Os i want to see snow fall (completed at pg 1

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Akash :Di pelase

Anajli:sorry

Akash : why you all are so boreing ?

Arnav: kya huwa

Akash: kuch nahi

Arnav: bolo to

Akash: Khushi ji ki wish ha snow fall dekhna ki

Arnav:so

Akash: so kuch nahi

Arnav: i can arrange snow fall here

Akash; had a laughter " bhai snow fall , how you will arrange here"

Arnav: oh sorry sorry i didnot listen correctly.

Akash: i am asking DI to come with us to Manali but she is saying no

Arnav: then you guys go your self.

Akash: leave it

Arnav: problem kya ha

Akash: aap nahi samjha ga.

Arnav:Akash do you think i am that dumb ?

Akash: no bhai

Arnav: then:

Akash: khushi ji needs company if i and payal he paused

Arnav: take some one

Akash: saw Lakshmi passing by " Lakshmi ji will you give company to Khushi ji

Lakshmi : maaa maaa

Akash: oh we got a partner for Khushi ji ...

Arnav: just smirk

Akash: let me call Payal

Arnav: Akash tum khushi ka saath rah rah kar bilkul iss ki tarah ki baatian karna laga ho.

Akash: assar tou hoga na a man is know by the company he keeps .aap ka bara mein nahi pata

Arnav: what?

Akash: kuch nahi , khushi ji is right you dont look like my brother at all

Arnav : remember the telephonic conversation "when you guys want to go?"

Akash: coming weekend as it is long weekend because of Christmas

Arnav: ok i can go with you guys but dont tell khushi i am coming with you guys

Akash : you

Arnav: kya i am not better than Lakshmi

Akash you are you are...

Arnav : now go .


the weekend arrived

Khushi: Akash ji we are ready when you are coming ?

Akash:5 mins we are on our way.

Khushi: only Anjali ji is coming with us aur koi nahi aaraha

Akash: who else you want me to bring?

Khushi: just bit her lips "koi nahi"

Akash: smiled bola na

Khushi: humara dil nahi kar raha jana ka

Akash: kya

Khushi: acha aap aai hum phir aap se baat karta ha.. she just sat in front of her DM "woh bhi chalta to kitna acha hota "

Payal: kon

Khushi: nani ji

Payal: acha

Akash horn

Payal chalo

Khushi just said bye to everyone and she walk out with heavy heart.

Akash: kya huwa as she has long face

Khushi kuch nahi she open the back door and seated she placed her hand on his "aap"

Arnav: looked at her face " kya na jao " he just try to open the door

Khushi: nahi nahi hold his hand tight

Arnav: saw her face change color it was sad suddenly it lighten.

Payal" arnav ji please you come on front seat she will bother you"

Arnav: i am fine here he look at his hand which was still her hand , he just look out

there journey started .

Akash it will take 9 hours

Payal: this is all because of Khushi

Khushi: hum na kya kiya

Payal: you and your wishes ..

Akash: did you kept your warm clothes ?

Khushi: jee.

Payal:Arnav ji aap ko tang to nahi kar rahi

Arnav: no both looked at each other khushi realized she was holding his hand for last 30 mins.

Khushi: just left it started looking out . "wasie jija ji are we going on a funeral"

Akash : no

Khushi: but we have a ancient soul in the car

Arnav: what you said ?

Khushi: aap ko to kuch nahi bola , kya aap ko laga ha hum na aap ko kuch bola ha.

Payal: "khushi if you will tease him i all ask your jiju to stop car and i will throw you out, he is just going because of you"

Khushi: jiji your blood has turn white since you have wore that ring.

Payal: chup karo

Akash please please dont scold my saali.

Khushi: jiju you will throw them right

Akash look at Arnav who was looking out and smiling." right"

Khushi: pat payal shoulder. "by the way you guys are not talking , kuch nahi bola ga Arnav ji . you remember i went with him to naintial the whole journey i was talking .

