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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc start dear!!!!!...plzzz cont soon ... w8ing 4 d First part
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Haila...you started it😲😆
Amazing dear!!!😃
Congrats on your no SS🤗
Tick tock...waiting for the first part 😍
-Namratha-😃
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congo for new ss

awesome cs

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START SOON, WAITING FOR IT
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Interesting character sketch dear do continue
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Me waiting for the updates...

nice intro
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interesting concept
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Hey friends..I'm Namratha🤗

I have written a prologue for this SS of my lovely friend Jyothi

Hope you all like it 😃

**************

~~DIL KI BAATEIN~~



PROLOGUE

Dr. Handa..It's an Emergency

She came running ,rushed towards her new patient her eyes fell on her patient ,he was unconscious ,blood all over ,lying on the stature like a lifeless person.

There was a commotion around his bed ,Nurses rushing towards him carrying syringes , plasters, Doctors ready to treat him.

He opened his eyes after some time, just to find himself lying on the hospital bed ,he remembered the last time his eyes were open ,he was slammed on the road he was trying to move his hands ,trying to remove the huge piece of glass that was pinned on his left arm ,he was in a miserable position unable to shout ,unable to bear the pain .

That's it ,he couldn't remember anything more than that.

He looked around his bed ,the ward allotted to him was quite decent.

Should he be happy that he is alive..yeah ofcourse..afterall he is alive ,It's a big deal

His eyes fell on the doctor coming towards him ,he knew her, Geet..She is Geet ,ok does she work in this hospital??

Hello Mr. Maan Good Morning

She smiled soflty ,so how are you feeling now?? Better?? she said while checking his pulse.

You must be knowing it better Dr. Handa with a stethoscope ,and hopefully some knowledge of how to check the pulse.

Geet looked at him with a stern look.

But she continued checking without speaking a word.

Ahh..are you unable to check or you unable to utter a word??

Look Why don't you call some other Doctor , agar yeh tumhari bas ki baat nahi hai!!

Koi senior Doctor...tumse better!!

Waise bhi I don't believe you ,he said while looking at her with his arrogance filled eyes


Enough Mr. Maan ,said Geet a trying to be soft but her sternness was audible through her voice .

Mr.Maan Singh Khurana ,will you please stop speaking for a while??

You might be a boss in your company ,but here you are a patient , and I'm your Doctor.


Understand?? So you better co-operate with me rather than passing your rude comments,she moved closer to him and her expressions became more rigid

Because this time I'm not gonna take this anymore!!!!!

Not anymore Maan , you better understand this.

She walked away from his room and went to her locker.

She sat there for a while rubbing her hands on her hair ..she stood up and took a dairy from it.

She turned out a page ...

She read the words written on the page.

"I Love you Maan" ...she touched the page on which the words were written,closed her eyes for a few seconds and soon opened them looked at the diary and closed the book hardly and almost threw it in the locker angrily and closed it.

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Part 1 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2608694/maneet-ss-dil-ki-bateein-epilouge-updated?pn=10




Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
prologue was just gr8..
i think he hit his head sumwhere..
otherwise hw cud sum1 b so rude...?
but msk cums with impossible na..
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awesome prologue
cont soon
thanks 4 pm

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