i am so hurt dears😭...my like just fell like anything...and comments...usski baathi mat karo...😭...just a page comments!!!😭 ..
i think people are losing interest in my ff...
one side ghsp is coming to an end news and above it...this...may be people no more want to read ff's on maaneet...😭...i m so hurt guys...
i m thinking of ending my both ff's...
now for it...if u people really want to read my ff plz let me know and if want...i will surely continue more...
i have a lot more story in this ff...but as i m feeling that u people lost ur interest i am thinking of ending it...or else i have so much in my mind to pen it down for u...
so frnds know it all ur wish...ur likes and ur comments...
plzzz silent readers...atleast now comment for this ff...if u want me to continue...
Part 59
Yash and misha went to the stage along with others. They both exchanged the rings and all clapped.
The party was in full swing everyone were busy in chatting with some one or the other. That's went geet received a call.
"hello" geet said.
"geet" came the voice from other side.
"meera?" geet asked confusingly.
"haan geet" meera said.
"meera where are u? why are u calling me?" geet asked looking around for her.
"geet I came out to get some things…but I was stuck here….actually I am at….do u remember the park near our school???...geet plz yaar its becoming late….come and pick me…..i will be waiting okay……plz come quick okay….bye geet…..i will be waiting….." meera quickly cut the call not listening to geet.
Geet quickly ran towards the exit and drove out in her car.
Meera stood at the entrance looking at the car driving out of the gates.
Geet went to the park and stopped the car in front of it.
She came out and looked around but found no one. She took few steps and again looked around but no one was there. the whole road is deserted. She took the mobile to call meera its 11.30. she called meera but her phone came switched off.
She turned to leave but when she turned around she saw a note pasted on her car window….
Geet,
Don't worry u came to the correct place….
Just do as I say…..dont panick…..u r safe…..remember its ur friend who called u and asked u to come…..so u r safe….
Walk into the park infront of u geet…come on….
I m waiting for u geet……come geet…..
Ur love.
Geet dint know what to do. She read the note again and again….yes whoever it is they are right….its her friend meera who called her and asked her to come here…so there is nothing to fear….but still she is confused and scared….whether to go in or not.
Finally she made up her mind and walked forward.
She entered into the park and the park was totally dark. As she kept her first foot in…… the whole place... turned from dark to bright…..every where the trees are decorated by lights and color balls, different kinds of flowers etc……the bench are covered with different color decorative items, roses, orchids and candels…..
She looked at the ground and found a path with rose petals leading her to her destiny.
She walked few steps forward and that's when she found another note on a small plant which is near the path way….
She took the note which is in another color now along with a rose….
Geet,
I know geet u will come….welcome geet….
Did u like the decorations……I m not that romantic types like SRK geet…..so plz adjust with this……I know I m bad in these things but a small hope that u will like it……..
Did u like it geet?
Come geet….take another step…..
Waise are u wondering who is this deewana?
Well u know this deewana…..i wont say my name until u reach me……and after u reach me u wont ask my name….
So until then I will give u some clues and u think who I m….
The first clue is……u know me very well……
U know me from less time…but I know u from ur childhood..
Think geet…think
Ahhh….dont forget to take another step
Ur love.
Geet read it and started thinking….he knows me from childhood? But I know him only few days back?...yeh kaun hai?
Geet took another few steps and saw another note on a bench. She literally ran to the bench and took the note in her hand.
Geet,
Are u that desperate to meet me? Don't run geet…u may get hurt yourself….afterall u r wearing high heels na….
Waise geet dint u find who I am?...
May I give u another clue?
U are so cute when u node ur head like that…like a small child….hayye how much I love it…..
So here is the second clue…..
I m related to this park…..u know me here and u also left me here…
Think geet…..
Take another step….
Waiting for u….more desperate than u…
Ur love.
Geet smiled and took another step thinking…she is unable to relate anything…..
She took few more steps and the path way took a turn…now she is moving to right side of the park. As soon as she turned right and took few steps…she found countless rose plants…..all red one side and other side white and red as pairs tied together…..but the red count is more….
She instantly fell in love with the roses….
She took another few steps and saw another note there.
Geet,
Did u like those roses?
Those roses…did u remember???….from the day I met u….
I gave u a rose daily and after u left I planted a rose daily
So do u know how many are there?
The count of the red roses at ur left side is 2190…..
And the count of red and white pair roses is 364….
Do u know what they indicate??
That's the next clue geet…..
2190 are the days I spent without seeing u…..from the day u left me….and till the day I saw u
Then the pairs….are 364….from the day I again saw u till today….
Hmm I must still plant the pair of today's….literally 2mmorrows…coz it only 15 mins more for the next day to begin….and I want to plant it along with u….
One more thing geet…..
The day I saw u first….i mean in our childhood…..
And the day u left me……..
And the day I again saw u back after long time…years actually…
Are the same…..
That's today…..after 12.00 I mean…ha ha
Come on geet….come on
Ur love.
Geet went towards the roses and caressed them and walked forward. She is so touched by his love…but still she cant get anything.
She saw another note…..
Geet,
Here take a look at the gift also…
Geet looked at the gift that lay on the bench. She opened it quickly and shocked to see what lay infront of her eyes.
It's an old book….actually it HER book….her chemistry notes….which she lost in her 10th class. And she found another note book with some other writing but with the same matter. She took it and preserved it…..
She resumed to read the letter…..
Yes geet
Its UR book….
Yes its me who stole ur book and also its me who wrote u a new book…..
Come on geet….dont stop…walk….