Arnav: look at her she was telling them what happen in their journey. to say she is correct she use to pull his sweater to get his attention as he was buys with his lappy, and Arnav use to shake his head in yes,

time passed they stop to have refill tank

Payal: khushi you talk all lot mera sar mein daaard karwadiya ha ... aap ka bhi horaha hoga she asked Arnav

Arnav: no i am fine

Khushi: he is use to off my talking ..she just pat his shoulder.

Arnav: look at her she was just talking to Akash. who was standing next to her window

Payal: pagal ha

Arnav: ha thori se.

Khushi:kya thori se

Payal: sardi ha thori se

Arnav: smiled

Khushi: you both were saying something against me i know .. i am not talking to you both she just closed her eyes.

Payal: shukar.

Akash :started the car and they were on highway again. she started falling on side way next to the window her head use to strike again and again

Arnav look at Akash and payal they were busy in talking he just slide bit close to her and rested her head on his shoulder.she just grab his sweater

Arnav smiled he started using his lappy

Payal: turn back"khushi sach me naraz ho"

Armav: sshhh sogai ha

Payal look at her she was holding his sweater keeping her head on his shoulder."ab tang horaha ha na "

Arnav: no you just relax i am perfectly fine ..

Payal and Akash look at each other

me tried that why i just stop here . my neck ...😳 last part tomorrow if you guys comment

updated 4 things today


next part is below check


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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it..its really good..i really enjoyed reading it..from strat to unfinished end,
i was enjoying when i realized oh its ended..but its k as u have given a lot of stuff today.so ...
loved arnie's part and khushi's too..her desire of him being with her,and sadness and then sudden happiness.loved laxmi part as well.lolzzz..liked arnie and payal bond.
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there was a silence in the car as if there is no one sitting . Arnav was busy with his lappy

Akash: suddenly hit the brake "sorry sorry"

Arnav: just placed his hand on khushi shoulder to catch her "what the hell ? you cannot see."

Akash: it is foggy and my glasses .

Arnav: just pat her cheeks

Khushi: just look at his hand

Arnav: just stop the car i will drive from here you will kill us all. he looked at Khushi she was awake" your fool jiju woke you " he said to her

Khushi: when i slept ?

Payal: for last 1 and a half hour you are leaning on his shoulder

Khushi: looked at him he just softly un grip his sweater from her fist .

Arnav: i will drive now as he closed his laptop.

Khushi: just shyly look aside she just got down of car. everyone stretch their legs "jiji why you didnot wake me ? she just pat on her shoulder

Payal: Arnav bhai said not to wake you

Khushi: look at Arnav he was just wearing his jacket . she walk to him

Arnav: kya? do you want your's too? he gave her her jacket

Khushi: hum ko maaf kar da, she wore her's

Arnav: look around payal and akash was away watching the side scene"why?"

Khushi: i dont know when i slept on your shoulder

Arnav: smirk now what?

Khushi: you can punish me

Arnav: really

Khushi: yes

Arnav: ok i will but right now i have to drive ,so we reach there before its gets dark .

Khushi just walk to her side

Payal: you sit at front now .

Khushi: ok she just seated with Arnav

Payal: your lunch

Khushi: you all had

Payal: Arnav bhai didnot had.

Khushi looked at him .

he started the car .

Khushi: aap na kyun nahi khaiya

Arnav: just looked at her & picked a sandwich .she starting having her's

Khushi: jiju why you didn't told me that he is coming with us

Akash: actually Lakshmi agreed to come with us but then bhai

Khushi: buri baat aap Arnav ji ka mazaq urra raha ha

Akash : just stopped laughing.

Khushi:agar hum ko pata hota aap bhi aaiga hum aap ka leya kuch bana lata

Arnav: its ok

Khushi looked back they were asleep " aap ko jiju aur jiji saath mein acha lagta ha na"

Arnav: yes

Khushi: just look at them & smiled "aap na hota to kuch bhi na hota , hum ko pata nahi aap Pyar ka saath da ga iss tarah.

