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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
awsum update luvd it
cnt w8 4 der marrige plzz cont soon
fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Awesome, want to know is maan real or her imagination.continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
part 3
poor Geet...
she didnt believe in the past...
so they have taken it to the next level...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
superbbb!!!
glad to see that now maan is with geet!...
I hope that he will not leave her again!
conitnue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Fabulous chapter
They are so much in love
But where did he go for so much time
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART- 4

Morning at 5.00 am her mobile started to ring…geet come out from maan hug…she is taken her mobile. Cab driver is calling "oh …its already time up…"she cut the call and send message that today she is not coming to office.

Immediately she got a call from meera…she know she is waiting for her out side….she went to near window and replied to meera in her low voice…"meera I think this week I am not able to come to work. Pls inform to sir…."

"why what happened….geet are you ok…" there is concern in her voice. Geet understood her concern. When everybody left her only meera with her. till today she didn't ask about anything her about her past. she is a loving friend.

"I am ok meera don't worry …after one week ill give you good news…actually I am happy…too happy…I explain you when I meet you directly…ok byee take care…"she cut the call. She don't want to disturb her maan . again she went to bed slept next to maan. maan hands again wrapped her again. She smiled slightly. How much she waited for his love….all these days. This is her dream to be with maan . she turned his side and placed her face in his chest.

Morning before she wake maan brought a tea for her…"geet…otto na …."geet wake from her sleep by yarning her mouth…

As soon as she saw maan with tea cups she felt shy her self…."maan sorry I am so sorry…why you didn't wake me…"and she inhaled tea smell " maan when you started to drink tea….."

Maan sat next to her…"when you started to drink coffee I started to drink tea…"he smiled with teasing tone.

"maan…"she made a baby face…..

"geet till today you loved me so much …I think no one love me like you….i know you changed your self bcoz of me….even I want to show how I love you…"he placed small kiss on her fore head.

Again she forget everything in his hug…after few minutes "geet otto na we should go for our marriage purchasing….today we are getting marriage…."

"one minute…maan." she went to her wardrobe…she open it ,took a red color wedding dress from ward rob. One by one things she started to take from her word rob. Maan eyes went widen…already she kept everything ready for their marriage. She is already purchased from bindhi to mehandhi everything. She showed all her marriage jewelers' to him. each and everything proved that how much she is waiting to be with him.

Maan once looked her lovingly. He lifted her from bed to washroom. he him self took off all the all her cloths. Both enjoyed while bathing. After bathing he himself dressed her. he combed her hair..he applied cream ,talc powder ,and kajal everything. At last while placing red bindi in center of her eyebrows she closed her eyes with great pleasure…she thanked her bhabhaji to making all her dreams true. "geet chalo na …"

"kaha…"

"mandir….hamari shadi ke liye…"she stopped him in mid.

"maan I don't believe in all this formalities….right now we want to marry ok….we can marry here itself…already I lost hopes on society so pls this marriage stands only for our satisfaction…not for others..so can we marry here it self…"

"geet…"

"ha maan pls agree na…in front of bhabhaji photo we can marry.."

"…but geet we need pandith ,manthras and at least some of them has to be proof for our marriage…."

"no maan mereliye aapp sab hain. I no need any proof of my marriage. Love is proof for our marriage..bhabhaji is proof for our relation that's enough….."she hugged him tightly. He know how much pain she go through all these days. He nodded…

Geet went to kitchen and brought a match box. She made some fire on flour…maan taken sathphre with geet….he tied mangal suthr on her neck….he filled her mang with sindhur…finally he made her his own. There is no pandith, there is no manthras, there is no proof for their marriage, there is no relatives but they married in front of their bhabhaji. Bhabhaji become a proof of their new relation. Without anybody their marriage relation is forwarded…

"next what geet…"he whispered in her ears. She shied and hide In his chest. Her child wood dream become true today…he cupped his new bride cheeks in his hand….she closed her eyes with shy…her trembled lips were invited him….he sucked those lips in great thirst and desire…when he left her blood oozed in her corner of lips. immediately he licked her blood and tried to sooth her wound…she smiled at him with great feel…she understood that he is in guilt…she pulled him force fully to her and bite his lips hardly like she is taking revenge on him.

