Kriyaansh FF-YOung Love NOTE(pg 150) - Page 34

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SugarCubes

aww.. poor kria baby!!😆

it was sooo hillarious!!🤣 🤣



thnk uuu🤣

Originally posted by: magical_mania

hahahahahahahaha
i cnt cntrol my laughter
kya likhti ho tum kria baby rolf
i lvd it a lot
bs aise hi jaldi jaldi upmate karte rehna



ha ha ha control mat karo..haste raho...😆😆
Thnxxx🤗

Originally posted by: kriyansh960

🤣 🤣 KRIA BABY !!! AND SURESH ANNA !!! SO CUTE !! BECHARI KRIA KITNA MAZAK UDATE HAI !!! LOVED IT !!! 🤣



yea dey r cuteee

he he kria hai hi itni funny har koi mazakh udayega..lol
thnxxx🤗

Originally posted by: perfectangel

bechari kriya baby even neha is not on her side 😆 but really awesome 😊



yea bechari..🤣

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

nice update and thank for pm lol kriya baby is angry


he he thnxxx😳

thnk u😃

Originally posted by: twilightmystery

😭😭😭sad kria

felt bad for her


ohhh dnt cry... she s a masterpiece😆😆

Originally posted by: _sana.Magic_

its mind blowing but bechari kria. I feel sad for her.



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Originally posted by: -sofiya-

OMG what an lovely update Poor kria :Ppp



thnk u honey🤗

lol


Edited by sweetsultana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Monu_

omg poor kriya,,,but lovely work!!

im falling in love with ur ff updt by updt...well done!
feeling bad 4 her..but it was sooo hilarious ki i cant help laughing
LOL...i hope next updt KriyaBaby badla legi...lol
ya phir as usual viha n rey use manaenge
continue soon dude
love yaaa


poor kriya?? nai re she s master piece😆

he he... dats awesum...dat my ff makes ppl laugh so hard
thnkkk u sooo muuch
luv u too🤗
Edited by sweetsultana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvd it...btw ek sath itni sari quoting kase krte hain???

update jldi jldi plzzz...!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SSsanasonu

SRYY!! i kno m EXTREMEEELYYY LATE 😭
but i really had the toughest xams ever dis tym !!
i m reviewing ur chapters frm 7-15

ch7- kria ke armaan n da way neha n rey pulls her leg ws hillarious 😆
poor gal ws so embarasseSD🤣!!
Ch8- btw wich song is dis?? i've neva heard dis 1 😕
Ch9-krias lyns to rey...besura gane ke saath saath bure dancer bhi ho kya...hahahaahaha 🤣
N M LIKE DYINGG TO KNO DA SECRET BEHIND REY NT DANCING ????😲
CH10-vicky:moti toh mujhe patak patak ke maregi...🤣
kria:(to moti)ek punch marungi toh hawa meiud jayegi,.,..i mEAN THE LIL-CUTIE-N ALMOT SKINNY KRIA IS RETIRTING DIS THREAT.,...hahahhaaa
rey:(to vicky) meri ankhon mei toh aansu a gayeseeing ur dard...haehehhe
CH12- aww1!!! dat hug ws sooo cuteee ❤️__❤️ LOVELY KRAIYANSHHH!!
CH14-vicky(to rey) tu bhi pagal,woh bhi ragal..WAHH GR8 PAIR...hahahaa

rey ka vicky ko tchr ke saamne fasana ws sooo wow!! i luvvv u rey n dat chaddi-baddi scene ws soo sweet!! love u for dat1!!🤗

neha craking:kaidi lag rahe hain , vicky on dis:haha,nt fun ny...hahaha dey r cute 😍


AGAR KISI KO PHOOT-pHOOT KE HASNA HONA TOH YH FF ZAROOORRR PADHNA CHAHIYE...hhaha

love ur humor dear 👏

GR8 work!!!!





Gosh kya review diya...ek dum jhakkkasss...I cant stop laughing🤣
ek dum dhaasu comment... itna lamba dekhke i ws shockd..itni din ki kasar nikal di sanu tune🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

And dat punching dialogue...Agar kisiko phut phut k hasna ho toh yeh FF padhe🤣🤣🤣Itni tareefff
yaar yeh dekhke mai phut phut k hasne lagi🤣🤣
maine tera yeh comment 3 baar padha... i luv it a lot...🤗
❤️I luv uuu... muahhh❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago

Kria: pata nahi kya samajte hai khud ko.. Mera mazakh banate rehte hai...

Rey: chalo na yaar wahan chalte hai...shayad humne kuch zyada kardiya...

vicky: haan bechari..kaise mu fulaye gol gappe ki tarah baithi hai... He he

Rey: chup re.. smiles...

Neha: ha ha...haan meri gol gappa...

Vicky: gusse me kitni cute lagti hai na

Rey: Jealous... Dude...?

Vicky: mai uski tareef nhi kr skta

Neha: kyu vicky kya hua

Rey: nthng... Vicky zyada blne laga hai...mai jata hu uske paas

Neha: rey...tum uska gussa nahi jante...mat jao..

Vicky: kyu..?? Gusse me wo aur pagla jati hai kya?

Neha: kuch b kar deti hai pagal

Rey: kuch nai karegi... Mai jata hu

Neha: rey suno

Vicky: rey mat ja rey..arrey rey...

