This Might Happen On Monday(Updted pg1)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok i cant anymore wait so heres sumthing i am writting which comes to my mind wheneveri think of monday's epicšŸ˜•

hmm ok lets start from jai entering in the roomšŸ˜‰

bani turns around to see jai with eyes full with tears,jai also sees her and goes near her and asks her "bani tum party mein se chali kyu ayi i was seraching for u"

by listening this bani just turns back not facing jai and tells him"mein to party mein hi thi magar app kisi aur ke sath the aur shayad isiliye app yeh bhulgaye honge ke koi apka party mein intazar kar raha hoga(Refering to herself)"

jai gets really surprised with this behaviour of bani and holds bani's sholders and makes her face him and says"bani i'm sorry,mein kisike bhi sath tha par abh iswaqt mein tumhare sath hu tumhare paas"

by listening what jai said bani starts crying and says"app mere sath to ho magar mere paas nahi ho, mr walia pata nahi kyu lekin mujse abh yeh doriya seh nahi jati. mein apko kisi aur ke sath nahi dekh sakti and she hugs him very tightly as if someone will snatch his jai from her😳

she cries alot as she is taking out all her pains which she had from many days jai just holds her and lets her cry then after some time bani bursts out "mr walia mein apse bohot pyaar kartihu, mein apke bager nahi ji pawungi"

jai gets shocked listening to what bani said, then bani looks at jai like as she is waititng for jai's reply

jai doesnt know what hapned to him after the words which bani said he justlooks at bani with lots of emotions and passion

then he holds bani's face and cleans bani's tears with his finger,

bani gets an unknown feelings when jai touches her face and so does jai he cant take off his eyes from bani and in other hand bani still looking at jai with the same xpression as waiting for jai's answer

finally jai asks bani as"kya tum janti ho na ke tum kya keh rahi ho bani"

and bani says' meine khud ajj hi to jaana hai ke mein apse kitna pyaar karti hu, ajj apko khone ka daar mehsoos huwa hai mujhe, ajj apko panne ka ehsaas huwa hai mujhe"

once bani finishes saying this jai couldnt control himself and had just holded bani really close to him and hugged her really tight

then jai goes really really close to bani wth very passionate look and bani beeing very shy and blushing with her eyes down then jai takes off her earrings then necklace then ok only necklace and earringsšŸ˜†

then he lifts up bani(sorry didnt have any other thing apart from jai beein around 40 still lfting banišŸ˜†)in his arms and makes her lie on bed

then lights goes off

rest on ur imaginations what u think might happned and what u think might not happen

ok so this is it

do tell me how was it😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ahhhh thats really good!!!! You should continue!!!! Its amazing!!! You are really talented!!! you didnt bore me and you arent bad at writing romantics!!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: nellie_2

ahhhh thats really good!!!! You should continue!!!! Its amazing!!! You are really talented!!! you didnt bore me and you arent bad at writing romantics!!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘

thanks dear😃

i would really like if u continue it from here😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh!!! man.........wow!!! wow!!! wow!!! tht was too good!!!!!!šŸ‘šŸ‘.........Fantastic....SuperbšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘.......i mean i cudn't even think how it wud b done.....who wud make the first move😳....wat wud they say.......wud they even ay ne thing.....i was excited n lost at the same time.....but i don't noe how u did it...........but u RULE!!!!šŸ˜›.........plzzz plzzz plzzz keep it up.....n plzzz do continue😳..........it was amazing!!!!!!.........n until Monday this is the perfect dose for me...........hehe😳😳😳

luvvvvvvvvvved ittttttttt😳

loadz n loadz of luv,

lisašŸ˜›

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks zara
and khjl
ill try to continue it
😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow really good šŸ‘
u didn't bore me! šŸ˜›
and plz continue! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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aha there u go i have updated it 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow divya...that was too good yaar šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was soo romantic divya 😳
thanx 4 sharing, i jus hope that happens

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