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Posted: 13 years ago
hm i love there date maan is naughty and romantic lolz love it
and nt got her blow of her life
thanx for pm
continue soon yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago




Part 33:-

Maan was in room standing beside window...looking at moon...gazing at him finding his mishty's face on moon...maan closed his eyes and saw her face...maan took his mobile...geet was lying on bed looking at ceiling and smiling at her own...her smile turned into wider one when she heard her cell phone ringing...she quickly picked up and said happily
G:" hello maan"
Na:" meine aapko mana kiya tha..ke maan se dur rahiye ga"
Geet smile vanished from her face and turned into fear
G:" ko...kon"
Na:" wahi...Jo aapko pehle bhi savdaan kar chuki hai ke maan se dur rahiye"
G:" agar tumhe aesa lagta hai ke mein tumhari in damkiyo se dar jaungi..tau tum bilkul Galat hoo...maan meri zindagi...meri jaan hai...aur unhe mere se koi alag nahin kar sakta hai...samjhi tum..."
Naintara smiled evilly and said
Na:" tau theek hai...aab Jo Hoga uski zimedar sirf aur sirf aap hongi"
Geet were flowing from her eyes...
Naintara cut the call and laughed evilly...
Geet layed on bed and start crying hardly...
G:" Kyun babaji...Kyun mere saath aesa hota hai...Kyun...mein apne maan ke bina nahin jee sakti...nahin jee sakti mein maan ke bina"
Her phone was ringing again...she was getting scared...
Geet picked up phone angrily and said
G:" Kyun tum baar baar mujhe pareshaan kar rahi hoo...Kyun...maan sirf mere hai...sirf mere...mein tumhe unko mujse alag nahin karne dungi...SAMJHI TUM!!!" she shouted angrily and crying but she didnt knew that it was maan was on phone
Maan was standing there with shocking and angry face
Mk: geet.." he said softly and in painful voice
Geet was shocked and said
G:" maan...aap"
Mk:" kya huwa jaan..." he asked angrily
G:" maan...wo..woh maan"
Mk:" batao jaan..."
Geet start crying badly on phone...and sobbing...maan's anger was increasing by listening her each sob..her tears was piercing his heart...
Geet cut the call and start crying badly...not because she loves her life just because she loves maan's life...she cannot live without him...
She was lying on bed crying..but she got shocked when she felt his touch...On her skin...she feels him caressing her hair from back
G:" ma..maan"
Yes that was maan...how can he see his mishty in tears...how...no he cant he can do anything for her happiness
Anything...geet got up from bed and hugged him tightly and passionately
Maan hugged her equal fervor
Mk:" kya huwa mishty" maan whispers softly while caresses her back..she said nothing she was just feeling him...
After 15 minutes...she stooped crying and maan asked her
Mk:" bolo na mishty kya huwa"
G:" maan...woh.."
Mk:" bolo jaan kya huwa..."
G:" maan woh uska phir se phone aaya tha..." maan's eyes got red with anger...geet Start telling him everything what she said to her...his angry was rising second by second
G:" woh Kyun aesa kar rahi hai maan...Kyun" she start crying again
Maan hugged her
Mk:" tumhe apne maan pe yakeen haina"
Geet nodded her head
Mk:" tau phir yaad rakhna ke woh kabhi bhi kuch bhi nahin hone dega...samjhi.."
G:" par woh"
Mk:" ssshhh"
Maan broke hug and cupped her face
Mk:" tumhara maan tumhe kabhi bhi khud se alag nahin hone dega...yeh mera wada hai tumse"
G:" maan woh.."
Before she could say anything maan crashed his lips on hers...and start kissing her passionately...geet get lost in his touch and start kissing him back with equal fervor...both were kissing sucking biting each other's lips...taking out their pains which was clearly reflecting in their kiss..maan placed his tongue inside her mouth...and start tasting her inner sweetness...geet gasped and kissed him passionately...she was getting out of breath..both broke their kiss panting heavily..maan kissed her forehead and geet hugged him..trying to catch her breath...
They didn't say anything because their silence was saying everything..their love was saying that no one can separate them...no one..they are only made for each other...just MAAN and GEET
Geet kept his head on maan's chest...
And closed her eyes...put put his hands on her waist and brings her more closer...she was completely leaning on him...
Mk:" geet"
G:" ??"
Mk:" geet"
G:" ??"
Maan looked at her find her sleeping...maan smiles at her she was looking so cute just like a small baby... Maan kissed her forehead and made her lie on bed properly and kissed her lips...geet smiles in her sleep and maan smiled at her...maan left from there...

