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Posted: 12 years ago

really very sorry for d late reply yaar...
finally d sari part n it was no less dan double wow...luved it...
arey so vegas k baad its tym for Goa...maan has become such a die hard romantic n he really planned dere HM with all d luv he has for his wifey...
" Meri Mishti mujhse kuch maange aur main na karoon….yeh kaise ho sakta hain…hmmm…bus tum hukum karti jao….main zindagi bhar ke liye tumhaara gulam hoon."...haye main marjawan maan ki in pyaari baaton p...
to finally wo din aa hi gaya jab maan apni mishti ko us ghayal kar dene wale andaaz mein dekna chahta hai...
d part where he requests her to wear it is so natural n sweet...
wow Ritz i can actually visualize d whole romantic setup n drown in la la land...totally mesmerising dear...
note ka kya kehna it was xtremely sweet n super romantic...just brilliant dear...
d whole part geet getting emotional till maan dhamkaoing her not to cry was sooo sweet...really really luved it...:-D
d dinner part was really romantic...
deir staring in each other's eyes for long was a real sweet n passionate moment n den wat went along was HOT...luved it...
d way u wrote d whole part hats off yaar...it was superb HOT n magical...luved d way maan said "Oh Mishti…since that party, you don't know how much I have fantasized about this" hehe...luved his payback finally bechare ki hasrat poori ho gai...lol...
baap re sach mein maan kitna soch k rakhta hai...luved him saying tum is kurte mein sexy lagogi...hehe...cute bit...
d last line is really beautiful yaar...
u r a lovely writer dear...n d way u describe everything is really amazing...hats off to u yaar for giving us such brilliant updates...luvya...n again sry for being late...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update di
dinner part was too romantic..loved that
sorry been so late in commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting











































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Posted: 12 years ago
I read ur message.
Thanks so much.
Ur fans are not going anywhere either.
We love ur writing.

Geet is just going off screen.
But it will always be alive in our hearts and soul

Maneet will rock forever
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Posted: 12 years ago

 

 

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Although I am little sad that my likes keep on decreasing and not even 7 pages of comments but I am too emotional right now to think about it. No more GHSP and I am going to miss it like hell. It is the only serial I have watched in last two years and now I don't even know how to fill that gap.

 

So, I am giving a real long update to all of you. It is more than double as I have combined two updates into one and I hope you enjoy these Maaneet filled moments and smile for few minutes; filling the gap our beautiful characters have left in our lives.

 

Chapter 108 – To Love a Woman

 

To really love a woman, to understand her
You gotta know her deep inside

Hear every thought, see every dream
And give her wings when she wants to fly

Then when you find yourself lying helpless in her arms
You know you really love a woman

An' when you can see your unborn children in her eyes
You know you really love a woman

So tell me have you ever really
Really, really ever loved a woman?


19th June 12:00 AM

 As the clock struck midnight, everyone pulled Maan in a bear hug, wishing him. They cut the cake and as usual by the end of it more than half was on his face. He kept one piece aside for eating later and rest was eaten up talking and laughing.

 

19th June 1:30 PM

 

Everyone left to their own rooms bidding them good night. Maan pulled her and held her to the door by placing his both hands at her side.

 

"My gift Mishti"

 

Geet noticed the glint in his eyes. "De doongi…itni jaldi kya hai….hmmm"

 

Maan removed his hand and pushed his entire self onto her, trapping her hard.

 

He bit her neck – "Abhi to bahut shauk se cake laga rahi thi na tum….ab sazaa milegi tumhein aur gift hoga woh mera"

 

Saying this Maan lifted her and threw her on the bed a little roughly. Before Geet could register anything, Maan took the cake slice he had saved and liberally rubbed it on her face, neck and cleavage.

 

Geet gulped as Maan came closer – "Ab mujhe cake khaana hai"

 

Geet moaned in pleasure as Maan licked off each and every bit of the cake from her face and neck. When he reached to her cleavage, he ripped her nighty from front. "Maan!!!"

 

But Maan was in a trance. He then pulled her br* cup down and licked her entire chest eliciting throaty sounds from Geet which neither could decipher. Very soon Maan took his gift in entirety as he collapsed onto her after satiating his inner desires.

 

19th June 9:00 AM

 

While closing his shirt buttons, Geet gave an exasperated sigh – "Maan…you have opened my hook again"

 

Maan grinned as his hand roamed her bare back inside her kurti – "Aaj mera B'day hai…mein jo chahe karunga…saying this he grabbed her for a deep kiss."

 

Geet broke gasping for breath. She slapped at his shoulders and put her hook back.

