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Hello Friends...😃
Im coming up with SS which has 3 parts...its for the first time im trying with writing SS so i jus hope u all will read it...and feel free to comment... i do want to know whether u all loved it or not...😃
Appreciation and Criticism both allowed 😉and forgive me if any grammatical errors or if u find it boringgg...😃😆...Its Rajpreet SS after their Marriage with some cuteee romantic scenes...😉

SS Rajpreet: Special Place

Part1:

It's the Day after the Marriage…Rajbeer plans to surprise Preeto by taking her to his Fav Place..😊

Monsoon Season its evening 5:30pm..Rajpreet Travelling to the Special Place in a car...Preeto is very curious to know so asks him where we are going …Preeto I told u na it's a Surprise..in a sweet chirpy voice she asks him again Rajbeer plz tell me na…he says I can understand u Preeto ur all excited to know where we are going but for that u need to wait for 45mins…she agrees to him and asks to drive fast…counting minutes she says 30 mins more..Rajbeer smiles…Heavy traffic because of Marriage season…and all of a sudden Rajbeer stops the car..ughh traffic jam.. Preeto says oh god don't know how much time will be wasted here..Babaji do something…looking at her he laughs…she says Rajbeer there is nothing to laugh at me with angry look on her face…Preeto im really sorry now plz smile…she says its k n both smile…he then says Love u Preeto looking into her eyes..Sigh She Blushes…Phone rings Rajbeer lifts the call its Dhruv..dhruv asks did they reach the place..Rajbeer replies we are on the way Dhruv jus struck in traffic..Dhruv then says jus called to inform about ur leave…officer has extended ur leave for 2 days more..Rajbeer thanks Dhruv…Dhruv then says jus have grt time with Preeto and ends the call…Meanwhile Rajbeer notices a bouquet shop and tells preeto to wait in car by saying will come back in few mins…she asks where u going Rajbeer he replies saying Preeto will be back jus wait by winking at her…he crosses the road and buys red roses bouquet comes back and gifts them to preeto saying ur very special to me…she smiles and says thanku …Preeto phir se thanku…she laughes and says k no more thanku he says that's guddd…she feels very happy and tells him that shez the luckiest gal to get him as husband who loves her lot…😃

Finally traffic cleared after around 15mins.. Rajbeer starts driving and Preeto with all excitement asks him Rajbeer did u go before to this Special Place…he replies saying ya Preeto I have been to the place before many a times and Trust me u will love the place…Driving Fast they reach the place by 6:30pm…Rajbeer Parks the car and says Preeto lets go in….she with surprise asks him is this house…ya Preeto yeh humara ghar hai …she is all amazed looking at the house and says it looks so beautiful Rajbeer…at the doorstep Rajbeer rang the bell then chottu(servant) opens the door they go inside…Chottu and Rajbeer greet each other and then Rajbeer introduces Preeto saying Chottu yeh tumhari Preeto Bhabi He says Namaste Bhabi and tells that he had done all the work cooked few dishes too for them Rajbeer says thanku for all the help then Chottu smiles and leaves saying will come tomm for work by 9:30Am…😊


Part 2:

As Chottu leaves Rajbeer closes the door they are now in living room area where there are dark brown sofas nice oval shaped table..its well decorated room with light pink curtains and towards the left end is way to small kitchen and dining …Preeto has not yet come out of the state of surprise and says lovely house Rajbeer .. Rajbeer smiles and hugs Preeto side hug …He then asks Preeto "will u have Coffee or Tea my dear Wife"…Preeto says "Coffee my dear Husband" then done wait a minute Chottu must have kept in a flask he goes to kitchen …Preeto makes herself seated in the Sofa…Rajbeer brings 2 Coffee mugs and handed one to her…Both comfortably seated in the sofa close to each other then have Coffee…and start talking about how well their wedding happened with lots of enjoyment in Sangeet Mehandi and all other ceremonies…Rajbeer then asks so tell me Preeto did u like Special Place…She Says Its Awsomee Rajbeer ..he then says her its 3 Bedroom house he loves this place as its cool place to stay…u know Preeto I used to come and spend my holidays here…Preeto then asks with whom do u generally come here ?…he jus wanted to tease her for fun so he says hai koi special friend..she then smartly says really u want me to believe this Rajbeer…Preeto we have got Married why would I lie…she then asks who is she..? he says hai koi very special…Preeto' s face turns pale as if she has lost some precious thing in her life shez confused at the moment unable to know whether hez saying true or not…Rajbeer notices this and starts laughing oh god Preeto jus look at ur face…Rajbeer ur sooo mean I say..jus hate u she gets angry goes frm that place Rajbeer realizes that he has hurt her so he also goes after her..Preeto listen to me she says leave me alone Rajbeer…he still goes after her stops her by holding her hand…he turns her towards him..both faced eachother but she didn't feel like looking at him or talking to him..Preeto plz don't be angry It was jus a joke I didn't mean to hurt u im really sorry Preeto…she looks at him but still no smile on her face…Rajbeer asks her plz preeto jus smile once for me he puts both his hands on her cheeks and tells her I really love u a lottt Preeto and I swear u are the only gal in my life there is no special friend nothing ur my love Preeto and ur very special to me I cant even think of anyone in ur place…Trust me Preeto I used to come alone and spend time in holidays or else sometimes I used to bring Dhruv Jogi along with me…she suddenly laughs hard and says Rajbeer ur such a stupid and hugs him tightly…he then kisses on her forehead…she Blushes….He says Thankgod finally made u smile…Preeto says now stop all this drama Rajbeer.. its all enough plz show me bedroom I have to freshen up n then we shall have Dinner together he says sure preeto and they move through the upstairs turn left..Rajbeer shows her the bedroom and Preeto in a cute way asks Rajbeer Patidev now u also go and freshen up as its already late…both smile..he then goes down and gets ready.


Part3:

Its 8:30Pm now climate has turned even more cool…Preeto is still at upstairs and Rajbeer is waiting for her at dinner table…Finally Preeto comes he couldn't take away his eyes he kept on starring at her when she was coming down through stairs…she then reached the dining area…Preeto takes her seat and innocently asks Rajbeer what happened why are you looking at me like that …didn't this blue color saree look guddd at me…after a gap of 5to6secs he says im totally blown away Preeto u look very Gorgeous she blushes and says to him even ur looking grttt in white Rajbeer…both smile and then start Dinner…Preeto is in all praises of chottu he has really cooked very well…food is so tasty Rajbeer….both complete dinner…Rajbeer then shows her other room in upstairs where he has all his paintings…Preeto feels so happy looking at all the paintings saying Rajbeer these paintings look so natural n realistic the colors u have used according to the paintings is superb I knew that ur gudd at Painting but I never knew that ur so talented and besttt at it…he smiles and thanks Preeto and tells her there is one very special painting I jus hope u will definetly like it..she smiles…I jus wanna gift u that painting Preeto…Preeto is all excited to see the painting…Rajbeer shows her the painting and asks her howz it?...Preeto says I have no words to speak…its jus so perfect Rajbeer…painting touched her heart a lot she was very happy looking at it as it was painting of her…She thanks Rajbeer for such a special gift…she keeps the gift aside in the room…then says I love u Rajbeer u mean a lot to me I cant live without u jus be with me forever she then hugs him tightly…both hug eachother for 5mins…he then says I have one more gift for u Preeto…Rajbeer still how many more gifts left u have already given so many gifts…Preeto jus close ur eyes…but why Rajbeer…I said to close ur eyes preeto she listens to him and closes her eyes …he now holds her right hand puts the gold bracelet and tells her to open eyes…Rajbeer its like very beautiful jus so lovely…he then kisses her hand she blushes sigh..both look at each other eyes…their eyes speaks a lot…he puts his hand on her waist and holds her tight close to him…she blushes and asks him yeh tum kya kar rahe ho Rajbeer...mein toh kuch nahi kar rahi hoon yeh Pyaar hai Preeto…he again grabs her even more close to him…both were so lost in the moment very close to each other…he then looks at her lips…she closes her eyes…he was almost about to kiss her lips she breaks the moment saying its raining Rajbeer and runs away frm there Preeto wait where are u going…she gets down the stairs im going out Rajbeer u also come…she opens the door goes out .. she loves rains a lott…so shez jus enjoying rains out and Rajbeer stands at the door and calls her…Preeto plz come in otherwise u will fall ill…she says nothing will happen Rajbeer y don't u Come out…he standing at the door looks at her with smile on his face…she looking up into the sky ran her hands through her hair closing her eyes…he kept on looking at her talking to himself veryyy beautiful…Preeto ur jus Crazy he smiles and goes in brings the umbrella…then goes near to her…Preeto throws the umbrella aside and starts laughing he also starts laughing and then he lifts her up..she in his arms and her both hands on his shoulder both looking into each other eyes enjoying the moment in rain suddenly Preeto holds his shirt tight scared of the lightening…he then tells her lets go inside house she says yes with a smile…both looking at each other eyes go inside…he takes her to the bedroom she still in his arms..he goes through the upstairs..jus making fun of her says Preeto tum kitna bhaari ho yaar…she jus hits him saying Rajbeer in a cute manner…they reach their bedroom…She then gets down…he asks her to change her clothes and goes frm there…he comes down changes his clothes and wears black shirt..then he decorates the entire hall and his bedroom with candles before Preeto comes downstairs…Preeto wears Purple saree gets ready and comes down…looking at the decorated room she smiles and meantime her eyes are searching for Rajbeer but she doesn't find him thinking where he is…he then comes and hugs her frm back and whispers in her ears ur looking very beautiful Preeto…she bluses and turns towards him and hugs…then he lifts her up and takes her to his bedroom(which is opposite to dining room decorated with candles)…she then gets down both facing each other…she tries to go away from there but he stops her and pins her to the wall not allowing her to escape frm there…she closes her eyes as he came even closer to her…he was struck by her beauty..he kisses her neck..kissed her cheek..kissed her forehead…she somehow again goes away frm there near to the bed he stops her by holding her hand..he then pulls her very close to him…for some few minutes they looked at each other eyes Preeto says I love U Rajbeer…he says I love U too Preeto then as she says Rajbeer he puts his fingers on her lips to keep her off from speaking for few seconds he then places both his hands on her cheeks and gives her a passionate kiss on her lips….☺️