Neha: ye to gaya kaam se

Vicky: kuch nahi hoga...tum rey ko nhi janti... U knw... himmat chahiye uske saath rehne me...

Neha: accha... Aisa kyu

Vicky: u knw wo khadoos hai

Neha: haan pata hai

Vicky: wo bht accha hai... He s best..par gussewala hai... Uska gussa jhelna bht mushkil hai

Neha: really...??? tum darte ho usse

Vicky: mai kyu darun... ha...? Wo mujhse darta hai

Neha: accha...wah...u r great...

Vicky: thnxx:D

Neha: mera matlab tha fekne me... Ha ha

Vicky: Huh...stupid

Neha: wat??? Angrily..Tumne mujhe stupid kaha?

Vicky: Nahi...tumhare joke ko stupid kaha...

Neha: ... oh no rey kria k paas chala gaya...

Vicky: maza ayega...dono k beech yudh hoga...

Neha: shut up

Vicky: i wont baby

Neha: mujhe baby mat bulao

Vicky: haan wo to kria hai... Ha ha

Neha: emmm...tum chup chap baithne ka kya loge?

Vicky: tum kya dogi?

Neha: *irritated* shut uppp...

Vicky: ha ha ha

Rey: kria... Kya mai yaha baith skta hu

Kria stares @ rey...

Kria: aapse kaha tha na yahan mat aana

Rey: haan par tum yahan akeli baithi ho

Kria: haan duniya me sab akele hi aate hai aur akele hi chale jate hai...aapko nahi pata

Rey: wat??

Kria: kuch nahi..aap jaiye yahan se...

Rey sits..Main nahi jaunga...

Neha: hume wahan jana chahiye...

Vicky: tum jao...mai yahi thik hu...

Neha: kaise dost ho tum...hame rey ko support krna chahiye kria ko mana ne me...aur tum ho ki?...chey

Vicky: tumhe aag me kudne ka shauk hai to kudo...mai kyu aaun...mai hamesha safe side pe rehna prefer krta hu

Neha: tum nahi aaoge?

Vicky: nahi... Aur tumhare chehre se saaf dikh raha hai k tumhe waha jne me darr lag raha hai..chup chap baith jao...

Neha: ok..

Kria: aap uthiye yahan se... aur jaiye un do langooron k paas...

Rey: smiles...kria hum bas mazakh kar rahe the...

Kria: par mai mazakh nhi kar rahi... And she starts drinking her orange juice

Rey: kria... Gussa chodo... Plzz..kria it ws jst a joke...

Kria: plzzz rey..leave...

Rey takes hr juice...and says.. jab tak tum nahi manogi mai aise hi tumhare paas baitha rahunga

Kria gets irritated and in a fit of rage she throws orange juice on rey

Vicky; oh shit...

Neha: oh no...

Kria: OMG maine kya krdiya...aapki shirt pe... M sry rey gusse me..galti se hogaya... She takes tissue and as she tries 2 wipe...rey hold kria's hand and stares @ her angrily...his eyes turn red...he moves kria's hand and leaves...

Kria: rey...rey...suniye..plzz.reyy..

Vicky: wat did u do? Tumne uspe juice feka... gosh...

Neha: ohh no ab kya hoga vicky...rey to gusse me chala gaya...

Vicky: kuch nhi ho skta... Kria tmhe aisa nhi karna chahiye tha

Neha: tum usko kya bol rahe ho... Usne kaha tha kya rey ko uske paas jane k liye...

Vicky: wat do u mean..wo bas mana ne gaya tha

Neha: maine to mana kiya tha na

Kria: neha sab mri galti hai.. maine hi zyada kardiya... Vicky plzz tum rey ko samjhao..

Vicky: bht mushkil hai... Abhi jaunga to wo sunega bhi nahi... 15 mint baad jata hu

Neha: 15 mint me wo thik hojayega...

Vicky: nahi...bas meri baat sunega...

Kria: maan jayega?

Vicky: nahi sirf sunega...manega aisi koi guarantee nhi hai...

Neha: ehhh...kria tu bhi kis pagal se baat kar rahi hai..chal humlog jake sry blte hai rey ko...

Vicky: haan jao... Jao... Uska chehra to dekha hga kria tumne..gusse se kaise laal hogaya tha...

Kria: haan...vicky...kya karein fir

Vicky: wait karte hai 15 mint

Neha: Urggghhh kya 15 mint laga rakha hai

Kria: neha chup baithna...vicky to rey ko acche se jaanta hai...

Vicky: suna tumne neha..ab chup raho

Neha: aise baithe rahenge kya ab

Kria: aur kar b kya skte hai

Vicky: haan...kria tumhe juice fekne ka itna hi mann tha to mujhpe fekti yaar... Mai mind nai karta...

Neha: kria..abhi k abhi tu ispe juice fekde..

Vicky to neha mai fekun tumpe

Kria: guyzzz stop it... Mujhe sochne do...


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Posted: 13 years ago
wao it was very nice chapter 👏
loved it very much😊
neha and vicky's fight was superb👍🏼
bhaut maza aaya🤣
rey ko itna gussa aata hai😲
bechari kriya😆

please update next part soon waiting eagerly for it😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh no... rey angry but i dnt thnk he will remain angry with kria for long..he cant be
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Posted: 13 years ago
Neha and vicky are so cutee 🤣
awesome update. thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww soo CUTE !!! REY KO GHUSSA AGAYA !!! loved it !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
bechara rey aska kya hoga 😕

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