Arnav: i am not against love .

Khushi: but you do n't believe in love

Arnav: yeh bhi baat nahi ha

Khushi: phir kya baat ha

Arnav: look at her

Khushi : bola na

Arnav: just ignore her she just started looking out .

Khushi: you don't have answer as you do believe in Love bus you are scared if you will everyone will make fun of you. you will stay restless & will make the person you love restless .

Arnav: khushi

Khushi: look at that the hill top . it is covered with snow ,she pointed at a hill top, your heart is also covered like that . but i am sure one day someone will come like sun rays & melt the ice .

Arnav: just look at her

Khushi: hum ko na dekha iss tarah ,drive

Arnav: just lost in her words she was just looking out ... "Khushi am i really so bad "

Khushi: looked at him

Arnav: bolo

Khushi:nahi jo aap ko samjhta ha un ka saath nahi ha aap

Arnav: do you understand me?

Khushi: yes i can tell what you have in your mind .like right now you are thinking why i said you all that ?

Arnav: looked at her "i hope you are not having black magic classes"

Khushi: had a laughter quickly placed hand on her mouth.

Arnav" you are unbelievable Khushi"

Khushi same to you.

Arnav: shhh.

Khushi: hum aap ko aik baat bola

Arnav: ha bolo

Khushi: hum na DM se bola tha ka aap bhi chala

Arnav: why you didnot call me then?

Khushi: agar hum bolta tou aap nahi aata .

Arnav just shake his head "why you want me to come ?"

Khushi: pata nahi ..

Arnav: pata karo phir ...


there was a silence in the car. it took one more hour they reached .

Khushi: shhh as he parked car

Arnav what you are up too?

Khushi just jump out of car made two small snow balls she open back door & throw it at payal & Akash

Khushi: welcome

Arnav just looked at her Payal & Akash just woke up

Payal: Khushi ki bachi wait let me tell you

Khushi: just hide her self behind Arnav .

Payal: you get a side yeh cheating ha

Khushi: sorry he will not as he is my partner jiji jao apna un ko bolo.

Arnav just shocked at her act.as she was rotating him with her

Khushi: that why i want you to come .hide her self behind him

Payal & Akash was trying to hold her

Arnav: ask Payal to give him a snow ball she just passed him .

Khushi: you cannot catch me jiji

Arnav: just turn and rub the snow ball to her face

Khushi: just shocked

Arnav: had a laughter ..."ab bolo"

Khushi: was just stunt with open mouth "hum aap ko bataa ha roka aap " she just made with her both hand's and throw it on Arnav

Arnav: just reply her .Payal and Akash just attack her too

Khushi: yeh kya sub humhara becha pargai she was all snow snow

Arnav: bus bus bus he just hide her in his arms she will get sick .

Payal and Akash just look at them with eyes they just walk in the hotel.

Khushi: aap bhi un ka saath mil gai

Arnav: smiled at her look at her face and hairs which was all cover with snow ..he just dust it out .lets go in you will get cold.hold her hand and walked in

Akash and payal were standing with long face

Arnav: kya huwa

Akash: bhai you asked for two rooms next to each other right

Arnav: yes i categorical asked them

Akash: but they have booked two rooms one is on first floor and other is on 3

Arnav: what the let me talk to them?

Khushi look at payal

Arnav was angrily talking at the reception

akash: bhai ko tou ghusa aagaya

Khushi: wait she just walked to him"suna " hold his hand pull him aside

Arnav: i cannot let you both stay alone

Khushi: i will stay with you we have already stayed before .jiji will be with jiju

Arnav: looked at her

Khushi aap ko problem to nahi ha na

Arnav: no .

Khushi phir just dont spoil your mood chala she just took the keys and walk to payal and Akash who just brought their bags .

Khushi: jiji your room key .

Payal: what ?

Khushi: arnav ji doesn't want we stay alone at this place.

