IN LOVE WID MR. IMPERFECT New Note@ Pg 87/20th Jan - Page 20

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thanx dear 🤗
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Originally posted by: t_areeb

like the happy go lucky nature of maan

and waiting for the part where maan will come to office




Thanx Sweety 🤗... glad u liked characterisation of Maan... nd ur wait will over soon in future updates

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Thanx dear😊
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Thank u so much dear...
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hey gals! me back again... Going to update next part in an hour so get ready wid ur comments
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hey gals! me back again wid another update. thank u so much for showering ur Love on d Previous updates... i feel so special wen i read ur comment... Thanx a ton for liking d story... nw here's d part 3 of my FF hope u all r gonna like it too. Pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it

Part 3:

Geet: ur luck is good dat I had to go urgently or else only god can spare u. nd one more thing just pray to God dat u never cross my path because I dnt know whether I would be able to tolerate u again or not. Good Bye!

She said nd moves towards d shop across him. Maan turned to look at her only to find her retreating figure. He smiles nd shakes his head at her attitude

Maan: No Byes! Ms. Perfect ye Duniya bahut choti hai nd my instincts says dat we'll meet once again. Right Dude?

He said while looking upwards nd headed towards his decision

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"Idiot, stupid, duffer, gadha, ullu... argghhh I dnt even knw further words of cursing nd whatever every word would be less for dat jerk. I hate him, I hate him, I hate him, I just..."

"Hate him" Pari completed her remaining sentence which she was listening from past 15 mins continuously, while sitting on d stool nearby. She wonders which guy has dis much courage to mess up wid Geet nd nw being a part of her cursing. Since d tym Geet has came inside the showroom Pari was witnessing d same thing.

"Yes, I just hate him." she said it again while stopping for a while nd den again started pacing back nd forth while Pari just rolled over her eyes. She looked around herself nd saw dat everyone is passing strange glances to Geet while Pari just passes a nervous smile to them

"If he again comes in front of me den I'll just kill him. Wait he haven't gone far by now. Abhi batati hoon" she said while turning to go outside. Pari instantly realized d gravity of situation so she quickly gets up to stop her

"Di, Di relax. Calm Down. He was just a stranger. You just sit over here" Pari said while making her sit on d stool to calm her down.

"Ok now close ur eyes nd take a deep breath. Breath in Breath out. Relax, take it easy" she said while trying her best to calm her down. For one thing she was sure by now dat Geet's foul mood was just not due to dat stranger, dere's something also. Den it struck her wat can be d other reason for it.

"Feeling better nw" Pari said wen she saw Geet opening her eyes.

Geet: much better

"Wat happen Di? Ghar se fir se call aaya?" Pari asked while holding her hands while Geet just nodded to her question.

Pari: Di let it be Na. y u always spoils Ur mood by thinking about all dat. see all dese things doesn't matter anymore Na. Den y u always gets upset wenever u get call from home

"Den y cant they just leave me alone? Y cant dey understand day I dnt need anyone" Geet said bitterly

"Because they Love you Di just like I Love you. Uncle Aunty wants to see u happy, datsy dey always be worried for u." Pari said while trying her best to make her understand

Geet: nd Daarji? Who had given him dis right to still take decisions of my life? Haven't all dat was enough wat he had done dat he again wants to do d same

Pari: Di may be he was really repenting his mistake nd was trying to control d damage caused by him

"His no act can fix d damage caused by him in my lyf Pari nd anyways I dnt want to talk about all dis pls." Geet said while trying to cut-short d topic

"Ok fine we'll not talk about it. But abhi come wid me" she said nd making her get up from stool

Geet: Where?

Pari: oho Di! U asks so many Questions? I'll answer all of dem later. Abhi cum wid me.

