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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates why did sameera now come just because she is on her death bed feel bad for geet as she is so possessive for maan and updates are superb continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello no update till now😡


waiting dear ...ms.dashu update soon
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Originally posted by: vanadhi

hello no update till now😡



waiting dear ...ms.dashu update soon


dashu va😲😲...from morning am not in home so no update today..😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
i am having a heavy cough and head ache today but yet am updating just for all my crazy fan's of maaneetians...😳😳😳
i love all your comments thank you..🤗
hope you will like this update too...😃

Part 27

Part 28

He bends slightly and said don't talk any thing now take rest I will come in the morning...saying that he left

In KM geet is packing her dress in suitcase... maan seems to be lost some where

Maan she called him to choose her dress but he didn't respond so she called out his name louder and asked

Maan tell me na...Red one or white one...

Ha'haan..what you asked geet..? he questioned her..

Maan where you lost please help me in my packing na am very confused what to wear and what to take..

Haan..saying that he just pulled her dress form her box which is already packed and throw it out..

Maaa..aan she shouted again

He wake up from his thoughts with a jerk and asked kya hua geet...

She stand hardly holding her heavy stomach in one hand and came near his side by putting her hand on his shoulder she asked

maan kya hua... where you lost is there any problem?

Nothing geet am just thinking is this travel is necessary now for you in this condition?

Voh...you know the reason na maan...maa is calling me from the 5th month as its our first baby she thinks i need more care and also you know na am missing maa very badly that too in this time...I too want to spend some time with her...

he seems little bit disappointed and turned away from her..

maan.. please and I promise you that I will be back soon with in few days...

And am going in our car so don't worry I will be safe please let me go na please she made a baby face...

He accepted her pleading as he know she is adamant and she will don't change her decisions...

Before leaving KM she just kissed him on his cheeks and he is on her fore head

Bye maan going to miss you badly...

Me too geet bye take care...

After giving instructions to driver he moved little bit away from car where geet waved her hand to him as bye and car moves far away from him...

At night he didn't sleep he was lost in his thoughts and staring out side the window at a sudden he heard his phone ringing and attend it its from hospital where sameera is admitted they asked him to come soon there with out any further inquiry he went there in a rush...

She is sleeping at a glance he thought that she died went near her and try to wake her up but at a slight touch of his hands he opened her eyes and said yet am alive don't worry

At the same time doctor enter the room and told that she is very adamant to leave the hospital we all felt very difficult to handle her so only we called you...Mr.Khurna please tell her to take rest saying that he left the place..

What all these sam? why you doing like this ?

Maan can you assure me that i will live for next few months if I stay in this hospital and take bed rest

He put his head down to her question as he knew he cant assure her that...

no na..she continued that 's why am saying that i don't want this hosp environment and want to spend my last days happily...

but where you go now?

Don't know...but here I feel like am patient please take me some where were I can live happily my last days...please maan

Maan nodded yes and he took her away form the hospital..To his guest house which is away from the city in a peace full area where no traffic and no pollution it's a nice house but not big like KM but yet its a big...

a garden in the front of the house which filled with colorful flowers and the house which is small but yet luxurious she loved the house a lot and the garden especially... from the child hood she like the color full flowers and garden... which is very well known to maan so he took her to that guest house which is far away from KC and KM after enjoying the beauty of that flowers she turned towards him and asked

Maan did geet love flowers? maan looked at her surprisingly

Haan... now she is in 7th months na? how is she and baby did you take her to regular check up..Is both are fine... and keep on she is asking about geet ...which shocked maan...

She with a smile answer to his questions which he didn't ask in words but with his eyes... I know that you married to geet I seen her also once with you near KM and gather all details about her from your servants..

Maan now seen her with an irritating eyes... is she planned every thing before meeting him.

Don't doubt me maan I know what you thinking now I didn't planned any thing I was just following you for the past few days to get a chance to meet you... nothing else..

I thought you will never forgive me ever in your life as am the reason for maa papa's death she turned her face other side in guilty and tears started to roll down on her cheeks...

Yeah she is right when she rejected maan he was out of his mind and worried day and night which make his parents more ill seeing him in such conditions... as they cant able to see him like this they both left the world in peace one after the other... she is the reason for his parents death

#He is burning inside seeing her tears how I can forget every thing soon and speaking with her peacefully at a sudden thought he left the place#

At night in KM...

His phone is ringing but he is not in mood to pick up actually he didn't hear that sound he lost in his own world'

At a sudden knock of the door bring him back

Sab ji madam ji ka phone... servant enter and extend his hand to give him the cordless and left...

He took it from him and answer haan geet why you didn't call me on my phone..



Precap:

he kissed the receiver's mouth piece of the phone and said papa loves you so much and good night my little princess'

part 29

sorry for hindi mistakes..😃

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum part dear
i think sam is the cause of everything
ll be waiitng to reveal the past dear
take care

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
so sam is the main problm of jeaousy and break upetween maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan should tell about sam to geet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
maan is just being caring but i hope that does not develop any MU between maaneet
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This sam entry is goin to be a big misunderstanding between maneet... Oh god sam i'll kill u if u dont die soon...

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