Payal: but khushi

Khushi: jiji you dont trust jiju

Payal yeh baat nahi ha

Khushi: jiji please jao iss se pehla Arnav ji ko phir ghusa aai please she just beg her

Payal just look at her .she just grab the key from her hand and walked with Akash.

Khushi: chala she just walk to the lift

Arnav followed her "give me bags'

Khushi: thek ha

arnav took it from her hand "baat suna karo "

Khushi: just look at the floor ..suddenly the lift stop with a jerk she just hold his arm

Arnav: thek ho

Khushi: yes

the door open

Arnav: to the guy"fix your lift " he just walk to the room .

Khushi: har waqat naak per ghusa rahta ha ...she walk behind him look around the room one double bed and a sofa . "thanks DM"

Arnav: look at her " kya huwa"

Khushi: kuch nahi

Arnav: change karlo then we will go out .

Khushi: woh log

Arnav: leave them alone Khusih let them enjoy , i am with you so you dont have to worry.

Khushi: ok she just taken out her dress "what should i wear?"

Arnav: look at her "kya problem ha ab "as he was sitting next to fire

Khushi : what should i wear ?jiji hotai tou hum un se poche lata

Arnav: red

Khushi: aap ko kaise pata

Arnav: i have eyes at my back now go and get ready.

Khushi: just quickly changed and came out .chala


Arnav: just look at her

Khushi: kya wore her jacket

Arnav: nothing .

Khushi just fixed her duppta and wore a woolen cap

arnav just walk out "would you like to go on chair lift ?"

Khushi: yes

Arnav: ok lets go then we will have a ride .

they walk to the place

Khushi: hum nahi jai ga as she saw it moving in air

Arnav: why

Khushi: hum ko daar lag raha ha . agar wire toot gai tou

Arnav: khushi kuch nahi hota he just pull her with him to the chair lift.

Khushi: arnav ji hum ko sach mein daar lagraha ha

Arnav: warp his arm around her as it started "now "

Khushi: look at him

Arnav: abhi sun set hoga you will enjoy that

it started

Khushi: we are in air agara yeh up side down hojai

Arnav: belt kis leya ha

Khushi: see homes how small they are looking .. she pointed towards a valley

Arnav: just look at her face she was waving as if people were looking at her.

Khushi: how it work?

Arnav: electricity

Khushi: and if electricity goes then

Arnav: khushi stop your nonsense

Khushi: hum dono yahan per stuck hojai ga ,

Arnav: look at her face

Khushi just hide her self more in his arms

Arnav: nahi hota .

suddenly it stopped

Khushi: yeh kya huwa

Arnav: look around as it was not moving

Khushi: bola na

Arnav: shhh relax just relax he taken out his cell and call akash ..

Akash picked up

Arnav: we are not in room.. the call disconnected

Khushi:kya huwa

Arnav: signal gone

Khushi: hum yahan

Arnav: ssshhh cup her face "relax relax i am with you kuch nahi hoga it will start working "

Khushi; look down it was hanging between two mountains

Arnav:see that sun set

Khushi: arnav ji it will be dark now

Arnav: sweet heart it will move relax please he just hold her hand in his and kissed it

Khushi: look at him

Arnav: it will work suddenly the heard announcement shhh

"sorry for inconvenience it will be fix in an hour "

Khushi: hour

Arnav: just shake his head."just close your eyes "

Khushi: nahi see it is getting dark and it was snowing

Arnav: hug her more tight now dont be scared ok khushi ji

Khushi: dont make fun of my jiju

Arnav: acha ji

Khushi:again you are doing it

Arnav: ji mein kya karo khushi ji aap itni darpok ha

Khushi: Arnav ji

Arnav: ji

Khushi just had a laughter

Arnav: thank GOD

Khushi: just look around

Arnav: ok tell me can any girl can fall in love with me ?

Khushi:: yes but you are very technical to handle

Arnav: what do you mean by that?

Khushi: hum aap ko samjhata ha .

