had made dere place in dere lives.

Outside d room Sameera's parents were witnessing d whole scene wid tears of happiness in her eyes seeing dere children so happy nd praying to god dat dis happiness remains forever in dere lives nd nothing can go wrong wid dem.

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"Di tell me Na hw ur Love story has started" Geet said while keeping her head on Sameera's lap while Sam was just caressing her hairs

Sameera: Me nd Maan has first met in Vidyut's party. U know Vidyut right?

"The one who looks like Ranbir Kapoor." Geet said excitedly while Sameera just rolled over her eyes seeing her die hard affection for Ranbir Kapoor

"Ya the one who looks like Ranbir Kapoor. Waise I forget to tell u, he has been asking about u a lot nw-a-days. Wats up? Is something cooking between u two" Sameera asked suspiciously

Geet: Oh! c'mon Di. It's nothing like dat ok. I mean he's gud but abhi he's just a friend of mine, so dnt get any wrong ideas ok. Acha nw dnt change the topic nd tell me further

Sameera: ok. So I nd Maan has first met at Vidyut's party. Vidyut introduced Maan to me as his childhood friend nd I dnt knw hw we instantly clicked nd had become good friends. Den thru Skype, Facebook nd calls we started cuming closer. He use to come to base wenever I was in duty to meet me nd didn't realize dat wen we fall in Love. Nd finally he proposed me nd I said yes. Bas dats it!

Geet: Wow not bad ha. But Di u always use to say dat u'll do arrange marriage den hw come u land up in being Love nd all

Sameera: Stupid, its not all planned ok. Love just happens nd it won't ask Ur permission. U urself won't realize wen u'll fall in Love nd den all Ur ideologies nd logics will go in vain. Just wait until u fall in Love wid someone den u'll realize it.

"Whatever! But for one thing m sure that m going to do Love Marriage only nd dat too wid d one who'll look like Ranbir Kapoor" Geet said while getting up from her lap.

"Hhmmm! So it's like dat, ok so in dat case I must talk to Vidyut right." Sameera said wid the intention of having some fun

Geet: Vidyut? Wo kyun?


"Arey u only said na dat u wanted to marry someone like Ranbir Kapoor nd dis also u had admitted dat Vidyut looks like Ranbir Kapoor so in dat case both of urs match will be perfect. Wat say?" Sameera said while winking

"Di u r so mean" she said nd picked up a pillow from her side nd throws on her. Sameera too dis d same nd both Sisters had pillow fight.

*******~~~~~~~Back to Present~~~~~~*******

Geet opens her eyes as soon as dis memory crossed her mind. Automatically a smile crept up on her face. Those were d happiest moments of her life where everything was going fine. Dere was so much happiness around dem. After dat introduction part Maan nd Geet had really become very comfortable wid each other. Geet always use to make fun of his bad temper nd calls him "Angry Young Man" while Maan always teases her by saying "Aadhi Gharwali" nd Sameera just back of by saying dat its d matter between u both y should I interfere.

She looked at Maan nd found him still sleeping but least she knows dat Maan haven't slept a wink by now. She again rests her head on d bed post nd thinks about those past moments. Everything was going fine. Maan's family has whole-heartedly accepted Sameera ns soon she got married to him too. But dat doesn't made nay difference between d relation of Sameera nd Geet infact nw dere binds becomes more stronger. Maan's family too likes Geet a lot. Infact Annie nd Vicky had become her good friends so dere was no restriction for her cuming nd going in KM.

Everything was going in d way dey wanted to be until that dreadful day which changed everyone's Life forever. Almost 6 months have been passed since Sameera nd Maan are married nd Sameera has to go to base all of a sudden. Though she was at 1 month leave at dat tym but due to emergency she had to go to report.

**********~~~~~~~~Flashback~~~~~~~~~**********

Geet was not having a gud feeling dat day. She felt like sumthing very worse going to happen but Sameera assured her dat everything is fine nd she'll be back soon. Even Maan was reluctant to let her go like dis but Sameera somehow convinced him too nd den she left for base but for never to come back.

