Kriyaansh FF-YOung Love NOTE(pg 150) - Page 59

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey suzi pls update soon nxt part
plss
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Kria while dialing rey's numbr... thnks iss waqt call krna thik hoga kya..? Agar wo khadus rey gussa hogaya to...Emmm... das hi to baje hai...call krti hu... arrey nahi... She thnks fr 10 mins and den she finally calls rey

Rey: yeh kiska numbr hai.. He picks d call... N says hello

Kria: *shivering*hii rey..

Rey: whoz dis..?

Kria: aa..emmm...mai hu..kria...kria ghai

Rey:kria..? tmhe mra numbr kaise mila?

Kria: vicky ne diya..

Rey: ohh accha... So..iss waqt kaise call kiya..

Kria: kyu nahi karna tha?:(

Rey: Haan... Mai so raha tha...

Kria: *self talk* khadus...aap kaise ho?

Rey: m fine..

Kria: mera haal nahi puchenge..?

Rey: emm..hw r u?

Kria: mai waisi hi hu jaisi subah thi..

Rey:*holds his head*...wow...aur kuch?

Kria: aapne dinnr kiya?

Nidhi: di iss waqt kisse bata kar rhi ho?

Kria: ek mint rey... Soja nidhi ki bacchi...

Nidhi: aapki awaz mj distrb kar rhi hai...

Rey: hello kria..u dr...? Hello

Kria: blanket odhke soja chup chap... haan rey boliye..

Rey: kya hogaya tha..mai kbse hello kiye ja raha hu...

Kria: nahi wo mai bas...

Rey: accha batao... call kyu kiya?

Kria: *self talk* arrey kya bolu... Emm... Wo rey muje notes k baare me puchna tha...

Rey: haan pucho

Kria: *self talk* dhat... Maine to notes khole b nahi ab kya bolun...

Haan wo rey wo kya hai ki wo mai

Rey: *irritated* shouts..kya wo wo..saaf saaf bolo

Kria: haan wo muje aapki handwriting samaj nahi arahi...

Rey: wat??? ...Tmhe mri writing samaj nhi arahi.. Jaanti b ho maine kitni mushkil se wo notes banaye.. Aur itne acche se to likha hai... Tumhari aankhen kharab hai

Kria: accha... Haaa... Aisa nai hai... Mri aankhen acchi hai... Chahe to test krlo..

Rey: shouts..wat? Kria tum neend me to baat nhi kar rhi?? Kya bakwas kiye ja rhi ho..

Kria: *self-talk* mai khud nahi janti k kya bol rhi hu...

Rey: kria... koi hai??

Kria: haan.. Mai bakwas nahi kar rahi...mai to bas..emmm...aise hi..

Rey: kria tum pagal hogayi ho... Jaake sojao..gud nite...nd he disconncts..

Kria: arrey suniye rey... Kaat diya..

Kaatega kyu nhi mai jhalli jaise bakwas jo kr rhi thi...mere haath Abhi b kaanp rahe hai.. Mje rey se baat krne me itna darr sa kyu lag raha tha...Ufff... She takes a lng breath...kria pagal..pata nahi kya kya bak diya rey ko.. ab kya karun...hey univrse ji aap hi kch karo...

Rey: *irritated* kaisi pagal ladki hai... Dimag kharab krdiya... Muje pareshan krne k liye call kiya hga shayad...God save me ye ladki muje pagal kardegi... He luks @ clock..emmm its 10:30... sojata hu..subah gym bhi jana hai... He sets 6'o' clck alarm N sleeps..

Kria: rey ko firse call karun...? Agar wo gussa hogaye toh... Na baba... Gusse me to bade khatarnak hojate hai rey... Par mai kya karun... Maine to bechare rey ko pareshan kar diya... Call krke fatafat sry bolke cut kardungi.. Yea gud idea.. She calls up rey...

Rey hears his cell ringing..

Rey: ab kiska call hai... He picks his cell nd says hello..

Kria disconncts outta fear...

Rey: kria ka call... Discnnct kyu krdiya usne..?? *annoyed* Ohhh nooo...ye firse mje pareshan kar rhi hai...:X

Kria: arrey baap re... Mje to darr lag raha hai baat krne me...

Rey calls up kria..

Kria: oh no rey ka call..ab kya karun..kya karun kya karun...

Rey: angrily..ye pagal recve kyu nhi kr rhi...

Kria: zarur wo muje daant ne k liye call kr rhe hai.. Mai nahi uthaungi... Cell silent me rakhke sojati hu... Haan yehi sahi hai..

Rey: damn... isne recve hi nhi kiya... mai cell off krdeta hu... Yehi thik hai... Aise Yeh muje pareshan nhi kar payegi fir... Yes... he offs his cell... N sleeps..

Kria: she chcks hr cell... Kamaal hai bas ek baar call krke thak gaye... Huh... Maine recve nhi kiya to kya hua ek aur baar try krna chahiye tha na...Itna ghamand... Soja kria... Ye call nhi krnewale... Agar Kal subah clg me rey ne kuch kaha toh...? unka mood b thik nhi tha... Dhat..isme naya kya hai..har waqt khadoos jaise hi to rehte hai...Pakka rey mje kal chaar batein sunake hi dam lenge...Ohhh nooo... Ab mai kya karu... Kuch sochna padega...

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow dude that was awesome👏👏...kriya kitna darti hai rey se baat karne mai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally kria ne call to kia..jhalli kahi ki..n rey kitna khadus h ladki se pyaar se baat ni kar sakta bt d update was mast..ekdm jhakkas...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
i thought that rey would be happy but anyways nice update and ty for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaa i also thought that ray would be happy to see ki kriya ka call hai
but wo to gussa hi tha 😳
nd kriya ray se baat krne se drti hai lol😆😆
but nyc update loved it so much❤️❤️
nd pls update soon next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowowowo!!! :D
rey is angry youngh man!!
hahahah luuuvvv ur fff!!!:) m
thanxxx for the pm!! plzz next part too haan!!!:):):)
thanxx update soon!!!:)
Edited by Anyaa_012 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
kriya ko itna dar kyu lag raha hai rey hi to hai
but nyc update thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc 1..par rey ko to khush hons chaye
kriya k phn se
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it dear !!! awsum !!! pura update call karne pe guzaring !! hahahhaaha !!! <3

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