The End...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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☺️ 😍 Love it Sneha. This was like actually seeing it happening. Gr8 job. And the ending was too good. Ab morning ka intezaar hai.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Uff Yaar Sneha there is lot of Hidden talent in you...
I read Part 3 thrice...Too good love happy endings and this one is just tooo good..

NIce attempt and you nailed it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG...Sneha tooo good yaar

It's freaking cold where I live but your SS definitely rose the temperature 😉

Loved all your parts and especially part 3 was like WOW 👏

Kudos ...Great attempt...Hope Cv's see your post and film it 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: adianasr

☺️ 😍 Love it Sneha. This was like actually seeing it happening. Gr8 job. And the ending was too good. Ab morning ka intezaar hai.

thankuuu...😃
Dawn only 3 parts dear SS ends with 3rd part...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajpreeto

Uff Yaar Sneha there is lot of Hidden talent in you...

I read Part 3 thrice...Too good love happy endings and this one is just tooo good..

NIce attempt and you nailed it

thanku dear...😃
pehla nasha seq in the show helped me and so 3rd part turned out even more romantic..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Haan par ek aur SS bhi toh likh sakti ho. Am waiting for the next installment from you.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankitaluv

OMG...Sneha tooo good yaar


It's freaking cold where I live but your SS definitely rose the temperature 😉

Loved all your parts and especially part 3 was like WOW 👏

Kudos ...Great attempt...Hope Cv's see your post and film it 👍🏼

thanku for loving it dear...😃 u stay in AP rite...hyd ?
lets see what Cvs are going to show...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow sneha great job👍🏼 wah It's just like a movie not like a article..😍
plz continue it sneha want part 4 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: adianasr

Haan par ek aur SS bhi toh likh sakti ho. Am waiting for the next installment from you.😉

yaaa i may come up with some few more further but it will take time...😃

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