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Posted: 13 years ago

A very happy new year to all of u, may Allah bless u with happiness, blessings, good health, success and all good of luck'

N pls remember me in your prayers '

Lov ya all

May Allah bless us all'

Fiza Ahmed'.

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Mayank: chalo aj mein ghar choro ga tum ko

Nupur: kyun tum ko job per nhi jana hai

Mayank: aj thora late jao ga..chalo na…itny dino baad aay meri bike ki shobah parahin..

Nupur: mjhy khabi nhi laga tha mein yeah kaho gi…hello bike I really missed u

Mayank: asay kuch maat kaho nupur meri bike k heart fail hojay ga shock se…

Siting behind him, she placed her head on his shoulder

Mayank: nupur …kisi ny dekh liya tu

She looked back at him through rare mirror

Nupur: I donot care…

Mayank: acha ..he griped her hand from his waist, n pulled her close placing it on his shoulder from under his arms…making her almost back hugging him..

Nupur: mayankk..

Mayank: kya mayank… asay hi raho bus….…wasy tum ko ab daar nhi lagta bike per

Nupur: nhi ab mjhy maza ata hai…itni jaldi ghar agaya…she pouted

Mayank: ay hay…sorry kya kero is se zayda slow chalta tu slow speed k penalty hojati

Nupur: she huged him ..bye..

She pressed the bell, and her nani opened the door…

Nani: hello beta..ajo jaldi se…

Nupur: kya baat hai nani tum itna kyun muskura rahi hoo

Nani: andar tu aao tum bhi muskuraoo gi…

Nupur: asa kya..she entered in ful on masti mood…

Nani: jaldi se acha sa taiyaar hojao….

Nupur: kyun

Nani: bus aj mein kah rahi hoon islyn…ap k kapray nikal diyan hai..jao jaldi se zayda time nhi hai

Nupur: uff…okay…

She was getting ready for God knows what, when her cell runged to her surprise it was mayank

Nupur: mayankk….hey…apko is waqt yaad kasay agai..

Mayank: kya ker rahi hoo

Nupur: taiyaar horahi hoon

Mayank: is waqt kis k liyan..kahin shadi k tu irada nhi kerliya

Nupur: soch tu yahin rahin..tum ny mera mind kasay read kerliya…uff

Mayank: nupur bhushan mjhy kam se wapas any per majboor maat kero…

Nupur: acha tu tum asay aajo gay…tum ab yahin kero gi….

Mayank: nupurrr

Nani: nupur neechay ajay…ap ko bolaya hai guest are there…jao darwaza kholo

Nupur: mein kyun …

Nani: kyun k mein kah rahin hoon…

Nupur: uff aj yeah ho kiya raha hai….mayank mein tum se bad mein bat kerti hoon

Mayank: okay..byee

Nupur: byeee

With anger she went to open the door, dressed in a little pink churidar she left her hairs half tied, and open the door with a big frown that disappear in a sec

Nupur: antyyy….

She was shocked to see the sight infornt of her, shilpa with MF and mayank smilingly standing behnd them , she was so surprise to see them all…

Nupur: ap..sab..she felt shiver in herself somhow guessing wht they all are doing here..

MF: bhi nupur nhi chahti k hum log ghar k andar aay

Nupur: oh im so sorry uncle…aay na andar…nani…

She open the door and stood there, and nani welcomed them and escorted them to drawing room…

She was standing at the door…

Mayank: nupur why r u blushing so much….he said leaning to the door crossing his arms around his chest…smirking

Nupur: maa aur dad..tum sab…yaha….

Mayank: hum sab ny soch aj yeah kam kahtam hi kerain…

Nupur: kaun sa kam….

Mayank: nupur itna sharamo gi tu logo ko daar lag jay ga k nupur kahin bhag gai hai….andar chalo sab pata chaly ga..

Nupur: mein nhi jarahi…

Mayank: chalo….shadi ki baat kerny nhi aay..

Nupur: phir…she said disappointmently…

Mayank: humari baat official kerny aay hain….comon… he said forwarding his hand…and she placed hers in him….

Nupur: chalo andar mayank I want to be there dad or mom bhi hain ..mein nhi chahti woh un ko kuch bhi kahain

Mayank: relax..koi bori baat nhi..

Nupur: dad yeah uncle hain mayank's father or yeah un ki mom…

Mayank: UN ki…he said under his breath and suppressed his smile…

ND: hello mr Sharma…

MF: hello mr Bhushan…

Nupru went and set beside shilpa completely ignoring her mother..holdin her hand…she squeezed them telling her donot worry

MF: as mayank is now very bit stable, and tu hum ny socha k ap se baat keralin…nupur ko officially apna bana layin…

ND: ur son meet me yesterday at my office,

Nupur looked at him surprised and he smiled at her…

Mayank 's father that day when came to his room, asked him to make this relation official as now it has been 4 months of his job and there final year is almost to the end too..he to agreed on it.

Yesterday he went to his office to talk on this personally as he doesn't want to his parent to face her fathers harsh words

At office

ND: yes mayank why u have came here, change of plan kya, I know u wont able to fulfil my demands

Mayank: he smiled, fortunately sir I thought I will be able to fullfil only one of your demands, yet with God grace I have fulfilled both. Here sir…

He forwards his official letter of job that has all the details on his job…

And do also have ok bank balance..