She said while literally dragging her out of d showroom making Geet confused wid her behaviour

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"What's this?" Geet asked while gesturing to a place wid her eyes

"Haawww Di! U dnt know this? Its disco theque" Pari said innocently

"Thank u so much Pari for telling me but I m asking why we are here" Geet asked in a stern voice

Pari: oh dat? Aise hi to enjoy ourselves

Geet: Pari u knw na I dnt go do discos nd all den y had u brought me over here

Pari: because I want. C'mon Di main hamesha apki baat maanti hoon. Kya aaj aap meri baat nahi maan sakti pls.

"Again mellow drama" Geet said under her breath nd shakes her head seeing her 'Nautanki'

Geet: fine I'll come wid u. nw stop ur Nautanki.

Pari: o Di! U r d best. Nw lets go inside

See said nd headed inside.

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As soon as Geet enters inside she saw everyone is busy in dancing nd drinking nd enjoying demselves. Pari excused herself by saying dat she's going to get drinks for dem nd asked her to find a seat for dem. Geet nodded nd soon finds a seat for both of dem nd waits for Pari to return back. Just den she saw a group of Teenagers across her seat who were busy in enjoying demselves oblivious of any worries. Geet smiled slyly looking at dem. hw much carefree dey were, enjoying the atmosphere but all dese things doesn't seems to affect her anymore nw. her life had lost all its colors nd anyways she is happy also like dis. atleast sis is wat she use to tell herself Everytym.

She came out from her thoughts wen she felt a sudden push. She looked around nd saw a group of girls going towards d dance floor. She knotted her brows in confusion no understanding wat happened all of a sudden. Just den she saw Pari too moving towards d dance floor. She immediately stops her from going to ask wats wrong

"Pari wat happen? Y everyone is so excited nd where are u going?" She asked confusingly

"Di dnt ask anything just come to the Dance floor nd see urself" she said cheerfully nd rushes towards Dance Floor leaving Geet behind more confused.

She shrugs her shoulders nd goes towards d dance floor to see the center of attraction.

Music...

Just den she saw d Lights get dimmed nd DJ has changed into a peppy no.

Yeah! Baby When U See Me
Comming Yeah!
Yeah U Better Run For Cover
Yeah
Cos U Know When I Find U
Yeah
Yeah Im Gonna Be Your Lover

Yeah! Baby When U See Me
Comming Yeah!
Yeah U Better Run For Cover
Yeah
Cos U Know When I Find U
Yeah
Yeah Im Gonna Be Your Lover

She saw someone standing in a center wid his back towards her. She craned her neck to see who it is but couldn't able to see his face due to dim lights. D girls around him were shouting nd screaming excitedly

Tujhse Log Kahnge
Na Kar Pyaar Mujhe
Mein To Lakh Bura Hoon
Need Chura Loon Hosh Uda Doon
Main To Baahon Mein Le Ke
Raah Bhula Doon Baat Bana Doon

Chahe Jahaan Dil Ko Chupaa

Baaton Hi Baaton Main
Do Mulaqaton Mein Le Loon

Just den he started grooving according to music while shaking his legs nd hands acc to music. He bends towards one girl nd pulled her towards stage nd den he bends other side nd brings other girl. Nd started grooving wid dem. dere was a confidence in his steps like he knows his effect on gals. D girls felt like dey got all d happiness of dis world chosen by him. Geet looks around herself only to find girls drooling on him including Pari too. She wonders wat special is dere in dis guy dat every girl is dyeing for him.

Bachna Ae Haseena
Lo Mein Aa Gaya
Ae Bachna Ae Haseeno
Lo Mein Aa Gaya
Husn Ka Aashiq
Husn Ka Dushman

Apni
Ada Hai Yaaron Se Juda
Hai Ho


Bachna Ae Haseena

Lo Mein Aa Gaya
Ae Bachna Ae Haseeno
Lo Mein Aa Gaya

Just wen she was busy thinking all dis he turned to face her nd Geet gets d biggest shock of her lyf. It was none other den d same stranger whom she had a encounter few mins. Back.

She saw him extending his hand towards a girl nd twirling her towards him. She did d same thing wid girl present on his left side nd den he twirled both of dem together towards him while still grooving wid dem. D girls runs dere hands over his chest nd shoulders while he just swirl himself a bit backwards dere steps were going according the rhythm nd she whole crowd were enjoying wid dem while he was shaking his abs wid d girls.

