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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

here is seventh os, take care and enjoy this everyone!😃


Seventh Os

Doctor Saab and Dadisa accompanied Udayveer as he carried Manyata up to her room.

" Aaram se," Doctor Saab said.

He did not need to say anything as Udayveer gently laid her on the bed. He hesitantly stood back as Doctor Saab started his work. He told a servant to call the lab and to get his kit.

Dadisa and Udayveer looked on for a few minutes before Komal arrived. She was concerned since she had not seen Manyata in awhile.

"Kya hua meri bacchi ko?," she exclaimed.

"Woh behosh hogi thi," Udayveer stated softly.

Doctor Saab took Udayveer aside.

"Tum inke saath the. Kuch tension wali baat huyi thi kya?( You were with her, did anything stressful come up?)

" Rajkumari has heard the truth from Murari,"Udayveer admitted.

Doctor Saab sighed.

"This girl has been through a lot. She is dehydrated and it doesn't seem like she has been taking good care of herself. We'll have to monitor her for a few days. RajMata will not want her to go to the hospital. The lab is here now. I will get some samples sent out in case. However we know the main cause of all this is stress. Aap ko unka khayal rakna hai,"

Udayveer nodded firmly.

Everyone awaited for Doctor Saab to finish his check up. The blood was drawn and sent to the lab. Downstairs the guests gradually dispersed.

" Rajkumari Manyata ko dehydration aur stress hai. We need to monitor her for a few days. She needs to eat and drink better. Her blood pressure is low, we need to encourage fluids to keep her system stabilized.

Komal and Dadisa went in first to help Manyata more comfortable. They took off her heavy jewelry and helped her change into a nightgown. She was barely awake during this.

Komal stroked her head and kissed her forehead. Dadisa caressed her cheek and hair. They tucked her in like they would a small child. She snuggled in the bedding like a small child would. They decided they would take turns that night to watch over her. Udayveer volunteered the morning. The waiting throughout the night would be tough for him. However he wanted to be the first to see her awaken. He hoped his wish would be granted.

A few hours later he entered the room to relieve Dadisa. He had gone home to shower and change. He had dozed off a few hours but he kept thinking of her. He did not know why.

Dadisa gave him a considerate look. She was proud of him.

She glanced over at Manyata.

"I have full faith that you are the one that will take care of Manyata even when I am no longer here," she stated firmly.

He shook his head.

"Dadisa don't talk like this. Even you have to live much longer to see all of your dreams for Manyata come true," Udayveer declared.

She gave him a bright smile before she exited the room. He turned towards Manyata. She was still asleep.

He sat down on the armchair beside her bed and simply gazed at her.

It was coming close to 8am when she opened her eyes she gazed around. The sun came into her eyes. She nearly gasped to upon seeing Udayveer sitting in her room so early in the day.

"Tum kab aaye?," she exclaimed.

He smiled.

"When did I leave?," he quipped.

She glanced at what she was wearing and then looked at him horrified.

"Don't tell me you stayed the whole night!"

" I never said I was here the whole night," he quipped.

She wanted to scream but felt like she had no energy.

He got concerned for her and put his hands on her shoulders. She tried to push him away but did not have enough strength.

"Manyata dekho you need to relax. Doctor Saab said you need to take it easy for a few days," Udayveer said softly.

She started to cry. He felt his heart starting to tear for the first time since he had scarred her all those years ago.

" Pehle batao, kya hua kal raat ko!," she wailed.

He grabbed her gently and put a hand on her cheek.

"Kuch aisa vasa nahin hua tha. Komal Auntie and Dadisa got you ready for bed. I didn't see anything," he assured her.

" Saachi?"

He nodded in affirmation.

She leaned against his chest. He caressed her hair. For a moment it was pure bliss as if time had stopped for them. Then they both realized their position and pulled away.

" Hatto pare. I need to freshen up," she hissed getting up.

She almost tripped but he steadied her, then she went into the washroom.

He shook his head after her.

An hour later she was dressed in a green kurti and jeans, she emerged from her room intending to head to the kitchen to grab something as everyone else must have already eaten.

A servant came with a trolley loaded with food.

"Is someone having a breakfast meeting? This is so much food," Manyata exclaimed.

" Nahin rajkumari, yeh sab aap ke liye hai. It is the order of RajMata,"

" I can't eat all this. I will eat a bit then you can take it back," she stated.

" We have to make sure you eat well so you get better," the servant insisted.

"Who will make me eat all this?," Manyata asked.

" Hum hain na," Udayveer declared stepping into her view.

She glowered at him and turned to go back in the room. Udayveer indicated for the servant to bring it in the room.


