VIRMAN FF MAGICAL MOMENTS UPTD [part 10-page 22]

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HY GUYS I HAVE COME UP WITH ANEW FF hope u like it'.i will continue my :YOU R MY LIFE part 4 also but had another story so started this one too''''.

INDEX:
PART 1 & 2 :PAGE 1
PART 3 &4 :PAGE 2
PART 5 :PAGE 7
PART 6 :PAGE 9
PART 7 :PAGE 12
PART 8 :PAGE 15
PART 9 :PAGE 19
PART 10:PAGE22
MAGICAL MOMENTS'.

A new day manvi woke up from sleep with a smile''.and it was the happiness she got after making friendship with virat''.they got along from past 4 to 5 months after virikas marriage'..wer manvi stayed in vadheras mansion.for her further studies in chandigargh'.virat used to pick her up from the college and also drop her'.in short he was not less than a driver for her'''..days passed and their relationship grew though their fights continued it had some affection in it''''

Manvi started feeling protective around him and he felt he was forgetting all his pain wen with maanvi'.but he also realized that he is losing his control coz of her or she is controlling him''.

After manvi gets up...

Virat enters her room and calls chalo bandariya aaj teri chute hai na kahi bahar chalte hain..she says oye chep yahan hey toh char mall aur kuch mandir kitne baar yehi jagah muje gumaoge'''mein kahin nahi aarahi hoon'

"Arey tum bhi kya yaad rakogi aise jagah leke jaonga tumeh chalo"''.
manvi asks kahan he says chalo mere saath'''she goes to get ready''..jeevika comes der and givs her a pink color beautiful saree and says mammiji ne kahan aaj gar pe pooja hey toh tumeh saadi peheni hogi vaise tum jaldi wapas aajana'''''.

Maanvi denys first later she wears the saree and she looks gorgeous''.virat comes to her room to tak her and couldnot move his eyes away from his princess(ooo he has not yet realized it that she is his princess)'''

She looks at him confusingly kya chep kya dekh rahe ho''he says ye dekh raha tha ki bandariya kabse ithni sundar dikne lagi'''.

Mannvi says WAT???????

Virat says kuch nahi bandariya chalna nahi hai kya jaldi chalo shyam ko gar me pooja hai toh hame jaldi aana hain'..

They leave together'..in car also virat is jus finding reasons to look at her''..he knew something is happening to him.he din want to see her like that but still dint stop drooling over her''''..

They get down from the car''..it a beautiful garden and a their is a lake near by it and there was no around the place was quite far from the city''

They wer sitting and having chat jus as usual it started raining suddenly''.virat was running to the car but he stopped as he sees maanvi enjoying the rain'.she is wet ''..virat coulnt take his eyes away'.he was unknowingly going near her he stopped'''..maanvi took her hair in front front just as to dry them as the rain had slowed''her back less blouse attracted him'.he closed his eyes for a second and thought :virat ye galat hai manvi aur tum sirf dost ho sirf dost"

But o my god it was maanvi how could he stop goin near her.he went closer she was staring and giving a confusing look

Her eyes asked "wat r u doin??"

Before she could take her next breathe'..virat tightened his grip over her waiste and took control of her lips'''.he dint realize wat he was doin''but maanvi was happy''.and thought "Muje gussa hona chahiye use dhaka dena chahiye par mein aisa kyu nahi kar rahi hoon''.shayad shayad mein bhi yehi chahti hoon!!!!!"

And they hug each other virat has still not opened his eyes'.the moment he opens his eyes he realizes he is in maanvis arms and jus immediately takes back himself''.

She blushes but he gives a strange look''.and tells chalo bahut der ho gayi hai muje lagtha hai hame ab chalna chahiye''maanvi tries to talk to him virat kya hua.tum aise achanak ???????????

Manvi chalo ghar pe sab humara intezar kar rahe honge''..maanvi thinks fine I will talk to him later'..

WAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?

