~Tera Mera Pyaar ty vm pg 68 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
aaahhhaaa!!!!! Can I kill u ..!! I am so JEALOUS!! U are such a fab WRITER!!!!
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Originally posted by: roking_nidhi223

You may not recall this but the scar on your upper back is a mark from me claiming you as mine,"
gosh this line was just superb
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yes that line was splendid 😳 well written dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome one! loved the ending line
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome... loved the part...

Awww.. loved Uday the most in this part.. his entry and his announcing about their engagement..



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Eagerly waiting for the next part

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Continue super duper soon!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aree vah!!! Kya baat kya baat kya baat!!! Lol!!! Bechari manyata!!! Loves akash but forced 2 be with udayveer!! Hes soo mean yet im totally flat over him!!! Lol!!! Loved it!!!
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thanks everyone Kiara you are good too, writer gets better the more he or she writes. I used to be really bad when I first started
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here is my fourth Manveer vm, I think it goes with the current situation in this os series and the show



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=07o3tPAXKtY[/YOUTUBE]LINK=YTUBElink


Edited by adventure_gurl - 13 years ago
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Loved the song choice.. awesome VM!!!


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Beautiful VM sona :) i already commented on YT but i just have to tell you, not many songs fit manveer atm but your choice was so apt for them and then you editing. Beautiful.
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thanks Shiza, love your siggies vm and postings as well.
Please Note: Index is on page 1 first post. 4th Vm pg 21
Here is a new one

Part Ten- Dancing

He backed her into the room. He stopped near the mirror. He pulled her hair aside. He showed her the scar where he had accidently hit her when they were children. She gazed at it in wonderment. Murari never knew how she got that scar. Now Udayveer had revealed to her the truth.

He took a finger and traced it as she glared at him. She shivered with his touch on her upper back.

Manyata awakened with the alarm and the birds chirping outside her room. She had moved back into her own room after last week's mishap of a press conference. Today she would continue her lessons. Dadisa and Komal had hired tutors to educate her and teach her skills required of all rajkumaris. She had a rigorous workout then her lessons would continue after breakfast. She would have a late lunch then go review everything she had learned earlier in the day.

She was surprised that today after the stretches her trainer announced she would be learning different forms of dance in the coming days. She would be invited to events and hosting some herself once she got accustomed to all the going ons in the royal world. She knew her responsibilities would increase whenever Dadisa got her engaged to Udayveer.

The following week Udayveer returned from a series of rallies. He stopped short of the recreation room where Manyata sat reviewing lessons . She decided to practice some of the movements she had learned earlier that morning and put on the music.

Udayveer's eyes never left her figure as she danced. She seemed to be in a daze. He moved into the room slowly. He stopped short in the middle as she made her way in his direction not realizing he was in the room. She ended up twirling right into him. He caught her and helped her stand straight.

"Tum yahan kab aaye?," she inquired.

He smirked.

"When you were studying," he said.

She stiffened.

He reached over to move some hair off her face. She stepped back and grabbed a towel from the rack nearby. She had asked to be left alone earlier. Why did Udayveer show up all of a sudden?

" I though you were busy for awhile. I didn't expect you back so soon," she said.

He smiled at her and gave her firm look. She could feel him sizing her up.

"You look like you are losing some weight. It's a shame less of you to love," he hissed.

She rolled her eyes.

"Excuse me Rajkumarji. I need to freshen up before breakfast," she stated.

He stopped her.

She glared at him.

"Is this how you welcome your honewale pati dev?," he inquired.

She frowned.

" I never did accept your proposal Prince Charming," she scoffed.

He had her pressed against the wall before she knew it.

" I will propose to you one day rajkumari Manyata. It will be done in a grand manner. However for now in this moment would like to see what you have learned and if you can match up with me," he hissed.

She looked at him digusted with his demeanor.

He put on the music. He twirled her around a few times. She danced to the music the best she could and tried to stay ahead of his steps. He would pull her close whenever he felt it right. At the end of it he held by her waist and her back to his chest. She trembled slightly with the strenuous effort it had taken her to keep up and his warm breath on her neck did not help matters.

She removed his hands from her waist and sat down to catch her breath.

He took the bottle of water from the side put some on her face.

She looked at him stunned.

He simply handed her the rest and got up.

"I'll catch you later princess," he said.

She was fuming mad as she drank from the bottle anyway.

She emerged scrubbed clean and smelling of lavender. She gazed around her room. It was boring. She wanted to get rid of the curtains and repaint the whole room. She decided to give Unnati a call.

"You know Manyata I have to do a project for my interior decorating class. I will come over soon and we can decide what to do with your room," Unnati stated with glee.

"Great vaise I wanted to ask you some advice about another matter also," Manyata said.

Unnati smiled knowlingly.

"It's about Dada right? No worries you can tell me anything. I'll do my best to help you," she assured her future bhabi.

"Thanks Unnati, abhi tum jaldi aha jana,"Manyata stated.

"No worries. I think you really need another spa day," she quipped.

Manyata sighed.

" A foot massage and facial will do just fine," she said

The girls hung up.

Manyata rushed to the table. She was famished and needed to get lots done today.

She ignored his presence at the table especially after Unnati arrived. He noticed she looked refreshing with her hair damp and droplets dropping on her cheeks. He also thought she smelled nice. However he was Udayveer he would not admit this openly to her or anyone else. He didn't know what was going on with him today. Why did he feel so attracted to her?


Edited by adventure_gurl - 13 years ago

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