This is really good!!! Can't wait for your next os!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
the vm was fantastic.. very well edited
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks Pinky was worried if the song fit all the scenes or not. Here is another os.
Part Eight A Challenge Proclaimed

She did not like being alone with him when he had first brought her back to the palace. She did not understand why he was always out to catch her like predator goes after its prey. She was a human being for goodness sakes! What in the world was his problem?

Now she knew why. Her family had promised her to him when she was merely three years old. Now when Unnati had mentioned it and Udayveer smirked as if he had won the jackpot.

In fact that was why he was here with her trying to stuff all this food down her throat. He was eating a bit here, and there. However majority of his attention was on each morsel going in her mouth. She was flustered. Why did he always have to be around. She wanted to go out with her friends and be with Akash like she used to a few weeks ago.

Udayveer had brought this storm into her life. She could have made Murari agree to being with Akash eventually. However after everything she realized she could never have the same life again. Since she was royalty she couldn't be Monia anymore.

He snapped his fingers.

She looked to see him holding a glass of juice.

"Kya hai? Are you trying to kill me with all of this food?," she exclaimed.

"Rajkumari aise baat nahin karti," he stated.

She rolled her eyes.

" Dekho tuhme iski zaroot hai. Dadisa has entrusted me to help take care of you," he stated.

"All you want is the money in my name. If the money wasn't in my name you wouldn't give me a second look," she scoffed.

He smirked at her.

She stiffened remembering when he had caressed her when she had been tied up in the chair last week. She took the juice and drank it, while giving him a stern glare.

" You know you are first girl who swooned without me trying to impress her. Actually pata nahin kyun, mere koi charms tuhme effect nahin karte," he said with glee.

She placed the glass on the tray.

" Main tumse shaadi nahin karna chahti. Dadisa and rest of the family believe you are the right match for me but I don't think.."

Dadisa had entered the room.

Both turned to give her respect. They blessed them the same time. They glared daggers at each other.

They raised their heads.

"Ab kaisi ho Manyata?," she inquired.

" Ab main theek hoon Dadisa," she replied staring back at Udayveer.

Dadisa patted Udayveer's shoulder.

" Udayveer barely slept last night. He was only gone a few hours. He has been watching over you since early this morning. Kal raat kya hua tha tuhme kuch yaad hai?," Dadisa asked.

"Inko nahin pata Dadisa. Lekin ab yeh theek horary hain," Udayveer said with a smug look.

She stared at him shocked.

Would he tell Dadisa she had sneaked out of the party?

"Aap behosh hogayi thi. Udyaveer aap ko bauth dhan se upar leker aaya tha," Dadisa said looking pleased at Udayveer.

Manyata looked stunned.

He had carried her up last night and she had not even realized it.

Udayveer smiled slightly.

Dadisa suggested they go for a walk in the garden and then out for an outing if Manyata was up for it. She left them alone.

Manyata grabbed him by the collar.

"Don't you dare carry me again! I do not want you around me!," she snapped.

He smiled looking at her grip on his collar.

" Then why are you touching me now?," he asked.

"Yuck! You are too much," she said trying to walk away.

He grabbed her arm and pinned her against the wall.

"Choro mujhe. I will scream," she stammered.

"Yell all you want. It will just move up the wedding date. Which means Dadisa would have to announce our enagagement sooner. I know you like your freedom princess so what is it going to be?," he asked as she fidgeted.

"You will pay for this rajkumarji," she said through clenched teeth.

He cupped her chin.

She stared back at him horrified.

He wiped something off her lips and then released her.

"You had something on the corner of your mouth. Now you can go," he said.

"You really think you are something. Let's go out today. Ek din I will prove you are nor worthy of being my anything," she stammered.

He laughed.

"Woh kaise?"

"Wait and watch Mr. Charming. Even if you get your way somehow, you will never get to enjoy any of your wins. I will always be there to challenge your every move," she declared before walking away.

Edited by adventure_gurl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👍🏼 ... 👏👏👏 ...

😃😃 Yay first to read! i always wait for your oses and they are worth waiting for.. loved every scene init..!
Good job! 😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am a huge fan of your one shots and your VMs.I loved the latest VM so much.perfect song choice.Hope we get more of Uday-Manyatha scenes so that you can make more wonderful VMs.waiting for your next one shot eagerly😃


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yay you posted a new update. thanks😊
Edited by minizz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsum..!!challenge aahaaa..!!! Manya ..!! Dosent she know WHAT A MASTERBRAIN UDAY IS?
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW so manyata has challenged UV.. so loving how the story is progressing...

Loved the part.. awesome...


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Eagerly waiting for the next part'

Thanks for the pm'

Continue super duper soon!!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
The VM was fantastic..




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Posted: 13 years ago
as usual
i just love your os
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Posted: 13 years ago
Marvelous OS as usual enjoy reading it ...VM is lovely👏👏⭐️⭐️❤️❤️
Thx u 🤗
Awaiting the next update

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