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Reaching home she threw her self on bed, celebrating Shilpa's cum here. She wonder how lucky he is, how content in his life he is. Why not any1 will do so much for such parents, who are alawy as there with him when he needs him and when even he doesn't. the feeling tht they are with him is so much blessed.

She herself cherishes them so why not he…

The text on her cell broke her thoughts

Will pick u up at 8 in morning..be ready 😊

Okay…she typed..with a frown on her face

He chukled reading her such okay…

Hey😆…donot worry three days with me u will b out of ur this fear…okay..

I donot know,😕 I just nevr had such ride, u know, I am afraid of rides too…🤢😕

With this text her cell runged

Mayank: kya nupur…why r u so worried ..its just a bike ride..

Nupur: I know but …

Mayank: acha ..disappointedly…chalo tum phir khud ajana…will meet u at college okay bye…

Nupur: bye…

The feeling of him not with her, plus the clear disappointment in his voice, was sumhow making her restless,

Kya nupur u know how much he was celebrating it, plus the feeling for him to now will be doing his things on own. It was his first step of an achievement.

She took her cell n test him

Pick me up at 8, dosti ki hai tu jan bhi muskil mein dalni paray gi..sigh

Her smiple text make him grin widely…

😃..i'll b there

.

Mayank: han tu, hum do subjects prepare ker chukay hain 2 aur we need to this week..

Nupur: hmm thik hai..mjhy tension horahi hai

Mayank: kya baat ker rhai hoo..tumhain papers ki tension horahi hai…nhi nupur movie dekhny chalein

He said sarcastically

Nupur: mr mayank shrama….meri zayada nakal utarny ki zaroorat nhi hai..wasy yaar movie im missing

Mayank: nupur papers per concentrate kero…aur hum prof Senha k pass ja rahy hain.. assignment k topic layany

Nupur: han chaloo…

Prof Senha: so I have decided that u both are gonna do assignment on,

This on was preety much a question for both of them, Prof Senha is there English literature teacher, and what topics most of the student had got was preety weird. Mostly pretty romantic, or must say sensuous . Both of them have been ignoring this, praying that they must get a descent topic.

So mayank nupur ur topic is, Love n breakups…

Mayank was preety much in urge to hit his head, n nupur was looking sumwhere to find a whole n dig there prof there.

Both of them has no knowledge of the emotion LOVE, especially they way they describe it usually . For nupur she loves watching movies yet thriller n actions, and for mayank he hates love been described only in one direction and being decribed it as only a intimate relation rather been feelings..

Mayank: yes ma'a…

Saying so he left ther room, followed by her..

Nupur: yeah sneha ki tu

Mayank: phir bhi kafi better hai..

Nupur: kya better hai..ek tu mjhy yeah LOVE..he nhi samhj ata uper se breakup…

Mayank: yeah tu hai.. but kafi descent hai…

Nupur: mayank kay decent hai yaar

Mayank acha tu tum woh riya k topic lay lo kafi descnt hai..

Nupur: kya

Mayank: Shakespeare n KISS..

Nupur: tu kam se kam koi reference tu hai

Mayank: with personal experience

Nupur: KYA…wasy riya k liyan perfect hai..kafi experience hoga

The both giigled…and hared a high five

Nupur: chalo ek plot bantay hain

Mayank: hmm chalo…to the class room…

Nupur: okay starting from definition….

Mayank: ab is ki definition kis dictionary mein milay gi…lets find out…

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Nupur: and wht is breakup…

Mayank: obviously when ur not with the person u love, or u ur over it

Nupur: how can u get over it..abhi in definition we said k this in intense emotion ..thn how can u get over it and if tht was not the emotion u have than wht we said love n break ups

Mayank: Nupur dekh mjhy yeah topic samhj nhi arha upper se itna gool mool sawal…..mjhy kya pata, do u know any1 who is in love….

Nupur: hmmm….she smiled….mom n dad…

Mayank: ur mom n dad

Nupur: ha ah aha h..wht a joke….im talking about ur mom ndad…she said clasping her hands…..

Mayank: with a frown..n u thing they will help us…I mean can we talk ..with them

Nupur: han ..us mein kay hai…chalo ghar chalty hain…they r so sweet

Mayank: I am not gonna u are going to…

Nupur: kyun

Mayank: ghar chalo abhi pata chaly ga…

…….

It was evening so mayank's father was at home too, the moment nupur with a helpless frown told them the topic, the both burst in to laughter..

Mayank: see..thats why I said..

