OS: Suhaag raat wearing buaji's shaadi ka jora upd

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Hey everyone... this is my first shot at an ff... hope you guys like it :)... p.s I'm not good in Hindi so don't judge me

*UPDATED*

I've also translated the hindi parts into English on request :)

At poolside...

Akash: Bhai please
Arnav: No
Akash: Bhai I really want to meet Payal ji
Arnav: to jao na meine kab mana kiya hai lekin I don't want to see her face [Then go and meet her ...it's not like I told you not to but I don't want to see her face]
Akash:What!!!! What has Payal ji done to you????
Arnav: Uff not Payal... I don't want to see that girl... that Khushi's face

NK walks in...

NK: Don't worry Akash I'll go with you... you can talk with Payal ji and I'll talk with Khushi ji (makes a dreamy face)... besides I want to see her face at 12

Arnav looks at him as if he is going to punch him (but NK doesn't notice that) and suddenly says
Akash I'll go with you. What if buaji sees you or something? I'll take care of that. NK you stay here and lookout for Nani ok

NK: but Nanav

Arnav: Bas enough... don't argue... chalo Akash

Akash just follows him... a little bit confused about Arnav's sudden change of mood( but he doesn't have any clue of arnav's feeling for Khushi as afterall he is a Raizada and they have taken an oath to not notice anything between Arnav and Khushi😆... he just assumes Arnav doesn't want Nk to meet Khushi because if they fall in love they'll annoy him even more... and he'll have to bardash{tolerate} khushi 😕 lol)

At Gupta residence( in Bauji's room){ there is no light in the other rooms):

Khushi trying on Buaji's shadi ka jora{wedding dress}

The dress is very ugly but when Khushi wears it she looks mesmerizing in it.

Buaji: Sanka devi tum itna sundar lagrahi hoon... kahi kisi ki nazar na lag jaye [Sanka Devi you are looking mesmerizing in this dress...]

Garima: sach mein Khushi tum bohot sundar lagrahi hoon... [truely khushi you are looking very beautiful in this dress]

Khushi: woh to mein hoon i sundar 😃 [Because I'm very beautiful😃]

Buaji: Besharam ladki [This girl doesn't have any shame]



Arnav and Akash reaches Gupta residence and not seeing anyone assumes everyone is sleeping

They climb the window and comes to Payal's and Khushi's room... sees it is empty...

Arnav is about to call khushi to ask her to bring payal to this room when suddenly they here buaji's voice. Both rushes inside the empty cupboard before buaji reaches the room. The cupboard has holes so they can see and hear what s going on.

Buaji: Khushi tum iha ayo... hum dekhna chahte hain tum pe ye jhumke kaise lagte hain [Khushi come here... I ant to see how this earring looks with this dress]

Khushi and payal walks in... arnav is stunned to see khushi like this... sach mein uski saase ruk gayi[Arnav truely forgot to breathe}... he is totally mesmerized by her beauty and aksah on the other hand is scared to death wondering what will happen if the whole gupta clan finds them inside the cupboard.

Khushi: uff buaji humme aur nehi try karna... shadi jiji ki hain ya hamari???... she is about to open the duppata and go change when she suddenly has a plan. She gives her mischievous smile and says [Uff buaji I don't want to try this... Jiji is the one getting married not me]

Waise hamne dulhan ka jora pehen hi liya hain to jiji ayo tumhe muft mein kuch tips de doon. [Since I'm wearing a wedding dress jiji why don't I give you some tips on what to do on your wedding night]

Payal: tips??? kaise tips??[tips???? what kind of tips]

Khushi: Suhaag raat ko tumhe Akash ji ke saathe kaisa pesh ana chahiye??? Hum tumhe sikhate hain 😆 [How to impress your hubby!!! How to flirt with him... come let me teach you😆]

Buaji: tumhari kitni baar SR ho chuki hain sanka devi jo tum usee tips do gi [How many times have you gotten married that you are giving her tips about her wedding night???]

