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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
amazing update...
do cnt soon...
lyk d way u hav potrayed d characters...go on
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
amazing update
pls di don't seprate sajan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmm great and intresting update hope to read more soon and hop to see u back too may god help u
as for ur update the wedding scene was rocking and then the bidai scene was really emotional and then at home sajan was cute and sweet while mayur uff koi ek bhi kahmoash nai hu sakta ek ka bbd ek taunt marta hai and then the table scene was gud i understand gunji it is always like hum apna bhai behano koa jitna chahe boal dah par jb koi dusra boalta hai hamesa bura lagta hai and the way mayu talk it was obvious kisi bhi new person koa bura laga ghaand i think mayur tu larta larta ek dusra sah pyaar kar bahtan gha per sajan kii difference ki waja ban jayi gha and as for ur question abi tak mujha sajan kah relation as for them its is love marriage tu woa ek dusra kah sath understndin mai hai so their are more mature kyu kah woa ek dusra koa explain kar pah raha hai when gunji was angry he make her better and in the lst she also understand that he is there for her while mayur kah tu abbi situation he different hai and first i was also tinking tm nah sajan koa bara kyu dikhaya woa kahi sah bhi mayur sah bare nai dikh tah in both girls and boys as well as couple bt now as u explain its becuz of their character bt its really a intresting track
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice update.

so interestomg

plz update soon

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
hope that u continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally I am back very soon but unexpected

But dont expect me to update my ffs now i need time I will update soon

till then

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys atlast I am back with update baaki sab bhi jald update karoongi sorry this update is small next time sure big update hope you like it

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part6

Nupur goes inside shashi sees her and shrieks her name in happiness shobha comes out. shobha kisses her forehead and hugs her

Shobha- kab se hum tum dono ki raah dekh rahe the meri gudiya rani kaisi hain tu raat ko teek se soyi ya nahin koi pareshaani toh nahin hain na kisine tujhe kuch kaha toh nahin tu chup kyun hain

N-aapke rukhenge toh bolungi na kitna questions pooch rahi hain aapko lawyer hona chahiye

Shobha-meri beti pati aur daamaad teeno lawyer hain ab main bhi join karoongi toh court kam family jyada lagga

When shobha brings mayank in conversation her smile dissapears

Shobha'sab teek toh hain na meri bachi mayank ne tujhe kuch kahaan toh nahin

N-ma mujhe in fizul baaton ke baare main koi baat nahin karni aapko jo karna hain aapne wohi kiya ab jo hoga meri kismat

Shobha-par beta

Shashi fears of earthquake sokhe interferes

Shashi-saara pyar mom ko dad ke liye kuch nahin dad ne bhi aapko miss kiya

She hugs hims he asks shobha to keep quiet

N-i missed you papa

He kisses her forehead

Shashi 'aaj subah court jaane ke liye tayyar hua tha par tere bina jaane ka mann nahin kiya

N-kal se daily mujhe pick karna

Shashi-agar main aapko pick karoonga toh mayank kya karega meri responsibility khatam ab tu uski responsibilty hain agar usne tera teek se khayal nahin rakha toh mujhe bolna main uska class loonga

N-dad aap mayank se baat karke kyun apna bp badana chahte ho kitna sarr khata hain aapko nahin pata kal raat jab se car main baiti hun tabse ab car se utarne tak non stop mujhse lad raha tha pata nahin khud ko kya samajta hain sadu naam use perfectly suit karta hain

He smiles

Shashi-tu kuch kam hain kya dono ek jaise hain mujhe toh tumhare sasuraal waalo par taras aaraha hain pata nahin unka kya haal horaha hoga

N-dad

Shashi-tum yehaan kyun khadi ho meri beti ko ab tak paani bhi nahin di

Shobha-abhi laayi

N-mom aap rukhiye agar mujhe kuch chahiye toh main khud jaakar leloongi shaadi hone ka yeh matlab nahin ki main apne ghar main guest ban jao aap yehaan baitiye aur mujhse baatein kijiye

Shashi-tu todhi der aaraam kar baad main baat karenge

N-dad maine koi travelling karke nahin aayi hun mujhe aap logo ke saath thodi der toh baitne do

