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maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

waiting dear...

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maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

yaar mey tho hey bhool gaya tha ki last part mey kya huha..😆
ab maine ek aur baar pada...😆

jaldi update karo...

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sehrish79

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Part 5:-

He closed his eyes and remembered their sweet moments which they spend together and happily.

13 years ago:-
Maan was 14 and geet was 12

G:" ladoo!!!!!!" she screamed
MK:" what happened princess?... Why are you shouting and yes dont call me ladoo
G:" where is my chocolate..aapne Kaha tha ke aap mujhe aaj chocolate doge...you are very bad..and yes you are ladoo..very very very big and fat ladoo hmmph" she pouted
MK:" princess dont call me ladoo ok"
G:" you are ladoo...jab dekho bas ladoo hi khate rehte ho aap..isliye aap ladoo ho hmmph"
MK:" princess I am not ladoo"
G:" yes you are ladooo ladoo" she runs from there and maan also start running behind her..both were laughing and running everywhere in the house...she hides behind her naina maa (naina is maan's mother)
G:" dekho na maa..yeh ladoo mujhe taang kar raha hai" she breathing heavily due to running
N:" aare maan kyun taang kar rahe ho meri geet ko haa"
MK:" mom yeh mujhe bar bar ladoo kehti hai...mein koi ladoo ho kya?" he asked with innocent baby face
Naina smiled and hugged both maan and geet
N:" tum dono aapas mein itna pyaar karte ho tau larte kyun rehte ho haa"
G:" kyun ke yeh ladoo hai" she giggles cutely
Maan looked at baby angry face
MK:" tau tum konsa kahin ki Rajkumari hoo mein Tau pagal ho jo tumhe princess kehta rehta hoo..tum Tau ek number ki atom bomb ho"
Geet opens her mouth in wide o
G:" hawww kyaa!!!"
Maan was laughing at her...she was looking so cute
N:" bacho aese larte nahin hai" she said while caressing their face
Maan was still laughing
G:" hmph ladooo kahin ka"
Geet runs from there angrily
Maan looked at geet and then naina with innocent face
N:" dekha tumhari princes naraz ho gayi"
M:" aab mein kya karu mom?"
N:" hmm mein batati hoo"
She something whispers in his ear and smiled...maan smiles widely and kiss her cheek and runs from there
Maan...naina smiled and left from there...maan went to her room and saw her talkingto her big teddy bear in her lap..
G:" tumne dekha woh mujhe atom bomb keh rahe the..hmph...ladoo kahin ka...meine Tau sirf chocolate maangi thi naa...Lekin woh mere liye chocolate bhi nahin laaye" she had tears in her eyes...one tear was about to escape from her eyes when maan quickly grabbed her tear on his finger and looked at her painfully
Geet looked at him and pouted
She turns her face away..maan smiles and hugged her from behind very sweetly
MK:" princess dekho mein tumhare liye kya laya hoo"
Geet was seeing him from corner of her eyes...she pouted and sits back on her place
G:" I don't want to see...you called me atom bomb...I'm not going to talk to you ladoo"
MK:" fine then I will give this big teddy bear and chocolates to my freind ok"
Geet's eyes get bigger...teddy bear and chocolates...
Maan was about to leave...when geet hugged him...and jump on his lap
G:" are these chocolates for me..and this teddy is for me" she asked with excitement
Maan smiled naughtily
MK:" yes..but if you don't want to keep them it's ok I will give this to my friend ok"
Geet make baby face
G:" mein rakh lo" she asked with cute baby face
Maan smiled teasingly and said
Mk:"but you were angry na"
G:" nahin I'm not angry"
Both smiled and hugged each other tightly
Mk:" princess..you know you are my best friend my sweet princes...don't ever get angry with me princess..I feel so lonely without you" he said with tears
Geet hugged him more tightly and kissed him on cheek
G:"Ladoo you are my favourite Ladoo...I can never be angry with you..and how can I you are my everything"
Maan kissed her both cheeks and gave her Teddy bear and chocolates...both feed each other chocolates and they start playing with Teddy bear...they were laughing smiling..they were each other's heartbeat...they loved each other so much...
They were playing and giggling but their smile vanished from their face when they heard maan's dad Rahul scream...he was screaming on his mom...maan and geet looked at each other with sadness...they run from there and stand outside of their room...watching them...
R:" naina meine tumse kitni baar kaha hai...mere har kaam mein interfere mat kiya karo" he said angrily and throw his file on ground...maan and geet got scared after seeing him so angry
N:" par Rahul...meine aesa kya keh diya...Jo aap itna gussa ho rahe ho.."
R:" mein tumhare saath behass nahin Karna chahta...lekin ainda mere kisi bhi kaam mein rok tok mat Karna samjhi"
Naina had tears in her eyes...seeing her teary maan and geet also had tears in their eyes...her naina mom was in tears and maan was feeling so alone and sad
N:" tau kya aab mera itna bhi haq nahin mein aapse kuch keh bhi nahin sakti" she asked painfully
R:" haan haq hai tumhe...lekin har ek baat mein bolna yeh mujhe kabhi manzoor nahin hai"
