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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

*VirIka Dark Desire*
Hello my name is Mandeep, i am 17 years old and i live in Canada. I am in love with this show and i personally loveee VirMan but i also do adore VirIka. I was planning to do a fan fiction on VirMan but i thought that this plot of my fan fiction would suit VirIka more just because. I really hope you enjoy this because i really am working hard on this considering im in high school and im taking 4 college classes that i have exams for! but i am for sure staying active on India-Forums :)

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Viren has been turning from good to bad in an blink of an eye. He's going out late for parties, being rude, and much more. Jeevika has to find a way to bring the old Viren back so she wont loose her lover. Can she bring back the old Viren on live in pain and sorrow her whole life!

Author: Mandeep

Edited by -Mandeep- - 13 years ago

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

CHATPER 1: The Flashback

Jeevika wakes up this morning and turned to her side and said "Viren wake up!!!" Viren didn't talk or move at all. Jeevika says "FINE" and gets up but Viren holds her back and says "Don't go, i'll miss you too much" and right before Jeevika could speak, Viren puts his finger on her lips and leans in to kiss her lips but gives her a nice soft kiss on the cheek instead. Viren says "I'm sorry" and holds his ears. Jeevika kisses his forehead and says "It's okay" Viren picks Jeevika up and stares right into her eyes as Jeevika stares back. Viren says "You have the most beautiful smile but even more deeper eyes then my soul"😳 Viren walks downstairs holding Jeevika and puts he down and says "I'll cook breakfast today, you'll just sit here like a queen" Jeevika doesn't allowed Viren to cook so she helps him and they start eating. Viren starts acting like a kid and says "Feed me" Jeevika says "Your a big boy Viren, eat by yourself" Viren says "I only eat out of my lady's hands" Jeevika reaches over to feed him but instead Viren kisses her hand. Jeevika blushes and says "Viren, hurry up and eat so we can just spend this day alone" Viren and Jeevika finish eating. Jeevika starts washing the dishes and Viren comes behind her and hugs her waist and says "You know love only happens once, well your that only one for me" then Viren leaves trails of kisses on Jeevika's neck leading up to her lips. Jeevika slowly starts leaning back but Viren holds her tight and picks her up and spins her around and around. Jeevika then realizes that shes having flashbacks and starts to break out crying...

WHAT HAPPENS NEXTTT!!!

Promo for next chaper: You find out whats wrong with Viren and why all of a sudden Jeevika has that flashback!

COMMENT&LIKE PLEASEEE

Edited by -Mandeep- - 13 years ago

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maryumtalks

@maryumtalks

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Posted: 13 years ago

WOW great start!! I loved the romance of virika in it... look forward to see how viren changed and how Jeevika brings him back. Do PM me for more on this one when chapter 2 comes.

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarahvirika
WOW great start!! I loved the romance of virika in it... look forward to see how viren changed and how Jeevika brings him back. Do PM me for more on this one when chapter 2 comes.

Will Certainly do :)

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isnat

@isnat

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow..that was awesome!! waiting eagerly...plz pm me when u update..loved this part...

Edited by isnat - 13 years ago

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Jennifer

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it😃

plz PM me when you update!!!

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

Will do so both of you!

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delete1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hiya Mandeep;

I'm a right sucker for stories with dark angles, so naturally I gravitated towards this.

And my gosh, I'm loving it :)

Personally Viren's character is tooo good, so I guess this is what I love about fanfiction; it's your own stamp on characters and story-lines which we most likely will never see. And bad boy Viren? Wow, what an idea. Hopefully Jeevika won't be too emotionally scarred.

I really want to read more now. Please carry on with this and please, please, please PM me. (And can you make the writing a teeny-tiny bit bigger please ?:] )

Thank you x

Edited by sabeeha - 13 years ago