Gunji comes inside and shouts nupurs name.three of them turn to her

Shoba-tu bhi aagayi mujhe toh lagaa dono saath main aayenge

G-maine bhi yehi socha par madam ka toh apne pati ke saath aane ka mann tha isiliye bina bole chali aayi

Shobha-yeh sahi hi hain na beta

G-kahaan se sahi hain mom us ladke ko iski zara bhi parvah nahin hain phir yeh kyun uske peeche padi hain kya zaroorat thi uske saath aane ki nupur ke liye who bilkul bhi teek nahin hain usmain tameez naam ki cheez bilkul bhi nahin hain

Shoba-gunjan zabaan sambhal ke woh tumhara jiju hain

G-jiju kis haq se maa aapko pata nahin aaj usne kya kahaan

She narrates whole thing

N-di please unsab baato ko chod dijiye mujhe inke baarein main discuss nahin karna

G-kyun chod doon mujhe toh itna bura lagaa tujhe uske baaton ka zara bhi bura nahin laga

N-lag ke kya faida di mujhe kya acha lagega kya bura isse kisko kya faraq padega mere saath wohi hoga jo aap decide karenge ab bhi wohi ho raha hain

G-yeh tu kya keh rahi hain

Shashi-nupur tu apne kamre main ja

She leaves from there

Shashi-tum dono kya uske peeche padi ho tum nahin jaante nupur kitna senstive hain ab akeli bait ke royegi kisise kuch kahegi bhi nahin gunjan please undono ko thoda waqt do ek dusre ko samajne ke liye bahut jald sab teek hoga

G-mujhe nahin lagta dad maanti hun mayank ke saath jo hua usse woh bahut naaraz hain par iska matlab yeh nahin ki woh hum sab ka gussa nupur pe nikale

Shashi 'beta hum gussa unhi par hote hain jin par hum apna haq samajte hain mayank jo ab usse itna lad raha hain wohi ek din hum sab se jyada usse pyar karega

G-kya yeh ho payega

Shashi- zaroor hoga(she hugs him)

In hospial shashank sees sam tensed so he calls sam to cabin

S-may I come in sir

Shashank-maine apne bete ko bulaya yehaan ke intern ko nahin

He smiles and sits on chair

S-acha yeh bataiye achanak aapko aapke bete ki yaad kaise aayi

Shashank-shaadhi ke dusre din hi bete ko pareshan dekhkar bulaana pada kya hua

S-kuch nahin dad takaan ki wajah se

Shashank- ek toh main tumhara dad hun dusra main bhi doctor hun mujhse jooth bol raha hain

S-dad who (he narrates whole story) mujhe darr hain kahin gunjan mayank se kuch ulta seeda na kahe

Shashank-kyun nahin kahegi gunjan nupur ki behan hain upar se mayank ki bhabhi use pura hak hain mayank ko kuch bhi kehna ka

S-dad aap bhi uski tarah baat kar rahe hain mayankne jo kahaan gusse main kahaan

Shashank-toh kya sam agar koi gusse main tumhare bhai ko kuch kahega toh bardaash karega kya nupur uski behen hain mayank ke galti hone ke bavjud tu uski support kar raha hain toh gunjan ka nupur ko support karna kyun galat hain sam tum dono in sab baaton se jitna dur rahoge utna hi acha hain tum dono ke liye baad main yeh na ho tum undono ko zindagi bar khoste raho tum dono ke beech main aane ke liye mayank aur nupur hamaari responsibility hain hum hain unka acha bura sochne ke liye tum dono insab main mat pado

S'par dad

Shashank-please sam

Sam leaves shashank calls shilpa and informs about all this shilpa calls shobha and apologises for mayanks misbehaviour

Shobha bursts on gunjan for fighting with sam she takes promise from gunjan to stay away from mayur matter

In evening sam picks gunjan both were silent in car they want to stay away fom all this but their love for their siblings is making them uncomfortable both were waiting for the other to start

