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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Friends !
I Have A Story About Krishna and Subhadra ( His Sister Talking )😉

Hope You'll Enjoy ! 😊It's The First Story Written By Me On IF☺️

Now The Title Shall Change . I'm Sorry About This !

Part-1 On Pg 1

Char Sketch On Pg 1

Part-2 On Pg 2

Part-3 On Pg 2

Part-4 On Pg 3

Part-5 On Pg 4

Part-6 On Pg 4

Part-7 On Pg 6

Part-9 On Pg 9

Edited by Radhikerani - 13 years ago

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wayward

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Posted: 14 years ago

A Convo. Between Krishna And Subhadra . Subhadra Had Come To See Him

Subhadra : Krishna Tum Yaahan Par Kaise Ho ?

Krishna : Thik Hi Hun .Aab Apna Khabar Sunao ?
Subhadra :Main Bhi Thik Hun Aur Tumhare Liye Devaki Maa Aur Pitaji Se Ek Sandesha Layi Hun.

Krishna :Aha ! Bolo Bolo !! Kya Kaha Unhone !

Subhadra : Ah ! Unhone...

Krishna (Jumped Down From The Chair On Seeing Yashoda Coming ) : Chup Chup !

Subhadra ( Almost Jumping And Falling From Her Chair ) :Kya ?? Kyu ?? Kab ??

Krishna ( Came Close To Subhadra ) (Whispering) :Maia Sach Nahi Janti Ki Main Unka Putra Nahin Hun . Isiliye Un Ke Saamne Aapna Muh Bandh Hi Rakho Aur Chalo Mere Saath .

But Yashoda's Sharp Eyes Had Caught Krishna Whispering To Subhadra Though She Couldn't Catch The Words .

Yashoda : Haan Tum Dono , Kya Ghusur-Phusur Kar Rahe Ho ?

Krishna (To Yashoda) : Kuchh Nahi Maia Voh Baat Yeh Hai Ki Main Isse Puchh Raha Tha Ki Kya Ye Humare Sath Gokul Ghumna Chahti Hai ?

Yashoda : To Ye Baat Uske Kaano Mein Ghuskar Puchhne Ki Koi Avashakta Nahi . Thikse Bolo Ye Baat .

Krishna ( Taking Yashoda's Last Few Words Literally )(Shouting) (To Subhadra) : Kya Tum Sun Sakti Ho Main Kya Keh Raha Hun ? (Subhadra Nods With Her Hands On Her Ears ) To Suno Main Puchhta Hun Kya Tum Mere Sath Gokul Dekhne Chalogi ?? ( Subhadra Again Nods ) .Toh Chalo !

Yashoda Starts Giggling Like Anything And Subhadra Also Smiled .

Subhadra (Getting Up) : Chalo Phir Gokul Hi Dekh Lete Hai .

Krishna : Hmm Chalo .

They Went Out .Krishna Took Subhadra Near To A Spring

Krishna : Aab Batao Kya Hua ?

Will Be Continued...

It'll Be Continued !! How Was It !!

Edited by Radhikerani - 14 years ago