Maan couldnt see anymore...he left from there...he went to terrace and sat on swing...tears were flowing from his eyes..his mother was in pain..everytime he has seen them like this...they always fight and as always he couldnt do anything...he was crying...when he felt someone's hand on his shoulder...he looked at her...she was his geet...his princess
He looked at her tears... And hugged her tightly from her waist...he brings her more and more close...geet hugged him back tightly...she caressed his back trying to sooth his pain...she kissed his head
G:" please ladoo...chup ho jao...aapko pata hai naa mein aapko aese nahin dekh sakti"
Maan looked at her tears and hugged her once again
Mk:" princess...tumne dekha na dad mom ke saath kese baat kar rahe the...mein unko aese nahin dekh sakta...mujhe Buhat bura lagta hai Jab woh aese larte hai tau...mein chahta hu ke woh kabhi bhi na jagre"
He said while crying and hugging her tightly..tears were flowing from her eyes too after seeing his ladoo like this...geet made him look at her...and then kissed him on eyes...
G:" Dekho aapki princess aapke pass hai phir aap dukhi kese ho sakte hoon..please ladoo ... Meri kathir mat ro na"
Maan put his head on her lap and cried bitterly...geet knew that he is still crying...geet put her head on maan's head and hugged him
They remain in that position..they got lost in each other..feeling each other's pain...and don't know when they slept in that position...
In morning...geet wake up first and felt some burden on her when she saw his Ladoo...sleeping peacefully in her lap...she didn't disturb him...she caresses his hair and smiled at him..she kissed him on forehead and maan slowly opened his eyes and looked at her princess smiley face...his face gets brighten when he saw his princess with smile on her face...
G:" good morning ladoo"
Maan smiled am
Mk:" good morning princess"
He realized he was in her lap for whole last night...he cursed himself...his princess was uncomfortable whole night
Mk:" I am sorry princess...meine tumhe poori raat tang kiya na"
G:" aeloo..aap bhi na each mein Ladoo hi ho...hehe" she giggled cutely
G:" aap mujhe tang kese kar sakte ho...mein bhi tau so gayi thi "
They both giggled and hugged each other...they went downstairs and geet and maan gets happier to see her mom and dad... Kiran maa and Ajay papa...they were geet's mom dad
G:" maa..papa" she screamed with excitement
They were out of town for few day..but geet said that she wants to stay here with her ladoo
Kiran and ajay looked at her amd hugged her..and then they hugged
Maan
K:" kesi hai geet...kese ho maan beta"
G:" bilkul theek maa...aab aap wapis aagaye ho na"
A:"haa beta aab hum wapis aa Gaye hai"
Rahul and naina looked at her with smile
G:"maa aapko pata hai naina mom ne mujhe Buhat aachi aachi cheeze bana kar kilayi" she hugged naina
And Kiran smiled at them they were attached to each other so much
G:" aur papa aapko pata hai Ladoo ne mujhe chocolates aur Teddy bear bhi diya" she said while giggling
Maan looked at ajay very cutely
Mk:" dekho na papa yeh mujhe phir se Ladoo keh rahi hai"
Ajay looked at them and hugged maan
A:" are geet...maan Ladoo kaha pe hai woh tau kitna pyara hai..haina maan"
Mk:" haa" he said with wide smile
Ajay and Rahul were college friends and they were very attached to each other
R:" ajay..Kiran bhabhi aap sab log aram kar lijiye thak Gaye honge"
A:" hum bilkul theek hai Rahul...tu suna tera business kesa jaa raha hai"
R:" hmm..Aacha chal raha hai yaar" and they started their business talk...naina and Kiran went to kitchen..
Maan and geet went to their room and start playing their games

Precap:- memories continues

Please please guys tell me how was it...I hope u all like it...if u have any confusion about ff or this update then do let me know plzz
Plz do comment and press like
Love u alll
Sehri xxx

Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 13 years ago

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Mishti13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

awesome loved maaneet so much

cont. soon

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meena..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

awesome dear

loved it

cont soon

thanks for pm

luv u🤗

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97531

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

awesome update dr,
loved it,
nd maaneet were so cute,
plz continue soon,
nd thanx for pm.

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

awesum..

loved deir cute past...

but y rahul s behaving lyk dat?

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sehrish79

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: -maankimishti-
awesome dear
loved it
cont soon

Thnx mishty dear :D

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sehrish79

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: 97531
awesome update dr,
loved it,
nd maaneet were so cute,
plz continue soon,
nd thanx for pm.

Thank you so much dear xx

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sehrish79

@sehrish79

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Posted: 13 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: priya_94
AWESOME

Thanks priya sweety xxx

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