LOVE STORY ch 45 END pg 32

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Hi Guys i am a silent reader. I love SHANAK i thought of writing a small story on them.This is my first attempt.some scenes may be filmy.some are original some from novels ...sorry for any of mistakes .

"LOVE STORY"



KHANAK SHARMA : A simple bubbly girl.Her world is around her family but She is Reserved when it comes to strangers.Her father MR. sharma is a business man.Her mother MRS. Vidhya Sharma a house wife loves her daughter khanak and their elder son sanjay .her brother sanjay is working with his father and is married to anjali.



SHANTANU KAPOOR: A hot handsome guy he loves to be friendly with everyone.He has lot of friends .he is mostly interested in sports like basketball and swimming and car driving.His father MR.rajiv kapoor a business man and his wife MRS. madavi kapoor .his brother akshay kapoor has his own business and he also looks after his father business and he is married to kusboo and they have a son named aryan.



Khanak and Shaan are studing in same college same class doing their final year.they are in same class but they are known only to be as class mates.she is with her friends and he is with his gang in the starting years they were busy with their studies there was tight work for all of them in final yr there main thing was project compare to theory subjects.now story starts from final yr only six months to end of college.


ch 1 - pg 1

ch 2 -pg 1

ch 3 -pg 1

ch 4- pg 2

ch 5- pg-2

ch 6- pg 3

ch 7- pg 4

ch 8- pg 4

ch 9- pg 5

ch 10- pg 5

ch 11- pg 6

ch 12- pg 6

ch 13- pg 7

ch 14- pg 8

ch 15- pg 8

ch 16- pg 9

ch 17-pg 9

ch 18 -pg 10

ch 19- pg 11

ch 20- pg 11

ch 21- pg 11

ch 22- pg 12

ch 23- pg 12

ch 24- pg 13

ch 25- pg 14

ch 26- pg 14

ch 27- pg 15

ch 28- pg 15

ch 29- pg 16

ch 30- pg 17

ch 31- pg 18

ch 32- pg 18

ch 33- pg 19

ch 34- pg 20

ch 35- pg 22

ch 36- pg 22

ch 37- pg 23

ch 38- pg 24

ch 39- pg 24

ch 40- pg 25

ch 41- pg 25

ch 42- pg 26

ch 43- pg 29

ch 44- pg 30

ch 45- pg 32
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice

seems to be interesting in fact pretty gud

update soon.
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hi guys i am not that good at writing so googled for some sorry for any mistakes

CH 1

Shaan and Khanak houses are in same area .Even they have cars they go to college by bus with their friends.It was early sunday morning , morning breeze hits khanak face. wearing a short kurtha pink colour tops with white kurtha pants.since it was early morning there were 5 to 6 people walking and jogging.khanak also walking since it was daily routine one but this time she was walking slowly thinking about yesterdays night.

sanjay and his father came from office in the evening.khanak was sitting and watching tv. anjali was in her room.father and her brother went to their respective rooms to freshen up and her mother went to make make coffe for them.Khanak father came and joined with khanak and had is coffee.


in sanjay and anjalis room
sanjay sat in the chair and started removing shoes anjali came there she placed a dried pea in his hand and said, "Want to hear something amazing? This is how small your baby is right now." His face went from confusion to joy and tears. he hugged his wife in joy.sanjay told anjali lets tell our family.she was in joy and shy.he took her hand with his walked towards hall.
in the hall every one are seated and watching tv sanjay and anjali came there sanjay said "dad" every one looked them sanjay face was with full of joy anjali was blushing .sanjay said "Miracles and magic...
dreams come true...
we're in such a whirl!every one was confused then he said
"There's a new branch on the family tree".every one understood MR and MRS sharma are very happy .sanjay and anjali took there blushings.Khanak screamed in joy she hugged them amd teased anjali.khanak was in happy mood she told her mather " mom i am going to make a sweet for bhaiya and bhabi." she said and went inside kitchen.vidhya was giving advice to her daughter in law .while khanak was in kitchen others are in the hall and talking .while she finished making sweet she was taking to them she was stopped in the track .her father was telling to them about khanak marriage many proposals are coming we have to find a proper one and finish her marriage after this six months when her college ends.on hearing this she was shocked then she composed herself and went and gave sweets to her brother and bhabi.every one had sweets and talked about baby.

later in her room at night she could not able to sleep.she was thinking about her father said.finally she concluded parents will do only good still six months there khanak dont think of it.

while thinking of this she was changed in her direction of walk she did not know it.suddenly she was bumped into someone.

