NIVIREN FF- JOURNEY OF TWO HEARTS(chap 25 updt ) - Page 45

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Originally posted by: Nivren123

Please continue soon waiting for your update. 😊

very sorry for updating very late...

hi guys...iam so sorry...i know iam very late...what to do...

my college didnt give me any christmas holidays😭...

and my brother came back to india to spend his christmas holidays😆...

i nearly got crushed between family get togethers and my college works...

and today i got one day off😉...all thanks to the cyclone which hit chennai today😆...it was pouring like hell from yesterday evening, i totally got distracted😭...okay you go ahead and read...

again this one is full niviren😳

JOURNEY 24

"hmm..not bad.." he lazily said, as he stretched both his arms in front of him, clenching all the ten fingers together, he tried to ease out his stressed muscles. She responded by hitting him slightly on his shoulders. "bad?" he turned towards her as he heard her slightly tempered tone. After giving him a warning look, she turned her face towards front, she said "it.. looks.. beauutifulll.."

They were standing at top of the hill. The dark sky was glittering with stars and below that the town was glittering with lights; And the place were both appeared to meet looked eternal. "Doesn't it look paradise?" she asked him and quickly she added "now please don't ask me, have you seen heaven or something like that. I have never seen it but.." he interrupted her saying "you will."

She opened her mouth in disbelief as he continued "sensible people will call this place dangerous." Then looking at her reaction, "I mean.., come on niveditha. it looks more like suicide point" he finished last three words in high tone as he removed his hands from pocket and pointing them downwards. She closed her eyes and shook her head, before she sighed and said "you are unbelievable!!!" for which he replied with a cheeky smile.

They stood there in silence for next ten minutes looking at the sky. As nivi opened her mouth to say something, without turning he said "chup." That's it. Nivi lost her temper, she pulled his shoulder so that they face each other, she opened her mouth to yell, His stiff body language told that he was fuming.

She bit her lower lip, trying to think clearly, by looking at everywhere but not at him. she froze as she felt his hand on hers. Then she realized that her one hand was still on his shoulders. She hastily removed it as she started to speak "what..i mean...how do you know that I was going to talk?" "What?"She got an immediate response.

She sighed "okay. I wanted to scold you for that yelling at me. but.." he raised his brows in curiosity, when she finished saying "forget it." He said " you wanted to scold me, but suddenly you realized it was your mistake so you kept quiet, right?" before he said last two words, he heard her shouting "it was not my mistake." She paused before adding "I just didn't want to start another fight."

He was shocked at his own words. Why did he say like that? he never blabbers whatever comes to his mind. And he was more shocked when he realized that these words are straight from his heart. Of course it was true.

Talking with her worked like riding bike or playing flute. It made him forget all his worries. He was not worried as third one was added to his favourite list. But what worried him the most was it topped other two in the list. He loved talking with her more than riding bike or playing flute. As his mind was progressing very fast towards some realization, a voice stopped his progress.

She unzipped her jacket halfway to let her hands inside as if taking something from inner pocket. His eyes grew wide as he saw her taking out his flute from her pocket. 'how does she know everything about me?' he didn't remember any conversation with her about his passion for music.

"play it. You will feel better." He asked "now?" she nodded. He shook his head as he carefully placed the flute near his lips. He took a deep breath before blowing fresh air into the pipe. He stopped in a second as it sounded awful. His next attempt also failed. The sound was more like horn. She started to giggle. He barked "stop it. Don't forget we are standing on top of the hill that too at 2 in the night. And iam freezing here."

She rolled her eyes back to his almost frozen face, "wait, you were not talking about yash, right?. So about whom you are talking?" she was shocked as her realization lead to something else. Recovering quickly from his state, He walked past her to his bike as he said "come on, its getting late, we have to go home." But she was not in a mood to give in, "try me. you will feel better!"

He quickly grabbed his helmet and turned his bike on. He started his bike, when he looked at her reflection on his bike's mirror. She was shocked and gave him a disbelieving look. He turned his bike off and got off from it as he stood there leaning on his bike. Time passed as both didn't say a word. They both had their hands folded, while he was looking at the sky, she was looking at the ground.

"lets go." He groaned as they both got on his bike quickly. She looked up once again at the sky, which was pouring like hell. She rubbed her palms as she said "iam freezing. Make it fast." Her voice was below audible level. She closed her eyes as the raindrops landed on her face, hitting her hard. She hid her face on his back as her forehead rested on his shoulders.

"viren" she shot back. "give me some space to drive properly, niveditha." He complained like a small child complaining to his mother for not cooking his favourite dish. She immediately moved back realizing their proximity and guiltily lowered her gaze while she bit her lower lip. He was shocked by her reaction. Then it stroked him in his head like a thunder what he said.

"iam sorry." He finished it. She nodded. But he felt very guilty and was worried what this will do to their relationship. "sorry" he repeated his words. "iam sorry." He found it difficult to meet her gaze. His head refused to turn. As if she understood the war going on inside him, she placed her hand on his shoulders, making him to look at her. "its okay. I know you didn't mean it." He looked at her in surprise before he nodded. She reassured him with a smile. She placed her other hand on his shoulders as they drove towards their home.

forget to tell one thing😉...

iniya puthandu nalvazhthukal deepe...:-)wish u and ur family a very cery happy new year..:-)

Awesome Updates...👏... They start feeling each other... Hmmm..

wow beautiful ud I like how u r bringing their relationship. well done sweetie. looking forward for ur new ud.

lovely and advance happy new year

awesome update dear😃

awsm updates as usual..the intensity in ur update made me to feel the entire scene in front of my eyes...u r writing so beautifully deeps...wish u a happy new year n plz continue soon..can't wait to read the next updates... n thnx a ton for d pm..:)