I will think about it if u hav liked it'''''.ok how was it its not my first one but still leave ur comments and criticism also is fine I will improve my writing in the next''shall I make it an ff and continue or stop it as an os''

[NOTE:PART 2 is done ...last post in this page] guys i hav reserved post for other parts too so that u dont hav to search pages...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Obviously it's awesum plz continue
Soon plz plz plz and do
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Me nd plz don't make virat hide his feelings now it's just unbearable

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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is really a gr8 beginning & i thnk u should cont.
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Lovely...waiting 4 the next part...
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It's really good...😳 do pm me...loved the dialogues..you know i actually felt that when VirMan realise their attraction for each other they will feel like this only..😆😳 and maanvi in a backless sari super hot..😉😳 continue..wanna see how virat loses his control..or ends up getting controlled by manoo! 😉😆😳
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its really good
plz pm me wen u update the next part!
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Ooohhh...I like I like...plz cont n pm me
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MAGICAL MOMENTS

CHAPTER 2:

Both virat and maanvi enter vadhera mansion and pooja is on'.they just join the pooja silently'''throughout the pooja maanvi tries to get a glance of virats eyes but he escapes from her looks '.he jus tries to make himself very busy is completely occupied with one or another work''.maanvi goes behind him''.he jus escapes from that place''he thought to himself

"mein aisa kyu kar raha hoon'.maanvi kya soch rahi hogi mere bare mein muje use kiss nahi karna chahiye tha''. mene ithni badi galti kaise kardi muje use maafi mangni chahiye"

Its night all are in their rooms.maanvi couldn't sleep she was feeling virats behavior strange she wanted answers for her questions''.

She goes to his room knocks the door..virat opens it and is shocked to see her''.he asks" Manvi tum ithni raat ko yahan kya kar rahi ho'.."

Manvi:acha hain namm to mera yaad hai tumeh mene socha who bhi bul gaye.

Virat:ye bakwas bandh karo aur batao kya kaam hai'

Manvi:kya kam hai???? Virat tum mujse aise bartav kyu kar rahe ho''.

Virat:"Maanvi aaj job hi hua who nahi hona chahiye tha muje apne aap par sharam aa rahi hain please muje maaf kar do na jaane ithni badi galti mujse hui kaise'''..sorry maanvi im really sorry'tum jo chahe who saja de sakthe ho muje'.

Maanvi:In tears''.nothing could hav hurted her more than that SORRY'the words of virat are runnin "who meri galthi thi"'''

Maanvi thinks "use lagtha hai who galat tha..lekin mere liye who sahi tha virat''.she cries more and runs to her room"

While virat looks at her goin longingly'.

Next day moring'..

Maanvi is walking towards the dining room she gets down the stairs.she is about to slip but she finds her self in virats arms'..he says dekar nahi chal sakthi tumeh kuch hojatha toh'''..

Maanvi says "hojatha to kya virat mein mar tho nahi jaathi naa"

Her words wer poking him he does not reply her..he leaves to the dining hall''

Now all are in the dining hall having their breakfast'.jeevika is serving them somegravy'..when she comes near maanvi virat says bhabhi "rukiye use mat rakiye who teeka hain aur maanvi teeka nahi kathi hain na" jeevika is quite surprised and says haan teek hai mein use koi aur gravy rakh leti hoon''

But maanvi says didi kisne kaha muje teeka bahut pasand hain.rakiye mein yehi gravy kaoongi..jeevika says mannu tut oh teeka nahi kaathi hain na''..

Manvi eats the spicy gravy''wontedly and she couldn't bear the spice she drinks ample of water tears are rolling no one notices it except for virat''

She coughs he gives her water she says" mein teek hoon"

All leave the dining hall''..

Next part will continue''''..

Edited by lakshm - 13 years ago
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MAGICAL MOMENTS

PART 3

All leave from dinner hall…….its maanvi in room thinkin about virat and her relationship….she makes it clear to herself that "virat shayad mujse pyar nahi kartha mujse hi galat femi ho gayi……..manvi tuje use bulna hoga chahe job hi ho jaye yehi mere liye teek hain…….she is tears………….the night is over…..