Music (Hai Hai )...

Yeah! Baby When U See Me
Comming Yeah!
Yeah U Better Run For Cover
Yeah
Cos U Know When I Find U
Yeah
Yeah Im Gonna Be Your Lover

Suddenly he extends his hand towards Pari nd bring her towards d dance floor nd Pari felt like she's d luckiest girl in dis earth. Geet looked at her in disbelief as if hw is she enjoying herself wid a stranger while Pari was busy in dancing wid his 'Mr. Dreamy'.

Just den Maan's eyes fell on Geet who was standing over dere nd tym froze for him. he cant believe his luck dat he's meeting d same girl again dat too in d same evening. He knows dat dey'll meet soon but dis soon dat he doesn't know. Geet was not at all comfortable over dere so she turned to leave but before she could leave he held her wrist to stop her nd before she could understand anything he pulled her towards him.

Hey Tujhko Zamaane Je Aage Main
Cherrunga Na Chorrunga
Aankein Churayegi Bhi To Milaunga

Geet was shocked at his sudden act nd wen she realized she found herself on d dance floor along wid him. Geet tried to free herself but he griped her hand tight. He took hold of her arm and jerked her back... she lost her balance and crashed into his broad chest. he caress her jaw line wid his fingers while still loking into her eyes.. Gripping her hand he made her swirl around him wid d music' pushed her away nd den again pulled her back all d while keeping d grip fixed on her hand nd bend her down like a flower

Ja Ja Kya Bahaane Banayegi
Dekhunga Dil Phenkhunga
Jhootey Mootey Vaadey Suna Ke Fasaunga

Husn Ka Aashiq
Husn Ka Dushman

Apni
Ada Hai Yaaron Se Juda
Hai Ho

He brings her back nd again twirled her around in d way dat her back in touching his chest. He places his hands on her waist nd grooves wid her. Nd den turns her around so dat she can face him. Maan was once again lost in her eyes while dancing nd again bends her down

Bachna Ae Haseena
Lo Mein Aa Gaya

Bachna Ae Haseena

Lo Mein Aa Gaya
Husn Ka Aashiq
Husn Ka Dushman

Apni
Ada Hai Yaaron Se Juda
Hai Ho

Bachna Ae Haseena

Lo Mein Aa Gaya

He brings her back again nd slowly puts all her weight on his hands nd twirls her around nd den gently puts her down. She felt his hot breath on her neck while he was dropping her down nd Geet felt a strange sensation in her.

She felt his grip on her waist nd she pushed him back immediately frees herself from him nd goes backwards.

Yeah! Baby When U See Me
Comming Yeah!
Yeah U Better Run For Cover
Yeah
Cos U Know When I Find U
Yeah
Yeah Im Gonna Be Your Lover

Yeah! Baby When U See Me
Comming Yeah!
Yeah U Better Run For Cover
Yeah
Cos U Know When I Find U
Yeah
Yeah Im Gonna Be Your Lover

As soon as Geet goes away from him all d girls came at d dance floor nd surrounded around him just like bees surrounded around sweets. Maan tries himself to be freed from dis crowd nd go towards Geet but crowd was too much. He craned his neck among crowd only to find him rushing towards d door dragging one more girl wid her.


(P.S. Pls refer to where's d Party Tonight sequence of GHSP to imagine d steps of Maan as i m really not gud in dance sequences😃)


He shakes his head nd looks upwards in an appreciation nd den again start dancing wid girls.

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"Di, Di wat happen? Y u brought me out all of a sudden" Pari asked as soon as Geet brings her out d disco.

"Nothing pls lets go home. M really very tired." She said while shrugging off her questions.

"Wat happen Di? Few mins back u were dancing, was it because of dat?" Pari asked worriedly.

