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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
n maan now it is revenge time majza ayega

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU

Thanks everyone for supporting my FF
i will cont writing FF OS and SS on maneet as far as u all r ready to read ...so tell me if i shd cont


of course tumhe continue karna hoga nandu
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww, lovely part...👏 ⭐️
so now a full fledged wedding...
gr8... waiting for it ...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arre continue yar.y r u askng such ques?
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Sorry cld nt like da update..error in posting! update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear...lovely update...do pm me whn u update nxt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Bechara Maan, 1 sharat jeetne ki itni badi saza?
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the updates...
missed lots of updates...
thanks for the pm...
geet's memory is back and fine...
so maan won the challenge and geet is taking her revenge for that...
very interesting...
pl cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
phooo
readd all the 5 parts togther !!
tats a great challenge and maan proved tat he is smart !!
and geet is equally smart tooo !!!
woow indian wedding , cool!!!!
really love the frendship between dev and geet
its awsum !!
poor maan is gonna have tough time without geet !!!
let see how marriage goes !!!
waiting !!
great update !!!
do conti soon !!!
loved it !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
can u believe it i reached 50 chaps ... oh gees i can't believe tat its me who wrote 50 chaps ... it wouldn't have been possi without u all so thank u very much

CHAPTER - 50

Maan woke up and found his coffee in the side table with a note ...

Main aur meera ke saath outing jaarahe hain''' so muje doondna mat''''
love
geet

MAAN : shopping ? poore din ? ye zaroor mujese badla lene ki plan banarahi hai '''''''.. Mrs.Khuranna plan toh hamare paas bhi hain kal se aap doo min bhi humse door nahi reha sakte hai

Maam got ready and went to office '''''''''.

Later maan came back after tiering day and found Daadi , geet , dev znd meera having fun talking and playing .

MAAN ( st) : main yahan itne kaam karke takke aaya hoon aur ye loog maza kar rahe hain

DAADI : maan beta aap aagaye '''''.. day kaisa ta?
MAAN : bahut saara kaam ta daadi ''..
DAADI : humare day ke baare main toh poochiye mat ''''''. Bahut maza aaya ''''.haina

Everyone had their own version of the fun filled day '''''''.. maan was irritated '''''

LATER AT DINING TABLE

MAAN : toh dev kya tum office join karne keliye tayaar ho?
DEV : office ? kyun bro?
MAAN : dev boolgaye kya I said u tat u ll join office with me
DEV : par bro ''''
MAAN : dekiye daadi kitna irresponsible hai
DAADI : dev beta maan teek keha rahe hain ''''.. u shd take care of business with maan
DEV : teek hai daadi''''. Par ek condition
MAAN : kya?
DEV : geet bhi office join karegi
GEET : main kyun?
MAAN : tum kyun nahi?
GEET : maan aap jaante hain I don't like business
MAAN : I don't want to hear any excuse geet ''''.. tum aur dev kal se office join karenge '''''''

Maan got up saying his final decision and smirked seeing geet she just gave him a glare'''''..

NEXT DAY

Geet woke up early and checked her clock it was 6 '''''''.. she called dev

GEET : good morning
DEV : itni jaldi mrng kaise hogayi
GEET : drama mat kar '''' jaldi se tayar ho jao
DEV : kahi jaa rahe kya?
GEET : boolgaya " tum dono office join karenge"
She mimicked maan's voice ''''''. Dev got up immediately'''''.

DEV : oh Damn'''' bbolgaya ta
GEET : I know isliye call kiya get ready fast'''''' breakfast at sharp 7
DEV : ohk bye
GEET : jaldi karna

Geet was already in dining table with maan while dev came there half walking half running

MAAN : dev tum 4 min late aaye ho'
DEV : than god sirf char min I thought isse zyada late honga

Dev gave hi-5 to geet'''''''..Maan gave angry glare which shut them both

MAAN : business mein I don't entertain fun and carelessness ''''.. so u both behave better''''''' office main I ll Be The MSK boolna mat '''''''.. ab chalein
GEET : breakfast
MAAN : already late hogaya ''''''. Office main karlo

Geet made a baby face and went with him''''.