Khushi: uff ho buaji hum ne bohot saari cinema dikha hain... hum e pata hain SR kaise manaya jata hain 😉 [ Uff buaji I've watched a lot of movies so I know what they do on the wedding night😉]

Buaji: kya!!!! suhaag raat ki scene dekha hain tumne 😡... besharam ladki... sharam naam ki koi cheez nahi hain tum me [ WHAT!!!! You've seen people actually doing it on TV😡... how could you... don't you have any shame]

Khushi: uff buaji usse pehle ladka ladki kaise baat karte hain woh dekha hain maine... kaise sharma te hain... muskurana... sharma sharma ke haat pakadna [Buaji... before that... how they talk?... how to blush... how to flirt... I'm talking about these things not about what you are thinking...]

Buaji: thik hain bolo hum bhi to dekhe tum kya shikhayo gi payalia ko [Ok l'll also listen to what you want to teach payalia]

Payal: humme naahi shikna... khushi chup kar [I don't want to learn... Khushi shut up]

Both Arnav and Akash are flabbergasted by what is happening... Akash is totally embarrassed and Arnav is enjoying the going ons very much... he is wondering can I get some pop corn in here 😆

Khushi: jiji hum dulhan ke jode pehene huyi hain to hum tum hain aur tum akash ji hoon ... thik hai??? [jij since I'm wearing wedding dress I'm you and you are Akash ji]

Payal: hum nahi karenge... bilkul nahi [I won't do this... not at all]

Khushi: Uff jiji tum sirf khadi raho baki saab kaam hamari hain [jiji all you have to do is stand still... I'll do the rest]

Khushi takes her dupatta and puts it around her head like a dulhan... Goes outside the room takes an empty glass knocks on the door and comes back... she is acting as she is a dulhan carrying a glass of milk for akash ji

[Guys my boss is here😡... I can't write anymore now... will finish it soon I promise as soon as he goes to the next room ... I don't have any work now but still it looks bad 😭...bye for now]

Samiya




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Khushi takes her dupatta and puts it around her head like a dulhan... Goes outside the room takes an empty glass knocks on the door and comes back... she is acting as she is a dulhan carrying a glass of milk for akash ji

Khushi: aji aapke liye doodh

Payal is just standing there not knowing what to do 😕

Khushi: itna sharmaiye maat mein apki biwi hoon koi paroos ki biwi nahi hoon... 😆

Khushi starts moving very near payal and payal starts backing against the bed... Payal: khushi tum ye kya kar rahi hoon ... Arnav starts feeling hot... he starts wishing it was him instead of payal


Payal falls on the bed... Khushi just sits near her and says hamara haat pakariye na...

Buaji: Besharam ladki aise baat karogi apni pati ke saath

Khushi: to kya huya pati hi to hain... main to apni pati ke samne nachungi zara zara behekta hain behekta hain aaj to mera taan badan (starts dancing ... throws her dupatta in the air and goes very near Payal...

Arnav just stares and stares at her ( akash is so embarrassed that he is looking at his feet for which Arnav thanks lord... not that he believes in lord that is)

Payal: khushi aab sacchi mein maarongi tujhe... ye filmi drama bandh karo

Khushi: uff jiji tum itni rukhe sukhe hoon... bechare Akash ji...humme un per taras araha hen

Buaji: aye ladki ka kuch nahi ho sakta... pata nehi kahase le ke ayo ek ullo ka patha iske liye ... she starts doing her chores and chatting with Garima leaving the room... Arnav and Akash still can't come out because although from where Buaji is sitting she can see the cupboard

Payal: khushi

Khushi: Pata hain jiji jab hamari saadi hongi haam to shayad apne pati ka balatkar hi kar denge 😆... kitni rukhe sukhe hon tum...

Payal: KHUSHI

Khushi: hum to apne pati ke god mein jake bet jayenge... aur jor se ek pappi dungi... jiji humme tumhari baccho ki mukh dekhni hain... to tum haam jaisa kehte hain practice karo

Akash: bhai iha aur der rahungi to mein maar jaoungi... I don't care kaun ata hain... I don't care if buaji sees us... I want to get the hell out of here... Khushiji pagal ho gayi hain

Arnav: shut up Akash... he wants to see what Khushi will do

Khushi aur payal: tumne kuch suna... but they looks around and sees no one there

Khushi: jiji pehle jiju ko doodh pilana... fir sharma ke unke samne muskurana aur fir apni dupatta ko fekdena... unke haat mein haat dalna... akh mein akh dalna aur fir ek pappi dena...