There are many thing to talk…there is many thing to share…but they both remained like dumbfounded. They want to be each other hug…till death meets them…they want sooth all their pain with their new relation. They try to full fill all their desires, thirsts at a time…

Maan lifted her from his arm and went to bedroom….there was a strong urge began in both of them…they cried ..they smiled….they done everything what they dreamed all these days. both prepared their food at night…they fought while eating. Again they compromised by feeding both of them….geet done everything what she planned all these days to do with him. Finaly when they slept it is almost midnight is crossed.

They spent whole week enjoying in their shopping, teasing each others, visiting temples, visiting all famous places in Bangalore ….its a very beautiful life what they waited for all these days. Their life filled only with love and passion. After one week maan went to delhi to meet dadima.

Geet remained in Bangalore and she rejoined her work. Meera surprised looking her…there is a new bride look on her face. When meera teased her, she blushed like new bride. Meera forced her to give a party and ask her to introduce maan. geet agreed and fix the date.

One fie day geet met meera in hotel and she said maan will be here at any movement. after few minutes she got a message from maan that he couldn't come for party due to his busy schedule. Geet made a baby face and she fought with him in phone. Finally meera consoled her they ate some pizza and left the hotel.

Geet is too angry on maan at night she fought with him. maan tried to console her…but geet went violent. Finally maan packed his stuff and ready to leave…geet went to him and hugged him tightly.

"maan pls I am sorry don't go pls…again I can't live with out you." Maan kissed her on forehead…

"no geet I am not angry with…you….if I try to be angry with you I couldn't…pls don't cry…"he hugged her and drunk all her pains through from her tears. Geet slept on his chest hugging him tightly at whole night. But she couldn't sleep peacefully. Again her past displayed in front of her eyes.

PAST.

When she open her eyes she is hospitalized. She blinked once… why I am here…her gaze stared on her mum…still she is crying not only she everyone are crying..why all are crying….why no one are trusting me…I am not lying…he will come .he told me….he will back…..

Ranu sat next to her she caressed her hairs softly….."geet tum theek to haina…"

"ha mama…why all are crying…trust me …maan will come very soon…"ranu stood in shock. There is no tears on her eyes. in fact she is happy. Her innocent mind is not accepting that maan is dead. How to make her to agree a fact. She is nearly hospitalized from three days. In their absence maan family completed all their remained works.

Some how they brought her back to KM. geet stunned entering KM. there is maan death ceremony is going on in hall. Again her act turned to wild. She ran inside and thrown all pooja things. She holed pandith tightly and try to drag him out from her tiny hands." Why all are doing this….kiss basha may aap sabko samjana padega….maan zinda hain…maan zida hain …wo zaroor vapas ayega…"her brothers tried to control her but they failed…she is become panic…she started beat every one. She started scratch every one with her sharp nails…already khurana family in pain….now again they completely shattered…looking geet behavior.

Finally brij dragged geet to car. Whole handa family left KM without attending maan death ceremony. Geet continuously screaming that maan is not dead.

When they reached hosaipur….still geet is convincing her family that maan is not dead. Her mind is not ready to accept the truth.

Finally brij slapped hardly on her cheek…"geet try to understand…wo marchuka hain…"

"nahi…tum jhoot bolungi…"again she protested hardly. She try to run away from handa havely.

Every one try to hold her…really don't know where she got so much of strength in her tiny hands she pushed every one and run away. Some how arjun tej caught her. brij hit again hardly on her cheek" bandh karo thumara natak…."he thundered…..geet suddenly went dumb…she couldn't utter a word. She lost her sense again.

Day by day geet becoming too silent. She lost her voice… she forget to speack….always her gaze stuck in door. she left to eat her favorite alu parata…she need only pasta which is favorite to maan. she started to follow maan life style in every movement. day by day she is become a big question for everybody.

Finally their family doctor suggested to admit in mental hospital.

PRECAP: story end…..

Hi,

Friends, thanks for your honest replay. I request something to this part also. I am too disturbed that geet is ending .even I am ending this story in next part. If I want I can drag this story for some more days. But I know almost FF readers like sweet and happy loving stories. I don't want to leave maneet fans in pain. so pls get me your honest comments.

Varsha.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
finally they r married. past was painful. loved the update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
😭past was so painfull
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
past is painful...present is beautiful...totally wonderful...

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