Illusions of Love Part 9 pg 63 09/12 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



don't tell me Rose that this FF of urs is as filled of suspense as ur last FF...warna main abhi hospital mein ja kar ek bed book karwa rahi hoon...na jaane kab jaroorat pad jaaye...🤢

No dear its not full of suspense...par hospital ka idea achcha hai...i will also book the bed next to u and we both can relax😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: crystal-rose

Thank u so much😊...yes it is different and i hope everyone accepts this story...as its quite different than LLD.


but i wanted to read that letter😳 will we get to read them????😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awweee awesome part rose ...mee loving it... i am really very happy tat u getrid of ur depressionme 4r u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
this is really wonderful and i really love it...continue soon...and plzzz add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: honeygrape


but i wanted to read that letter😳 will we get to read them????😆

not just now...may be later😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: geetsweet

awweee awesome part rose ... mee loving it... i am really very happy tat u getrid of ur depression me 4r u...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zahra15

this is really wonderful and i really love it...continue soon...and plzzz add me to ur pm list...

Thank u dear...will sure add u to the list 😊 but will only pm if i see ur name in the like button or if u comment dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Thank u😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
Dear friends, today saw the segment of Geet's last day shooting. Feeling very sad. After today they will not be shooting for the serial anymore and we will not get our daily dose of Maaneet. We will miss Maaneet/gurti terribly. I hope we can keep the Geet serial alive in our hearts and never forget the serial as well as Maaneet
Part 2
If that happened, not only would Geet suffer their taiji's wrath, but Rajji would be in big trouble herself. Geet had a temper which scared Rajji. Rajji snatched for the letter.
Rajji tried to take the letter form Pinky's hands but pinky was too fast for her. She slipped sideways and moved a little further away form Rajji.
"Pinky mujhe who letter dede, mujhe who letter Maan ko dena hai, nahi to Geet mujhe bahut maaregi" saying this Rajji lunged at Pinky and managed to get a grip on a bit of paper, "chod Pinky, letter ko chod de" saying she pulled at the letter.
But Pinky held the letter firmly in her hand refusing to part with it, "Nahi Rajji, taiji should see this letter. It's very important."
"Do you even know what Geet will do if she finds out I have opened the letter?" Rajji tried to pull away the letter from Pinky hands.
"You are thinking of Geet but have you thought about taiji's wrath when she sees the letter, Geet is only going to get angry at you but taiji is going to kill you." Saying this Pinky hid the letter behind her back.
"That's the reason I do not want Geet to know that I have opened the letter nor do I want to show this letter to taiji" Rajji put her hands around Pinky to grab the letter from her and was successful in holding the corner of the sheet and tugged and as she struggled to take hold, Pinky loosened her hold on the letter and one sheet of the letter almost ripped in two. Hearing the ripping sound they simultaneously released the sheets they were holding.
Both girls froze and watched them flutter slowly to the ground with horror written all over their faces.
Just before it landed in dirt, one wayward sheet decided to the catch its freedom on a gust of wind and fly away. It started to lift, to twirl and to spin.
"Oye Pinky, letter ke sheets pakad, nahi to udd jayenge" suddenly Rajji was jumping, reaching, trying to snatch it back, but it danced out of her reach just as she was about to get a hold of it.
Pinky bent down to collect the rest of the sheets of letter and after collecting them she tried to seize the page which had fluttered away.
But before any of them could catch hold of it, it changed its direction and flew across the stream, falling into the water, it floated away.
Seeing this Pinky could not hold herself and burst into tears but all Rajji could do was to watch in dismay, the sheet floating away, the ink turning the paper a watery blue before it disappeared.
"Stop crying Pinky, lets search for the remaining pages" Rajji pulled herself together and yelled at the still crying pinky and before pinky could dampen the remaining sheets with her tears and her silly crying Rajji took the sheets from her fist and tried to smoothen it out.
"Page three is missing! Page three!" she glanced back towards the water, her face alive with panic.
Oh babaji, why couldn't it have been page two, with all the mushy, sappy, maudlin and over-sentimental gushing and rumblings? Maan would never have noticed it missing but page three. Page three ' was the one with the really big secret.
"What are we going to do now" Pinky asked tears still rolling down her cheek but the frequency had lessened. She stood up wiping her tears and looked at Rajji.
"I don't know Pinky, meri toh kuch samhaj me nahi aa raha hai, ab yeh adhoora letter toh uss hey nahi de sak te na, we cant give the letter to Maan like this" why o why couldn't Geet give this letter herself to Maan, Rajji was frustrated at Geet and couldn't understand why Geet had trusted Rajji to give this letter to Maan.
She turned to Pinky, her mind set, "we can't give Maan, the letter which is shambled and tattered he will come to know someone has opened and read the letter and will ask Geet about it. Geet will kill me if I tell her what I did, so I have decided we will not hand over the letter to Maan, Geet would just have to do her own dirty work and talk to him, herself."
Pinky started to sniff again, mumbling something about it all being her fault, but Rajji wasn't listening.
She was staring at the gurgling waters of the stream, "Ab ek hi rasta hai, there is only one thing we can do."
Slowly she walked towards the edge of the water, holding between thumb and forefinger, she lifted another page high and deliberately let it go. Another page followed and then the envelope. It was as if she was giving aahuti to fire. Stifling silence hovered in the air around them as if they bereaved the death of someone close. They held their breath and watched Geet's secret float away downstream.
Precap: I am coming home after 4 years.
(I know there is no Maaneet in this'..but maybe from the next update you will be getting it)
Prev. part - Part 1 pg 8 Next part - Part 3 pg 17
Edited by crystal-rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NICE ONE. GO ON. IT SEEMS LIKE U LUV CREATING SUSPENSE.WE WOULD NEVER EVER LEAVE OUR MAANEET GURTI GHSP AND OUR DEAREST GEET FORUM.KEEP IT UP DEAR.👍🏼

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