Payal: tu jo ye sab bol rahi hain kya sacchi mein ye sab kar payegi

Khushi: Haan bilkul kyun nahi

Suddenly she has a vision of Arnavji as her groom and he is giving her those stares which make her melt like butter. She blushes...

Buaji moves from the sitting room and arnav and akash comes out. Khushi seeing them screams like hell. Seeing that arnav and akash goes back inside the cupboard and buaji rushes back.

Buaji: kya hua Sanka Devi.

Payal: kuch nahi buaji khushi ne cockroach dekha

Buaji: hai re nad kishor iss ladki ka kuch nahi ho sakta... then she leaves

Arnav and Akash comes out... Khushi is so embarrassed that she just forgets to speak... her eyes downcast... Arnav is giving her that look with his eyes and a small smirk on his face

Akash quickly closes the door and tells payal what happened... and why they are there...

Arnav picks up khushi's dupatta which was lying on the floor since her zara zara dance and hands her back her dupatta... she takes it but does not look at him

Payal and Akash are oblivious to their surrounding as they have eyes only for each other.

Arnav was enjoying teasing khushi very much cause he has never seen khushi so embarrassed
and in loss of speech...

Arnav : taras araha hain mujhe tumhare pati paar... bechare ka tum balatkar hi kar doogi 😆

Khushi becomes more embarrassed... arnav continues

Khushi tum aaj bohot pyaari lagrahi hoon especially jab tum nach rahi thi

Khushi doesn't know how to react. actually she never knows how to react when arnav is in front of her. He is so hot and cold.

Arnav looks at khushi... holds her chin and makes her look at him...and says "Happy New Year"

Khushi looks at him then at the watch and then again at him. She gets lost in his eyes.

Arnav so wanted to hold her and give her a new years kiss but he knew that even blind couple akash and payal would notice that.

Suddenly buaji knocks at the door and arnav and akash makes a run for it through the window.

Payal opens the door and starts talking with buaji whereas Khushi is still lost at arnav's thoughts. She has seen a new look in arnav's eyes and it made her shiver.

After all he has done to her, after all the pain, hurt , tears one look from Arnav and she turns into a puddle . She couldn't imagine anyone touching her other than Arnav. She had wanted to kiss him at Diwali and she knew if he ever tried again she will melt once more.

Arnav was also likewise lost in Khushi's thoughts on the drive home. He felt the need to touch her , to kiss her take over his senses.

The whole time that she was talking about her SR... he was imagining himself there as her husband... the shocking thing is that is did not feel absurd... it felt as if he was meant to be her husband... imagining her with someone else is not possible for him to bear... he'd go crazy... so there was two options left for him either she should stay single her whole life but come to raizada house everyday or he has to marry her. He doesn't think it is possible to keep her single her whole life because as far as he knows di and nani are already conspiring ... so he has to give the second option a thought... and the though of her and suhaag raat made him dizzy...

Arnav spent the whole night thinking about what he should do



Sorry I had to write the second part very fast so it is not that good... tell me whether you liked it or not :)

New SS continuing from here https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2657134/mission-khushi


Edited by samiya.tas - 13 years ago
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good going... Loved it...
Nice comic sense and slight touch of romance😊
Edited by abavi - 13 years ago
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hey waiting...post the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh come on... next part.. that was abrupt.. I hate your boss...:P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was great.👏👏👏👏👏 So much fun.😆 Tumhara Boss chala gaya ke nahi? Jaldi karo humko aur story chahiye. 😆 We want more. Update soon.😃 Thanks.😉
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tell your boss to take a hike... :P you know what...i always update on MS Word...and then copy and paste into the forum...that way even if your boss is around - you are working on a document :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it. Please continue😃😆
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Lol loving ur story dear actually it was so good that even ur boss wanted to read it so woh sab kaam chhodke tumhare OS padne aa gaya! 😉😆
Anyways update soon dear 😃
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Hey, waiting for the next part. Post it soon. Your 2nd part is also too good.
Edited by Luckyforever - 13 years ago

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