NIVIREN FF- JOURNEY OF TWO HEARTS(chap 25 updt )

Hi everyone...

I am a big fan of niviren. Now I miss them very very much. I have read almost all niviren ff on this forum. But I really don't know where and how I got the idea of creating my own ff. I don't know whether it is good or bad idea. But I was unable to sit quietly. I thought you all people could help me out in this matter. So I give judgement to you people. After reading my ff, just tell me whether my decision to write is good or bad.

I hope that you all guys remember that rough and tough viren of our ccbm. His never care attitude was well characterized. I was a big fan of that viren. I think every kinshuk fan would have loved it. So this forum is dedicated to those who all loved that viren. This doesnot mean that iam going to show his character as bad one. Infact there is no negative character in this story. I have retained all the characters and original story line of ccbm.

NIVEDITHA SHARMA:

Simple, loving and caring 21 year old girl. She lives with her father (Keshav),younger brother (yash) and dadi (nayanthara). She will do anything to make her loved one's happy.

DIVYA SHARMA:

Nivi's elder sister - lives with her father (pratap) and mother (hemalatha ) - 22 year old- fun loving girl. She has instant solution for all problems. She Loves her sister very much.

SIDDARTH SOOD:

Smart, intelligent and handsome 25 year old guy. He lives with his mother(vandana),chachi(chinchal), chachu(jawahar), dadi and dadasab. He takes care of their family business and loves his family very much.

VIREN SOOD:

Rough , tough and self-centred 24 year old guy. Chinchal and jahawar's son. He was sent to boarding school at age of 9. He is very kind at heart. But the only problem with Viren is he completely forgot how to love others.

INTRODUCTION:

Sood's and Sharma's were neighbours and were very close to each other. Nivi lost her mother at very young age and her dadi took care of her. Sood's had everything but they were not happy. It has been 15 years since Viren had left Shimla. He never came back. Everyone blamed themselves for sending him away.

So here begins the journey of two hearts...

chapter 1 - page 1 chapter 2 - page 5

Hi dear sorry i did not introduced myself before...i am Neetika...nice to meet you dear and very glad to see a new ff on NivRen
nice intro ...i will be waiting for your updates

CHAPTER 1.

Viren sood opened his eyes. Everything looked blurred. He tried to focus. The place was unfamiliar. His body pained like hell and his body was so hot that he felt like his skin was burning. He tried to organize his thoughts but he was too tired to do that. He thought that he should consult a doctor. Doctor! Suddenly everything came to his mind. He was in the waiting room of a hospital.

Viren has been working as program analyst at MNC company in Mumbai for last 8 months. He came to manali for conference. Now he was just 250 km away from Shimla. The thought of being so close to shimla made him feel more sick. He was not well for last two days. He took tablets but nothing worked. Today morning his body condition became worse. His eyes had become red and he was not even able to walk properly. He had no choice except to consult a doctor.

He looked at his token number which read 59. Still 10 more to go. Viren had a strange feeling. He felt like Somebody is watching him. it was a guy who was standing in front of him.. Before looking up, he prayed that it should not be Siddarth. From the day he came to manali, he had this fear of meeting any of his family member, eventhough he was 250 km away from shimla. He never wanted that to happen. He never wanted to meet with his family. Then he recognized that the guy was not Siddarth. Siddarth looked more handsome than this guy. Viren saw siddarth six months before, when siddarth came to Mumbai just to meet him. but viren completely ignored siddarth that time.

When viren looked up, the guy was still looking at him. then viren realized that guy was not looking at him but at some girls who were seated next him. the girls were making sound as if they were in a party. It irritated him. he was not even able to turn to see those girls. Once again he cursed himself for not consulting a doctor 2 days before. he leaned back at his chair and closed his eyes.

Somebody shook his wrist hard. He opened his eyes to see blurred image of hospital. A guy came near to him and told viren to follow. As he was too tired to ask anything, he obeyed the boy's order. Doctor checked him. his temperature was more than 103 degree. Doctor made him to lie on the bed. Doctor told viren that he must get admitted. Viren didn't respond. Doctor didn't blame viren. He pressed the bell on his table. He enquired his attender about his last patient.

Viren was not even able to open his eyes. He heard doctor asking somebody, "has anyone came with this patient, mr.viren sood". Viren wanted to answer that question. He whispered "no' no one came with me'.infact viren sood has no one." He smiled to himself before he dozed off.

When he opened his eyes, he felt like he was at different world. Everything looked different. His body still pained. He felt pain on his left wrist. He turned and saw a drip's bottle. "hospital" he thought. Then He looked up. His eyes became wide open. He looked around the room. He closed his eyes in disbelief.

After 15 years, viren sood was home.

pls bear with my grammatical errors... hope u all like it

wonderful update dear...just loved it ...oh he is avoiding all the members of Sood's family ...want to know about Viren's past...hope he gets well soon and this time he did not leave Sood's house...continue soon dear
waiting for Nivi's entry

Hiii Deeps...lovly...i love it ...plzzz continu soon ...the way u do ur ff is different ...good work dear

Originally posted by: edwardcullen19

wonderful update dear...just loved it ...oh he is avoiding all the members of Sood's family ...want to know about Viren's past...hope he gets well soon and this time he did not leave Sood's house...continue soon dear
waiting for Nivi's entry

thank u... neekita...😛 thank u very very much...

It a very nice start can't wait to read more please continue soon.