Arnav: ok

Khushi: you look very proud and rude from out but if a person come close to you they will find you are totally different.

Arnav: i didnot get you?

Khushi: you care for others more than your self , you will go out of the way to help other .for eg "you came to safe me in the guest house risk your life , then you help me in babuji treatment.

Arnav: hmm

Khushi: i dont have one thing i have many things

Arnav: tum ko phir muhje se pyar kyun nahi huwa

Khushi: kya

Arnav: when i have so many things in me why you didnot fallen in love with me ?

Khushi: just didnot reply

Arnav: bolo i will not say anything

Khushi: you were in relation with La ji

Arnav: jhoot you very well know what kind of relation was that .

Khushi: hmmm

Arnav: you are in love with me Khushi

Khushi: no

Arnav:dont lie ok

Khushi: how can you say that i love you?

Arnav: your eyes say that every time you look at me , you want me around you , you can do any thing for my pleasure .like today you agreed to stay with me just not to cool me down. and you were very happy to see me in the car .

Khushi : woh tou hum

Arnav: jhoot if you will say lie in the air na this chair will fall down in the valley

Khushi: just wrap her arm around his neck " acha acha nahi jhoot bota hum bilkul nahi bolta jhoot"

Arnav: tou bolo sach

Khushi: i love you sach wala pyar

Arnav yeh sach wala pyar kya hota ha .. tighten his grip around her

Khushi: sach wala pyar in which you dont have interest , i was happy when you and La ji was getting engaged as i loved you aur woh aap kai khushi thi .

Arnav: she was not meri khushi woh tou yeh khushi ha ... kissed her shivering lips till it relaxed ... the chair started

Khushi: kya aap na hum se yeh sub bolwana ka leya tou nahi

Arnav: khushi

Khushi: hum aap ko janta ha aap kuch bhi kar sakta ha

Arnav: ha bola tha because i wanted to hear the truth.

Khushi: hum ko pata tha ... she push him away

Arnav: wait let me call them again to stop the chair

Khushi: no no

Arnav: bol jo tum na bola tha woh sach tha

Khushi: just hide her self in his arms

Arnav: i didnot asked them ok hug her back ,as i know you are scared of dark an the most imp thing i cannot see tears in your eyes "peck her .

My trip doesn't gone waste it was a nice deal said to himself ..


they reached the land

Arnav: just picked her up in his arm they were covered with snow flakes as it was snowing he shouted at the staff

Khushi: chora na because of that you she paused

Arnav: smiled and walk to hotel

Akash and Payal were walking restlessly in the hotel lobby they saw them coming

Arnav: was just looking in her eyes as he wanted to see her reaction in light .. she just shyly closed it .

Akash: bhai where were you?

Payal" khushi kya huwa bolo na?"

Arnav made her stand " iss ko pyar huwa ha" and dust her jacket

Payal:kya

Arnav: can i be your jiju ?

Payal: what?

Arnav: Akash bolo na

Akash: bhai what are you saying ?

Arnav: can i marry your saali ? hold khushi hand in his

Payal and Akash look at each other " we are scared here and you are joking"

Arnav" khushi they will not help us we have to fight our case our selves "

Payal and Akash shouted "we were worried for you both and you are cracking jokes here "

Arnav and Khushi smiled and each other and walk towards the lift ...they followed them while shouting on them...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~the end ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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loved it!!!!
it ws jst awesome!!!!
so cute...both arnav n khushi!!!!
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wow really lovely...
Akash dialogs superb and awesome os yaar thanks
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VERYYY Cute OS Pls continue 😊
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oh wow what an OS!

You are very creative seriously

but aw u are killing us by stopping here 😭
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Originally posted by: LyssaPie



oh wow what an OS!

You are very creative seriously

but aw u are killing us by stopping here 😭

i am just tired my neck is just stiff sitting for last 5 hours ...
4 updates that why i stop
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As i said beforeee amazin update again .. Update soon
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It's okay i guess we can all wait till 2mrw hehe

anyways great work

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