S-aaj sab tumhare baare main pooch rahe the

G-sab matlab

S-hospital ki staff I think who humein kuch surprise dena chahte hain

G-zaroor rahul ka plan hoga suprises dene main number 1 hain

S-mujhse bhi acha

G- sam (he winks she catches his hand)sorry

S-sorry kisliye

G-maine subah kuch jyada hi badtameezi se baat ki

S-gunjan please main unsab ke baare main koi baat karna nahin chahta I think humein sab ki chod ke ek dusre ke baare main sochna chahiye kal hi shaadhi hui hain aur aaj

G-saari galti meri hi hain

S-tumhari koi galti nahin hain haalat hi aise hain insab ka ek hi solution hain hamara honeymoon

G-sam (she blushes)

S-i am serious main tumhein aisi jagah lejaana chahta hun jahaan tum aur mere alawa koi nahin ho I think we need to spend time with each other kya tum mere saath chalogi

He forwards his hand

G-tum jahaan lejaoge wahaan chaloongi

S-i love you

She hugs him

G-i too

Nupur was hell irritated with all the nonsense and she knows mayank was responsible for all this

N-mayank gaadi rokho

M-main tumhein driver dikh raha hun main nahin rokhne waala already bahut late ho gaya hain

N-(in raised voice)I said stop the car dammit

He stops the car with a jerk

M-tum khud ko samajti kya ho shaitaani ki bhi had hoti hain

N-apne gatiya mazak karo tum tumhein andaaza bhi hain insab ke wajah se ghar pe kya hua sirf tumhari wajah se di aur jeeju ki ladai hui

M-maine tumhare di se nahin ka haan tha ladne ke liye tumhari family main problem hain toh koi kya kar sakta hain

N-mayank stop it who tumhari bhabhi hain tameez se baat karo aaj tak tumhare jitna badtameez insaan nahin dekha pehle to tum aise nahin the par ab ji toh kar raha hain tappad maroon waise atleast tum hosh main aaoge

M-rokha kisne continue tum sab ke liye main putla hun na jise jo jaise chahe nachata hain agar nahin maani toh maar ke teek karoge mere ghar main meri value hain aur insab ki wajah tum ho tumhare wajah se meri family mujhe boj samajti hain unhone sirf tumhare family ke khushi ke liye meri life barbaad ki tumhara kya hain roke sab ka muh band karroge aur har koi mere peeche padta hain tum ho hi aisi koi tumhein bare nahin kar sakta isiliye tumhara peecha chudaane ke liye tumhein meri gale main baanda hain you are just digustin tum kisike laayak nahin ho

He was blabbering she vanishes he searches for her and finds her sitting on bench hiding her face in palms and sobbing

He was about to go near her

N-wohi rukho don't dare to touch me tum khud ko samajte kya ho tum meri buraai kar rahe ho khud ko dekha tumhare parents ke liye tun musibat se jyada kuch nahin ho tumhari wajah se unhein sab ke saamne sharminda hona pad raha hain tumhari wajah se koi khush nahin reh sakta pehle apne parents ab apne bhai ke life ke saath khel rahe ho

M-ek aur lafz nahin main yehaan tumhare bakwaas sunne nahin aaya hun tum jiyo ya maro mujhe koi faraq nahin padne waala par ab tum mere saath ghar nahin pahunchi toh sab mujhe nahin chodenge tum seedi tarah se mere saath aao toh acha hain warna jabardasti uta ke lejaana padega

Both were frustated they don't know what was their destiny what was happening with them they were dying every moment with pain but cant share with anyone one one showing in form of tears other in form of anger

She goes with him they have silently and reach their room

N-main sofa pe sojaongi

M-thanks for the help

She sleeps hugging her parents photo she cries for sometime and falls asleep

He goes and sleeps on the bed but was unable to sleep he goes to balcony and sits on chair hides his face in palms and tries to cool himself but his mind was not in his hand it is not allowing him to sleep he was dying every second becoz of the pain he sleps in that position only

Precap '😕

part7

Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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aww bichare mayur
nice part
hope mayur get in good terms soon at least friendship to hojaye dono mein
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
loved it lodsss...
good to see u back here...
love ya...🤗

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