Kriyaansh FF-YOung Love NOTE(pg 150) - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago
it was very funny.
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG..M on cloud 9 aftr reading all ur commnts... 😍

M glad dat u ppl r luving my ff so mch...Thnxxx a lot guyzzz luv u all 🤗muaaahhh❤️

@perfectangel @namz: No sweethrts..vicky kria ki jodi nahi bana rahi mai... Kya mai ekta kapoor lagti hu tumhe...🤣 Kria sirf rey ki hai...❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago

Vicky: kria isne hame donkey bola

Kria: itni himmat

Neha: haan...

Kria: aisa kya kardiya maine jo itna chilla rahi hai

Neha: itna sab karke tu puch rahi k kya kiya..wah ji wah... Iss chamkadar vicky k saath milke pure class me mera tamasha bana diya..

VickY: nehaaa...tmne muje chamkadar kaha...kria baby dekho..

Kria: oye neha

Neha: agar tune ek lafz b kaha na to mai tera khoon pijaungi

Kria: kyu tu vampire hai

Vicky: haan shakal se to wahi lagti hai

Neha: tum dono ko to

Rey closing his ears tightly shouts shut up...Rey: yeh kya lagake rakha hai... Ladna hi hai to jao yahan se.. Mera BP high mat karo

Kria: par rey

Rey: chup... Bht hogaya tamasha..

all standing chup chap and stares @ rey

Rey: mujhe ghurna band karo...

vicky neha kria starts seeing oder side...

Rey: idhar udhar kya dekh rahe ho

Kria: aap hi ne kaha aapko na dekhe..isliye idhar udhar dekh rahe hai

Rey starts laughing... Tumhara kuch nahi ho skta..

Sabki hasi chaalu...

while laughing neha keeps hr hand on rey's shoulder... Seeing dis kria moves neha's hand.. And whispers in neha's ears control kar... Rey tri property nhi hai..

Neha: toh kya teri hai.. He he he..

Rey: kya hua..

Vicky: tum dono kya khusur pusur kar rhe ho...

Kria: kuch khaas nahi...

Rey: waise neha inhone kya prank khela tha

Neha: dnt ask rey... mai class me baithi aur mujpar chipkali rakhke chale gaye

Rey: shockd.. wat??? Chipkali...

VICKY: dude nakli wali..

Rey: ohhh... Bht bura kiya.. Fir kya hua

Neha: fir mai bench pe khadi hoke chillane lagi...mere saath mre benchmates b khade hogaye... Fir to itna tamasha hua..ufff

Rey: Laughs..

Neha: tum has rhe ho...muje koi support nahi krta.

Rey: aisa nahi hai neha... Kria dis s undone... Tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...

Kria laughs

Neha: ye koi pehli baar thode hi kar rhi hai... Ye to iska purana game hai mje tang karne ka... Pata nahi bhagwan ne b kya soch k isse mera dost bana diya hai...

Kria hugs neha... And says isliye banaya taaki mai tuje roz aise pareshan karu meri jaan

Neha: haath hata... Nai to maarungi mai..

Kria: nahi hataungi...and she hugs hr tightly...

Vicky: wah wah wah kya dosti wala prem hai wah... Hai na rey..

Rey: haan kamaal ki dosti hai... Lol

Neha: wo to hai...

Kria: ohh no mai late hogayi.. Neha mamma muje maar dalegi... Chal jaldi...

Neha: arrey haan dhyan hi nhi raha...

Kria: bye rey..bye vicky

Neha: bye guyzzz...

Vicky: kria suno... Mai tumhe call karunga to koi prblm to nhi hai na

Kria: no vicky.. Prblm hai...mri mom ne pick karliya to mri chutti hojayegi... Tum call krne se pehle mje ek txt krdo... Agar mai free rahi hai to il cal u... Now byee... I gotta rush..

Rey: byeee...

And neha kria leaves...

Rey: usne tuje apna number diya

Vicky: haan

Rey: par muje nahi diya..

Vicky: hmmm... Tuje bura laga..

Rey: naaa... And he thnks kria ne muje numbr kyu nahi diya...kya wo muje apna dost nahi samajti...😔

Do hit Like and comment..If u luvd it😎


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Posted: 13 years ago
osmie osm...i just luvd it...rey jealous...m super happy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wah wah
amazing
kria n rey dono jealous haan
superb
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swaron502

osmie osm...i just luvd it...rey jealous...m super happy...



Thnx dear🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum one... loved it...👍🏼 ❤️ pm mw wen the next one is out.. i really wish i cud write like u.. 😔...
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Originally posted by: AlexArsha

awsum one... loved it...👍🏼 ❤️ pm mw wen the next one is out.. i really wish i cud write like u.. 😔...



Awww... Zarur Likhogi..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
OHHH WOOOWWW...!!!!!!!
this was the BEST PART so far...!!!!!!

just LOVED how they were fighting...
and then Rey shouts and then kria ka comment...
and Kria jealous...

SOOO...What...??
i dont have words...!!!!

u might have noticed that i haven't commented on the other parts...
but this one was sooo goooddd...that i couldn't stop my self...!!!!!!!!!!!

update soon please...

-Saumya

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