 

 "Dusht Danav ho aap…. Ji nahi aaj aapki nahi meri marzi chalegi….maine jo kehdiya so kehdiya…itna bhi nahi kar sakte aap mere liye…maine pura din plan kiya hai and you will not say no"

 

Maan – "Lekin Shona…itni planning ki kya zaroorat thi"

 

Geet – "oh Hello!!! aap ka Birthday hai….aapka pata nahi but mere liye bahut important day hai….is din aapke saath saath meri kismet bhi like di gayi thi"

 

Maan was perplexed with her logic –"lekin Geet tum to paida bhi nahi hui thi tab"

 

Geet made an irritated face – "aap na…toh I was just waiting for you to be born….samjhe….ab mujhe kuch nahi sunna…aur waise bhi kitne din ho gaye koi family outing nahi hui hai….isliye hum sab bahar jayenge..haan"

 

Maan chuckled at the excitement in her eyes. He leaned a little bit towards her and said huskily – "Family outing…haaan….waise Geet tumhein mera B'day hi mila hai yeh family outing plan karne ke liye…agar main kahoon ki main apna b'day apni nayi nayi biwi ke saath akele mein guzaarna cahta hoon toh"

 

Geet looked at his face and whacked his shoulder – "acha…lekin aapko kya farak padta hai…b'day ho ya no ho…aap to waise bhi har rat apni nayi shaadi celebrate kar leto ho"

 

Maan made an angry face – "Geet tum to aise keh rahi ho jaise you don't enjoy…ok I had put the cake on you but who went downstairs and then got that chocolate sauce upstairs and dribbled all over me…uske baad…tumne…kya kiya tha…you were lickin"

 

Geet kept her hands on her ears – "bas bas bas…ok baba….but…but….everyone want to celebrate and wish you on this day…hai na….toh family outing…..aur raat ko aap jo kahoge main karungi…lekin….lekin raat ko" Geet finished with pointing her finger at him.

 

Maan held her finger with his finger – "Oh dear wifey…ab itna sweet promise karogi to main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...last time ka promise yaad hai na"

 

Geet blushed – "Hey Babaji yeh maine kya keh diya inhe manane ke liye…Geet ab to tu gayi"

 

10:30 AM

 

First everyone travelled to chandani chowk. They walked through the winding lanes of old Delhi to a street called paranthe wali gali and had a hearty brunch of different paranthaas, chole bathure and lassi. All shared and tasted lot of varieties enjoying the old charm of traditional breakfast.

 

Raj – "I have eaten so much that I feel like I am done for the day"

 

Maan sucked his fingers clean of the pickle – "Ummm….jo bhi kaho bade pa, mazaa aa gaya…it has been a long time since we had such chatpata and yummy breakfast"

 

He leaned towards Geet - "So Madam, what's the next plan…aaj din bhar hum aapke haath mein hain"

 

He winked stressing on din bhar and Geet instinctively blushed understanding his reference.

 

12:30PM

 

From Chandani Chowk, all traveled to outskirts of Gurgaon to a water park. Maan smiled at Geet's choice.

 

Geet – "What!!! Oh come on, we will have fun"

 

Maan just shook his head as all moved inside.

 

Girls changed into swimming suits with t-shirt on top and sarongs while boys changed into swimming shorts as well.

 

Geet and Maan went together on the slides and through the water rides. Geet squealed as large waves hit her in the wave generator pool. She clung to Maan as he laughed out pulling her in his embrace. Sparks shot out as Maan's wet chest collided with Geet. She gazed in to his eyes and lost all semblance of sanity.

 

Annie – "Bhabhi…relax…please aapko yaad toh hai na hum sab bhi yahaan hain"

 

Geet blushed profusely as she started to move out but Maan just pulled her back.

 

Maan – "Shut up Annie and let me enjoy my B'day"

 

For next few hours everyone enjoyed like kids lost in a dreamland. They let go of all inhibitions and enjoyed with complete exuberance…screaming and shouting and just enjoying themselves.

 

4:30 PM

 

All were back at home and relaxing in their rooms. After such a heavy brunch and water park, everyone was exhausted so all decided to take a little siesta.

 

Geet cuddled into Maan as they embraced each other in bed. Soon both had a quick shuteye as Maan wondered what his darling wifey had planned for him next.

 

6:30 PM

 

Geet had given strict instructions to everyone to be ready by 6:30 and wear jeans. Only exception was Pari and Rahul who had convinced Geet with great difficulty to go ahead with her plan for surprising everyone. It was going to be loud and hence Pari who was now 6 months pregnant can not make it.

 

Maan descended wearing a white shirt with jeans while Geet wore a black and red shimmer top with her jeans. Both looked quite dashing and beautiful.

 

Though everyone except Maan had been on the plan for the day but this was a surprise to all. They were further shocked when they reached airport and Geet gave them tickets to Bangalore.

 

Maan complained like a child – "Geet hum Bangalore kyon jaa rahe hain"

 

Geet smiled mischievously – "Dr Khuarana, aap ko yaad hai aapne mujhe kitna tang kiya tha Honeymoon pe jaate waqt. Maine toh phir bhi aap ko jagah bata ke le jaa rahi hoon."

 

Maan pouted but to no avail. Everyone else also tried but Geet just kept quite. There were limos waiting for them when they came out at the Bangalore airport which whisked them to their destination.

 

9:00PM Bangalore

 

Maan eyes open wide with shock and he looked unbelievingly at the venue. Raj and Rishab could not control the excitement they felt after such a long time and Nisha and Juhi just entwined their arms with their husbands dreamily. Annie's jaw dropped as she held onto Geet's shoulder to steady herself.