She still remember dat dreadful day wen dey receive call from base reporting about Sameera's plane crash nd her accident nd told dat her cond. Is very critical. As soon as dey got the news dey all rushed towards the hospital told by them. All d way Geet was silently praying to God dat nothing happen to Sameera. But it seems God is not in mood to listen to her that day.

As soon as dey reached to hospital Geet saw dat Maan nd his family was already present over dere. Geet quickly runs towards Maan nd hugged him tight but he was just standing over dere lifeless nd didn't reciprocated d hug. Just den Doctor came out nd called Dadimaa inside as Sameera wanted to say something to her.

Maan: Doctor, is Sameera all right?

Doctor: can't say anything right nw Mr. Khurana. Her condition is still critical

Saying dis he excused himself nd Dadimaa goes inside the ICU to meet Sameera. Everyone was eagerly waiting for her to come out to know for what Sameera has called her inside. Every passing minute seems to be an eternity to dem. after sometym she comes outside. Her face clearly expressing dat dere's something wrong. She seems to be very much worried.

Maan: Dadimaa, wat happen? Wat had Sameera said to u?

"She wanted to meet Geet 'alone'." She said while trying her best to hold back her tears leaving everyone confused.

Without asking any questions she ran inside d ICU while Dadimaa just prayed silently to god to give her d courage to bear d situation dat she's going to face nw.

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As soon as Geet reached inside the ICU she saw Sameera lyieng over dere surrounded by so many pipes nd wires. Her heart cried seeing her Di in dis condition but she hold back dere tears nd goes towards her. As soon as Sameera notices her she gestures her to come near her. Geet sat near Sameera nd hold her hand.

"Di! Hw all dis happened? U said dat everything is fine den hw come ur plane got crashed" She said while sobbing

Sameera: few things r not in our hands Geet, just like my Lyf. It's slipping away from my hand.

Geet: Di Pls dnt say like dat. u had a long lyf, trust me.

Sameera: No Geet I dnt have. This pain is getting unbearable to me nw.

Geet didn't said anything nd shakes her head in denial while still crying

"Geet, if today I'll ask sumthing from u den will u give me dat?" She said almost in a pleading way

"Yes Di I'll give u whatever you want but pls dnt go away from us" Geet said while holding her hands

"Geet, Pls Marry Maan after my death" Sameera finally said after taking a deep breath giving Geet the biggest shock of her lyf.

Geet couldn't believe dat whether wat she was listening is correct or not. Did Sam just ask her to marry Maan? Seeing Geet perplexed expressions Sameera spoke further

"Geet I knw I m asking a very big thing from u. I knw that sumwhere I am getting selfish too. U had never dreamt of marrying Maan. Ur dreams are different wen it comes to marriage nd I m asking u to sacrifice all dat but pls Agree to it Geet. Pls"

Geet: No Di, dis is not right. He loves only you. I can't marry him.

Sameera: I knw Geet hw much he Loves me nd I also know dat u dnt Love me less den him nd dis also I knw dat after my death u both will be broken completely. Tu to apne aap ko sambhal legi but Maan will never be able to overcome from dis. he'll be shattered. Nd dis I can't bear. Geet only u can fill dat void in his lyf that'll be created after me. Only u can take him out from dis situation. I had seen hw much u both are comfortable wid each other nd I m sure dat u both will be each other's support. Pls Geet dnt refuse. u both r d only ones whom I Love d most in dis world nd My soul wont be in peace if I'll see anyone of u in pain after my death. Fill his lyf nd heart wid so much Love dat he never feel my absence in his lyf nd I knw dat u can do it.

Geet: Di I….

"Pls Geet Pls Promise me dat u'll never leave Maan alone. Promise me dat u'll always be wid him as his shadow. Promise me Geet dat u'll fill dat void in his lyf dat will create after me. Pls Promise me Geet. Pls fulfill my last wish" Sameera said while breathing heavily. Geet can't see her sister in dis state so without any second thought she holds her hand nd accepted her desire

"I Promise u di dat I'll fulfill Ur last wish. I'll marry him nd will never leave him alone. I promise" Geet said wid tears in her eyes.

Just den Sameera's eyes fell on Maan who was standing behind at d corner. His facial expression clearly says dat he had listened to their conversation. He nodded in denial gesturing "Don't Do dis" to reply of which she gestured him to cum to her.

