it was mentioned before somewhere in the forum - probably contained in a lot of threads LOL - but the way these two were introduced, incited into a relationship, and their follow through action.. it was weak, shallow and rushed. In fact, even a lot of "good," "hard working" and "understanding" (in essence "perfect") boys have to work a little to win the girls heart. Instead, the story was automatically there. one minute they're touring mumbai, then at a club, running away & now the actually romeo juliet stuff.
no CV would ever write a scene like this unless the track was another transient moment for Manyata's overall life. think about it, this serial isn't about who she's going to marry, but about a girl who was kidnapped and denied her birth right. How does she overcome such a huge betrayal, accept true reality, situate herself and manage royal politics? this, i believe, was the main point of DEK.
what part does udayveer play? The same part as all the other royals, allowing Manyata to recognize her destiny. Aakash is a stepping stone for Manyata's transition from a childish, sheltered, and unawares girl to a regal, influential, and important female figure within society. I still see this story (disregarding entertaining) as impactful if they can show individuals growing, learning and understanding themselves and how they feel. UV and Manyata (even JayNandini) have the ability to "grow-up" and understand themselves. ..and that process would be amazing to witness
Udne Ki Aasha