Edited by niki_rbo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Niki ! :D Welcome to the RBO forum ! Or should I say thanks for speaking up :P. I'm SO glad more and more people are coming to the forum and opening up despite it being long since the show has ended :D Makes me even more prouder of RBO :D. I like the story. I can relate to it since I will be in their position next year (Woohoo the joy ! :/) Looking forward to how their relationship will start since they live in the same street and even study in the same class but still do not interact with each other much. Woah, a thought just struck me - is Khanak getting a rishta from Shaantanu's house ? Only you know that :P I'm eagerly looking forward to their first interaction ! ;D Do carry on ! I'm Ani by the way :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi friends the story will be in the point of veiw of Khanak

ch 2:


while thinking of this she was changed in her direction of walk

she did not know it.suddenly she was bumped into someone.

she was slipped about to fall pair of hands that made her to

steady. his hands are in the shoulder of khanak making her to

steady his face is very close to hers .she lifted her head to

see ,she saw a pair of eyes which was staring at her she was

mesmerized by those eyes she was also starring back. it was a

minute or two they came to realization when a birds sound

came.khanank suddenly moved from that person did not say

anything she started walking from there very fast .her walking

stopped when she went to her room.she breathed heavilly then

closed here eyes remebered what happened.the person she bumped

into was shantanu kapoor her classmate.when she closed her eyes

she saw his mesmerizing eyes.khanak hit her head "oops I didnot

say sorry to him "

remebering his face near hers that thought made her something

then khanak shook her head khanak "what am thinking" "khanak

khanak" her mom called her she then went to her mother


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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi friends

ch 3:

khanak got ready for college

she went to college there her friend jhanvi has come she is the

best friend for khanak.

khanak: hi jhanu (smilied with joy her face shows that very

clearly)
jhanvi: hey khanak whats the news u r looking show happy


khanak: jhanu come on guess it.


jhanvi:uhh.. i think u might... lost some weight

(laughing naughtly teasing her)

(*khanak gets tensed when they talk about structure .she is
chubby but not that fat she is beautifull)

khanak:urgh..(angrily)

khanak: i will not tell u


jhanvi:come on yar tell me please iam ur best buddy know



khanak:ok i will tell but..

jhanavi: but what?

khanak: since u teased me u should get me a chocolate icecream

during break


jhanvi:uff ok


khanak: i have become bhuwa jhanu( she hugged her with joy )


jhanvi: congrats man (joyfully).


jhanvi:(naughty face) waise khanak it is a happy news give me

treat u should get me butterscotch milkshake


khanak: ok baba teek hai


jhanvi: nodded with a smiling face...khanak how is bhabi convey
my regards to her.
khanak:umm..

tina:hey j and k goodmorning guys

khanak and jhanvi:hey t

(tina is one of their class mates to them she has lot boy

friends she is jovial friendly frankly speaking person with her

there are 2 to 3 girls always)


meera: hey guys


(meera is a friend to them she is in love with ranveer but
jhanvi and khanak are more thick


ranveer is the close friend of shantanu he is also in love with
meera).


behind meera their came ranveer


ranveer:good morning meera

meera:hi

tina :ranveer we r all so here.

ranveer:um shake is head hi hi hi...

(even though khanak was there she will not think about others

she will be watching things but mainly she shares with jhanvi

she only answers to questions that to short only if needed she

talks to them)


khanak all of sudden little tensed...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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1st welcome to our forum.😊

ur story is really interesting . plz continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice story plz cont.n welcm to the forum
Edited by _sweetshona_ - 13 years ago
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hi friends it may be little slow sorry guys this is my first attempt spare me till 2 updates will be like this next only real twist starts


ch: 4

khanak all of a sudden became tensed...

shaan: hey ranveer

(they both did hi fi)

shaan : said hi to others and his eyes met khanaks itmay be a 1

min or long there trance broken by aman he is a friend of shaan

and ranveer he is very good in studies aman is living in the

same street of khanak.even in the same street .khanak talks to

aman when there is any need in studies .boys gang went to their

places and khanak was in her own world



during break khanak and jhanavi went to canteen to get

milkshakes and icereams.boys gang is sitting a little far from

girls gang .khanak can see shaan even it is far wise same like

to shaan that is he can she her.

khanak: jhanu i wanted to tell u ...
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hi friends

ch: 5

khanak : jhanu i have to tell u one

jhanvi : watsup buddy

khanak:today morning when i went for walking i bumped ...

jhanvi:tell me yar(curious)

khanak:bumped in to shantanu and

jhanvi:and..

khanak:and..

jhanvi: and what man?

khanak:i didnot say sorry i walked fast and came

jhanvi starts laughing

khanak:urgh... stop it yar(angry)

jhanvi:uhh.. khanak...khanak...(laughingly)

khanak:stop it jhanu

jhanvi:uff ..ok ..ok man..dont worryman he is a cool dude he doesnt mind this

khanak:umm...

khanak felt somebody is seeing here she lifted her head and saw shaan was laughing heartly


with there gang there eyes met .khanak cheeks became red.she turned other side.

at boys gang place:

ranveer: hey shaan next class is a bored one lets go practise for our volleyball match.

shaan:ok dude

ranveer:aman we will get those class notes from u later dude

they all made hi-fi and they all went to their works.

khanak walking to her home from busstop there...


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