As soon as he reaches to her Sameera takes his hand in hers nd keeps it on Geet's hand. Her heart finally got peace knowing dat the two persons whom she loved d most will never be alone now without her. A smile of contentment crept on her face as she finally closes her eyes to drift into a peaceful death

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Badi Maa: No Arnav, I can't agree to it

Bade Papa: Madhu try to understand it was our daughter's last wish

Madhu: Geet is my daughter too Arnav. I may not be her real mother but I haven't made any difference between her nd Sam. I knw I m strict wid her at tymes but dat doesn't mean dat I dnt Love her. No, I'll not let Geet bear dis Lifetime punishment

Arnav: and you think Geet will agree to it. She had promised Sameera nd nw no one can make her back out from dat promise.

Madhu: I dnt know about all dat but I'll not let her do dis. Arnav, Geet is my daughter. She had seen so many dreams for her marriage nd I wont let her ruin dat

"I had made my decision Badi Maa" Geet said while standing on d door making Arnav nd Madhu to look at her

"I won't back out from my promise. It was Sameera Di's Last wish nd I'll fulfill it" she said wid determination in her voice

Madhu: Geet, ye tu kya bol rahi hai? No I wont let u do dis.

Geet: Pls Badi Maa for Sameera Di. Pls agree to it

Madhu: but Ur happiness

Geet: m happy Badi Maa nd trust me I can never be dis much happy. U call KM nd tell dem dat I m ready for dis marriage.

She said nd goes out from dere to Sameera's room nd sat on d floor wid her photo nd drifted to sleep.

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1 month later Geet got married to Maan. she knows dat she had sacrificed her every dream, her every expectations for dis marriage but still she was happy as for d first tym Sameera had asked sumthing from her nd she was able to give her dat. No matter wat her dreams was all dat matter is dat she's doing dis for dat girl who had welcomed her with open arms wen she has stepped into dis house holding d finger of her Bade Papa's hand. Who had never let her feel alone wen god has taken away her parents from her to leave at d mercy of dis cruel world.

May be she'll get no happiness from dis marriage but she'll try her best to give Maan all d happiness of dis world as she promised Sameera.

*******~~~~~~~Back to Present~~~~~~*******

The night of memories had passed as d morning rays hit d sky. Geet didn't realize wen she drifted off to sleep thinking about her past memories. When Maan got up he found dat Geet is still in sitting position nd in deep slumber. Her head is rolling from one side to another. Maan notices her uncomfortableness so he goes near her

He was about to wake her up but he stops his hand in d mid thinking dat she must be tired. But he can't see her uncomfortable too. He was not sure whether wat he was going to do nw he had to do dat or not but he cant see her like dat too. So after thinking a lot he bend down nd pulls her down wards making sure dat her sleep don't get disturbed. He cradled her head in his other hand to make sure dat she didn't get sprain due to sudden pull. After laying down her comfortably he tucked her up wid a blanket.

He turned to leave wen he felt a sudden jerk on his hand. He turns towards her nd see dat she was sleeping peacefully by keeping his hand as a pillow. He smiles seeing her like dat nd slowly bent down on his knees on d floor nd watched her for sometym. He noticed d hair strands coming on her face disturbing her sleep. Maan very gently removes dat from her face nd tucked dem behind her ear. He watched her innocent face for some more tym nd den gently removes his hand beneath her nd goes to gym for his regular exercise.

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After a while Geet too woke up. her head was still heavy due to lack of sleep. She somehow managed to open her eyes nd looked around her surroundings nd den it struck her dat she's not at her home. She's at KM nw nd have to spend whole of her lyf here only.

Den she noticed her posture nd realized dat she haven't slept like dat nd she was sure of it. den hw come she's sleeping so comfortably nw nd den she realizes dat Maan had made her sleep like dat. she smiled a bit seeing his care nd den moves towards washroom as it was her first day at KM nd she dnt want to be late.

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Wen Maan came into the room he found it all empty nd den he heard d sound of shower nd guessed dat she was taking bath so he decided to go thru some files as he had missed lots of work due to dis Marriage nd all.