He looked at the letter and was dam surprise he was saying truly at a fair designation….

The expression on her fathers face told him he is surprised ..and feeling of proudness inside him

ND: so tu tum ko lagta hai k tum ny mjhy neechay dekha diya hai

Mayank: mera asa koi intension nhi tha, na aj na pehly, mein sirf apko yeah prove kerna chata tha k mein nupur k liyan galat choice nhi hoo… mjhy pata hai apny iny mjhy asa kerny ko islyan kaha tha..i can completely understand that at that moment I had nothing with me, so it was a fair test…

ND: tu ab..

Mayank: sir my parents want to meet u and make it official…tu if u think its right ..hum ghar askaty hain

So as a result of this mayank and his parents are here…

ND: thik humain koi iteraz nhi hai….

MF: thik hai tu I think abhi sagi ker day tay hain aur phir jab yeah log abroad se ajay gay tu shadi…..

Nupur: abroad…

Mayank: v got the scholarship too….

Nupur: huh…

Mayank: nupur woh…

Nupur: excuse me…

He to excuse from there silently after reciving congratulation from all mostly from his parent.

Rashing to her room, he went inside closing the door…

Mayank: nupur yeah kiya hai

Nupur: kiya matlab..tum ny sab kuch khud he decide kerliya….tum ny smahj kiya rekha hai mjhy

Mayank: aray mein tu surprise day raha tha..

Nupur: han yeah acha hai surprise k chekar mein sab khud decide kero aur mein tu sir halaoo na tumahri baato per

Mayank: after all mein tumhara honay wala padi dev hoon

Nupur: oh hello mera pati sirf pati parmeshwar nhi

He put his hand on his waist

Mayank: kyun mein ny tumhrary betay ko ghar se nikla hai..jasa chal raha hai mjhy lag raha hai meray maa baap k beta ghar k bahar jay ga

Nupur: yeahi tu plan hai by god..

They both burst out load….and n he griped her head and pulled her towards him…she looked at him surprised but the grin at his face made her smile n moved away her eyes

Mayank: uffu…ab ap sharmay gi bhi…abhi tu bhar kiya tah woh…dad yeah IN k parents hain..uff…heart fail hojata mera abhi

She hited him on his shoulder n huged him

Mayank: squeezing her in his arms for sometime enjoying the moment after so long finding sumthing peacfull…but when he tried to break apart..but she didn't let his arms leave her

Hey kya hua……nupurr…y r u sobbing…kya hua

Nupur: nothing….

Mayank: hmm so u thought it wont happen…hain na

She nodded yes still griping him close…

Mayank: so half MRs Sharama don't trust MR. Sharma..

She chuckled at his way of calling of there names…

Nupur: I trust mr Sharma more than ur honay waly wife…..

Mayank: excuse me…he broke apart still holding her…dekhain ap meri biwi k baray mein kuch na kahain…buhat suhil hai woh..ghar k sary kam kerti hai, meray kapray press kerti hai, aur khana tu by God perfect banati hai…

Her mouth hanged down…

Nupur: mjhy yeah sab bhi kerna paray ga…mein tu nhi ker sakti..kya zaroori hai yeah sab

She asked innocently …

Mayank: mhhm..not at all..pati ko khush kerny k aur bhi tareakay hain..he said pulling her near…

Nupur: choro…mayank..koi ajay ga…..

Mayank: he moved further near her….anay dooo

Nupur: ma..ya…..nnnkk…her voice shivered as he leaned close n closed..and can feel her shiver increase…

He smiled at her sense of purity and knew very well his intentions n way of expression too….placing his lips on her forehead and than on her cheeks…he moved near her ears..to whispered it again….

I love u nupur…his huskily whispered words, warmed her every nerve..and grace her face with a content smile…..

I love you mayank……

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Happy NEW Year API...🤗

Awesome update...
i loved it lodsss...
waise mujhe laga hi tha woh yehi surprise dene wala hain...
bt itni sari taiyari ke sath ye nhi socha tha...
loved it lodsss...
MayUr r sooo cute...
waiting for d next part...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful amazing. plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
happy new year sis
and ur update is so nice wow mayur r getting married great
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Posted: 13 years ago
happy new year

Awsm update & thanx fr PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was Adorable surprise Mayank did 👏 well done Mayu proud of him.. superb part sis it was really sweet n cute update
thanks for the pm
n Happy new year sis 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
happy new year di... it was awesumesttt mayank toh puri taiyaari ke saath aaya hai
sirf band ,baja,baraat ki kami hai
baki toh sab perfect
loved mayur moments😳
n the update was lovely
loved it core
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
At first Wishing u a very very happy new year to u and ur family member..
it was amazing update Fiza ji
wow mayur r getting engaged ... they got scholarship and going to abroad- wow great..
Mayank proved himself as a perfect life partner for Nupur...he has fulfill all the condition given by Nups Dad.. feel proud for mayank...
mayur ki life set hogaye.. i really loved the entire update..
very nice part
keep it up

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Posted: 13 years ago
happy new year fiza..god bless you dear
cute & sweet updt
thanks for the pm

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