Next day morning…..

Manvi in her room is getting ready for her college…….she is in peacock blue color lehenga standing in front of the mirror and struggling to tie her dori…….its TRADITIONAL DAY in her college…..

Virat is passing by her room…..jus makes a halt couldn't stop from seeing her……….she was looking like angel…….he was drawn towards her .her bare navel was pulling him even more………..though his mind was telling "stop it virat mantra…." His legs were already near manvi…. He ties her dori……..

Manvi is thinkin……."ye muje kya ho raha hai…….mein use kyu nahi rok rahi hoon…mene decide kiya tha mein use baath tak nahi karoongi…….." she immediately stops him but he has already finish tieing the dori………….

His hands slowly plays around her back finally circle her navel…..he grips her bare waist…with both his hands……..manvi was melting completely…….she kept her hand over his as if to say "ye haath kabhi mat nikhalna" she felt heaven………..

Without realizing that she has kept her hands over virats hand….she says tumara haath nikalo virat………….still her hands are over his……

Virat says "tumare haath mere haath mein hai maanvi"

She immediately removes her hand……both feel embarresed……….he leaves her room….manvi again confused about wat happened………

She is about to leave to college……viren asks her "manvi kaise ja rahi ho"

She says"jiju rickshaw se chali jaongi"

Viren says "kyu virat chod dega…kyu virat"

Virat says "woh bhai muje kahin bahar jaana hain"

Viren :"maanvi ko raaste mein chod de na…"

Virat couldn't refuse it now……..he takes manvi…….who hesitantly gets into the car along with him………..

Both steal glances they knew they loved each other but were unable to accept it…….

Half the way the car stops…….virat gets down to check it…..he says it will take time………..maanvi "muje rickshaw se chali jaana chahiye tha ab yahan toh koi rickshaw bhi nahi milegi"

Virat "agar ithni jaldi hai toh chalke jaana"

Manvi "agar time pe nahi pahucha sakthe they toh jiju ke sammne bade hero kyu ban gaye they kahedete tumse gaadi teek se chali nahi jayegi"

Virat takes it a challenge "mein tume kisi bhi halat mein college chodkar rahonga"

Virat asks for lift…..no vehicle stops…….nearby he sees a cycle outside a small hut……he goes inside and asks the guy for cycle for sometime and promises to leave it back…..he pays some money too……that guy accepts and gives the cycle key……….

Manvi :cycle pe mein nahi jaongi

Virat: Bachpan se BMW mein chalne ki aadat hai kya natak mat karo college jaana hain ki nahi……

Manvi: [In childish tone…..] jaana hain.lekin

Virat:itne taiya shaiyar hokar aayi ho ab chalo tumari wajah ab cycle chalene ki bhi din aagayi………..

Manvi: arey isme back seat bhi nahi hain……

Virat:Ab cycle dene wala back seat front seat sab lagake todi dega……..chalna hain to chup chaap mere aage beto varna ruko….gaadi teek hone ke liye shyam ho jayega hum sath mein gar chalet hain……

Manvi:nahi nahi mein mein betthi hoon……..

Manvi is unable to sit in front of the cycle……virat holds her waist and makes her sit……still he doesn't take his hand from her waist…….its manvi who realizes it and coughs…..virat immediately starts the cycle all throught the ways his hands are playing with her bare back……..she unknowingly had a smile a blush on her face……college had come…they both wished this ride could hav been more long………..

Manvi gets down…….she says thank u a little rudely………..he jus smiles back…….

Edited by lakshm - 13 years ago
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PART 4:
MAGICAL MOMENTS

In vadhera mansion all are in garden after dinner….manvi tells to jeevika to talk about manvi leaving to Mumbai for her project work……jeevika says no one will accept her going alone…..but manvi insists jeevika…….so jeevika starts

Jeevika:Dadaji wo muje aapse ek baat pujne thi…

Dadaji:haan beta poocho……….