While going thru files he keeps d file aside nd attends d call. He talked for a while nd after sometym he cuts d call. While he was returning back to his files he bumped into Geet who was just coming out from d shower.

Geet gets disbalanced due to sudden collision but before she could touch d ground she felt a pair of strong arms around her waist preventing her from falling. She turns her head to look at d person only to find being saved by Maan. dere was an eye lock session between dem for a while wen Maan suddenly realizes dere position nd slowly raises her up on her feet.

Maan: tum theek to ho na?

Geet: ya. Sorry I didn't saw u.

Maan: it's ok. It happens. BTW tum itni jaldi kaise uth gayi. I mean u had slept late at nite

"Wo its my first day so…" den it struck her "but hw do u knw dat I slept late at nite?"

"Wo… Actually" Maan fumbled wid his words not sure wat to say

Geet: its ok I understand. Afterall we both r sailing on d same boat. u can understand ur Pain wid me

Geet said while smiling weakly making Maan once again surprised wid her maturity. He still can't believe dat she's d same girl who always comes to conclusion without understanding anything nd nw talking so maturely. She's indeed an antique piece

"App kuch soch rahe ho" Geet's voice brings him back from his reverie.

Maan: ha… nothing… wo I think I should go nd take shower.

He said to which Geet simply nodded. He was about to go inside washroom wen Geet calls him

"Ji suniye" Maan frowns a bit at her sudden addressing nd den turned to look at her

"Wo I wanted to ask wat will u take in breakfast" she asked innocently while fidgeting wid her duppatta. Maan looks at her for a while nd den spoke

Maan: Geet y u r getting worried for dat. Nakul hai na he'll handle everything

Geet: nahi its ok u tell me I'll prepare it

Maan: Geet y u r hell bent in preparing breakfast for me

Geet: wo… I saw in movies wives use to do like dis so I thought……

Maan chuckled a bit seeing her filmy fever. He couldn't help himself from not smiling on her innocence. Dis girl indeed had many colors in her. Everytym he sees different sides of her

"Geet, U dnt have to do anything like dat. tum waise hi raho jaise tum pehle thi. U dnt have to change urself for anything ok. I dnt want u to lose Ur innocence" He said nd moves inside d washroom before she could say further

Geet just stood dere quietly watching his retreating figure nd den smiled seeing his care nd concern for her. he may not fall in Love wid her ever but for one thing she was sure dat he'll take care of her for d rest of his lyf.


Ok so dis is it guys! finally i covered up d whole past... nw d story will move in present... hope i did justice to dis part as m not sure hw dis part has came up... so pls tell me hw u all find it... Hit d like button if u all like it nd do leave ur comment/criticsm its necessary


Will PM everyone tomorrow as m feeling very much sleepy nw... gud nite all


Luv Aakriti



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Wow My Basanti u updating... Me waiting...!!!!!!!



veeru basanti is hell tired nw so gng to sleep so catch up wid u tomorrow... Luv u loads veeru... bye gud nite
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Posted: 13 years ago
Basanti... Loved the update...

Yepieee... Me First to comment again...😆

Finally the Past came out...

Loved the update...

The past u described luvd it...

Loved the bond between geet & sameera...

Ahh.. I m *J* after seeing their bond...

I dont have a Sis...😭

Present was just wow yaar...

Geet Saying "Suniye" Hayeee Me mar jawa...

ANd That Filmy style... Haha.. She is such a innocent yaar..

Just like a kid... Yet Mature and understanding...

And Maan was awesum.. the way he understood her.. loved it...

Me eager to read more...

Basanti It was just fab yaar...

Luv ya... Muaah...

Hugs and Kisses to my basanti...😳

-Ritu
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111



veeru basanti is hell tired nw so gng to sleep so catch up wid u tomorrow... Luv u loads veeru... bye gud nite


Awww... My Basanti... Take rest... Tale care...

Gud N8... Sweet Dreamz... Luv ya 2...

Muaah.. ANd me again first to comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago
sooo emotional past


love between 2 sis...totally diff...nd pure



loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
so fnally the past is over
continue soon
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Brilliant dear just brilliant.
The past was very well described and the concept was amazing.
Loving it.
Great job dear.
Keep it up :)

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