 

Maan's voice was laden and he could only utter – "Geet!!!" lovingly.

 

Geet smiled. "Welcome guys to the Bryan Adams live concert at Bangalore" (Ok guys I think actual tour happened in Feb and it included Delhi too but taking liberty that it is in June and does not include Delhi)

 

Raj just came and hugged her. "You know we are such great fans of his and were disappointed that he is not coming to Delhi. Moreover tour was planned on Maan's B'day so could not even think of travelling and finally it slipped our mind. But Oh My God, I still can't believe it"

 

Geet grinned seeing his father jumping like a teenager. They made an entry and were escorted to VIP area in the front.

 

They screamed and shouted as the show started with "Summer of 69". Maan held Geet and Annie in his arms as they jumped up and down to the beats and sang the lyrics along.

 

Each and every song from"18 till I die" to "Everything I do"  to "Please forgive me" only increased their craziness and heartbeats.

 

Bryan Adams – "Well next song is for all the lovers out there….especially the boys who are deeply in love…so are you ready Bangalore"

 

Crowd screamed their lungs out when the song started.

 

For this one, Maan could not control himself and grabbed his Mishti in his arms and started singing along.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hq2KgzKETBw

 

 

To really love a woman, to understand her
You gotta know her deep inside

Hear every thought, see every dream
And give her wings when she wants to fly

Then when you find yourself lying helpless in her arms
You know you really love a woman

They swayed with the music lost in each other as Maan's heart sang


When you love a woman
You tell her, that she's really wanted

When you love a woman you tell her that she's the one
'Cuz she needs somebody
To tell her that it's gonna last forever

So tell me have you ever really
Really, really ever loved a woman?

Yeah

Maan bent down on his one knee and hugged her stomach


To really love a woman, let her hold you
Till you know how she needs to be touched

You've gotta breathe her, really taste her
Till you can feel her in your blood

An' when you can see your unborn children in her eyes
You know you really love a woman


When you love a woman
You tell her that she's really wanted
When you love a woman you tell her that she's the one
'Cuz she needs somebody
To tell her that you'll always be together
So tell me have you ever really
Really, really ever loved a woman?

Maan stood up and kissed her slighty at her temple as they moved to music feeling the emotions bursting inside them


Oh
You've got to give her some faith, hold her tight
A little tenderness, you gotta treat her right
She will be there for you, takin' good care of you
You really gotta love your woman, ya

And when you find yourself lyin' helpless in her arms
You know you really love a woman

When you love a woman
You tell her that she's really wanted
When you love a woman you tell her that she's the one
'Cuz she needs somebody
To tell her that it's gonna last forever
So tell me have you ever really
Really, really ever loved a woman?
Yeah

Just tell me have you ever really
Really, really, ever loved a woman?
Oh
Just tell me have you ever really
Really, really, ever loved a woman?

 

Concert had finished at 12:00 AM and they took a red eye flight back to Delhi. It was 2:30 AM by the time they reached back. But still everyone was buzzing with excitement due to the concert. They could still not get over the awe and thrill.

 

20th June 3:00 AM

 

Maan crushed Geet into his arms as she slipped under covers wearing a sleeveless blue nighty which reached upto her thighs. Maan caressed her legs gently as she placed her head on his chest "Maan I know I promised the night to you. But bahut late ho gaya na. I promise aap kal jo kahoge mein karoongi"

 

Maan smiled at her innocence and zeal to please him in every possible way even so late in the night. He turned so that she laid on the bed as he hovered on top of her. He moved his hand from her thigh and caressed her cheeks lovingly. "Geet tumehin pata hai aaj tumne mujhe kya kya gift kiya hai. You started with the most delicious cake I tasted along with you. Then I had devoured you into world of pleasure with chocolate sauce. My morning started with your sweet kisses followed with a brunch which took me back to my childhood."

 

Geet turned redder with his each and every word. He kissed her lovingly and then nuzzled her neck with his nose.

 

"As if that was not enough, I had the most fun at Water Park sliding and playing with you. And then you took me to a concert which I could not even dream of going because of work pressures and busy life. You fulfilled my each and every wish without even me voicing it or asking for it. What more can I even dream for hmmm"

 

He looked back at her and cupped her face – "I love you darling and there are no words to tell you how I feel to have you in my life and in my arms. Sleep tight Jaan and you have already given me beyond I could think of"

 

Saying this he grabbed her lips into a sweet good night kiss.

 

Precap – Old Memories

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Posted: 12 years ago
me 1st yippe 



in precap u said old memories does it bye any chance means u r going to bring sammera back in maaneet's life...?
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsomeawsome


loved it



loved geet surprise


truely magical


a true couple


loving...caring



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Posted: 12 years ago
awww so sweet
i really loved it di
dont have words to say how beautifully u have written
n it surely made me forget that geet has ended fr the time being n i was imagining it happening 
n loved the whole update where geet planned the whole day 
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a sweet updt!!!! one of the best till date...i loved it sooo sooo much...lov yooo...🤗