Nupur: anty uncle pls na help…she pouted…

MF: beta tumhari teacher k tu jawab nhi ..mayank ko yeah topic mila…amazing…

Mayank: dad please…islyan mana kiya tha…ab yeah dono sirf tang kechay gay aur kuch nhi….

MF: acha bhi kuch nhi kahata… chalo shilpa help them ..n he left

SA: beta if emotions ko tu definition se define kero gi tu kasay chaly ga..feel it..

Nupur: kasay feel kero ..

SA: khabi tu tum ko yeah feel ho hoga..maa k liyan ..

This brought a strange restlessness in her, a weird feeling here inside her….

SA: acha ..tu ..nalaiq..tu hum se pyar kerta hai k nhi..

Mayank: ap ko shak hai…

SA: see….yeah hai n ullu ..is se poch… .woh kya feel kerta hai….

Nupur: bolo..

He scratch her head..

Mayank: define kasay kero….

SA: acha chalo simple…tum mayank humain ya kisi buhat close ko soch ker apni feelings ko pen down kero, aur tum nupur yeahi kero….phir hum kal discuses kerain gay ..k yeah kya hai….woh sab kuch socho jo tum us k liyan ker sakti ho, ya chati ho k woh tumhary liyan keray…anything or everything

Nupur: okaaay…bye anty mein chalti hoon..

…..

The next day ,nupur had a restless night, almost sleepless, as she was feeling to much depressed, and anxiety too she was feeling..somehow it was pretty strange arousing of sumthing ..

With all that thoughts she was steping down the stairs of college when she missed the steped, n sherik was too loud..

Ahhh

She was lying on the last step, when she was holded from shoulder to sit

Mayank: nupur tum thik ho,

Her head was spinning cause of shock, but soon she recovered within as strong hold she was, the warmth she was getting with a rub at her arm….

Nupur: ahh..mayank mera ankle…

He looked at it , it was completely twisted…

Mayank: kuch nhi its twist..try to stand up, hold me…

He put her hand on his shoulder, and hold her from waist, almost carrying her on his…he called her driver who was always there in parking ….placing her carefully in car the went to hospital..the whole journey she was silently wincing in pain, n he was there consoling her…

Mayank was always a person of strong nerve, it was very few moments that he fear or feel restless, and this was one of few moments, yet he has his practical mind with him, who was repeatedly telling him that, be with her, tell her everythnning is fine, and right now stay with her..

By the time he dial her father's no to tell them she is hospital but he was I meeting so he left a message..

Reaching hospital they told him it was'nt her ankle that was damage, though it was though , but her finger of foot was displaced..

The moment doctor told that they are gonna put it back with a jerk, he looked at her who was already pressing her hand on bed, biting her lips not to make voice. And this is absolutely gonna cause aloud pain..

Mayank this is not time to panic..tu asay keray ga tu us ko kaun dekhy ga…

Mayank: doc cant we give her a local anesthetic…

Doc: we r gonna spray it, yet phir bhi..pain tu hoga..but I think she is a strong girl she will mange..and u also donot worry …

The consolation he received from doc made him embarrassed

Mayank: nupur…suno..

Nupur: kya hua…tum itna pareshan kyun hoo..

Mayank: ur finger is dislocated ..tu us k place per laa ker they are gonna plaster it…it will hurt as woh fractured hai…he said each n evry word..slowly assuringly..n consolingly

Nupur: okay…she said with fear…

The doc came, n automatically she grip his hand n he pulled her near..stnading beside her, he encircle his arm around her, slightly rubbing it…

Cleaning the area, the doc signal him tht this it..with a jerk he pulled n place it on place.but true the pain was too much.

As reflex she clutch his shirt n n he pulled her , hugged her tight..winicnng in pain…he hold her tighly as it was truly too much to see her like that. Knowing she is not a type of girl who scream on little things, she is a girl who even donot scream on big one…hearing her screm it was a confirmation for him tht it was too much to bear..

Mayanak: hogay abus hogaya..kuch nhi…

He didn't allowed her to see her bandge though it was nothing , no blood..yet he griped her head tightly in himself to hold her away from any more pain…..

Doc: it done …now u need to take rest…

She moved away her head a bit, n than found her self in a pretty embarrassing position yet it was nt embarrassing it was comforting one

DOC: u cant walk for 4 weeks, donot stress this foot, donot put weight on it, while ur walking , its better u avoid it…

Taking th medicine n clearing all things, he helped her to cum out n took her to her house…truly she live in mansion. It was first time he entered her house, it was huge, yet to quite..