Jeevika:who manvi ko project ke kaam se Mumbai jaana hain toh…

Dadaji:Uske saath uske dost toh honge na beta…..

Jeevika:nahi dadaji uske dost sab apne apne shaher ja rahe hain…

Dadaji: (thinks for a while) and says teek hain lekin hum maanvi ko akela nahi bej sakthe hain………..

Viren: (Interrupts them) virat tum chale jao na manvi ke saath waise then din hi tho hain…………..

Virat:nahi bhai muje yahan kaam hain……

Dadaji:Virat viren teekh kehe raha hain tum chale jaana maanvi humari zimedari hain……….uska kayal rakna humara farz hain…..

Virat:looks manvi and says teek hain dadaji mein chala jaonga…….

Manvi is packing her clothes and jeevika is helping her……..manvi says "is virat ko mere saath kyu bej rahe ho mein akeli kud ko sambal nahi sakthi hain kya"

Jeevika says"bade humare ache ke liye hi kehethe hain aur virat bahut acha ladka hain"

Manvi: haan haan di ab toh apkeliye apka devar hi acha hoga…….

Packing gets over manvi is ready to leave…..virat also comes to the living hall with packed bags…they formally say bye to everyone and leave to airport……..

In airport:

Manvi and virat get their boarding passes and are waiting for their flight….their is still half an hour left for their boarding…….

Manvi continuously stares at him……

Virat:he baar baar muje goorna bandh karo tumara body guard banna mera shouk nahi hain…….woh toh bhai aur dadji ne force kiya toh mein yaha hoon…….

Manvi:natak mat karo tume muje pareshan karna bahut acha lagtha hain tabhi toh tum mera peecha nahi chod rahe hoga……

Virat:arey tumeh samjane ki patience mujme nahi hain ab chalo flight aagayi hain……….

Inside flight:

They both sit in their seats……..as the flight takes off…..manvi gets scared and holds virats hand tightly………and closes her eyes………after sometime as the fight stables…….she loosens her hand from his and realizes wat she has done she asks SORRY……..he says its ok and smiles

Maniv:hey chep muje dar pokh mat samajna woh peheli baar flight se jaa rahi hoon na isliye………

Virat does not reply…..after sometime manvi feels drowsy she tries to control her sleep but finally ends up in virats shoulder………he touches her headand caresses her like a baby……….he smiles at her innocent face and thinks jitna innocent ab dik rahi hai uthna who hain nahi………..

They hear the announcement that they hav landed in Mumbai they open their eyes to see that both their heads are touching each others and they had slept like that only…………..both immediately get up take their bags and get down……….

Outside the airport they catch a cab to the hotel…….they reach the hotel and ask for the key the receptionist gives a single key manvi is shocked and asks him

Manvi: kya hum dono ek hi room mein rahenge…….

Virat:ab agar alag alag room mein rahenge tumari dekhbal kaise karoonga……….

Manvi:offf…………..

Now they enter their room………Manvi goes into the wash room to take bath with her towel………..virat says from outside that he is goin out he will lock from outside and go…manvi says ok……….

After taking bath manvi realizes she has taken only the towel and not her dress…..she is hesistant to come outside but then thinks "virat toh bahar gaya hain uske aane se pehele mein bahar jaake change karthi hoon……."

She comes out with the green towel wrapped around her exposing her shoulders and her bare legs…………before she could get her dress virat enters and is drooling over her………she is about to shout but virat closes her mouth………..she looses her balance and both fall into the bed………virat now had lost his control..holds her waist tighly with one hand and is crawling his other hand over her wet shoulders………manvi wants to say something but she wasloving wat he was doing and stops thinking……..he was above manvi he holds her waist and brings her on top of his body……they both have an eye lock……..manvi says softly virat muje chodo muje jaana hain…………

Virat goes close to her ears and says "manvi mein tumar uppar nahi tum mere uppar ho…….

Manvi feels embarrassed and runs to get her dress from bag and rushes to the wash room to change………..all this while Virat is smiling………….

Edited by lakshm - 13 years ago

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