"Pari Pls no more questions. Just tell me r u cuming home wid me or should I go alone?" Geet asked angrily nd Pari realizes dat she's really in a foul mood so without arguing further she accompanies her to their flat.

Once reaching d flat Geet immediately goes to her room nd retires herself on bed. Pari didn't asked anything else as she thought that Geet is really tired nd moreover she's in a foul mood too. She sighed nd goes to her room.

It was past midnight nd Geet was not at able to sleep. Wenever she closes her eyes she sees Maan's face in front of her. D way he pulled her for dance was still fresh in her mind. She don't understand y she had met him twice dat too in d same evening nd moreover y he pulled her for dance all of a sudden. Does he want to take revenge of d way she behaved wid him. But dat doesn't seem like. D way he was grooving wid her over dere it seems like he was enjoying wid her.

She gets up all of a sudden nd whacks herself mentally for thinking about a stranger. No dere's no need of her to think about him. She's not going to meet him in future so it's better if she shrugs off all of thoughts

"Geet, stop thinking dat crap. U r not going to meet dat jerk again so just stop thinking about him. he's just another passing stranger of ur lyf nd anyways no one can affect ur lyf anymore nw. so whether if I meet him again or not it hardly make any difference. So just stop thinking nd sleep" she said to herself nd takes a deep breath to calm herself.

After fighting a lot wid herself she went to sleep hoping dat she dnt meet dat stranger again but least she knows dat fortune is busy in planning something against her wish

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On the other hand Maan too was having difficulty in sleeping. No matter hw hard he tried to sleep but couldn't able to sleep a wink. Only her face, her eyes keeps on coming in front of his eyes. he don't know wat spell her eyes had done on him dat he couldn't able to think anything else.

It was just few hrs only wen he met her but it seems dat he knows her from eternity. Wenever he looked into her eyes be it at dere first encounter or at dance he saw something different; something dat she is been hiding from whole world but dnt know wat it is.

Finally he gets up nd sighed heavily. A smile crept on his face wen he remembers her attitude towards him. He was a charmer among ladies but no girl had such affect on him like she had nd dat after first meet. He's definitely going to insane for sure. He don't even know her name nd here he's thinking just about her only.

His instincts have said dat they'll meet again but he did not know dat they'll meet again in just a difference of an hour or so.

"I don't know whether I'll be able to meet u again or not Ms. Perfect but my heart says dat this is not the end of our story. We'll meet once again. Right Dude?" he said looking upwards nd den gets back to sleep hoping for his wish to come true soon

But unknown to both of dem their destiny is busy writing dere story in its own way where dey demselves don't know wat had stored for dem in future.



ok so dis is it guys! hws it? not much happening na... actually it didnt came out d way i wanted so just wanted to apologize to u all nd hope dat u all gonna like it. pls hit d like button if u all like it. i promise in next update i'll definitely make it up. Do Leave ur comment/criticism.. its necessary


PMs Later after i update "Destinied To be" most probabaly will update dat today itself...


Luv Aakriti😊😊


Edited by aakritisri1111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeepiieee...!!!!!!!!!!!! Me first To comment...!!!!!!1😊

Wow yaar Gud update...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uff ye geet bhi na... Ms.Perfect...😆

Luvd her yaar... her cursing session also...😆

The talks betwen pari and her were gud and cute...

Means the bond they share is really sweet...

Uff Me egar to knw geet's past...😕

Now Coming to Mr.Imperfect...

Mr.Imperfect tussi to chaa gaye...😉

Loved th song seq... ANd their Dance...😊

Uff Dance ho gaya fir bhi sapno me... 😉

ANd Maan Last dailogue was sweet...

Yaar Destiny nahi My Basanti will Decide their next meeting...😆

Heya My basanti... Update was sweet and nice...

Loved it sooo Much...

Luv ya My basanti...

Hugs and kisses...😳
Edited by mishtiritu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh jeez!dat was a dreamy update..
luvd the dance part a lot..
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum loved it
ossum dear
waiting for next part dear
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first fight, now dancing and then romance is it?? waiting..

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