OFFICE ' MAAN's CABIN

MAAN : dev tum Noida project pe kaam karoge aur wahan ke sare sites tumare zimidari hai'''..
DEV : ji bro
MAAN : main wahan koi gadbad nahi chaata'''''''. Do ur best
DEV : aap fikar mat kariye''''' I ll handle
MAAN : good '''' I trust you''''''.Adi tumhe guide karega aur tume koi bhi doubt hai toh adi ko contact karo ''''''.
DEV : ji bro'''''' ab main jaoon
MAAN : yeah bye

Geet hugged dev

GEET : all the best
DEV : sambalke geet lion ke den main akele ho
GEET : ye dialogue apne bro se bolo

Geet giggled and they came out of the hug ''''..

GEET : bye

MAAN : so geet ab tumare job allot kare
GEET : kya karoon main
MAAN : tum meri seceretary ka kaam karoge

Geet'e eyes widened in shock

GEET : kya? Main ? seceretary? Aap aise kaise bol sakte hain? For ur kind info main'''''. Main MBA garduate hoon
MAAN : toh?
GEET : wat do u mean by Toh? I deserve better job
MAAN : mrs. Khuranna agar aap ko yaad nahi hain toh main yaad dilaoon ki humare beech ek challenge ti aur main who jeetgaya
GEET : so?
MAAN : so My wish is that have a hot PERSONAL seceratory

He said stressing the word personal

GEET : this is unfair
MAAN : tumhi ne toh kaha everything is fair in love
GEET : maan phir bhi seceratory?
MAAN : main aur kuch nahi sunna chata ''''''' tum aaj se mere secretory ka kaam karogi aur waise bhi tum 24*7 mere saath rehegi toh business seekzaogi ''''''. Bahut zaldi tumhe Handa Industries ko sambhalna hoga

Geet was about to say something but maan stopped her

MAAN : so its final'''''. Tum jaake &&&& files le aoo

Geet was still there staring at him

MAAN : jaoogi ya yahi mere mooh dek kar kade rahogi

Geet went out and came back with file''''''''.. she placed it on maan's table and sat before him

GEET : ye office main saare files ek jagape kyun nahi ho sakti

Maan was looking at her''''''. Geet narrowed her eyes

MAAN : mrs.khuranna kya aap ko kisine sikaya nahi ki boss ke saamne kaise behave karte hai
GEET : boss koun hai?
MAAN : hum office main hain '''''''. Aur yahan main boss hoon tumara pati nahi'''''''' so tum ab bahar jao knock karo phir with full respect file hand over karo samje
GEET : But maan''''..
MAAN : aur haan muje maan mat bulao sir bulao

Geet walked away in anger''''''''''.. she knocked the door and entered''''''''

GEET : SIR file

Maan took the file from her with smile

MAAN : good mrs.khuranna aap bahut jaldi seekrahi hain

Geet went away giving a glare to him'''''''.

Since it was geet's first day maan didn't rouble her with lot of work yet geet was hell angry with him ''''''''.

Later in the evening Dev picked up geet from office''''''''''. Geet was angry on maan and was not ready to go with maan so maan called dev to pick her ''''''

Geet narrated the whole day's incidents to dev ''''''''' dev couldn't stop from laughing but had to control fearing her anger '''''''..

Geet went to home and started her complains to daadi who was patiently listening to her ''''''''' daadi tried to convince maan but he had answer and explanation to everything '''''''''. Finally they gave in none can oppose when maan is MSK''''''

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PRECAP : ROMACE WITH SECERETORY

sry if its short but i can't help it coz i have exams till next fri




Edited by NANDY_BRU - 13 years ago
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