In morning
Maan woke up...he goes to gym and start his morning routine his tai chi... He start doing it very hardly her tears were hurting him from inside..he was burning himself from inside...her tears her sad face her sobbing...he broke everything..his hand was bleeding...
Mk:" chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye...mein apni geet ko much nahin hone dunga kuch nahin...woh Jo koi bhi hai...main usse zinda nahin chorunga jisne bhi meri mishty ki ankhon mein ansoo laaye..." his eyes were red like blood...he went to his room and take shower...he wore black shirt and pant...he came downstairs and Naintara start drooling over him...maan looked at her face...and feels disgusted...dadima and dev looked at him and smiled
D:" good morning bro"
Mk:" good morning dev"
MK:" good morning dadima"
Da:" good morning beta"
Maan start sipping his coffee...and looked at naintara who was staring at him with lust eyes...
MK:" dadima...mein yeh shaadi jald se jald karna chahta hoo"
Naintara looked at him shocked
Dadima and dev were happy but confused
Da:" lekin jaldi Kyun...abhi tak ymtau humne geet ke bhai se baat bhi nahin ki hai"
Mk:" mein jaanta hoo dadima...mein geet se keh dunga ke woh apne bhai se baat kar ke usse jaldi yahan bula le"
D:" umm ahem ahem.."
Maan looked at her
D:" dadima...bro ko kitni jaldi hai" he smiled naughtily
Dadima laughed at him and maan rolled his eyes...
D:" aare bro yeh aapke haath mein kya huwa hai" he asked worriedly...dadima also looked at his hand and she got worries
Maan looked at his hand..and remembered his tai chi session...anger filled his face
Mk:" kuch nahin dev...woh bas Zara si choot lag gayi thi"
Da:" maan..aap isse Zara si choot keh rahe hai" she said angirly
Mk:" dadima plz pareshaan mat hoiye...mein theek hoon"
Da:" rukiye...hum medicine lagate hai ispe"
Dadima applied medicine on his hand
Da:" maan apna kayal rakha kijiye "
Mk:" I am sorry dadima...dobara aesa nahin Hoga"
Dadima smiles sadly and dev said
D:" theek hai bro phir...agar aapko bhabhi se Milne ke itni betaabi hai tau theek hai..Kyun dadima" he winked at maan
Maan smiled at his little bro but feels bad because his so called wife is cheating on him..why these all things happened with good peoples..why..?
Mk:" mein apne bhai ke saath kuch bhi bura nahin hone dunga...kuch bhi nahin" he thought
Da:" par maan beta Hume geet ke bhai ka tau intezar Karna Hoga naa"
Mk:" jee dadima woh tau hai"
Naintara was burning with jealousy
Na:" humein kuch Karna Hoga...isse pehle ke Buhat der ho jaiye"
Maan looked at her face...and smirked...
Mk:" dev chale office"
D:" jee bro"
They both left from there...
They reached office and maan called geet on phone
Geet came out from washroom and feeling scared what if she is calling her again...geet slowly picked up the call
G:" hello"
Maan was overwhelmed by listening her magical voice
Geet smiled..she feels his breath
G:" maan"
Maan smiled at her jaan
Mk:" good morning jaan"
G:" good morning maan"
Mk:" hmm aesa good morning" he said with fake anger
Geet smiled at him and said
G:" tau kesa?"
Mk:" hmm tumhe pata hai " he said naughtily
Geet smiled at him and gave him his kiss
G:" mwahhh"
Maan smiled widely
Mk:" are wah mishty Buhat samjh dar ho gayi hai"
Geet open her mouth wide O
G:" matlab pehle nayi thi"
Mk:" are mishty meine aesa kab kaha"
G:" par aapne abhi kaha"
Maan laughed
G:" dekha aab has rahe hai mujhepe"
Geet pouted like a samll baby
Maan smile...
Mk:" aww geet you must be looking so cute"
Geet smiled at him
Mk:" I love you so much jaan"
G:" I love you too jaan"
Maan smiled
Mk:" jaan mein tumse baad mein baat karta hoo..hmm"
G:" ok..."
Mk: bye jaan...love u"
G:" love u too bye"
Maan smiled and cut the call



Precap:- naintara in trouble




plz plz guys do comments and press like
love u alll xxx
sehri xxx


Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lvly... part...
precap intrstn...
iss nt ki toh...😡


😃thx 4 d pm...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... awesome update ...
loved it...
awww... maan is sooo caring... love him...
grrr hate that naintara...
naintara in trouble... yayyy...
continue soon dear...
thanks 4 the pm
meena.. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear
cont soon
thanks 4 pm
sehrish79 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cyaa

yipee :) me first :)


😃😛
sehrish79 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: parikashyap

lvly... part...
precap intrstn...
iss nt ki toh...😡


😃thx 4 d pm...😃




thanks u so much pari😃
lol yeah i hate naintara😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

wow... awesome update ...
loved it...
awww... maan is sooo caring... love him...
grrr hate that naintara...
naintara in trouble... yayyy...
continue soon dear...
thanks 4 the pm



thank u so much jyothi😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

awesome dear

cont soon
thanks 4 pm


thank u meena dear xxx😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome eagerly waiting for precape par maan geet ka cell kyun nahi dekhta ki vo no. kiska hai continue soon

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