Mayank: ghar per koi nhi hai…

Nupur; nhi mom is out of country aur dad k meeting hai

Mayank: han I know..i told him about this ..he will be there soon..

Nupur: he wont…aur tum ny kyun batay un ko..tum thay na sab mange kersaty thy phir

Mayank: nupur ..woh tyumhary parents hai..relax..

Making her sit on her bed..placing her leg straight with a cushion beneath it…he sat next to her on a chair..

Mayank: tum thik ho pain tu nhi horaha hai..

Nupur: han thik hoon..she said with a smile…tum jao anty pareshan horahi hongi

Mayank: uncle ko anay do tum akeli ho …

Nupur: its ok mayank…nani hogi..us ko bol do woh mera kayal rek lay gu

Mayank: magar…

Nupur: mjhy addat hai…dad buhat dair se aay gay….

Mayank: acha but if u need anything u will call oka..

Nupur: han sure…but mayank 3 weeks mein tu exams hai..aur assignment ..

Mayank: relax…exams ki tiayri yahi kerlay na…notes mein la do ga…us mein kya hai,..aur hum yahin bhait ker parh lay gay…assignment ..us ko kuch kertay hain..

Nupur: hm..per phir bhi..mein exmas mein jao gi kasay ..paper kasay kero gi

Mayank: paper tum ko pair se likhan hai…itna over react kerny ki zaroorat nhi hai….it

His cell runged

Ji maa bus arha hoon…ata hoon aker bata ta hoon..han mein thik hoon…jung per nhi gaya tha

Nupur: she chuckled ..asa kyun boloa aunty ko, she cares

Mayank: janta hoon

Nupur: aha now u go….

Mayank: okay baba ja raha hoon…byes..take care…

Nupur: mayank…..he turned around at door….kal aao gay na…..he smiled n nooded in yes…n left

She kept looking at his lost figure, lost in her thoughts

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
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awesome update Fiza.

just loved it ... very nice update.😊

wah wah ... kya topics hai assignment ka ... love n brkups ...lol🤣

ye professor bhi kafi romantic hai ...🤣

ummm ... defination of love ... L > lake of tears, O > ocen of sorrows, V > vally of death, E > end of life ... so simple na ... LOL🤣

like MM n MF ... they r so nice ... made for each other ...⭐️

love the way shilpa aunty solved their problem ... so ab dekhna hai kya hota hai .. ... n iss pyar ki suruwat ho chuka hai🥳

m so happy🥳

waiting for next update😊

continue soon

love ya🤗



Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Awesome update API...
i loved it...
n ohhh-hooo meri API n dis naughtyness han!!!😉
i loved dat...
wah wah!!!kya assingment diya hain...By God!!!😳
n Riya wali toh aur bhi best hain wid personal experience han!!!😉😆😆
i jst loved dat lodsss...
n han it was also painful...
i was actuallly saying...YA ALLAH!!!
wen she fell...
i m loving dis lodsss...
love U API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: n han!!! u r busy issliye update! update!!! kehke tang nhi kar rahi bt i want a "LOOONNNGGG" update of "WWU" n "GMYH" jab ap update karogi ok!!!! bhulna nhi lambaaa saaa...😳
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
nice one,...
descent topic😆...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
its really very very beautiful.
Thnx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

It ws soo cute..

First toh love-break ups topic phir suggestion manhi bhi toh mayank ki parents se...kya baat hai...

Aww poor nupur...she must be in too much pain...but mayank did manage all so perfectly...a true frnd he is...

Lovely update...

Loved it loads..Cont soon dii...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
lovely updt fiza
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Just finished reading all the parts and I must say that all are
awesomely fantastic di...👏👏
Loved everything starting from Mayur's nok jhonk and then
the way u proceeding is too Mayurish and that is the best!

Nupur is so nupur type and mayank is so mayankish..kitabi keeda😛

coming to this update..it was cute...
and the asgt topic is too good..Love and breakups😆
kya di MJHT ko bhi peeche chod diya...aise romantic topics asgt me
milne lage to kya baat hai😆

Anyways loved it.
Cont soon.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
aww luvedd the update
soo touching and beautifull
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Posted: 13 years ago

waooo...

its awesum... di lagta hai hai professor kuch zyada hi romantic person hai.. issiliye toh itna romantic topic diya... n mayur were toh like ???
😆
awww my poor nupur ki finger dislocate ho gyi...
kitna dard hua tha usse..
bt koi nhi mayank hai na sambhalne ke liye...
loved it
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u...
Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago

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