Come to me….
I m waiting…
Ur love.
Now geet started to understand whats happening…..
She took another few steps and found there bunch of papers and another note….
Geet took the papers in her hand and they are the letters…..
Letters with her hand writing…..the letters she wrote to….
Her….her MR.Stranger…..
Geet,
Haan geet u r right.
That's me….ur MR.stranger…
Who gave u a rose daily….
Who stole ur book……
Who gave u a new book…..
Who shared his deepest secrets with u….
And who preserved ur deepest secrets deep inside his heart…..
Who wrote u letters…..
And to who u wrote replies……
Who stood behind the tree and observed u daily….
Who saw ur smile….
Who saw ur laughter…..
Who saw ur anger…..
Who saw ur frown…..
Who saw ur cry….
Who saw ur pain….
Who saw ur happiness….
Who saw ur innocence…..
Who saw ur dare…..
Who saw ur fear…..
Yes its me..ur Mr. Stranger….waiting to meet u…to tell u another deepest secret of mine….
Come geet
Ur love,
Ur Mr.stranger.
Geet instant thought went to maan. She understood what this mr.stranger meant of his deepest secret….but she dint understand what made her to think about maan… she dint understand whether to step forward and meet him or to run back….she dint even understand what feelings she had for maan….whether she ever have feelings for him….but when he went to mumbia for 2 days…she is unable to stand in the office….without seeing him…..she missed him terribly….what ever she did….where ever she go her thoughts always filled by him…..its he covered her heart and soul….
She slowly understood she liked him…..may be she loved him…the days she spent with him and the night she dreamed about him……its he always in her thoughts…..
She finally decided to meet this guy and if he propose her she is going to tell him that she loves some one else and sorry for him.
With determination she took few more steps and there she saw what she expected in an unexpected way…..
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there on the grass was written 'I love you geet' with candles and roses placed around them in a heart shape….the clock clicked 12.00 inviting a new day.
She was mesmerized by them…. She looked around and there she found a well built man coming out of the darkness.
She instantly started to speak….
" dekho…its nice u did this all for me ….par mein kisis aur se pyaar….." her words trailed off when she saw the person enter the light…..
She gasped looking at him….the only thing that came out of her mouth is "maan"
She stood there stupefied…..maan slowly came to her with a smile and put his hand on her shoulder. This made her come out of the shock but still she kept looking at him in awe….
She never in her wildest dreams thought that maan is her mr.stranger…..and never thought that maan is going to propose her in this way…itni romantic way….she still cant decide this is a dream or is this happening in reality.
The thought itself brought the red color to her cheeks.
"geet…." He said bringing her back to the real world.
"this is real geet…trust me…..u r not dreaming" maan said.
Geet is still looking at him in awe.
"so geet u thought to reject me…ur Mr.Stranger….and what u said…haan u love someone right?" maan chuckled.
Geet blushed.
"so whom do u love geet?" maan asked making her blush more.
For few seconds there is silence. She dint hear maan so she looked up to find him on his knees….and one hand towards her holding a rose and another hand at his back.
"geet I love u " maan said. Geet looked into his eyes which were filled with love….pure love towards her.
"geet the day I saw u nearly 12 years back….thats one of the days when I sat here in this park dully watching the lake infront…..crying inside and scolding the god for taking away my parents from me….and that when I heard ur laugh….which made me turn and look at u…..i dunno what made me walk behind u…..i dunno what made me watch u play sing dance laugh and jump…….it brought me happiness…an unknown calmness in me….from then I watched u daily….daily from behind a tree….watched every act of urs….
But one day u left…..u left the place and lost the warmth….i felt as if some one took my breath away….when I saw u hugging ur friends and crying for leaving them….i felt like running to u and hug u and cry along with u……but alas I m still behind the tree as ur mr.stranger…..
And after 6 years exactly on the same day…I saw u again……are u thinking that I saw u when u came to KC…no geet…..did u remember u almost hit a car and u scolded the drive there and some person came and settled the matter…its me geet…..do u know what I went through when I found u back….i m on cloud nine geet…..and again the same day I saw u in KC….and u joined as asst.arctic……what more can I ask god than having u beside me always…..
But when I saw u….ur cold behavior…..i wondered….is this my geet….my bubbly geet?...i felt as if someone pricked my heart with needles when ever I heard ur dry and dull voice….this is not my geet….her voice had an enthusiasm…..her eyes had a glow…..her lips always wore that true smile…..that is when I determined to bring u back….bring my old geet back…..
And I tried….i demoted u from asst.arctic to my secretary to keep u always with me….i gave u loads of work and made u do extra timing so that u will get irritated and I m successful…..u started to speak….u called me different names….shouted on me….cribbed about me…..that gave me immense happiness geet…..and hours turned to days and days turned to months and finally we became friends….but one day u shouted at me…but that day I saw pain in ur eyes….and it hurt me….i want to know what happened to my bubbly geet….what made her this…..
Sorry geet….i want to know ur past…..and I met neha and karan….i came to know ur whole past….sorry geet sorry…without ur permission I invaded ur past….but I did it as I love u and I want to bring u back…..
I m successful…..finally I brought u back….
Now I m here before u opening my all deeds and my feeling infront of u…..and its ur decision to accept me or to walk away….."
Maan stood on his knees still…not moving ….not even looking at geet. They staid there in silence for few minutes and maan felt geet's touch. She took the rose from him and that's when he looked at her.
Geet's eyes are totally filled with tears she instantly sat infront of him and hugged him.
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